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5th February 2005, 12:52 PM
Mohabbat mubaraq tumhe ham gam-e-rojgaar ke mare hai
gar tum ho ghayal nazron se to ham talwaar ke mare hai
murjha kar girte rahe phool armanon ki daali se
darr kaisa unhe khiza se jo bahaar ke mare hai
dam todte khawabon ka janaja kandhe par uthaye
ham khud se lagi ummeedon ke bhaar ke mare hai
raah ke patharon ke naseeb mein nahin manzilein "kureel"
ham bhatke hue musafir waqt ki maar ke mare hai.
-Manoj Kureel
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Re: gam-e-rojgaar -
5th February 2005, 01:05 PM
Manoj...
dekh rahi hoon...apki kalam parwaan chadh rahi hai...josh aa gaya hai, ek jazzba hai jo dekhte hee banta hai...daad kabool karein...
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Mohabbat mubaraq tumhe ham gam-e-rojgaar ke mare hai
gar tum ho ghayal nazron se to ham talwaar ke mare hai
murjha kar girte rahe phool armanon ki daali se
darr kaisa unhe khiza se jo bahaar ke mare hai
dam todte khawabon ka janaja kandhe par uthaye
ham khud se lagi ummeedon ke bhaar ke mare hai
raah ke patharon ke naseeb mein nahin manzilein "kureel"
ham bhatke hue musafir waqt ki maar ke mare hai.
-Manoj Kureel
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ek ek sher, josh sa paida kar gaya...ek gana hua karta thaa...
tumhi ho mata pita tumhi ho ...yaad hai..?
usmein ek line thee...
jo khil sake na wo phool hum hain
main jab yeh bachon ko sikhaya karti thee...mujhe bahut chubta thaa...isliey maine hamesha isse yoon sikhaaya
jo kal khileinge wo phool hum hain...bus aise hee yaad aa gaya...tau likh diya...
apna khayaal rakhna
paras
nayi ruton mein wo kuchh aur qareeb aaye
gayi ruton ka sulagataa sa intezaar bhii ho
mere khuloos kaa andaaz ye bhii sachhaa hai
rakhuun na rabt magar dostii shumaar bhii ho
--Sayyidaa Fatimaa Hasan
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5th February 2005, 01:08 PM
Hi Manoj Bhai,
Aur ek naya din, aur ek nayaab kalaam aap ki oor se. Bohot khoob mere bhai. Behud pasand aaya aap ka likha.
Luvs,
Salim
If there are no tears in the eyes, there will be no rainbow in the soul
Happiness is a butterfly, which, when pursued, is always just beyond your grasp, but which, if you sit down quietly, may alight upon you.
We come to love not by finding a perfect person but by learning to see an imperfect person perfectly
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5th February 2005, 06:06 PM
Raahi tu mat ruk jaana
TufaaN se bhi na ghabraana
Kabhi to milegi, teri manzil
KaheeN door gagan ki chhaaNv me..
Manoj mere dost....tumhaari rachna parhi...or samjhi bhi....jab mai bahut niraash hota hooN to is song ko sun leta hooN...kuchh halka mehsoos hota hai...
Weise suna hi hoga tumne bhi...
Him.mat-e-mardaaN.....Madad-e-Khuda..
So...Keep smiling...
Kalaam ki taareef ab kya karooN...wo tumne likh diya to khud hi ek taareef ban jaata hai.
Chaand
Sachh bolne ka hausla to, hum bhi rakhte haiN lekin
Anjaam sochkar, aksar khaamosh hi reh jaate haiN.
- Chaand
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5th February 2005, 09:35 PM
classic..lajavab...thanks for posting dost.
pappu.
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5th February 2005, 10:55 PM
Manoj Bhai
kya baat hai...janaab
murjha kar girte rahe phool armanon ki daali se
darr kaisa unhe khiza se jo bahaar ke mare hai
bohot acche... yeh chand sher apne aap taameer ho gaye aapke iss kalaam ke tasavvur mein khoye hue... ummed hai pasand aayenge..
hum to bahaar ke hi sitam ke mare hue,
rehte hain dil ko thaam ke har dum dare hue.
tareek andheroN mein guzaara gaya bachpan,
thaame hue tanhaayee ki unglee baDe hue.
likhte rahiyega.... dua go.
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Namaskar kureel ji -
6th February 2005, 01:23 AM
Namaskar kureel ji
kya baat kahi hay aapney apni rachna se..........aapki rachnao ki ek khasiyat rehtey hay ki woh kayi bar bahut kuch keh jaatey hain......itne aserdar jo hoti hay
Mohabbat mubaraq tumhe ham gam-e-rojgaar ke mare hai
gar tum ho ghayal nazron se to ham talwaar ke mare hai
murjha kar girte rahe phool armanon ki daali se
darr kaisa unhe khiza se jo bahaar ke mare hai
dam todte khawabon ka janaja kandhe par uthaye
ham khud se lagi ummeedon ke bhaar ke mare hai
raah ke patharon ke naseeb mein nahin manzilein "kureel"
ham bhatke hue musafir waqt ki maar ke mare hai.
