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Kadam Phir Ruk Gae Hain Aaj...! -
5th September 2015, 10:38 PM
Kadam phir ruk gae hain aaj, shikayat manzilo se hain... Mujhe toofan se nahi ab khauf.. ke dehshat saahilo se hai.. Bazm mein hain sabhi apne... Magar apna na koi hai... Naqaabo mein hai chipe chehre... aur humnawa na koi hai... Hain cheekhon mein bhi sannattein... aur ashqon mein bhi banjarpan... Ke Tanhaa hi hain achche hum... Aziiyat mehfilo se hai... Sitaaron ki jagmagahat, hai phir bhi chaand kyun tanha??? Nisha ki god mein simte sabhi jazbaat kyun tanha?? Kyu Beniyaazii saza merii... Kyu qaayil hai raqeeb mera??? Bewafa ki nahi ab chaah...* mohabbat dil ko bismilo se hai... Fareb-e-mashiiyat ka falsafa hai.. Shab-o-roz hain azaabo.n waale... Hazf hain lakeerein haathon se... Aur panne ulfat ki kitaabo.n waale... Hai ibaadat mein na dua koi... na khwaabon mein koi chehra... Muhafizo ki berukhi dekhi...abb ulfat qaatilo se hai... Kadam phir ruk gae hain aaj, shikayat manzilo se hain... ke toofan se nahi ab khauf.. haan dehshat saahilo se hai.. par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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6th September 2015, 09:17 AM
Nisha ji.
Aaapke ehsaaso.n ko mehsoos kar payi mein. Ummeed karti ho ki ye sirf ek nazm ho apka haale e dil nahi. Likhti rahen. Duaon ke saath. Sarika |
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6th September 2015, 01:14 PM
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kia baat hy Nisha jee.. Behad umdah peshkash... Daad qabool kejiye..  Likhty rahiye.. tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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6th September 2015, 02:15 PM
Kadam phir ruk gae hain aaj, shikayat manzilo se hain... ke toofan se nahi ab khauf.. haan dehshat saahilo se hai.. ...... ..nisha ji......waaahhhhh kya ehsaas pesh kiye hain aapne...bahut hee khoob..... Dher sari qubool kijiyega is dil se likhi huyi nazm par..... aise hee aati rahiyega... Khush rahiye..... अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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6th September 2015, 04:13 PM
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Dear Nisha....agar ham bas nazm ki baat kareN to behad umda aur ehsaasoN se bharpoor nazm hai...par agar yeh sirf aik nazm hi hai to....agar yeh dil ka haal hai to ham dard par mubarakbaad kaise den...bhagwaan se duaa karuNgi ki dard na rhe Meri Nisha ki zindgi meiN. bahut saare pyar aur duaoN ke saath dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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7th September 2015, 09:08 AM
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masti jii.... dard aur kalam ka saath to sadiyon se hai.... aur phir meri kalam to chalti hi tab hai jab dard dastak deta hai... par chalta hai.... sukh dukh zindagi k sikke ke do pehlu hain.... jitni khushi pyaari hai utna hi kareeb dard bhi hai mere... nazm ko pasand karne ke liye shukriya... duaon k saath aapki nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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7th September 2015, 09:10 AM
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hassan sahab.. aadaab! waqt nikaal k mujhe padhne ke liye aur hausa afzai ke liye shukriya.. nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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7th September 2015, 09:11 AM
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madhu ji.. namaste! tareef aur hausla afzai ke liye tahe dil se shukriya... duaon ke saath nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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7th September 2015, 09:14 AM
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Sunita dii... dherrr saara pyaar.. ehsaason ko samajhne se zyada mehsoos karne ke liye shukriya... aapko to pata hai... jab tak khud mehsoos nahi karti, kuch likha hi nahi jaata... par main theek hu.. sachchi.... kabhi yaadein to kabhi haalaat... thoda mayoos kar jaati hain... par jeena to isi ka naam hai na??? duaon ke saath aapki chhoti si behen nisha par itnaa to huaa, kuchh log pahchaane gaye... |
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7th September 2015, 12:23 PM
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Shayar ka dil naazuk hota hai , savedan sheel hota hai wo duniyaavi sabhi cheezeiN apne oopar lekar sochta hai .....lekin jis tarah aapne ahsaas byaan kiyan bahut khoob.....Daad haazir hai ...wasool paaiyega ... saadar !! |
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8th September 2015, 12:27 PM
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behad haseen khayaal pesh kiye hain aapne Nisha ji........ sach kahun to aapke alfaaz dil tak pahuche hain...... bahut si daad aur mubaarakbaad pesh hain aapko........ likhtii rahen salaamat rahen..... shaad..... |
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8th September 2015, 10:30 PM
khoobsoorat nazm ke liye dil se daad nisha jee............................
Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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"Taish meN hai Taish"
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9th September 2015, 03:48 AM
I will just keep mum.............
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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