Sher pe Sher....

[sameer'shaad']

Doston...

Jis tarah se shayri ki pathshala section khulne ke baad hum logon ke chchere pe khushiyon ki laher daud padii hai, aur kai tarah se pahle ho rahi hai shayari ki technicalities seekhne ki...

Isi lihaaz se ek nayaa khel hum shuru karne ja rahe hain.. jisme hame kuch khaas nahi, bas ghazal ki baareekiyaan, jaise, qaafiyaa, radeef, behr etc ko dhyaan me rakh kar sher pe sher kehnaa hoga...

Rules neeche de deta hoon...

1) Kisi shaayar ki ghazal ka ek misraa liyaa jaegaa. (khas kar matla) aur usi ko aage badhaate hue members apne apne sher kahenge.
member ek baar me sirf ek hi sher kahe.... repeat kar sakte hain magar kisi dusre member ke post ke baad...


2) Qaafiya badlaa jaaega, aur radeef same rahega...

3) Aap log use kiyaa huaa qaafiyaa istemaal kar sakte hain, magar shart ye hai ke ek hi qaafiya lagatar istemaal na kiya jaae. lafz "agar" ke baad, "magar", "dagar", "thahar" kuch ek baar aa jaae uske baad aap waapas "agar" use kar sakte hain.

4) Behr ki paabandii hai, aap usi behr me sher kahenge jis behr me upar likhe shaayr ka sher hoga.

5) beech beech me shuruaati (shayar ka origional) sher badalte rahenge.. jisse hame alag alag behr aur khayaal ka lutf milta rahegaa...



to aaiye shuru karte hain is khel ko jiska naam hai "Sher pe Sher"

shuruaat karte hain Daag ke is khoobsurat se sher ke saath....




Ajab apanaa haal hotaa jo visaal-e-yaar hotaa
kabhii jaan sadaqe hotii kabhii dil nisaar hotaa




Ab jaise ki hum is sher me dekhte hain ke radeef hai "hota" aur qaafiya hai "aar"

behr kuch yooN hai....

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(Agar main Ghalat houn to durust kareN...................

to aaiye, aapke sher ka intzaar hai..

[sameer'shaad']

Meri taraf se aglaa sher hai.......


yoon na dekhiye kasam se, mera dil fisal na jaae,
yahi khel khel me hi, hai Pehla pyaar hotaa...

[zidd]

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'

Meri taraf se aglaa sher hai.......


yoon na dekhiye kasam se, mera dil fisal na jaae,
yahi khel khel me hi, hai Pehla pyaar hotaa...

ye game bhi accha laga bhai....
waise is zameen par maine ek ghazal kahi thi....so usi ka ek sher yaha tika deta hu....
( shaad sahab ,aapke saani me typo hai..koi lafz bhool gaye hain likhna aap)

tum agar davaa bhi hote ,mere dard e laadavaa ki
wahi beqaraari hoti , bhale hi qaraar hota

[sameer'shaad']

Sher changed:

yoon na dekhiye kasam se, mera dil fisal na jaae,
yahi khel khel me hi, shuru Pehla pyaar hotaa...


thanks Zidd bhai for correction and what a lovely sher u shared......

[sameer'shaad']

Next Sher Pleezzzzzzzz...................................... .............................

[Hamdam]

Bhai logo meeri pehli koshish behr mein likhne ki , agar bouncer maar du to maaf karna

Mere paas aake baaitho kuch hale dil sunao
Magroor na tu hota gar mujh se pyar hota

[sameer'shaad']

Sanjay bhai, muaafi maangne ki koi baat nahi hai.... aapne baqaayda behr me likhaa hai... aur bahot khoob sher bhi kahaa hai Masha Allaah... daad hi daad......
likhte raheN...

Next:

TanhaaiyaaN na hotiiN kismat me gar hamaare,
koi dost saath hotaa, koii jaaN nisaar hotaa..........

Shaad...

[nehasharma9]

Inshaan Na Kuch Haskar Sikhta Hai
Na Kuch Roo Kar Sikhta Hai
Jab Bhi Kuch Alag Sikhta Hai to Ya…
Kisi Ka Ho Kar Sikhta Hai Ya…
Kisi Ko Khoo Kar Sikhta Hai…!!

[Hamdam]

Khona aur pana dono ka apna wajood hai,
Jaise din aur raat saath saath maujood hai.

[Krishnasharma]

Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'

Sanjay bhai, muaafi maangne ki koi baat nahi hai.... aapne baqaayda behr me likhaa hai... aur bahot khoob sher bhi kahaa hai Masha Allaah... daad hi daad......
likhte raheN...

Next:

TanhaaiyaaN na hotiiN kismat me gar hamaare,
koi dost saath hotaa, koii jaaN nisaar hotaa..........

Shaad...

Sameer ji hamne bhi koshish ki hai, gaur farmaayiyega . . .

Next:

Agar hotiiN koi haseena hamare zindagi me bhi,
toh yeh dil bhi har pal uske liye bekaraar hotaa . . .