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main aur mere alfaaz-few words of encouragement -
31st January 2012, 04:27 PM
main yahan un alfaazo ko jagah de rahaN huN
jinhe padhkar kar shayad aap sab apni zindagi
kuch aur behtr bana sakeN............
" manzilleN unhi ko milti hain jo
lehron ki rukh ko dagah deteN
hain.......
unko nahi milti jo kinnaro pe khade
ho kar sirf mazah lete hain......."
" maana ki purzor koshish ki tumne
aasma hilaane ki.........
badi kimat wasoolta hai wo zamee
pe aane ki.........
insaa wahi hai jo himmat na haare
aasma ko cheer kar le aaye sitare"
"kamao itna k kam na ho..........
jamao itna k gham na ho..........
maut aayegi to kuch na le paoge.......
fir kya tum kafan mein jeb silwaoge????????"
"zindagi jine ka gurr seekh paoge kabtak??????
apni hasi se ghamo ko chuppaoge kabtak??????
zindagi aaj nahi to kal rooth hi jayegi tumse.......
dekhna wahi to hai k tum isko mannaoge kabtak?????"
"housle bulandh ho grr tumhare........
khuda bhi bhejta hai mushkille bohat saare........
jo rakhte hain himmat imtihaano mein.........
hai zikr unka har affsaano mein............
chahte ho tum bhi jo aaisa zikr paana.........
to mushkillo k aage kabhi na sar jhukaana........."
"ye na socho k kya hua tumhe is zindagi se haasil........
ye socho k kya tum bana paaye zindagi ko is kaabil........
k guzro jidhar se bhi is jahan mein........
har mehfil mein ho bus zikr tumhara..........
tum hi raho har charcha-e-aam mein shaamil.............."
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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31st January 2012, 09:03 PM
very true n nice lines.... ananthpak ji
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2nd February 2012, 02:14 PM
Bahot bahot shukriya aapka richa ji........thanx for the appreciation
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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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3rd February 2012, 09:59 AM
ahche vichaar haiN, yuNhi likhte rahiye....
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3rd February 2012, 03:13 PM
bahot bahot shukriya taish ji...is housla afzaayi ka
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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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25th August 2014, 12:20 AM
waah wahh! Ananth jii...
aap aur aap ke alfaaz ... dono hi bohat ache haiN!
likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th August 2014, 07:01 AM
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Originally Posted by ananthpak
main yahan un alfaazo ko jagah de rahaN huN
jinhe padhkar kar shayad aap sab apni zindagi
kuch aur behtr bana sakeN............
" manzilleN unhi ko milti hain jo
lehron ki rukh ko dagah deteN
hain.......
unko nahi milti jo kinnaro pe khade
ho kar sirf mazah lete hain......."
" maana ki purzor koshish ki tumne
aasma hilaane ki.........
badi kimat wasoolta hai wo zamee
pe aane ki.........
insaa wahi hai jo himmat na haare
aasma ko cheer kar le aaye sitare"
"kamao itna k kam na ho..........
jamao itna k gham na ho..........
maut aayegi to kuch na le paoge.......
fir kya tum kafan mein jeb silwaoge????????"
"zindagi jine ka gurr seekh paoge kabtak??????
apni hasi se ghamo ko chuppaoge kabtak??????
zindagi aaj nahi to kal rooth hi jayegi tumse.......
dekhna wahi to hai k tum isko mannaoge kabtak?????"
"housle bulandh ho grr tumhare........
khuda bhi bhejta hai mushkille bohat saare........
jo rakhte hain himmat imtihaano mein.........
hai zikr unka har affsaano mein............
chahte ho tum bhi jo aaisa zikr paana.........
to mushkillo k aage kabhi na sar jhukaana........."
"ye na socho k kya hua tumhe is zindagi se haasil........
ye socho k kya tum bana paaye zindagi ko is kaabil........
k guzro jidhar se bhi is jahan mein........
har mehfil mein ho bus zikr tumhara..........
tum hi raho har charcha-e-aam mein shaamil.............."
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Dear anant ji
Bohut khoobsoorat vichaar hain aapke aur apki khubsoorat shuksiyat ke bare mein apke interview mein pad kar bohut khushi hui.
Bas ek prashn-agar aap bura na maane toh puchun? Yeh kamaao itna ke kam na ho wala sher aapne kahin aur bhi publish kiya hai kya? Kyunki ye mere paas what'sapp par aaya tha.
Regards
Sarika
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25th August 2014, 07:38 AM
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waah wahh! Ananth jii...
aap aur aap ke alfaaz ... dono hi bohat ache haiN!
likhte rahiye,,
DuaooN ke saath,
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Bohat bohat shukriya Hassan bhai
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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25th August 2014, 08:22 AM
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Dear anant ji
Bohut khoobsoorat vichaar hain aapke aur apki khubsoorat shuksiyat ke bare mein apke interview mein pad kar bohut khushi hui.
