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Aap ne haath jo rakkhaa merey zakhmee dil par -
6th January 2011, 05:07 PM
aadaab aaj shakeel bhai ki ghazal parhe ke ek ghazal ho gayee hai ummeed ki doaaon se nawaazen ge kaheen koi baat nazar aaye to plz zaroor bataayen kiun ki abhi tak dimaagh ki uljhan waisee hi hai masood hassaas Nain se nain mile dil ki redaa chaak huyee Eyk hi lafz me farzaanagee khaashaak huyee Hai tujhe gham ki koi chaahney waala na milaa Aor yaan zindagee terey like hi khaak huyee Dil ko ghar apnaa samajh rakkhaa hai aa jaatee hai Is qadar yaad ki khushboo teree bebaak huyee Hijr me eid ka tohfa bhi ajab hai zaalaim Dil huwaa said e jonooN aaNkh bhi namnaakhuyee Sar uthaaye huye phirtee hai sadaa galiyoN me Zindagee hi nahi ab maot bhi bebaak huyee Aap ne haath jo rakkhaa merey zakhmee dil par Qaabile fakhr merey dard ki poshaak huyee Har gharee ho gayee Hassaas thee mailey din ki aaNkh se ashk bahaa aor fezaa paak huyee |
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6th January 2011, 05:15 PM
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Janab Masood Hassaas Saheb...! Sb Se Pehlay To Is Khubsurat Kalaam Pr Dheron Daad......... Boht Boht Khoob Rahi Ye Ghazal ....... Aap Ne Ghazal Ka Haq Ada Kr Dia....... Boht Lutf Mila Parh Kr.......... ALLAH AAP KO KHUSH RAKHAY....... Or yunhi Mehfil Sajatay Rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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6th January 2011, 06:51 PM
Kamaal karte ho Masood Saheb kamaal karte ho yaar ab hum poori ghazal ke bare me kya kahe hum to aapke ek sher par hi bik gaye...........
Hai tujhe gham ki koi chaahney waala na milaa Aor yaan zindagee terey liye hi khaak huyee bas khush kar diay aapne aaj. Aur ek cheeze ki maafi chahta hu maine LIKE ko LIYE kar diya hai aur na chah kar bhi seedha "liye khaak huyee" padh raha hu, HI shumaar karne se woh maza nahi aa raha tha. Aapka Dost Ghayel Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta... Mob.: +971 501297654
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10th January 2011, 07:00 PM
Hijr me eid ka tohfa bhi ajab hai zaalaim
Dil huwaa said e jonooN aaNkh bhi namnaak huyee Bahut khoob ... Masood Bhai ! bahut umdaa rahi aapki yeh ghazal bhi .... humeshaa ki tarha ... ! sabhi ashaar ki adaayegi asardaar rahi ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi umdaa khayaaloN ke saath aate rahen aur likhte rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ... ! duaaon ke saath ... !  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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11th January 2011, 10:58 AM
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shabdo ka chayan kiya he,,,,,,,,or dil ki gahraiyo se chukar utar gaye............its very nice.........so sweet.........thanks for sharing with us,,,,,,,,,well done !!!!!!!!!! |
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19th January 2011, 03:46 PM
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shakil bhai allah aap ko jazaaye khair de bahot shukriyaa is hasne zan ka mere bhai mashkoor o mamnoon hun masood |
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19th January 2011, 03:48 PM
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aaj pahlee baat is taraf aayaa hun to sabhi ka shukriyaa adaa kar rahaa hun magar aap ka shukr khaas taor pe kiun ki aap ne sher pasand karne ke saath us ki typing ki jaanib ishaarah kiyaa badaa achhaa lagaa main shukriyaa adaa kartaa hun aap ka aor doaa bhi masood hassaas |
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19th January 2011, 03:50 PM
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aadaab mehraa ji aap jaise log jahaan rahte hain wahaan khushhaali aor barkat aati hai aap jaise sufaid barf dil waale log kam hi milte hain main aap kaa kis zabaan se shukriyaa adaa ki aap har kisee ki himmat badhaate hi rahte hain un me se ek main hun main aap ka shukroiyaa adaa karter karte thak jaaun tab bhi aap ka haq adaa na ho gaa doa go masood hassaas |
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19th January 2011, 03:53 PM
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aadaab kaise ho dost yar maaf karnaa zaraa bussy thaa to shukriya na ada kar sakaa waise aap jaise log hi hain jo baar baar achhe se achhaa likhne ki koshish me lagaaye rahte hain magar fir bhi koi aisee ghazal ab tak main na kah sakaa jis se main santusht hun bas yaar doaa karte rahnaa aor yun hi himmat badhaate rahnaa pata hai aap jaise log hi shair ki jaan hote hain jinko wo apne kalaam sunaa ke zindah rahtaa hai mukhlis masood |
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21st January 2011, 10:49 AM
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2nd March 2011, 12:15 PM
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