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Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n


*tifl = child

~Adil
Waah !! Kya khoobsurat sher N@zneen ji ke naam kiya hai !! Bahut khoob Aadeil bhai !!


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Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
Wwwaaaahhhh !!!!!! Beintehaayee khoobsurat khayaal !!! Waah !! Deed par mizhgaan ka pehra !! Kya haseen fiqr hai, kya khoobsurat sher !! Dheron daad N@zneen ji !!


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abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe

-zarraa


* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow


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mushtaaq*-e-deed*-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman* bana diya

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mushtaaq = longing for, deed = sight, chilman = curtain
wahhhhh!!! Zarraa saheb,, nihayat khooob...

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lafz-e-mizhgaa.n pe hamaarii kosish....

nok-e-mizhgaa.n* pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n* gham jo manaate rehte


*nok-e-mizhgaa.n = tip of eyelashes
*tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n = under the hidden eyelashes
wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!

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mizhgaan-e-tar* kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim* rahe
lekin saraab-zaar* nazar se adiim* rahe

*mizhgaan-e-tar = wet eyelids
*niyaaz-e-qadiim = long-term wish
*saraab-zaar = like mirage
*adiim = deprived of
nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...


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teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha

-zarraa


(kham = curl, ghamza = a flirtatious glance)
zarra saheb... wahhhh... aik khobsorat peshkash..

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Naaz, this is dedicated to you
shokHii-e-tifl* si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n


*tifl = child

~Adil
hahaha!.... you made her day!
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Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
ahaan... kia kehne! .. Naaz.... that was brilliant!

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abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe

-zarraa


* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow

wahhh! Zarra saheb... kamal per kamal kiye jatay haiN aap ...
behad umdaH khiyaal.... dherooN daad


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Sipar* liye khade the saf* meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah* thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN*


Sipar=shield
Saf=line
barq-e-nigaah=flash/lightening of sight.
NihaaN=concealed.
wahhhh! wahhh! Naaz.... superb!


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tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho?
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN...


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Back with a bang bahot khoob.......missed ur sher's on this thread
Naaz,,

Ab khud hi jawab do....

hum shair kehte
ya Eid karte ??



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Multitasking nahin ho
......................................
Dear.. Hum to is type ke hain :-

ae raat! Maa ki tarah apni aaghosh meiN le lo mujhe!
din bhar ki mushaqqat se jism toot raha hai...

Yakey baad deegray multi task karne lagieN gy
to aik cheez ka maza bhi sahi tarah na le paayen gy

Hope you may understand now


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Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
awesome!!! Naaz,
behteriin sher pesh kiya hai........ bahot hi khubsurti se mizhgaan lafz ka istemaal kiya hai..... too good



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Waah !! Kya khoobsurat sher N@zneen ji ke naam kiya hai !! Bahut khoob Aadeil bhai !!
aapka teh-e-dil se shukr guzaar hoo.n



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abroo* khiNchee itaab* meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN* par haiN aa rahe

-zarraa


* abroo = eyebrow, itaab = anger, kamaaN = bow
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
zarraasaab, kya kamaal kiya hai aapne iis sher me.n.... waaah hi waaah nikaltii hai.... dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se

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Sipar* liye khade the saf* meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah* thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN*


Sipar=shield
Saf=line
barq-e-nigaah=flash/lightening of sight.
NihaaN=concealed.
waaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhh!!! Naaz, you are doing an outstanding job, dear...

behad hi khubsurat khayaalaat pesh kiye haiN....

dheroN dheroN daad....................



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wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!

nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...


aapka bahot bahot shukriya, Hassanbhai

hahaha!.... you made her day!




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tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho?
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN...
waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! ala tariin khayaalaat, Hassanbhai....
bahot hi khubsurat............. beshkimmatii sher hai yeh........
dilse dheroN dheroN daad...............

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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!! ala tariin khayaalaat, Hassanbhai....
bahot hi khubsurat............. beshkimmatii sher hai yeh........
dilse dheroN dheroN daad...............

Adil
teh-e-dil se manooN hooN Aadil bhai...

milte rahiye ga,,


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Sipar* liye khade the saf* meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah* thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN*


Sipar=shield
Saf=line
barq-e-nigaah=flash/lightening of sight.
NihaaN=concealed.
Wwwwaaaaahhhhh!!! Barq-e-nigaah mizhgaan meiN nihaaN .... kya khoob takhayyul hai !! Bahaut khoob N@zneen ji !!


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tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho?
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN...
Wah wah Hassan sahab !! Chaand jaise sher par daad !!


