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26th May 2009, 04:12 PM

Mashallah.......................

Kya baat hai Nalin............

Tum to chhaa gaye ho..... har ek labz badi hee sadgi se tumhare ehesaas bayan kar raha hai.....

well done ...............



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Purvi Jee, bas yeh toh apki dua hai ki, jiski wajah se itna accha poem me likh paaya...................... aur apki wishes saath rahi toh aise hi likhta rahunga, poem padne ka behad shukriya..............
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Mashallah.......................

Kya baat hai Nalin............

Tum to chhaa gaye ho..... har ek labz badi hee sadgi se tumhare ehesaas bayan kar raha hai.....

well done ...............



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27th May 2009, 02:59 PM

tu Qaatil terii aankheiN Qaatil
teri baateiN qaatil ,har adaa Qaatil
ufff .......mat dekha kar aaina meri jaan
kahin takkra na jaye Qaatil se Qaatil


yeh puri poem mera nahi hai kahin se padhi thi 2line
baqi 2 line maine khud jod diya

uff keliye



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Baat itni si hai bas uski "ufff" mein ke mere dono jahan usme samaye hain
wo koi khoobsurat pari to nahi hai lekin khoobsurat bohot uski adayen hain
   
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27th May 2009, 03:21 PM

jab vo Uff kaha karti hai to ye mehsoos hoti hai
kuchh to taklif usko meri baatoN se hoti hai



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27th May 2009, 05:42 PM

ab tumse kya kahun, thread reply diya toh hi gazab ho gaya aur ab toh tumne hi shayri kehdi is "uff" , ab toh yeh superhit poem ho jaayegi.............100%
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tu Qaatil terii aankheiN Qaatil
teri baateiN qaatil ,har adaa Qaatil
ufff .......mat dekha kar aaina meri jaan
kahin takkra na jaye Qaatil se Qaatil


yeh puri poem mera nahi hai kahin se padhi thi 2line
baqi 2 line maine khud jod diya

uff keliye



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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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27th May 2009, 05:45 PM

BAQZ bhai, apne itna payara sa aur tomantic reply likha hai, yakeen nahi hota, mujhe toh laga ki ap kahoge, ki ab bahut zyada "ufff" ho gaya hai, toh "Iodex maliye, kaam pe chaliye". Iodex, Uff,aa, ouch.............se AHa tak..............

waise lines toh katil likhi hai apne........
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Baat itni si hai bas uski "ufff" mein ke mere dono jahan usme samaye hain
wo koi khoobsurat pari to nahi hai lekin khoobsurat bohot uski adayen hain



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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BAQZ bhai, apne itna payara sa aur tomantic reply likha hai, yakeen nahi hota, mujhe toh laga ki ap kahoge, ki ab bahut zyada "ufff" ho gaya hai, toh "Iodex maliye, kaam pe chaliye". Iodex, Uff,aa, ouch.............se AHa tak..............

waise lines toh katil likhi hai apne........
Tomantic aur mein kabhi nahi........

now dont be toooo tomantic and dont be toooo Tramatic.....

Next thing u gonna write Aaah.... phir uski Ouch par likho gey....

Ab wo sab bhi tou jhell na padega na..... (Mr... Tomantic)
   
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what a silly mistake i did, romantic ko tomantic kar diya, aur ap bhi kam nahi ho, ek bhi mauka nahi chorte kisi ki bhi taang kheechne ka, kyun Mr. Baqtiar....... ha hahaha ha

par jis andaz me apne jawab diya, maza a gaya, ab sko bolte hian "THE BAQZ STYLE"

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Tomantic aur mein kabhi nahi........

now dont be toooo tomantic and dont be toooo Tramatic.....

Next thing u gonna write Aaah.... phir uski Ouch par likho gey....

