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Post Angan mein mere..... - 8th February 2005, 06:01 AM

Hi Everyone

I am posting something new after a very long time....
Few thoughts that kept coming back to me for a long time...

In life we dream and hope that one day our dreams are fulfilled...
Some do...Some don't...
We see a dream and we begin to live by it....
Slowly we give up everything for it and forget everything even ourselves...
For us to achieve that dream is our goal in life....
In doing so we sometimes wee fail to achieve it...
But we should never loose hope...
For Tomorrow we shall live another dream...
Again we will have something to live for...
I believe in one thing....the journey...
The jourrney to the Destination to me is more important then the Destination itself....
So if ur dreams don't come true don't loose hope just remember the poem below....


Aangan mein mere....

Aangan mein mere ek paudha tha
Ek nanha sa, pyaara sa, aam ka paudha
Seecha usko, savara meine usko
Bada hua, Dharti se uth gagan ko chua

Kai saal the humne saath gujare
Sardi, garmi, savan, patjhad aur barsat
Dekhe humne milkar mausam saare
The chawn mein najane kitne din gujare

Kabhi khelke, hasske to kabhi ro ke gujare
Kabhi is tehni to kabhi us tenhi pe kaate
Kai din, kai shaam, tanha saath bitaye
Savan ke Jhula laga behan ko jhulaya

Phal tod uske, apne mukh pe lagaya
Phir ek din ek zor ka toofan aaya
Mera peed ukhad dharti pe gira
roya mein raat bhar, kai din nahi soya

phir utha hor hote gaya paas uske
aankhon ki boondon ko dharti pe gera
phir dekha vahan jahan beh raha tha pani
Mere pyaare peed ka chota sa paudha

Mere aangan ko tha usne mehkaya
Ek nanha sa, pyaara sa, aam ka paudha
Seecha usko, savara meine usko
Bada hua, Dharti se uth gagan ko chua


Hope--that is what is life all about i guess....
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8th February 2005, 06:34 AM

Rohin,
It's sad but happy ending story! I am glad that you send me! and I was able to read sucha wonderful thoughts!

Tumhara peed (tree) chala gaya par paudha (plant) chhor gaya!

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8th February 2005, 06:40 AM

Hi Parul,

I am glad you came ann read it...

the ped signifies our dreams and aspirations... and the paudha our hope to achieve those dreams

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8th February 2005, 07:32 AM

Good one Rohin bhai, thoda big bang theory ke tarah lagta hain na .
Ya phir bug solve kar kar ke yeh conclusion aur strong ho gaya LOL....
Bug hi jeevan ka stya hai vats baki sab mitya hai,
Lagta hai tune bug solve kar diya
par woh naya naya roop mein tere samne aata hai....
Isi liye bug solve karte jao, kabi bug free banane ka socho mat.....

Thanks Rohin for the inspiring writing....


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8th February 2005, 10:34 AM

Rohin!

Kya kahoon yaar... Very beautifully have u expressed the Truth of Life. Sometimes it brings all the happiness of the world to us and sometimes it seems that world has come to an end......

Amazing buddy... Loved the expressions in this.... Meri dil se daad kubool karna... Dooo keep writing such wonderful stuff....

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reply - 8th February 2005, 11:12 AM

Rohin,
thanks ki aapne mujhe ye thread padhane ko diya.
Bahoot achha likha aapne ek dam waise hi jaise maine socha tha.
Jiase aapke poems me kahi maine apni baat ko padh li.

uhi likhte rahna aur jaane kitne dilo ko aapke lekh ki jaroorat hai..


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8th February 2005, 12:59 PM

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Good one Rohin bhai, thoda big bang theory ke tarah lagta hain na .
Ya phir bug solve kar kar ke yeh conclusion aur strong ho gaya LOL....
Bug hi jeevan ka stya hai vats baki sab mitya hai,
Lagta hai tune bug solve kar diya
par woh naya naya roop mein tere samne aata hai....
Isi liye bug solve karte jao, kabi bug free banane ka socho mat.....

Thanks Rohin for the inspiring writing....
Prabhuji yeh vats jaanta hai ki karm karte rehna chahiye phal ki chinta nahi karrni chahiye...

