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"AAJ WOHI MERE LIYE SAB SE PARAYI HAI.............." a shayri for her....."?" -
5th November 2006, 12:57 PM
Zindagi se skhikwa kaise karu main,
Maine to apno se hi chhot khayi hai.....
Jise chaha tha main bde dil-o-jaan se,
Pata chala aj wohi sab se parayi hai.....
Dil se niaklu bhi Kaise main ab use ,
Wo meri har dhadkan me samayi hai....
Zakhm dene ki adat hai usko shayad,
Usike wajhse ankho me nami chhayi hai...
Sada Maaf kiya maine uski har galti ko,
Wo aj mujhe dard ki dehliz par layi hai....
Wade karti thi bahot shaan ke sath wo,
Jhoothi ummide dil me usne jagayi hai.....
Socha tha maine apne pyaar ke liye,
Pyar me hamare to bahot hi gehrai hai.....
Aaj ankh khuli to paya “dhaval” ne,
Sath dene ko uske sirf uski tanhai hai.....
A SHAYRI FOR HER..........................................
aaj wo hi mere liye sab se parayi hai.....................
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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5th November 2006, 05:27 PM
dhaval miyaa.N aadab
kaise ho yaar
Zindagi se skhikwa kaise karu main,
Maine to apno se hi chhot khayi hai.....
accha khyal hai
Jise chaha tha main bde dil-o-jaan se,
Pata chala aj wohi sab se parayi hai.....
kabhi kabhi esa hum sochte hai yaar per vastab main esa nahi hota
Dil se niaklu bhi Kaise main ab use ,
Wo meri har dhadkan me samayi hai....
gour se socho jara shayad iski jaroorat hi na pade
Zakhm dene ki adat hai usko shayad,
Usike wajhse ankho me nami chhayi hai...
nahi esa wo jankar to nahi karti na ho jata hai yaar
Sada Maaf kiya maine uski har galti ko,
Wo aj mujhe dard ki dehliz par layi hai....
lo kar lo baat yaar fir wahi rona ......
Wade karti thi bahot shaan ke sath wo,
Jhoothi ummide dil me usne jagayi hai.....
Socha tha maine apne pyaar ke liye,
Pyar me hamare to bahot hi gehrai hai.....
haan to isme kya shaq hai yaar
Aaj ankh khuli to paya “dhaval” ne,
Sath dene ko uske sirf uski tanhai hai.....
are ab lagta hai fir koi serious mamla hai yaar
amaa.N kya hua koi batayega mujhe..................
sun rahi ho na...... ab jaldi se batao kya hua hai...........
bye jawab ka intzar rahega taro
dilip
" Dilip " -Ek Adhoora khwab
Dard bantne se ab darr lagta hai
mere gamo ka usnane falsafa bana diya
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5th November 2006, 07:12 PM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
Zindagi se skhikwa kaise karu main,
Maine to apno se hi chhot khayi hai.....
Jise chaha tha main bde dil-o-jaan se,
Pata chala aj wohi sab se parayi hai.....
Dil se niaklu bhi Kaise main ab use ,
Wo meri har dhadkan me samayi hai....
Zakhm dene ki adat hai usko shayad,
Usike wajhse ankho me nami chhayi hai...
Sada Maaf kiya maine uski har galti ko,
Wo aj mujhe dard ki dehliz par layi hai....
Wade karti thi bahot shaan ke sath wo,
Jhoothi ummide dil me usne jagayi hai.....
Socha tha maine apne pyaar ke liye,
Pyar me hamare to bahot hi gehrai hai.....
Aaj ankh khuli to paya “dhaval” ne,
Sath dene ko uske sirf uski tanhai hai.....
A SHAYRI FOR HER..........................................
aaj wo hi mere liye sab se parayi hai.....................
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arey ab kia ho gaya donon chottouoon ko
abhi kal person to sulah kerwai hai.........
aur kia kahoon bas yehi kahoon gi..................pata hi hai tumhay..... donon phir sulah kerlo
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5th November 2006, 07:39 PM
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Originally Posted by moon
arey ab kia ho gaya donon chottouoon ko
abhi kal person to sulah kerwai hai.........
