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Waqt-e-furqat - 13th September 2010, 02:19 PM

वक़्त -ए-फुरक़त

ये वक़्त -ए-फुरक़त कितना कठिन है मेरी जाँ
होगा मुश्किल माना था , मगर इतना मुश्किल
सोचा भी ना था

वोह चंचल सी खिलखिलाहट
वोह तुम्हारी मंद मंद सी मुस्कान
वोह तुम्हारे बदन से आते बहार के झोंके
वोह तुम्हारी सादगी में दानाई के इम्कान

वोह तुम्हारा मेरी बाहों में दुनिया को भूल जाना
वोह बहते अश्कों में लरज़ते लबों का मुस्कुराना
वोह तुम्हारी पल पल को शिद्दत से जीने की चाह
वोह तुम्हारी नज़र में फूल से कोमल ख़्वाबों की राह

वोह तुम्हारी डबडबाई आँखों में अनकहे सवाल
वोह तुम्हारे घने दश्त से गेसुओं का जमाल
वोह तुम्हारे होंटों का तिलस्मी खुमार
वोह तुम्हारा मुझ पर बेलोस ऐतबार
बहुत याद आता है यह सब मेरी जान
और याद आता है बहुत तुम्हारा वोह -
"सुनो न "
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वक़्त -ए-फुरक़त-जुदाई का वक़्त ,शिद्दत-intensity,दश्त-जंगल,गेसुओं -बालों,जमाल-सौन्दर्य,beauty,तिलस्मी खुमार -magical intoxication,बेलोस-with total trust.
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WAQT-E-FURQAT

Yeh waqt-e-furqat kitna kathin hai meri jaaN
Hoga mushkil maanaa tha, magar itnaa mushkil
Socha bhi naa thaa

Woh chaNchal si khilkhilahat
Woh tumhari maNd maNd si muskaan
Woh tumharay badan say aatay bahaar kay jhoNkay
Woh tumhaari saadgi maiN daanaai kay imkaan

Woh tumhaaraa meri baahoN maiN duniya ko bhool jaanaa
Woh behtay ashkoN maiN laraztay laboN ka muskuraanaa
Woh tumhaari pal pal ko shiddat say jeenay ki chaah
Woh tumhaari nazar maiN phool say komal khwaaboN ki raah


Woh tumhaari dabdabaai aaNkhoN maiN unkahayay sawaal
Woh tumhaaray ghanay dasht say gasuoN ka jamaal
Woh tumhaaray hoNthoN ka tilsmee khumaar
Woh tumhaaraa mujh par beloss aitbaar

Bahut yaad aataa hai yeh sub meri jaaN
Aur yaad aataa hai bahut tumhaaraa woh-
"SUNO NA"
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30th September 2010, 03:23 PM

वोह तुम्हारी डबडबाई आँखों में अनकहे सवाल
वोह तुम्हारे घने दश्त से गेसुओं का जमाल
वोह तुम्हारे होंटों का तिलस्मी खुमार
वोह तुम्हारा मुझ पर बेलोस ऐतबार
बहुत याद आता है यह सब मेरी जान
और याद आता है बहुत तुम्हारा वोह -
"सुनो न "

wah wah very nice


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Bohat khoob Brijinder ji.....bohat khoobsurat ehsaas haiN...........




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वक़्त -ए-फुरक़त

ये वक़्त -ए-फुरक़त कितना कठिन है मेरी जाँ
होगा मुश्किल माना था , मगर इतना मुश्किल
सोचा भी ना था

वोह चंचल सी खिलखिलाहट
वोह तुम्हारी मंद मंद सी मुस्कान
वोह तुम्हारे बदन से आते बहार के झोंके
वोह तुम्हारी सादगी में दानाई के इम्कान