Hi Shadow,

Well i am glad it could insire you...

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Rohin!

Kya kahoon yaar... Very beautifully have u expressed the Truth of Life. Sometimes it brings all the happiness of the world to us and sometimes it seems that world has come to an end......

Amazing buddy... Loved the expressions in this.... Meri dil se daad kubool karna... Dooo keep writing such wonderful stuff....

TC
Hi Pulkit,

Zindaagi ki sachai ek dum simple hai....
Mushkil insaan ke bhavukta usse banate hain...
magar jasbat hi na ho to woh insaan hi nahi....kyon???

I will try and write like this ....

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Rohin,
thanks ki aapne mujhe ye thread padhane ko diya.
Bahoot achha likha aapne ek dam waise hi jaise maine socha tha.
Jiase aapke poems me kahi maine apni baat ko padh li.

uhi likhte rahna aur jaane kitne dilo ko aapke lekh ki jaroorat hai..


with love light and care
garima
Hi Garima ji,

aap apne vicharon ko yahan paya yeh jaankar khushi hui...
Pata nahi kitne padhenge... Kitne samjhenge...
Magar koi padhe to mujhe khushi hogi agar woh kuch seekh ke jaaye...

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hi rohin,
well superb buddy. the art of ur expressing is fantastic. reading ur post made me remember sum words. it goes as every good thought is a star which leads you on, shinning in the dark,making ur path way radiant.well dun buddy. keep it up. all the best for future too.take care n keep smiling.

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Prabhuji yeh vats jaanta hai ki karm karte rehna chahiye phal ki chinta nahi karrni chahiye...

Hi Shadow,

Well i am glad it could insire you...

Thanks
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Yaar Rohin maine ye kab kaha pal ka chinta nahi karo, pal ka chinta nahi karoge to booke mare jaoge
Maine sirf yeh kaha bu ke chinta mat karo, usise tho humara zindagi chalta hai.....


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hi rohin,
well superb buddy. the art of ur expressing is fantastic. reading ur post made me remember sum words. it goes as every good thought is a star which leads you on, shinning in the dark,making ur path way radiant.well dun buddy. keep it up. all the best for future too.take care n keep smiling.

DREAM AS IF YOU WILL LIVE FOREVER.
LIVE AS IF YOU WILL DIE TODAY.
Thanks jasleen for coming and replying....I am glad u like dthe thoughts....

Ur words are nice and very true....keep coming

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Yaar Rohin maine ye kab kaha pal ka chinta nahi karo, pal ka chinta nahi karoge to booke mare jaoge
Maine sirf yeh kaha bu ke chinta mat karo, usise tho humara zindagi chalta hai.....
Shadow bhai,

Yaar meine to tumhare bug ke vishey mein likha tha...lol

Anyways thanks for the thoughts

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a very nice one. - 9th February 2005, 02:19 AM

rohin,
mujhe yeh poem bahut pasand ayi.. aise hi likna... aur zindagi se sabko milate rehna


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9th February 2005, 04:36 AM

Hi Kevin,

I am gladd you liked this post...

Well zindagi ko dekhne ka nazariya sab ka ek nahi hota...
Kissi ko andhere mein ujala to kissi ko ujjale mein andhera nazar aata hai...

I am glad you liked it and hope u come again...

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Wakayi me Zindagi ki sacchai to simple.. we r the ones who r compplicating it needlessly...

Well... Emtions naa hite to naa tum Flirt hote naa Shayar

Well.. keep writing Buddy!!


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9th February 2005, 04:22 PM

hi rohin...

how r u...
well written...
thanks for sending me a mess to read this.. its wonderful..

like people se jaan chali jaati hai par yaade chod jaati hai...

u have proved this...

too good...

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Wakayi me Zindagi ki sacchai to simple.. we r the ones who r compplicating it needlessly...

Well... Emtions naa hite to naa tum Flirt hote naa Shayar

Well.. keep writing Buddy!!
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hi rohin...

how r u...
well written...
thanks for sending me a mess to read this.. its wonderful..

like people se jaan chali jaati hai par yaade chod jaati hai...

u have proved this...

too good...

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I am fine.
I am glad you read it...