Ab wo sab bhi tou jhell na padega na..... (Mr... Tomantic)



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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28th May 2009, 04:28 PM

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Muskuraye Jab Woh Toh Sari Kaynat Hansa Karti Hai,
Pade Uske Kadam Jahan Woh Jagah Jannat Hua Karti Hai,
Dil Ke Sagar Ne Ehsaason Ki Ek Leher Utha Karti Hai,
Meri Badmashiyon Pe Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jo Mudke Dekh Le Bas Ek Nazar Toh Zindagi Thama Karti Hai,
Uske Har Kadam Ki Aaahat Pe Rituayein Badla Karti Hain
Mere Bikhre Se LAfzon Ki Gazhal Bana Karti Hai,
Sunke Mere Kafiye Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Jab Bhi Mil Jaye Woh Toh Khushiyan Inayat Karti Hai,
Apni Pyari Si Baaton Se Man Ko Chua Karti Hai,
Meri Zindagi Ki Rehguzar Ko Manzil Mila Karti Hai,
Sunke Meri Daastan-E-Zindagi Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

Khuda Hi Jane Yeh Kaisi Justaju Saath Mere Hua Karti Hai,
Jitna Rehta Hun Dur Utna Hi Woh Mere Kareeb Hua Karti Hai,
Yeh Kaisi Kashish Uske Lafzon Me Hua Karti Hai,
Zindagi Se hoti Hai Mohobbat Jab Woh "Uff" Kaha Karti Hai

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Bahut pyaar aata hai,,,,, ek uspar,,,,, ek uski "Uff" par...

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28th May 2009, 05:00 PM

Bahut Bahut Shukriya Amit Bhai,

waise apne bhi kya kamal likha hai, aap aaye mere thread pe bahut bahut shukriya apka. and thanks alot for reps. bas yunhi ap mera honsla badate rahiye....................... aur khuda kare ap chand banke apni "chandani" ke saath, mohobbat ke aasman me hamesha bulan rahein......



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Kya Yaar Nalin Bhai,.. Aapne toh office mein mujhe meri Chandni ki yaad dila di. Bahut hi khoobsurat Ehsaas hain. Padh k maza aa gaya.....

Dhadakta hai dil har shaam, har alfaaz har guf-ta-goo par
Bahut pyaar aata hai,,,,, ek uspar,,,,, ek uski "Uff" par...

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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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30th May 2009, 05:54 PM

oye ye uff ka chakkar kya hain
mr chhuppe rustam
yaha to sab uff uff ke baarein mein jaan na chahte hain waise ye gadbad kab ki
dikhti kaise hain
miss uff
sach mein uff karti hain
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Toh finally aa gayi tum meri thread pe reply dene, kahan thi aap itne din...
he he he he, Bahut bahut shukriya apka muskaan ji, apne meri poem ko padne ke liye waqt nikala..... Thanks alot muskaan


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oye ye uff ka chakkar kya hain
mr chhuppe rustam
yaha to sab uff uff ke baarein mein jaan na chahte hain waise ye gadbad kab ki
dikhti kaise hain
miss uff
sach mein uff karti hain
he he he
keep smiling
bahot baatein karni hain
jab miloge tab bataungi
tc n bye
miss u



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Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
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25th July 2009, 09:19 AM

Ab Kisi ki "Uff" ko ham na dil se lagayenge,
Ab kisi ke lafzon pe na ham gazhal banayenge,
har muskurahat ke badle diya hai gam aisa,
ab chahe ke bhi ham na muskura paayenge..



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
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Hey all!!!!!

I have started documenting my shayari and poems on my blog at

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Plz Have a look and comment. Its in Hindi.
   
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Musafir Jee, i think ur spamming my thread..................................
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Hey all!!!!!

I have started documenting my shayari and poems on my blog at

http://beingnostalgic.blogspot.com

Plz Have a look and comment. Its in Hindi.



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Uski Har "Uff" pe hum apni jaan lutate rahe,
Uski Shaqsiyat ko karke buland hum khudko mitate rahe,
Raahe-e-mohobbat me hamne kuch yun paya sila wafa ka,
woh dete rahe zakhm pe zakhm aur ham muskurate rahe




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