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I'll Come Down!!! -
7th November 2005, 08:57 PM
I’ll come down as a drop of rain To feel your mesmerizing touch… I’ll come down as a word of a poem To stay on your mind for a moment… I’ll come down as a ray of hope To feel your warmth when I reach you… I’ll come down as a falling star To have the pleasure of making your wishes true… I’ll come down as a singing bird at the dawn To wake you in the morning with the sweet songs… I’ll come down as the autumn To show my love by showering flowers in your path… I’ll come down as the moon and sky To fall in to your lap just to make you smile… Thanks Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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7th November 2005, 09:11 PM
An Awesome Work buddy! Keep writting!
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7th November 2005, 09:57 PM
wonderful Karthik, awesome writing i loved it a lottttttttttt
ur sis Priya  ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ Jisnu Lagey, ohi'yo jaane, Kaun Jaane peer parayi! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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7th November 2005, 10:05 PM
beautiful..........keep it up...take care
Subha Kii Gard MeiN Naa Kho JaayeiN Aa ! Tere Gham MeiN Jaagtii AankheiN Kam Se Kam Aik Raat So JaayeiN." **~*FaRhAnA*~** |
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8th November 2005, 09:32 AM
wonerful, fantastic are the words for this poetry
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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8th November 2005, 05:45 PM
lovly.. wht a devotion karthik!
it was realy wonderful would luv to c u writing more on love./.heheheheh without pain in that....****** Your attitude towards life decides Life's attitude towards you... |
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10th November 2005, 09:26 AM
hello parul...thanks yaar...keep readin
take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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10th November 2005, 03:00 PM
hello priya...thanks a lot...
take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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pallavi ji -
10th November 2005, 04:28 PM
Pallavi tum kafi gharai se likhti ho...
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12th November 2005, 09:16 AM
Kathik ... wonderful buddy... truly sweet....
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14th November 2005, 09:21 PM
hello farhana...thanks a lot dear...
sorry replyin a lil late take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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14th November 2005, 09:22 PM
wonerful, fantastic are the words for this poetry
thanks buddy...i am glad u liked it... keep readin take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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14th November 2005, 09:23 PM
hey palloo...my sweet friend...
thanks a lot yaar keep comin ok take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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16th November 2005, 10:28 AM
KArthik...wat a luvely poem...
it was really cute.... keep it up tc komal |
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19th November 2005, 05:59 PM
hello komal...
thank u for the compliments i'm glad u liked it...it was cute? well... it was pleasant writing tht poem ... thanks take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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19th November 2005, 06:00 PM
hey rohin....thanks buddy...
i'm so happy u found it sweet... take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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Re: I'll Come Down!!! -
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cute poetry....really cute....really nice....yaaar....write on happiness dealing with love more often cuz this is fabulous.... ur poem reminded me of a song...well two actually "har subha yaad rakhna har shaam yaad rakhna mera naam hai mohabbat mera naam yaad rakhna" AND... "Bahon mein nahi rehna....tere dil mein utar na haiii Woh Jo pyaar mein hota hai...hehe...aaj wohi karna hai"   tako caro!!! adios tu amiga u kno me »~:¤.·ş`·.»WARDA«.·´ş·.¤:~« *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life, marveling at the different plants and flowers on the way....some hurt, yet some love... ~*~Ek Nanny Si Jaan...Chotta Sa Bacha...Thas Me!~*~ |
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23rd November 2005, 08:49 PM
hey warda...thanks buddy...
it was really nice to c ur replyy... hmm cute poem... i'll try to write more of them ok take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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24th November 2005, 08:49 PM
very nice nd very tochable....
simply fantastic.. I’ll come down as the moon and sky To fall in to your lap just to make you smile… keep it up Karthik... jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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30th November 2005, 05:27 PM
hello shweta...
thanks for readin it... glad u liked it... thanks for comin take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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1st December 2005, 08:48 AM
Dear Karthik,
It was too too too too too cute...bahaut cute likha hai tumne and yeah bahaut romantic bhi...loved reading each and every word of the poem... Aise hi likhto raho...it was really beautiful...hope to read soem more from you on love... Luv u lots and always palak =========================================== Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai ================================================== ================================================== ================ "Don't walk behind me; I may not lead. Don't walk in front of me; I may not follow. Just walk beside me and be my friend." ================================================== ================================================== ================= |
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5th December 2005, 07:48 AM
dear palak...idiot...u hope to read more frm me????
stupidd!!!!arre...how many days has it been since u came on to the site re...keep comin some times atleast... thank u for ur comments...grt to c ur reply... take care luv u too Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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5th December 2005, 11:06 AM
mere karthik,
khusurat ahesaas maa |
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7th December 2005, 07:45 PM
hello maa...thanks a lot...
take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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Re: Re: I'll Come Down!!! -
2nd January 2006, 09:51 AM
It really touches heart......
very nice Happy New Year to all the group members regards Dinesh Garg |
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3rd January 2006, 10:10 PM
hello dinesh...
thanks a lot... happy new year ... have fun buddy take care Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi... Dekhna chahta hun.. Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions I love my poetry… Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love… |
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