aur kia kahoon bas yehi kahoon gi..................pata hi hai tumhay..... donon phir sulah kerlo
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moona di....itna asaan nahi hota na............itni khatayen hoti hai ki bas insaan maaf kar kar ke thhakk jata hai mujhe..........ab kya kahu..........gunahgaar hai hum to..........sazaa mil rahi hai..............ok ji
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
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6th November 2006, 10:56 AM
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Originally Posted by dilip200
dhaval miyaa.N aadab
kaise ho yaar
Zindagi se skhikwa kaise karu main,
Maine to apno se hi chhot khayi hai.....
accha khyal hai
Jise chaha tha main bde dil-o-jaan se,
Pata chala aj wohi sab se parayi hai.....
kabhi kabhi esa hum sochte hai yaar per vastab main esa nahi hota
Dil se niaklu bhi Kaise main ab use ,
Wo meri har dhadkan me samayi hai....
gour se socho jara shayad iski jaroorat hi na pade
Zakhm dene ki adat hai usko shayad,
Usike wajhse ankho me nami chhayi hai...
nahi esa wo jankar to nahi karti na ho jata hai yaar
Sada Maaf kiya maine uski har galti ko,
Wo aj mujhe dard ki dehliz par layi hai....
lo kar lo baat yaar fir wahi rona ......
Wade karti thi bahot shaan ke sath wo,
Jhoothi ummide dil me usne jagayi hai.....
Socha tha maine apne pyaar ke liye,
Pyar me hamare to bahot hi gehrai hai.....
haan to isme kya shaq hai yaar
Aaj ankh khuli to paya “dhaval” ne,
Sath dene ko uske sirf uski tanhai hai.....
are ab lagta hai fir koi serious mamla hai yaar
amaa.N kya hua koi batayega mujhe..................
sun rahi ho na...... ab jaldi se batao kya hua hai...........
bye jawab ka intzar rahega taro
dilip
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mere dost dilip
aapne itni achhi tarhase jo jawab diya hai bahot hi achha laga mujeh ye aapka samjhane ka tarika
jab aap jaise dost hi to ye safar yuhi haste haste beet jayenga
aap yaha aye aur ise dil se padha bahot hi achha laga mujhe
bas yuhi is dost ka sath dte rahiyenga
apna khayal rakhna
khus rahiye
aapka shaitaan
dhaval
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10th November 2006, 12:16 AM
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Originally Posted by moon
arey ab kia ho gaya donon chottouoon ko
abhi kal person to sulah kerwai hai.........
aur kia kahoon bas yehi kahoon gi..................pata hi hai tumhay..... donon phir sulah kerlo
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moona di jhaghde to hote rehte hai chhote chhote
aapko yaha dekh ke bhot hi khusi huimujhe
apna khayal rakhiyenga
khus rahiye hamesha
aapka dost
dhaval
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10th November 2006, 12:18 AM
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moona di....itna asaan nahi hota na............itni khatayen hoti hai ki bas insaan maaf kar kar ke thhakk jata hai mujhe..........ab kya kahu..........gunahgaar hai hum to..........sazaa mil rahi hai..............ok ji
grazie
aapki dost
pooja
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sahi kaha saja maaf!!!
aap yaha ayi achha laga dekh ke bas yuhi sath dete rahiyenga
khus raho
aapka dost
dhaval
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14th November 2006, 01:00 AM
hi dhaval ..
kaise ho dost ?
bahut achhha likha hain ek baar phir ... aapki
har shayri achhi hoti hain ...
thanks for sharing yr feelings+shayris
likhte raho ...
aapka dost
prashant
AApka apna ... ,
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14th November 2006, 07:44 AM
bahut achhha likha hain dhaval
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16th November 2006, 09:07 PM
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hi dhaval ..
kaise ho dost ?
bahut achhha likha hain ek baar phir ... aapki
har shayri achhi hoti hain ...
thanks for sharing yr feelings+shayris
likhte raho ...
aapka dost
prashant
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prashnat ji mere dost kaise hai aap?
yaar kya baat hai aap ko dekh ke mujhe bahot hi khuis hui sach me , bahot dino baad aaye yaar kya baat hai? bahot achha laga janke k apko meri shayri achhi lagti hai bas aise hi aate rahiye aur yuhi padhte rhiyenga
khus rahiye hamesha mere dost
apna khayal rakhiyenga
aapka dost
dhaval
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16th November 2006, 09:08 PM
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bahut achhha likha hain dhaval
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dear sandhya bahot achha lagata hai aapko meri har post pe dekhke aap mera har bar sath deti ho bas ye sath yuhi kayam rakhiyenga
khus rahiye
apna khayal rakhiye
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bhut khub -
22nd November 2006, 10:57 AM
Zindagi se skhikwa kaise karu main,
Maine to apno se hi chhot khayi hai.....