Bahut aserdar rachna hay..........Nice composition indeed.
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Re: gam-e-rojgaar -
6th February 2005, 10:54 AM
Quote:
Originally posted by manoj kureel
Mohabbat mubaraq tumhe ham gam-e-rojgaar ke mare hai
gar tum ho ghayal nazron se to ham talwaar ke mare hai
murjha kar girte rahe phool armanon ki daali se
darr kaisa unhe khiza se jo bahaar ke mare hai
dam todte khawabon ka janaja kandhe par uthaye
ham khud se lagi ummeedon ke bhaar ke mare hai
raah ke patharon ke naseeb mein nahin manzilein "kureel"
ham bhatke hue musafir waqt ki maar ke mare hai.
-Manoj Kureel
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manoj,
chaand ne sahi kaha hai ....
tum jab likhte ho to woh rachna khud hi taarif hoti hai. ooski aur taarif kaise ho?
khush raho.
didi
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7th February 2005, 11:40 AM
murjha kar girte rahe phool armanon ki daali se
darr kaisa unhe khiza se jo bahaar ke mare hai
Manoj Bhai.....
kitna gehr khayal hai aapka.....
sach mein behad nayab kalam hai....
kush raho mere bhai........
**(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)**
*·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·*
**(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)**
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inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si.....
aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae......
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8th February 2005, 08:02 AM
Manoj ji
raah ke patharon ke naseeb mein nahin manzilein "kureel"
ham bhatke hue musafir waqt ki maar ke mare hai.
I liked your writing especially the last sentences, very good composition.
The higher you go, steeper will be the valley and greater will be the fall.
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Re: Re: gam-e-rojgaar -
12th February 2005, 01:33 PM
shukriya paars
bahooot ache tareeke se tumne mujhe apni baat samjhai...shukriya.take care
-Manoj
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Re: gam-e-rojgaar -
12th February 2005, 08:49 PM
Quote:
Originally posted by manoj kureel
Mohabbat mubaraq tumhe ham gam-e-rojgaar ke mare hai
gar tum ho ghayal nazron se to ham talwaar ke mare hai
murjha kar girte rahe phool armanon ki daali se
darr kaisa unhe khiza se jo bahaar ke mare hai
dam todte khawabon ka janaja kandhe par uthaye
ham khud se lagi ummeedon ke bhaar ke mare hai
raah ke patharon ke naseeb mein nahin manzilein "kureel"
ham bhatke hue musafir waqt ki maar ke mare hai.
-Manoj Kureel
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bhai ,,...
kuch asharoN se ek kalaam sajate ho...
haal-e-jindgi jisse hume batate ho...
janta huN yahi hai dard-e-"saccha_pyar"
phir bhi alfazoN se deewana banate ho...
bhai ...
shayad isi liye maiN apne aapko aapka fan kehta huN ... kalaam nahi haalat e jindgi bayaN ki hai humne ... har sher maiN sacchai ki woh hawa bhari hai ... ki kalaam ka vajan itna badh gaya hai ... ki nazroN se hattna hi nahi chahta ... bhai humeN bhi claas de do ... hum bhi kuch seekh leNge ... waise yahaN to itna kuch shikha hi jate ho... yuN hi haal e dil sunate rahiyega ...
aapka bhai
kunal
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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20th February 2005, 03:01 PM
hi salim
shukrya janab aapki hauslaafzai ke liye,,,deir se reply dene ke liye muaafi chahata hoon.....take care
-MANOJ]
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20th February 2005, 03:06 PM
Raahi tu mat ruk jaana
TufaaN se bhi na ghabraana
Kabhi to milegi, teri manzil
KaheeN door gagan ki chhaaNv me..
HI CHAND
dost mein ek gaane ko aksar gungunata hoon bekashi ke lamho mein.."wo subha kabhi to aaayegi"....bas usi subah ke intezaar mein yeh gam ki raat guzaare ja raha hon....
Him.mat-e-mardaaN.....Madad-e-Khuda..
yeh bahot sahi baat kahi tumne....khuda meri madad kare na kare...mein chalta hi jaunga..chahe phir manzil mile ya na mile....
shukriya dost tumhari anmol baaton ke liye...bahot acha laga tumhara post padh kar...take care
-MANOJ
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20th February 2005, 03:07 PM
shukriya pappu bhai....bahot acha laga aapko yahan dekh kar.....take care
-MANOJ
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20th February 2005, 03:09 PM
hum to bahaar ke hi sitam ke mare hue,
rehte hain dil ko thaam ke har dum dare hue.
tareek andheroN mein guzaara gaya bachpan,
thaame hue tanhaayee ki unglee baDe hue.