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Wah! Zarraji bahot khoob...bahot khoobsurat tasveer pesh ki hai apne..abroo aur mizhgaaN ko teer kamaan ki misaal de dii....bahot khoob.
Bahaut bahaut shukriya N@zneen ji


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Bahaut bahaut shukriya Hassan bhai !!



QUOTE=Hassan;463754]wahhhhh!!! Zarraa saheb,, nihayat khooob...



wahhhhh!! Aadil bhai,,, aik umdaaH khiyaal... dherooN daad!



nazar se adim .... ..wahhhh!!! wahhhh! wahhhh! boht khoob...




zarra saheb... wahhhh... aik khobsorat peshkash..



hahaha!.... you made her day!


ahaan... kia kehne! .. Naaz.... that was brilliant!



wahhh! Zarra saheb... kamal per kamal kiye jatay haiN aap ...
behad umdaH khiyaal.... dherooN daad




wahhhh! wahhh! Naaz.... superb! [/QUOTE]


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waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!
zarraasaab, kya kamaal kiya hai aapne iis sher me.n.... waaah hi waaah nikaltii hai.... dheroN dheroN daad hamaari jaanib se

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lafz "mizhgaan" par members ke aashaar .... - 1st August 2014, 09:11 PM

DostoN, lafz "mizhgaan" par members ke khud ke kahe aashaar ....

Apno.n Ka gham-e-marg na gar ho to hii achcha
Ye bojh saf-e-mizhgaa.n pe tolaa nahi.n karte
Ufaq

mushtaaq-e-deed-e-jalwa ye aaNkheiN theeN hum ne par
mizhgaaN ko us ke husn ka chilman bana diya
Zarraa

nok-e-mizhgaa.n pe na buu.ndo.n ko sajaate rehte
tah-e-mizhgaan-e-nihaa.n gham jo manaate rehte
Aadeil

mizhgaan-e-tar kii humko niyaaz-e-qadiim rahe
lekin saraab-zaar nazar se adiim rahe
Aadeil

teri mizhgaaN ke kham hi dekha kiye
haay ghamza tera kahaaN dekha
Zarraa

shokHii-e-tifl si tiir-e-mizhgaan ye terii
detii tujhe lutaane ijaazat ye mehfile.n
Aadeil

Shawq-e-deedar-e-yaar kii talib reh gaii
Kambakht mizhgaanoN ka pehra kamaal tha
N@zneen

abroo khiNchee itaab meiN mizhgaaN bhi uth gayee
dekho to teer-e-husn kamaaN par haiN aa rahe
Zarraa

Sipar liye khade the saf meiN mere raqeeb
Barq-e-nigah thi mizhgaaN meiN nihaaN
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tere nainooN k talism meiN koi kese giraftaar na ho
jheel si aankhON ko chaar chaand lagaaye mizhgaan jo haiN
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naya lafz - 1st August 2014, 10:28 PM

dostoN ... is baar ka lafz hai .... MUNTAZIR .....

"muntazir" means "one who is waiting" ya "jo intezaar mein ho"

"muntazir" meiN "t" ka pronounciation is as in teer (arrow), tees (30), taaqat (strength) ... aap samajh gaye hoNge ...

"muntazir" ki taqti, mere opinion mein, hai 212. any other opinion is welcome.

to ab hum lafz "muntazir" par ghaur kareNge, koyee sher, qit'ta, nazm, rubaayee ya aur kuchh jise shayari kaha ja sake, keh kar. behr ki koyee bandish naheeN hai, n hi aashaar par koyee gintee, jitne chaaheiN aashaar kaheiN ..... more the merrier

shayari ke saath saath SDC style guftagoo bhi jaaree rakkheNge, seekhne sikhaane ke maqsad se. members se darkhwaast hai ki is lafz par apne khayaalaat aur ilm bhi baaNtte raheiN aur is ki nuances aur is ki usage par roshni daaleiN, jis se hum sab saath saath seekh sakeiN.

ab is lafz par kuchh khoobsurat aashaar ka lutf lete haiN ...