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Hey rohin

tho late in reading it i did read it. its good. And I agree with what you say about journey being more important then the destination. Yaeh i can see how the tree symbolizes our dreams and lives and then all at once it gets tossed aside and we are left drifting. but then comes a saving grace that uplifts us. for each of us it comes differently. ok ok I will stop philosophizing now!!!

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9th February 2005, 11:36 PM

Hi Munnia,

I am glad you read it...

Well you have very rightly summarised the thoughts in the poem...

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Hi Everyone

I am posting something new after a very long time....
Few thoughts that kept coming back to me for a long time...

In life we dream and hope that one day our dreams are fulfilled...
Some do...Some don't...
We see a dream and we begin to live by it....
Slowly we give up everything for it and forget everything even ourselves...
For us to achieve that dream is our goal in life....
In doing so we sometimes wee fail to achieve it...
But we should never loose hope...
For Tomorrow we shall live another dream...
Again we will have something to live for...
I believe in one thing....the journey...
The jourrney to the Destination to me is more important then the Destination itself....
So if ur dreams don't come true don't loose hope just remember the poem below....


Aangan mein mere....

Aangan mein mere ek paudha tha
Ek nanha sa, pyaara sa, aam ka paudha
Seecha usko, savara meine usko
Bada hua, Dharti se uth gagan ko chua

Kai saal the humne saath gujare
Sardi, garmi, savan, patjhad aur barsat
Dekhe humne milkar mausam saare
The chawn mein najane kitne din gujare

Kabhi khelke, hasske to kabhi ro ke gujare
Kabhi is tehni to kabhi us tenhi pe kaate
Kai din, kai shaam, tanha saath bitaye
Savan ke Jhula laga behan ko jhulaya

Phal tod uske, apne mukh pe lagaya
Phir ek din ek zor ka toofan aaya
Mera peed ukhad dharti pe gira
roya mein raat bhar, kai din nahi soya

phir utha hor hote gaya paas uske
aankhon ki boondon ko dharti pe gera
phir dekha vahan jahan beh raha tha pani
Mere pyaare peed ka chota sa paudha

Mere aangan ko tha usne mehkaya
Ek nanha sa, pyaara sa, aam ka paudha
Seecha usko, savara meine usko
Bada hua, Dharti se uth gagan ko chua


Hope--that is what is life all about i guess....
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Hello Rohin,
Well you have nice thougts, it was really very wonderful. what i fealt for this poem was you should nvr let yr moral or hope down, if once due to mishap it is ruined there is a small ray of hope which will delight you, If God closes one door he opens many, its our vision weather we are able to see it or not

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Hello Rohin,
Well you have nice thougts, it was really very wonderful. what i fealt for this poem was you should nvr let yr moral or hope down, if once due to mishap it is ruined there is a small ray of hope which will delight you, If God closes one door he opens many, its our vision weather we are able to see it or not

Aasha Ki Ek kiran hai
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aur us kiran se duniya ko jagmaga dein

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Hi nidhi,

Nice to see you on this post....
I am glad u got the moral of the story...

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Hi Bro. Rohin,

U really touched a very sensitive and great subject...... Its my fav. Very Well Written.


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Hi,

ia m glad u liked it....
Well just hoped to convey a message here to everybody and i am glad people appreciated the effort....

If one can learn soemthing i will be glad...

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10th February 2005, 02:26 AM

Rohin,
I am glad that everyone like your thoughts, I am sure now you feel that all "shayri Parivar" is with you. so be happy always!!!

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10th February 2005, 02:35 AM

Hi Parul,

Ia m glad buddy....and yes i always smile seeing my friend smile makes me smile...

So keep smiling

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Re: Angan mein mere..... - 10th February 2005, 02:37 AM

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Hi Everyone

I am posting something new after a very long time....
Few thoughts that kept coming back to me for a long time...

In life we dream and hope that one day our dreams are fulfilled...
Some do...Some don't...
We see a dream and we begin to live by it....
Slowly we give up everything for it and forget everything even ourselves...
For us to achieve that dream is our goal in life....
In doing so we sometimes wee fail to achieve it...
But we should never loose hope...
For Tomorrow we shall live another dream...
Again we will have something to live for...
I believe in one thing....the journey...
The jourrney to the Destination to me is more important then the Destination itself....
So if ur dreams don't come true don't loose hope just remember the poem below....