Jise chaha tha main bde dil-o-jaan se,
Pata chala aj wohi sab se parayi hai.....
Dil se niaklu bhi Kaise main ab use ,
Wo meri har dhadkan me samayi hai....
Zakhm dene ki adat hai usko shayad,
Usike wajhse ankho me nami chhayi hai...
Sada Maaf kiya maine uski har galti ko,
Wo aj mujhe dard ki dehliz par layi hai....
Wade karti thi bahot shaan ke sath wo,
Jhoothi ummide dil me usne jagayi hai.....
Socha tha maine apne pyaar ke liye,
Pyar me hamare to bahot hi gehrai hai.....
Aaj ankh khuli to paya “dhaval” ne,
Sath dene ko uske sirf uski tanhai hai.....
dhaval ji ko raj ka namaskaar...kya baat hai bhut gehre ehsaason ko lafzon me byaan kiya hai....ek umda nazam ke liye meri daad kabool kijiyega....yu hee likhte rehna......take care.......raj.......
un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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25th November 2006, 11:26 PM
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Zindagi se skhikwa kaise karu main,
Maine to apno se hi chhot khayi hai.....
Jise chaha tha main bde dil-o-jaan se,
Pata chala aj wohi sab se parayi hai.....
Dil se niaklu bhi Kaise main ab use ,
Wo meri har dhadkan me samayi hai....
Zakhm dene ki adat hai usko shayad,
Usike wajhse ankho me nami chhayi hai...
Sada Maaf kiya maine uski har galti ko,
Wo aj mujhe dard ki dehliz par layi hai....
Wade karti thi bahot shaan ke sath wo,
Jhoothi ummide dil me usne jagayi hai.....
Socha tha maine apne pyaar ke liye,
Pyar me hamare to bahot hi gehrai hai.....
Aaj ankh khuli to paya “dhaval” ne,
Sath dene ko uske sirf uski tanhai hai.....
dhaval ji ko raj ka namaskaar...kya baat hai bhut gehre ehsaason ko lafzon me byaan kiya hai....ek umda nazam ke liye meri daad kabool kijiyega....yu hee likhte rehna......take care.......raj.......
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big b pranaam
kaise ho aap?
aapko is chhotu ka ye kalaam pasand aaya bahot hi achha laga aur aapki daad sar ankho par big b
main kosish karunga k aage bhii aur achha likhu
sath dijiyenga yuhi
khus rahiye
aapka shaitaan
chhotu
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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26th November 2006, 06:44 PM
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Originally Posted by dhavalrami4you
Zindagi se skhikwa kaise karu main,
Maine to apno se hi chhot khayi hai.....
Jise chaha tha main bde dil-o-jaan se,
Pata chala aj wohi sab se parayi hai.....
Dil se niaklu bhi Kaise main ab use ,
Wo meri har dhadkan me samayi hai....
Zakhm dene ki adat hai usko shayad,
Usike wajhse ankho me nami chhayi hai...
Sada Maaf kiya maine uski har galti ko,
Wo aj mujhe dard ki dehliz par layi hai....
Wade karti thi bahot shaan ke sath wo,
Jhoothi ummide dil me usne jagayi hai.....
Socha tha maine apne pyaar ke liye,
Pyar me hamare to bahot hi gehrai hai.....
Aaj ankh khuli to paya “dhaval” ne,
Sath dene ko uske sirf uski tanhai hai.....
A SHAYRI FOR HER..........................................
aaj wo hi mere liye sab se parayi hai.....................
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hi dhaval
u have done a grt job ! bahut hi achi lagi aapki nazm mujhe.
tum jo kehte the ke rone se na badlenge naseeb,
umar bhar is baat ne humko rone na diya !!!
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26th November 2006, 11:08 PM
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hi dhaval
u have done a grt job ! bahut hi achi lagi aapki nazm mujhe.
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ruchika ji aapko is dost ka namskaar
aapko meri ye nazm pasnd aayi aapka tahe dil se main shukra guzar hu bahot khusi hui k apko achhi lagi peshkas ummid karta hu aap is dost ko hamesa yuhi padhte rahenge , aapne bhi bahot achha likha hai apne pehle hi kalaam me ok ruchika ji apna khayal rakhiye , khus rahiye isi duaon ke sath izazat leta hu
aapka dost
dhaval
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