vese j tuhanu koi vi yaad kare tan, eh jaroori nahi hai ki tuhanu hichkiyaan
aundiyaan ne right. ye kise ne karna hove tan vese vi kar sakda hai
ha ji jyoti ji tusi theeek keh rahe ho, par hichhkiya da naam yaad naal juriya hai, so iss karke ya phir eh keh layo ke ek sohna jiha bharam hai ke je hichkiyi aave ta samjho kise ne yaad kita,
Deep tuhaadiaaN chaar lines wich aksar bahut asar hundaa hai. Urdu poetry wich is nu qataat kihaa jaandaa hai. Sach much bahut vadhiyaa likhiyaa hai. Es periphery wich hor ve likhdey raho.
tilak
Merey Kissey wich aundaa ein tu .... Merey hissey wich kyuN nahi aundaa
Deep tuhaadiaaN chaar lines wich aksar bahut asar hundaa hai. Urdu poetry wich is nu qataat kihaa jaandaa hai. Sach much bahut vadhiyaa likhiyaa hai. Es periphery wich hor ve likhdey raho.
tilak
A-Deep sab to pehla sat siri akaal bahut khoobsurt likhia a tusi kade -kade chand satra vich hi sab kuj simat janda a par gall samjhan te depend kardi a ke likhan vala ki kehna chahunda a kujh es tra di hi hai tuhadi a peskash vaise jis poetry di tilak ji tarif karan es da matlab ke oh kamaal di a
sandeep gill
[quote=A-DEEP;237646]Intezaar da jo meetha dard ditta ae tu, Mere te bada ehsaan kitta ae tu, E kambakhat hichkiyaan vi nahi aundiyaan, Jo lagge ki yaad kitta ae tu