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mohabbat - 13th September 2005, 03:53 PM

hello friends.
main nayi hoon in shayron ki duniya me. bas kuch yun hi mann me aa gaya aur likh rahi hoon. aur dua karti hoon ki aapko pasand ayega


maan ki ham mohabbat ka ijhar nahin karte
magar iska matlab yeh to nahin ki ham pyar nahin karte


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13th September 2005, 04:04 PM

samajh jate hum kab ka isharoN ko bhi...
par kya kareN ishara bhi sarkar nahi karte...

Ishika ji,...

Bazm maiN aaapka swagat hai .. aap hi ke sher ko aage badhane ki koshish ki maiNe bas.. par aapko yaad dila duN ek baat ,... yahaN gar aap apna likha hua post nahi kar rahi to .. Not mine.. ya writer k naam likhna na bhuleN .. umeed hai aap samjheGi.. gar galat laga ho to muaf kijiyega ...

aapka apna

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13th September 2005, 05:19 PM

ishika ji nice 1.liked it.bas aise hi likhte rahiye.


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16th September 2005, 10:59 PM

Naa sir jukao patthar ke aage ki woh dewata ho jaye.
Na chaho kisi ko itna ki woh befawa ho jaye.


Asman ko need aye to sulaaun kahan,
dharti ko maut aye to dafnao kahan,
sagar mein lehar aye to chupao kahan,
jab teri yaad aye to jao kahan


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kuch lamhon se aankhen bhar aati hain,
woh subah rangeen shaam nirali doob jati hain,
jab aap jaise doston ki yaad aati hai.

Tujhe dekhe bina humne, humdard banaya hai
Haan yaadon ne teri hi, hume jeena sikhaya hai
Mere humraaz, tu humsafar na bane, na sahi
Par toone hi humko yeh pyar sikhaya hai

Koi aankhon aankhon se baat kar leta hai
Koi aankhon aankhon mein mulakaat kar leta hai
Bada Mushkil hota hai tab Jawab denA
Jab koi KhamosH rehkar Sawaal kar leta hai

Aap Rootha na karO yun humse
Mere dil ke Dhadkan bhad jaati hai
Dil tho aap ke Naam kar hi chuke hain
Jaa bus baaki hai woh bhi nikal jaati hai

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if u dont mind ishika..!
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if u dont mind ishika..! - 19th September 2005, 08:04 AM

u wrote very well, but if u dont mind can i add some lines to it..!
plz dont mind.


maan ki ham mohabbat ka ijhar nahin karte
magar iska matlab yeh to nahin ki ham pyar nahin karte,
Aksar samajh jate hai wo hamare isharo ko,
magar phir bhi dil ko lagta hai wo humse payar nahi karte...!


i hope u like it ishika...!


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hai - 19th September 2005, 09:40 AM

i like that u fulfill my shayri will u plz add me in ur freinds list b'coz i want to complete and u will do this ok and send me u r yahoo chat id so that i can talk with u by by take care


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