वोह तुम्हारा मेरी बाहों में दुनिया को भूल जाना
वोह बहते अश्कों में लरज़ते लबों का मुस्कुराना
वोह तुम्हारी पल पल को शिद्दत से जीने की चाह
वोह तुम्हारी नज़र में फूल से कोमल ख़्वाबों की राह

वोह तुम्हारी डबडबाई आँखों में अनकहे सवाल
वोह तुम्हारे घने दश्त से गेसुओं का जमाल
वोह तुम्हारे होंटों का तिलस्मी खुमार
वोह तुम्हारा मुझ पर बेलोस ऐतबार
बहुत याद आता है यह सब मेरी जान
और याद आता है बहुत तुम्हारा वोह -
"सुनो न "
----------------
वक़्त -ए-फुरक़त-जुदाई का वक़्त ,शिद्दत-intensity,दश्त-जंगल,गेसुओं -बालों,जमाल-सौन्दर्य,beauty,तिलस्मी खुमार -magical intoxication,बेलोस-with total trust.
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WAQT-E-FURQAT

Yeh waqt-e-furqat kitna kathin hai meri jaaN
Hoga mushkil maanaa tha, magar itnaa mushkil
Socha bhi naa thaa

Woh chaNchal si khilkhilahat
Woh tumhari maNd maNd si muskaan
Woh tumharay badan say aatay bahaar kay jhoNkay
Woh tumhaari saadgi maiN daanaai kay imkaan

Woh tumhaaraa meri baahoN maiN duniya ko bhool jaanaa
Woh behtay ashkoN maiN laraztay laboN ka muskuraanaa
Woh tumhaari pal pal ko shiddat say jeenay ki chaah
Woh tumhaari nazar maiN phool say komal khwaaboN ki raah


Woh tumhaari dabdabaai aaNkhoN maiN unkahayay sawaal
Woh tumhaaray ghanay dasht say gasuoN ka jamaal
Woh tumhaaray hoNthoN ka tilsmee khumaar
Woh tumhaaraa mujh par beloss aitbaar

Bahut yaad aataa hai yeh sub meri jaaN
Aur yaad aataa hai bahut tumhaaraa woh-
"SUNO NA"
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nazm ke ehsaas bahut pasand aaye
likhte rahen
duaon ke saath


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I am very thankful for the kind words of appreciation.
   
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waqt-e-furqat - 16th October 2010, 03:24 PM

Yeh waqt-e-furqat kitna kathin hai meri jaaN
Hoga mushkil maanaa tha, magar itnaa mushkil
Socha bhi naa thaa
Woh chaNchal si khilkhilahat
Woh tumhari maNd maNd si muskaan
Woh tumharay badan say aatay bahaar kay jhoNkay
Woh tumhaari saadgi maiN daanaai kay imkaan

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O my love
How hard are these times for me
I knew it would be hard
But this hard, I never dreamed anytime

You blooming restlessly
Your smiles pleasing my heart
Your body fresh as spring breeze
Your beauty in your simplicity

[O darling, o darling
I miss you my darling
Forgive me my darling
I was mean to you my darling
Give me another chance, my sweet sweet darling
I will be your slave and you, my master, my darling

bana rahooNga tera deewana zindgi bhar my darling
kaisay tumain manaooN sumjhaaooN my darling
agar tu na wapis aayee to main mar jaooNga my darling
zehar kha kar ya gallay main rassi laga kar, ye abhi pata nahin
lakin kudkashi zarror kar looNga, my darling]

(duniya k mohabbati logo
bachao is deewanay ko
bhaago bhaago, pakaR lao
uski mehbooba ko)

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Very Nice Poetry ........ Brijinder Ji ! Nice Creation ... tahe dil se daad hazir hai ... aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen aage bhi ... khush rahen ....

duaaon ke saath .....




YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...

Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...


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I am very thankful for the words of appreciation.And thank you Kopra sahab for taking time to put it in english words.But i have normally seen that poetry when translitrated usually loses its strength n intensity.What do u say??
   
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