Bas ek prashn-agar aap bura na maane toh puchun? Yeh kamaao itna ke kam na ho wala sher aapne kahin aur bhi publish kiya hai kya? Kyunki ye mere paas what'sapp par aaya tha.
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Sarika
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Namaste Sarika ji
Bohat bohat dhanyawaad aap ka ki aap ko ye meri rachna pasand aayi aur meri shaksiyat bhi achhi lagi aapko...jahan tak wo kamao itna k kam ki baat ye sare posts main ne yahan jan2012 main kiye hain ...iske alawa facebook(2011) meri blog (ananthpak.blogspot.com) aur ek indian railways ki group magazine main bhi publish hua hai...kisi ne copy paste kiya hoga
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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25th August 2014, 09:42 AM
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Namaste Sarika ji
Bohat bohat dhanyawaad aap ka ki aap ko ye meri rachna pasand aayi aur meri shaksiyat bhi achhi lagi aapko...jahan tak wo kamao itna k kam ki baat ye sare posts main ne yahan jan2012 main kiye hain ...iske alawa facebook(2011) meri blog (ananthpak.blogspot.com) aur ek indian railways ki group magazine main bhi publish hua hai...kisi ne copy paste kiya hoga
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Mujhe aisa hi laga tha.
Yeh copy paste karne wale aksar crdit dena bhool jaate hain jo ki dukh ki baat hai.
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Sarika
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25th August 2014, 10:51 AM
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Namaste Sarika ji
Bohat bohat dhanyawaad aap ka ki aap ko ye meri rachna pasand aayi aur meri shaksiyat bhi achhi lagi aapko...jahan tak wo kamao itna k kam ki baat ye sare posts main ne yahan jan2012 main kiye hain ...iske alawa facebook(2011) meri blog (ananthpak.blogspot.com) aur ek indian railways ki group magazine main bhi publish hua hai...kisi ne copy paste kiya hoga
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Quote:
Originally Posted by masti
Mujhe aisa hi laga tha.
Yeh copy paste karne wale aksar crdit dena bhool jaate hain jo ki dukh ki baat hai.
Regards
Sarika
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Ananth sir and Sarika jii,,
Jii copy paste wala problem hur kisi ke saath aata hai,
bohat awkward mehsoos hua tha jab mere saath bhi aisa hua,
Sarika jii.. aap ne jo meri ghazal kal padh'i (Apni Wehshat ko
humsafar kar ke) http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=68626
Meri yeH ghazal bhi kisi ne churra (stole) kar ke apne personal
blog pe post ki... See:
http://bewafalarka.blogspot.com/2014...far-kar-k.html
Alas! we can't do anything about that!
Regards,
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th August 2014, 11:04 AM
Anant ji, bahut acche vichar hai, agar ham sab enko apni zindgi meiN amal meiN le aaye to kya baat hai...par ham ensaaN jab tak aisi baate padte hai tab tak lagta hai ki bahut sahi hai, amal meiN laana bhi mushkil nahi hai, par waqt aane par yeh sab baate dil-dimaag meiN aati hi nahi
khair, aise acche vichaar kuch waqt to dil meiN ghar karte hi hai...hamesha nahi to na sahi
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25th August 2014, 12:05 PM
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Sahi kaha Hassan bhai...mere kai nazm aur sher ek fb page par bhi share karta raha koi
bina credit diye...mujhe koi harz nahi koi meri likhi hui cheez agar share karta hai to sirf credit dede bus
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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25th August 2014, 12:07 PM
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Sahi kaha Hassan bhai...mere kai nazm aur sher ek fb page par bhi share karta raha koi
bina credit diye...mujhe koi harz nahi koi meri likhi hui cheez agar share karta hai to sirf credit dede bus
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Ananth sir... inhi batoN ko dekhte huay..
humeN apna "Deewaan" jald hi publish karwa lena chaiye!
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th August 2014, 12:10 PM
Bohat bohat shukriya Dii aapka ki aap ko mere vichaar achhe lage...aap ki baat puri tarah se sach hai ki asl zindagi main ye saari baatein amal main lana mushkil lagta hai ...par koshish ki ja sakti hai
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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25th August 2014, 12:14 PM
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
*pari*
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25th August 2014, 12:19 PM
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sir.. sahi keH raha hooN naa! .. kam az kam copyrights to reserved raheN ge
*hSn* : parStaar
tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di!
kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad")
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25th August 2014, 01:59 PM
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sir.. sahi keH raha hooN naa! .. kam az kam copyrights to reserved raheN ge
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Sahi kaha hassan bhai ...ab kuch na kuch to karna padega
Mohabbat ke ye silsile na the
Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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27th August 2014, 09:38 AM
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Wow jij amazing....apki talent ki kayal hogai...bahot hi khoobsurat khayal hain...thnx for sharing reps pending.
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Thanx for the appreciation saali
Sahiba
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Jab tak tum hum mile na the
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