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29th March 2003, 08:37 PM
Sauda na itafakiyo se kafhi kyo na hoo
Hum tau yohi hissab karenge pyaar ka Rahega har mol tol ka hissab apni jagah Kuch bure saudagar huve hum tau kya harz hai.....SaNjj |
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Hi -
31st March 2003, 04:17 PM
Anas..oooohoo..kese ho bhai mere..yaar ap ki koyee id yahoo mai hoo tau bolo hum kabhi tafsil se chat karenge apse..bye 4 now take care..sanju
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3rd April 2003, 01:06 AM
Bahut khoob Sanjoo Saheb !!!
Sauda na itafakiyo se kafhi kyo na hoo Hum tau yohi hissab karenge pyaar ka Rahega har mol tol ka hissab apni jagah Kuch bure saudagar huve hum tau kya harz hai.......... Beautifull thoughts and well written,especially this line... " Kuch bure saudagar huve hum tau kya harz hai " keep it up. Kabhi -kabhi haar mei bhi jeet hai Sanjoo saheb, so don't give it up. With your permission, I like to add one of my lines to your line... if you don't mind from : " Apni Jagah" "Woh nahi milta, iska gila apni jagah Rahega har mol tol ka hisaab apni jagah" Seemakshi "Jitni shiddat se tarastee, hoon mai uske liye Uutni shiddat se tho, unse mujhe chaha bhi na tha" |
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3rd April 2003, 05:59 PM
seemakshi jee....waah ap ne bhi kamaal ka sher likha......
Woh nahi milta, iska gila apni jagah Rahega har mol tol ka hisaab apni jagah"...waah kyaa bat hain.. Ap hamaree salah par gor kare ap bohot achha likhtee hain...iinse kuch sauda kiya jaye tau kya buraa  ....ap ki tarifhe hume kuch aor likhne par majbur kar dengee...bye 4 now..sanjay |
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