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7th June 2004, 04:39 PM
apne hothon per tujhe sajane ko dil chahey
her waqt khumari mein gungunne ko dil chahey nazreyin thak gayi meri tera intezar kerkey kero kabhi yaad humey sitamgar,,apna bhi dil chahey her taraf andhera hai shahar mein gumon ka ishq-e-shama roshan ho aaj jagmagane ko dil chahey her ashk mein tasveer-e-yara chalak jaye yun bhi moti chun ke labon pe thahar jane ko dil chahey hum shakl koi dikhta hai,,duniya ki bheer mein ger ab to phir se tere roobroo hone ko dil cahhaye ger maut bhi aa jaye to kerna ye dua "sona" teri bahon mein akhiri sansey simtane ko dil chahey |
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7th June 2004, 05:10 PM
apne hothon per tujhe sajane ko dil chahey
her waqt khumari mein gungunne ko dil chahey nazreyin thak gayi meri tera intezar kerkey kero kabhi yaad humey sitamgar,,apna bhi dil chahey her taraf andhera hai shahar mein gumon ka ishq-e-shama roshan ho aaj jagmagane ko dil chahey her ashk mein tasveer-e-yara chalak jaye yun bhi moti chun ke labon pe thahar jane ko dil chahey hum shakl koi dikhta hai,,duniya ki bheer mein ger ab to phir se tere roobroo hone ko dil cahhaye ger maut bhi aa jaye to kerna ye dua "sona" teri bahon mein akhiri sansey simtane ko dil chahey Swati ji sach aap ne mujhe bejubaan kar diya....mein hairat mein pad gaya hoon,,itne naazuk jazbaaton ke moti kis khubsurati se aapne gazal ki mala mein piroye hai,,wo aditiya hai,,,har sher kisi kasturi ke jaise mehak raha hai....ek khumar,,ek meetha sa ehsaas se dil sarabore ho gaya aapko padh kar.... aapki tareef mein aaj har wo shabd chota lpad jayega jo mein likh sakta tha....bas yehi kahunga ki aap ki tareef karna suraj ko diya dikhane jaisa hai... aap sada isi khubsurati se likhte rahein...sada khush rahiye...hamari daad kubool kijiye,....aap ki chahat poori ho yehi aarzooo rahegi. take care -Manoj karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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7th June 2004, 06:03 PM
swati ji,
waqi bohot hi pyara umda likha hai aapne! hum shakl koi dikhta hai,,duniya ki bheer mein ger ab to phir se tere roobroo hone ko dil cahhaye yeh ashaar tho lajawab hain!Is nacheez ki daad qubool kijiye!aur yunhi likhti rahiyega! heena |
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8th June 2004, 05:47 PM
Swati jee,
apki posts hamesha padhti hoon...lekin jawab har baar na de pane ke liye kshama chahti hoon...aur iss post mein yeh do panktiyan dil lubha le gayin her ashk mein tasveer-e-yara chalak jaye yun bhi moti chun ke labon pe thahar jane ko dil chahey last line tau bus ek tasveer see dikha gayi...bahut khuub...daad kabuul farmaayein..hamesha khush rahein paras gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho --Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan |
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8th June 2004, 09:08 PM
Dear Swatiji,
classic...excellent.... pappu.  |
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hello manoj ji
apne meri in shabdon ki itni tareef ker di ki ab to in shabdon ko bhi khud per gurroor ho gaya..hoga,,,!! aap samajh paye iske liye main apki dil se shukjrguzar hoon.... |
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hello paras ji
......aap jab bhi meri kuch panktiyon per apni daad deti hai,,to lagta hai ki mera likhna aur sochna safal ho gaya....aap ki is daad ke liye sach...shukriya,,dil se!!!!!!! khush rahiye aap,,bhi hamesha...! |
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22nd June 2004, 04:11 PM
hello pappu ji
...apke ye chotey -chotey se tareef ke shabd hi hamari hausla-afzai ko kafi hain,,,aapne waqt diya parhne ka aur reply dena ka...hum to iske hi kadrdaan ho gaye,,,! thx,,, |
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