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Originally Posted by AnjAAn!!!
AawaazeN kitni hoti haiN
AawaazeN har pal roti haiN
AawaazoN ka ik jangal hai
AawaazeN keekar boti haiN
AawaazoN par din nikle haiN
AawaazoN meN andhiyaare haiN
AawaazoN ke peechhe aawaaz
AawaazoN ke chauraahe haiN
AawaazeN andhi hoti haiN
AawaazeN bahri hoti haiN
AawaazoN ka swar dhokha hai
AawaazeN goongii hoti haiN
AawaazeN duniyadaari ki
AawaazeN zimmedaari ki
AawaazoN ka bojh bahut hai
AawaazeN palledaari ki
AawaazeN mirchi se teekhi
AawaazeN meethe se meethi
AawaazeN khanjar se paini
AawaazeN raatoN se kaali
AawaazoN ki mandi hai par
AawaazoN ki taul nahiN hai
AawaazeN bikti haiN lekin
AawaazoN ka mol nahiN hai
AawaazoN ka khel hai lekin
Khud aawaazeN khel nahiN haiN
Rang-birangi aawaazeN haiN
AawaazoN meN mel nahiN haiN
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Aadaab wa Tasleemaat Sumit Bhaee!!!
meray bhaee... kya kahooon.... awaaaz nahee nikal rahee..alfaaz us awaaz mayn bayaaN nahee kar saktay jo jazbaat dil mayn umad rahay hayn... MashaAllah! buhat aalatareen nazm! Something different.. a beautiful expression and experimentation and example of creative thinking... a demostration of your pursuit of versatility in poetry and the beautiful art of expression and at the same time bringing along the philosophy of life and its aspects!! Shabbaash bro..... keep going ahead...Dua haye Rab say... ho zor-e-qalam aur bhi zyaadaa!
Duago
Ahmad