Aangan mein mere....

Aangan mein mere ek paudha tha
Ek nanha sa, pyaara sa, aam ka paudha
Seecha usko, savara meine usko
Bada hua, Dharti se uth gagan ko chua

Kai saal the humne saath gujare
Sardi, garmi, savan, patjhad aur barsat
Dekhe humne milkar mausam saare
The chawn mein najane kitne din gujare

Kabhi khelke, hasske to kabhi ro ke gujare
Kabhi is tehni to kabhi us tenhi pe kaate
Kai din, kai shaam, tanha saath bitaye
Savan ke Jhula laga behan ko jhulaya

Phal tod uske, apne mukh pe lagaya
Phir ek din ek zor ka toofan aaya
Mera peed ukhad dharti pe gira
roya mein raat bhar, kai din nahi soya

phir utha hor hote gaya paas uske
aankhon ki boondon ko dharti pe gera
phir dekha vahan jahan beh raha tha pani
Mere pyaare peed ka chota sa paudha

Mere aangan ko tha usne mehkaya
Ek nanha sa, pyaara sa, aam ka paudha
Seecha usko, savara meine usko
Bada hua, Dharti se uth gagan ko chua


Hope--that is what is life all about i guess....
Rohin
Dear Rohin, Hope You are well*I am fine*Mujhe der ho gayi hain aate aate, actually I submited a song long before & I thought I better give You the link isntead of writing down the lyrics **I Love this song**http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthr...threadid=24676 There is another song too but I will come back & write it down here**Dil Ko Achha Laga Jo Tumnein Likhha Hain~~~Dil ki Gehraaion se Daad Aur Shukriya **Likhte Rehna**Khush Rahon Ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...*God bless You.

Keep smilling.......


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Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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10th February 2005, 12:48 PM

Hi Shimul,

yaar that song was really nice and sorry thoda der ho gaya but i know u understand

aur jald baat hogi

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Kal Ho Na Ho~One Of My Favourites :)** - 10th February 2005, 04:51 PM

Har Ghadi Badal Rahi Hain Roup Zindegi_Chhaon Hain Kabhi_Kabhi Hain Dhoup Zindegi_Har Pal Yeaha Jii Bhar Jiion_Jo Hain Sama_Kal Ho Na Ho~~~Chahe Jo Tumhein Pure Dil Se_Milta Hain Wo Mushkil Se_Aisa Jo Koiii Kahin Hain_Baas Wohin Sabse Hasin Hain_Uss Haath Ko_Tum Thaamlon_Wo Maherban_Kal Ho Na_Har Pal Yeaha Jii Bhar Jiion_Jo Hain Sama_Kal Ho Na Ho~~~Ho Palkon Ko Leke Saaye_Paas Koiii Jo Aaye_Lakh Samhalon Pagal Dil Ko_Dil Dhadke Hi Jaaye_Par Sochlon_Iss Pal Hain Jo_Wo Dastan_Kal Ho Na Ho_Har Ghadi Badal Rahi Hain Roup Zindegi_Chhaon Hain Kabhi_Kabhi Hain Dhoup Zindegi_Har Pal Yeaha Jii Bhar Jiion_Jo Hain Sama_Kal Ho Na Ho_Har Pal Yeaha Jii Bhar Jiion_Jo Hain Sama_Kal Ho Na Ho **Mujhe bhi der ho hi gayi...lol...Dil ki Gehraaion se Shukriya **Khush Rahon ye Duwaaon ke saath ijaazat...**Take Care...*God bless You.

Keep smilling.......


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10th February 2005, 05:28 PM

Hi Shimul,

Yeah its a lovely song...

Thanks for putting it here...Keep smiling my friend

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Rohin Dost! - 10th February 2005, 08:04 PM

Rohin Mere Dost,


Rohin mein kya kaahoo yaar...
Itne acche se khwaab aur Zindagi ke baare mein
bataya hai ke sach mein har ek alfaz dil mein utar gaya...
Excellent work! really this will be one of my fav thread...

