BHITAR NI VEDNA(the internal pain).....(Gujarati)

aas_sea1126 · **BHITAR NI VEDNA(the internal pain).....(Gujarati) -** 13th July 2005, 10:50 PM

Aansu na ajvale moti parovi, tame antar na dariya ujalo,
O sanjni tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Aansuda aavyata jivan samjavvane,lagni ni hodi hankaro,
O sajni tame bhttar ni vedna ne khalo.

Satey akash thashe sathi tamara,tame koinu jivtar to ujalo,
O sajni tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Duniya na dard badha bhuli jai ne,tame vhalap ni nauka ma mhalo
O sanji tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Shabdo na sathvare gunthi aapu tamne,kaladaar jivatar no malo,
O sajni tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Vanra te van(vrindavan) ma raas ramvane tamne bolave vaansli valo,
O sanji tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

-By."Aas"(Dr.Ashish) -Dil ne ade to pratibhav aapsho....

-Ashish

Parul · 13th July 2005, 11:04 PM

Dear Aashish ji,

Kem chho? ghana divas pacchi aavya, badhu theek chhe ne, ketla divas pacchi gujarati ma vanchyu. maja aavhi gayi. shu samachar chhe India naa? khoob saras lakhyu chhe... ghano aabhar tamari rachna ne andhi post karva badal, bas aamaj lakhta rehjo, ane khush rehjo......take care!

aas_sea1126 · **:) -** 14th July 2005, 06:26 PM

Dear Parul,

Tame vaanchta rahesho...samajta rehsho ane vhaali meethi gujarati bhasha nu sanidhya manta rehsho to ame lakhta rahishu...pratibhav badal aabhar....

"Jagat ne kari de game tyare jagrat..
Kalandar na naara chhe mari gazal ma.."

-Amrit "Ghayal"

Matrubhasha Maa jevi vhaali lage...

Mukhe bolu maa...ane mane saachey balpan sambhre...
motap ni badhi maja mane kadvi lage "Kagda"

-Kavi"Kag"

manomanthan karjo parul...to adshe..it will touch...

-Ashish

Pyarali Rajan · 15th July 2005, 01:49 PM

Ashish Ji,

Satey akash thashe sathi tamara,tame koinu jivtar to ujalo,
O sajni tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Duniya na dard badha bhuli jai ne,tame vhalap ni nauka ma mhalo
O sanji tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Wah! - Atti sunder - Kharekhar khubaj saras kavya rachna!!

Rajan!!!

aas_sea1126 · 16th July 2005, 10:19 PM

Dear Rajan ji,

Pratisaad aapva badal aabhar....

-Ashish

Angeleyess

Doctor Ji
Bahut acheyyyy.... Gulzar ki ek line yaad aagaiye.... " Dil me aise sambhalte hain gum..jaise zaewar sambhalta hai koi "

Itna Dard nahi sanjoke rakhte janaab...

.

Aap ki kya rai hai Parul ji ??????

Parul · 20th July 2005, 06:32 AM

Aap ne sahi kaha Angeleyess ji..

Dr. needs to calm down

Dil ko chhu gaye yeh khyaal. Thanks for sharing your creation mr. Aashish ji... take care, be happy!

Angeleyess · 20th July 2005, 09:16 PM

Doctor Ji
Parul ji aur meri rai mann lijiyega

.
Dard ko bahut ache se explain kiya hai aapne

, Per itna dard nahi sanjote janaab... zara apne aas paas dekhiyega...koi zaroor hoga jo aapk har dard ko baatna chahta hoga... sab ki life me zaroor hota hai..sirf dekhne ki baat hai.
Aur jab aisa koi mil jata hai na..tou kya mazaalllll dard aapk paas bhi aye.. .... True love is very powerfullll... ..can get 1 thru any thing .....bus ek baar yakeen kar dekhiyega os pyar pe... .. thore din k liye apni nigebaani ose soooup dijiye... ....aage aap khudh hi itne samjhdaar hain

Take care n Keep smiling ..coz that might make some 1`s day

n u never know whozz watching ..

sagrika · **mari duniya -** 22nd July 2005, 07:55 PM

ashish ji ghana time pachi ahiya aawi choo.ghana nawa dosto khub saru lakhe che,,tamaru lakhel wanchi aankh bharai gai,,desh ne ghar ne ghar na loko yaad awi gaya,,aamj aapdi gujrati bhasha ne jiwant rakhishu.ek warsaad nu tipoo ame chabi ma madhyu ,,tyaar thi bhej bhryaa orda kora na thaya ,,aaj warsaad nathi em naa kehwaay em kahiye hashe aapne bhina naa thyaa.(not mine).bye to all friends.fari malisu. cu.

Angeleyess · **Re: mari duniya -** 23rd July 2005, 04:20 PM

"ek warsaad nu tipoo ame chabi ma madhyu ,,tyaar thi bhej bhryaa orda kora na thaya ,,aaj warsaad nathi em naa kehwaay em kahiye hashe aapne bhina naa thyaa"

Sagrika ji......wah wah Majaa Aavi gayaa...

do keep on sharing

silver3in · 8th August 2005, 11:57 PM

Hi Ashish,
Kharekhar khubaj saras lakhyu che tame. Ne angeleyes ni salaah maanjo. Mutthi ne bandh rakhva karta ene kholi nakhjo. If you need a friend i'm here for you. Take care and smile.
Ta,
Jhakal

aas_sea1126 · 5th March 2006, 07:42 PM

Bandhi muthi lakh ni...khuli jay to rakh ni...khush rehje

-Ashish

aas_sea1126 · 3rd March 2007, 03:55 PM

Aansu na ajvale moti parovi, tame antar na dariya ujalo,
O sanjni tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Aansuda aavyata jivan samjavvane,lagni ni hodi hankaro,
O sajni tame bhttar ni vedna ne khalo.

Satey akash thashe sathi tamara,tame koinu jivtar to ujalo,
O sajni tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Duniya na dard badha bhuli jai ne,tame vhalap ni nauka ma mhalo
O sanji tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Shabdo na sathvare gunthi aapu tamne,kaladaar jivatar no malo,
O sajni tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

Vanra te van(vrindavan) ma raas ramvane tamne bolave vaansli valo,
O sanji tame bhitar ni vedna ne khalo.

-By."Aas"(Dr.Ashish) -Dil ne ade to pratibhav aapsho....

-Ashish

Dhaval · 9th March 2007, 05:41 PM

ashish bhai kem chho

su vaat chhe tame to khub j saras rachna lakhi chhe kharekhar fil ne khub j gami aa rachna

lakhta rehjo aap

aapno mitra
dhaval

mit4mitali · 13th March 2007, 11:16 AM

Ashish;

tame khub sunder kavita lakhi chhe.. vanchi maja aavi gai..

mitali...