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khudkushi - 7th November 2015, 05:30 AM
hamari khudkushi ke charche shahar m am hone lage
jo hme jante tak n the wo bhi hamari yad m rone lge
bewafai ka asa dag lga tha hmare kafan pr bhi
hamari kabra par akar sb wo dag dhone lage
taumra wo hmari muhabbat se inkar krte rhe
par ab wo ijhar kr rhe h jab hm mot k agosh m sone lage
sari kaynat humse rubaru ho rhi h
beabru jinhone hume kiya tha wo bhi hmse rubaru hone lage
ho rhe h rukhsat jahan se bepanah muhabbat leke
jo hume dekh kar muh mod lete the wo bhi humse muhabbat karne lge
so rhe h ase jaise barso se soye n ho
jo abi tk spno m ate the whi hme nind se uthane lge
ankhe nam h sbki or hm phir bhi so rhe h
inko ase dekh k hm kafan m bhi muskurane lage
jb tk hm jinda the kisi n samne burai tak n ki thi
wo aj hmare samne humaree tareefe krne lage
takdeer m to brij tere yahi likha tha
hamaree umeedo k sath hme bhi wo kabra m dafan krne lage
   
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7th November 2015, 12:17 PM
Bahut dard bhara kalaam pesh kiya aapne...
Ehsaas khoob bayaan huye hain...koshish zari rakhein..aur vaqt nikal kar aur logon ko bhi padhein....apki shayri me nikhar aayega yakeenan.....


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shukriya - 7th November 2015, 09:36 PM
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12th November 2015, 09:13 AM
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hamari khudkushi ke charche shahar m am hone lage
jo hme jante tak n the wo bhi hamari yad m rone lge
bewafai ka asa dag lga tha hmare kafan pr bhi
hamari kabra par akar sb wo dag dhone lage
taumra wo hmari muhabbat se inkar krte rhe
par ab wo ijhar kr rhe h jab hm mot k agosh m sone lage
sari kaynat humse rubaru ho rhi h
beabru jinhone hume kiya tha wo bhi hmse rubaru hone lage
ho rhe h rukhsat jahan se bepanah muhabbat leke
jo hume dekh kar muh mod lete the wo bhi humse muhabbat karne lge
so rhe h ase jaise barso se soye n ho
jo abi tk spno m ate the whi hme nind se uthane lge
ankhe nam h sbki or hm phir bhi so rhe h
inko ase dekh k hm kafan m bhi muskurane lage
jb tk hm jinda the kisi n samne burai tak n ki thi
wo aj hmare samne humaree tareefe krne lage
takdeer m to brij tere yahi likha tha
hamaree umeedo k sath hme bhi wo kabra m dafan krne lage
Bahut khoob ehsaas hue hai janaab bayaangi mein aur shaffafat aa sakti hai ...yunhi likhte rahiYe


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waahhhhhhhhhh kya baat hai bahut hi haseen kalaam likha hai................... likhte rahiye....

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