TALIB BHAI
sach..bahoot acha laga aapka reply apne kalaam par paa kar....aapke likhe aashar bahooot sundar hai..meri daad kubool kijiye..aajkal masroofiyat ki wajeh se yahan aana bahoot kam ho gaya hai..magar jab bhi aata hoon aapko jaroor padhta hoon..kyunki aap bejode likhte ho....aapki hauslaafzai ke liye dil se shukriya
-MANOJ
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Re: Namaskar kureel ji -
20th February 2005, 03:11 PM
NAMASHKAR SUKANYA JI
bahot khushi hui aap ka reply padh kar,.,,aur likhne ka ek naya jazba bhi mila....dil ki gehraiyon se aabhari hon aapka....take care
-MANOJ
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20th February 2005, 09:49 PM
Manoj Bhai
Adaab baja lata huN ...
kisi ghazal ke andaaz pe mil ke kisi sher ke anjaam pe bichad jana bhi kitna ajeeb saa lagta hai .. kya kareiN naseeb hai jo bhi deta hai sir aakhoN pe rakhte haiN ..
tareefmeiN kya likheiN .. aapke naam pe jo bhi padh lete haiN achha lagne lagta hai .. yaa to naam kaa asar hai yaa Qalaam kaa jiska asar aapki kalam meiN hai ..
DaaD ke sath
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31st March 2005, 07:23 PM
MEENA DI
taareeef ke liye shukriya...behad acha laga meri koshish ko aap ne saraaha...dil se shukrguzaaar hoon...take care
-Manoj
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31st March 2005, 07:25 PM
hi aman
kaise ho dost...aajkal masrooofiyat ke kaaran bahooot dinon se kuch naya nahin likh saka hoon...tumse kiya wada jald hi nibhaunga....mujhe bahooot acha laga ki tumne mujhe yaad kiya....tareeef ke liye bahoot bahoot shukriya
take care
-MANOJ
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9th May 2005, 11:51 AM
hi
behad khoob
bahut acha laga padh ke
sonal
~~ u never know where ur destiny takes u ~~
There would come a time when
we have to stop loving a person
not because that person started hating us .....
but because we found out that they'd be happier if we let me go.....
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9th May 2005, 12:20 PM
manoj
tumne apni nazm me ek baar phir se ye sabit ker diya hai ki "aur bhi gum hain jamane me mohabbat ke siwa"...baki bahut acchi rachna ke liye dil se daad.....
swati...............some words about tears in!
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1st August 2005, 07:11 PM
shadow Saahab
hauslaafzai ke liye bahoot bahoot shukriya....deir se reply dene ke liye muaafi ka talabgaar hoon...likhte rahiye
-MANOJ
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Re: Re: gam-e-rojgaar -
1st August 2005, 07:14 PM
kuch asharoN se ek kalaam sajate ho...
haal-e-jindgi jisse hume batate ho...
janta huN yahi hai dard-e-"saccha_pyar"
phir bhi alfazoN se deewana banate ho...
HI KUNAL
bahooot bahoot khubsurat sher likha hai tumne.....meri daad kubool karo...aur dost tumne sach bahoot jayda hi tareef kar di na-cheez ki....meiun bas dil ke jazbaaton ko sachai ke saath bayan karne ki koshish bhar karta hoon,,,,aapako acha lagta hai,,,to mein apni koshish safal hui samjhta hoon.,,,,aap sab ke saath bazm ki is mehfil mein apne gamon ko share kar ke apna dil halka kar leta hoon....waise tumhari tareef hamesha dil sdee nikalti hai,,shayad isisliye tumhare reply ka aankhein intezaar karti hai.,...likhte rahiye khush rahiye
-MANOJ
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1st August 2005, 07:16 PM
kSHITIZ SAAHEB
AADAB JANAB
kaise hai huzooor?>??
saahab aap ki daad dene ka andaaz bhi aapki gazlon ki tarah sabse mukhtlif hai.,.....bahoot acha laga aap ka reply dekh kar....dil ki gehraiyon se shukriya.,..take care
-MANOJ
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1st August 2005, 07:17 PM
SONI SONAL JI
tareeef lke liye dil se shukriya....take care
SWATI
bahooot acha laga tumhara reply padh kar.,..dil ki gehraiyon se aapka shukriya..take care
-MANOJ
apne usoolon par ham apne andaaz se chalte hai
karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein.
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