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24th August 2016, 01:07 AM
ye kaisi ghaRee aa rahii hai imtehaan kii baazi lagii hai aaj merii khud kii jaan kii. khat me likhaa tha baap ne ghar lauT aa beTaa choone lagii hai chhat mere kachche makaan kii. jisne bhii dii gawaahiyaaN mere khilaaf meN, keemat adaa huii hai sabhii kii zabaan kii. beTii ko na maaro arey beTii ko na maaro, rakhkhii hai laaj is ne mere khaandaan kii. samjhegaa yahaaN jo merii GazloN ki haqeeqat, main choom loonga Khaak paa-e-kadrdaan kii. jab mil ke chaleN chaar kadam hindu musalmaaN baDhtii hai umr tab mere hindostaan kii. kyaa shaad sunaaun main tumheN us ki daastaaN, main bhool gayaa shaql dil-e-beimaan kii.. Shaad... |
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24th August 2016, 08:54 AM
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Mujhe badi shiddat se intezaar rehta hai aapke kalaam ka Kyu ke aapke kalaam mai bohat gehraayi hoti hai Mujhe bohat kuch seekhne ko milta hai aapke kalaam se Ye ghazal bhi utna hi dilkash hai jaise ke aapke guzishta ghazle rahi hai Iss khaaksaar ke daad ko qubool farmaiye Dua ki darkhuwast |
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25th August 2016, 12:33 AM
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baraae karam nawaazish o mehrbani Mujahid saahab jo aapne is adna ki kaavish pe tawajjoh farmaai...! aage bhi aapke mehfil me tashreef laane ka intzaar rahegaa...shukriya Shaad... |
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25th August 2016, 02:51 PM
adaab shaad sahab.....
Jab aapki kisi ghazal ko padhkar jawab dene me deri hoti hai...to bada hee afsos hota hai par kya karein..aap to jante hain aur bhi gham hain zamane mein......khair..janaab bahut alag aur bahut asardaar peshkash rahi aapki....har sher kuch sochne ko majboor karta hua..maujuuda halat ki jhalak aur dil ki bebsi aur tadap ko khoob umda bayani di hai aapne.....aapko daad dene ki himaqat kar rahi hun qubool karein... likhte rahein... Salamat rahein......... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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28th August 2016, 11:43 AM
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aapne apna keemti waqt diyaa mujh gareeb ke liye wahi kaafi hai... aage bhi waqt ijaazat de to aati rahiyegaa mukhlis |
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28th August 2016, 04:42 PM
Shoiab bhai...jamane baad aapkan kalaam pada..aur pad ke ruk gaya aaj ...jaadu hai aapke kalaam mein ....aapke lafzon mein.....daad kubool kijiye...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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28th August 2016, 06:27 PM
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Zaroor........vaqt nikalti rahungi..... Shukriya... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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29th August 2016, 02:16 PM
vah vah buhet achee ghazal oomda kalaam pesh kiya aap ney shaad sahib dad qoobul kariye Quote:
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31st August 2016, 02:44 AM
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bahut khushi hoti hai jab aap chand puraane dost amooman bazm me dastak de jaate hain aur apni daad aur duaaon se hame nawaazte hain..... aage bhi aapka intzar rahegaa... khsuh rahiye Salaamat rahiye Shaad......... |
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31st August 2016, 02:45 AM
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mujhe khushi hui ye jaankar ke aapko khaak alfaaz pasand aaye... aati rahiyegaa Shaad........ |
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8th September 2016, 08:45 AM
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khat me likhaa tha baap ne ghar lauT aa beTaa choone lagii hai chhat mere kachche makaan kii. jab mil ke chaleN chaar kadam hindu musalmaaN baDhtii hai umr tab mere hindostaan kii. Umdaa yunhi likhte rahiye Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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9th September 2016, 11:36 AM
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ummeed hai aage bhi aapka saath yunhi milta arehgaa Shukriyaa Shaad........ |
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