A dream is a seed
The seed of a tree
A tree full of life
And the things you can be.
Your dreams are the windows
Through which you can see.
A hint of your future
And the things you will be
Each night when you sleep
Your feeding the seed
The seed of the tree
Of who you will be..


Not written by me...thought of sharing it here....

Take care...
Have a wonderful time.....


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Listen to your mind...but follow your heart.
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10th February 2005, 08:40 PM

Hi Yash,

I am glad you liked it and your thoughts and the poetry is really good...

Keep coming buddy...and it felt really nice that its one of ur fav

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hi - 26th March 2005, 11:10 AM

In life we dream and hope that one day our dreams are fulfilled...
Some do...Some don't...
We see a dream and we begin to live by it....
Slowly we give up everything for it and forget everything even ourselves...
For us to achieve that dream is our goal in life....
In doing so we sometimes wee fail to achieve it...
But we should never loose hope...
For Tomorrow we shall live another dream...
Again we will have something to live for...
I believe in one thing....the journey...
The jourrney to the Destination to me is more important then the Destination itself....
So if ur dreams don't come true don't loose hope just remember the poem below....


Aangan mein mere....

Aangan mein mere ek paudha tha
Ek nanha sa, pyaara sa, aam ka paudha
Seecha usko, savara meine usko
Bada hua, Dharti se uth gagan ko chua

Kai saal the humne saath gujare
Sardi, garmi, savan, patjhad aur barsat
Dekhe humne milkar mausam saare
The chawn mein najane kitne din gujare

Kabhi khelke, hasske to kabhi ro ke gujare
Kabhi is tehni to kabhi us tenhi pe kaate
Kai din, kai shaam, tanha saath bitaye
Savan ke Jhula laga behan ko jhulaya

Phal tod uske, apne mukh pe lagaya
Phir ek din ek zor ka toofan aaya
Mera peed ukhad dharti pe gira
roya mein raat bhar, kai din nahi soya

phir utha hor hote gaya paas uske
aankhon ki boondon ko dharti pe gera
phir dekha vahan jahan beh raha tha pani
Mere pyaare peed ka chota sa paudha

Mere aangan ko tha usne mehkaya
Ek nanha sa, pyaara sa, aam ka paudha
Seecha usko, savara meine usko
Bada hua, Dharti se uth gagan ko chua

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amazing thoughts
touched my soul rohin

u r right never stop...always keep going..

aaj ek aur dream hai

but when u dream make sure that it dont break ur day if it dont get completed..but also rember onething that....dreams are something we live by and with time they change and new ones come on.....life rukti nahi aur rokni bhi nahi chahye...do pal ki hai zindagi jee leni chahiye yaar...kya pata kal ho na ho??

aaj jo hai bas yahi hai....kal kya tha....it makes us hum aaj kya hai.,..par kal kal hai aur aane wala kal bhi kal........bas aaj hai aur aaj hi hai bas.

enjoy every sec of ur life. its most imp.

ur smile and happiness means the most.

luv and best wishes
ur friend
Priya

i luved the awsome words in ur wriitngs and feelings.


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi!


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Re: hi - 26th March 2005, 12:31 PM

Quote:
Originally posted by LuvPriya

amazing thoughts
touched my soul rohin

u r right never stop...always keep going..

aaj ek aur dream hai

but when u dream make sure that it dont break ur day if it dont get completed..but also rember onething that....dreams are something we live by and with time they change and new ones come on.....life rukti nahi aur rokni bhi nahi chahye...do pal ki hai zindagi jee leni chahiye yaar...kya pata kal ho na ho??

aaj jo hai bas yahi hai....kal kya tha....it makes us hum aaj kya hai.,..par kal kal hai aur aane wala kal bhi kal........bas aaj hai aur aaj hi hai bas.

enjoy every sec of ur life. its most imp.

ur smile and happiness means the most.

luv and best wishes
ur friend
Priya

i luved the awsome words in ur wriitngs and feelings.
Hi Priya,

You are very correct. Life should not stop at one dream. There aree many dreams to be fulfilled. Aur sach zindagi ka kya bharosa...isliye jo aaj hai abhi hai us mein jiyo...

I am glad u liked the words.

thanks
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