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Love meri umeed - 17th January 2010, 10:43 PM
hain umeedo ke saaye ne ghera mujhe ,
keh rahe chhodu kaise akela tujhe!
tanhai mein doob jayegi tu..
muskura kar aansoo chhipayegi tu..
Logo se bhale hi itrayegi...par ander hi ghoot..ti chali jayegi tu..
hai umeedo ke saaye...........................

kyu na samjhe ki mausam badalte har..dam,
kabhi khushiya hai to kabhi milte hai gam...
bahaaro mein phool jaise khil uthte hai ,
aur patjhad mein na jane kaha murjha girte hai...
hai umeedo ke saaye ne ghera mujhe................................

dekhna tere sapno ko sunehre se par aayenge...
tujhe pritam ki nagari o le jayenge....
tere kadamo mein phoolo ki sej sajegi...
chandani tere mathe ban bindiya chamkegi....
chanda ki doli tere aangan utregi aur
suraj ki lali ki odhe chunar.....
apne sajan ke hosh tu le udegi..
hai umeedo ke saaye ne ghera mujhe .......

sathi rahenge hum teri har nayi mod ke...
purane yado ko tu wahi chhod de....
tere khwabo ko sajaye yu hi hum..
teri umeed ban tujhse lipte rahe har..dum....
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18th January 2010, 10:02 AM
MUSKAAN JI
AAPNE BAHOOT HI ACHCHA LIKHA HAI
I LIKE IT
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29th January 2010, 07:30 PM
Yaqeenan Muskaan jee aapne bohat achcha likha hain.......take your poetry little more seriously aake khayaal bohat behtar hain. Maine aisa isliye kaha qke aapne shuruaat me ek funny icon banaya hain jo is khoobsurat kalam ki ehmiyat ko thodaaaaaaaaaaa kam kar deta hain.....i loved these lines.

hain umeedo ke saaye ne ghera mujhe ,
keh rahe chhodu kaise akela tujhe!
tanhai mein doob jayegi tu..

Jhoot kehdu yeh meri fitrat me nahi shamil

Par tujhe bevafa bhi kehna achcha nahi lagta...

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28th February 2010, 02:44 PM
dekhna tere sapno ko sunehre se par aayenge...
tujhe pritam ki nagari o le jayenge....
tere kadamo mein phoolo ki sej sajegi...
chandani tere mathe ban bindiya chamkegi....
chanda ki doli tere aangan utregi aur
suraj ki lali ki odhe chunar.....
apne sajan ke hosh tu le udegi..
hai umeedo ke saaye ne ghera mujhe ......


Ehsaas bohat acche haiN Muskaan ji...per Sajid sahab ki baat per zarur ghaur kijiyega...............



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Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...

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8th March 2010, 10:12 AM


loved the way u narrated.
simple words with a great theme

keep sharing muskan

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8th March 2010, 06:28 PM
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Originally Posted by muskaan arora View Post
hain umeedo ke saaye ne ghera mujhe ,
keh rahe chhodu kaise akela tujhe!
tanhai mein doob jayegi tu..
muskura kar aansoo chhipayegi tu..
Logo se bhale hi itrayegi...par ander hi ghoot..ti chali jayegi tu..
hai umeedo ke saaye...........................

kyu na samjhe ki mausam badalte har..dam,
kabhi khushiya hai to kabhi milte hai gam...
bahaaro mein phool jaise khil uthte hai ,
aur patjhad mein na jane kaha murjha girte hai...
hai umeedo ke saaye ne ghera mujhe................................

dekhna tere sapno ko sunehre se par aayenge...
tujhe pritam ki nagari o le jayenge....
tere kadamo mein phoolo ki sej sajegi...
chandani tere mathe ban bindiya chamkegi....
chanda ki doli tere aangan utregi aur
suraj ki lali ki odhe chunar.....
apne sajan ke hosh tu le udegi..
hai umeedo ke saaye ne ghera mujhe .......

sathi rahenge hum teri har nayi mod ke...
purane yado ko tu wahi chhod de....
tere khwabo ko sajaye yu hi hum..
teri umeed ban tujhse lipte rahe har..dum....
Muskaanji, you have written down raw emotions. Reading it is like feeling it. Touches the heart. Thank you. Keep writing, keep posting and keep smiling!

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8th March 2010, 06:48 PM
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aapki baato pe zaroor dhyan dungi
aur puri imandari ke saath pura karungi

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