jin ke hum muntazir rahe un ko
mil gaye aur hum safar shaayad
-Faraaz

sab apne apne qareene se muntazir us ke
kisi ko shukr kisi ko shikaayateiN karni
-Faraaz

muntazir kab se tahayyur hai teri taqreer ka
baat kar tujh par gumaaN hone laga tasweer ka
-Faraaz

qaasidoN ke muntazir rehne lage
parh gaye un ko maze paigaam ke
-Daagh Dehlevi

ab kaun muntazir hai hamaare liye wahaaN
shaam aa gayee hai laut ke ghar jaayeiN bhi to kya
-Muneer Niyazi

jo pyaas paani ki muntazir hai
wo sooliyoN par taNgi huwee hai
-Ali Sardar Jaafri

muntazir hai ek toofaan-e-bala mere liye
ab bhi jaane kitne darwaaze haiN wa mere liye
par museebat hai mera ahd-e-wafa mere liye
ai gham-e-dil kya karooN ai wahshat-e-dil kya karooN
-Majaz ki nazm se

jo muntazir n mila wo to hum haiN sharminda
ki hum ne der laga di palat ke aane meiN
-Javed Akhtar

hawas-naseeb nazar ko kaheeN qaraar naheeN
maiN muntazir hooN magar tera intezaar naheeN
-Saahir Ludhianvi

faiz kya jaaniye yaar kis aas par muntazir haiN ke laayega koyee khabar
maykashoN par huwa mohtasib meherbaaN dil-figaaroN pe qaatil ko pyaar aa gaya
-Faiz

jo teri muntazir theeN wo aaNkheiN hi bujh gayeeN
ab kyooN saja raha hai charaaghoN se shaam ko
-name of shayar not known by me, NM

is lafz par ghaur karne ka silsila hum agle 5 din tak chalaayenge, yaani Friday, 6th August, 10:00 PM India time ya 4:30 PM GMT.

to ab aur intezaar mat karwaaiye! hum muntazir haiN lafz-e-muntazir par aap ke khoobsurat aashaar ke

duaoN ke saath
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woh aa bhi gaye to 'hSn' ko rulayeN ge...


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too good......................


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too good......................
bunch of thanks,, Pari.........

You are so supportive since we met...

Take care,

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mere dil k har haal main tum ho

mere har khayaal main tum ho

na hoon muntazir kisi aur jawab ka

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behad shukriyaaH... Naaz!

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Waah !! Bahaut khoob !! Jazbaat ke ek safar ke jaisa hai ye qita. Bahaut khoob Hassan bhai waah !!


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k ab mere har sawaal main tum ho
Wwwwwwwaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!! Kya khoob daleel-e-ishq !!! Jawaab ka muntazir naheen kyunki sawaal mein tum ho !!!! Brilliant !! Beautiful thought and expression !!! Bahaut bahaut si daad Ananthpak ji !!!


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wwwwwwwwaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhh !!!! kya khayaal hai !!!! kisi ke muntazir rehne se hi sukoon mil jaata hai !!!!!! just wonderful !!! dheron dheron daad Praneeta ji !!!


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Wah!...bohat khoob. ...............




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Ananth jii,,

wahhh! wahh! kia hii baat hai... boht khoob...

DherooN daad,

DuaooN k saath,,


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hoon muntazir ke hoga deedaar-e-yaar ek din
faqat ye ehsaas hi bohat hai sukoon-e-rooh ke liye
Pari,,

Wahhh!! Mohabbat ki chashni liye.. aik haseeN tamanna!.. wahh!

DherooN daad...

DuaooN k saath,,


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2nd August 2014, 01:47 PM

n ayaaN* huweeN wo mohabbatteiN ke guzar gayeeN bhi haiN muddateiN
to hooN zikr ka tere muntazir tere naam par hooN nisaar kyooN

- zarraa

ayaaN = evident


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2nd August 2014, 02:23 PM

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muntazir rahe barsoN ke woh ayeN ge
dekhte rahe sapne ke woh manayeN ge
jaante haiN lekin dil ke hathoN majboor haiN
woh aa bhi gaye to 'hSn' ko rulayeN ge...

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Wah! Jiju bahot khoob
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Wwwwwwwaaaaaahhhhhhhhhh!!!! Kya khoob daleel-e-ishq !!! Jawaab ka muntazir naheen kyunki sawaal mein tum ho !!!! Brilliant !! Beautiful thought and expression !!! Bahaut bahaut si daad Ananthpak ji !!!

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Ananth jii,,
wahhh! wahh! kia hii baat hai... boht khoob...
DherooN daad,
DuaooN k saath,,

Bohat bohat shukriya Hassan ji.......





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n ayaaN* huweeN wo mohabbatteiN ke guzar gayeeN bhi haiN muddateiN
to hooN zikr ka tere muntazir tere naam par hooN nisaar kyooN
- zarraa
ayaaN = evident

Wahhhhhhh!!!!! Brilliant as usual Zarraa sahab.....dehron daad ....





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Wahhhhhhh!!!!! Brilliant as usual Zarraa sahab.....dehron daad ....
Ji bahaut bahaut shukriya Ananthpak ji


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