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I'll Come Down!!! - 7th November 2005, 08:57 PM


I’ll come down as a drop of rain
To feel your mesmerizing touch…

I’ll come down as a word of a poem
To stay on your mind for a moment…

I’ll come down as a ray of hope
To feel your warmth when I reach you…

I’ll come down as a falling star
To have the pleasure of making your wishes true…

I’ll come down as a singing bird at the dawn
To wake you in the morning with the sweet songs…

I’ll come down as the autumn
To show my love by showering flowers in your path…

I’ll come down as the moon and sky
To fall in to your lap just to make you smile…


Thanks


Karthik
Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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7th November 2005, 09:11 PM

An Awesome Work buddy! Keep writting!

   
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hi - 7th November 2005, 09:57 PM

wonderful Karthik, awesome writing i loved it a lottttttttttt

ur sis
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7th November 2005, 10:05 PM

beautiful..........keep it up...take care


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8th November 2005, 09:32 AM

wonerful, fantastic are the words for this poetry


meri har chahat se pehle ek chahat hogi
wo chahat hamesha tum hogi
ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main
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8th November 2005, 05:45 PM

lovly.. wht a devotion karthik! it was realy wonderful would luv to c u writing more on love./.heheheheh without pain in that....


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10th November 2005, 09:26 AM

hello parul...thanks yaar...keep readin
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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10th November 2005, 03:00 PM

hello priya...thanks a lot...
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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pallavi ji - 10th November 2005, 04:28 PM

Pallavi tum kafi gharai se likhti ho...

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lovly.. wht a devotion karthik! it was realy wonderful would luv to c u writing more on love./.heheheheh without pain in that....


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12th November 2005, 09:16 AM

Kathik ... wonderful buddy... truly sweet....


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14th November 2005, 09:21 PM

hello farhana...thanks a lot dear...
sorry replyin a lil late
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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14th November 2005, 09:22 PM

wonerful, fantastic are the words for this poetry

thanks buddy...i am glad u liked it...
keep readin
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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14th November 2005, 09:23 PM

hey palloo...my sweet friend...
thanks a lot yaar
keep comin ok
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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16th November 2005, 10:28 AM

KArthik...wat a luvely poem...
it was really cute....
keep it up
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19th November 2005, 05:59 PM

hello komal...
thank u for the compliments
i'm glad u liked it...it was cute? well... it was pleasant writing tht poem ...
thanks
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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19th November 2005, 06:00 PM

hey rohin....thanks buddy...
i'm so happy u found it sweet...
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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Re: I'll Come Down!!! - 22nd November 2005, 05:31 AM

Quote:
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I’ll come down as a drop of rain
To feel your mesmerizing touch…

I’ll come down as a word of a poem
To stay on your mind for a moment…

I’ll come down as a ray of hope
To feel your warmth when I reach you…

I’ll come down as a falling star
To have the pleasure of making your wishes true…

I’ll come down as a singing bird at the dawn
To wake you in the morning with the sweet songs…

I’ll come down as the autumn
To show my love by showering flowers in your path…

I’ll come down as the moon and sky
To fall in to your lap just to make you smile…

ohhhhhh!!! i get it!!! karthik's in love...nananananana....i knew it i knew it i knew it!!! hehe....lolzzz....
cute poetry....really cute....really nice....yaaar....write on happiness dealing with love more often cuz this is fabulous....

ur poem reminded me of a song...well two actually
"har subha yaad rakhna har shaam yaad rakhna
mera naam hai mohabbat mera naam yaad rakhna"

AND...

"Bahon mein nahi rehna....tere dil mein utar na haiii
Woh Jo pyaar mein hota hai...hehe...aaj wohi karna hai"

tako caro!!!

adios
tu amiga
u kno me


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I'm a wanderer...on the roads of life,
marveling at the different plants and flowers
on the way....some hurt, yet some love...

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23rd November 2005, 08:49 PM

hey warda...thanks buddy...
it was really nice to c ur replyy...
hmm cute poem...
i'll try to write more of them ok
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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.. - 24th November 2005, 08:49 PM

very nice nd very tochable....
simply fantastic..


I’ll come down as the moon and sky
To fall in to your lap just to make you smile…

keep it up
Karthik...


SHWETA


jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai

uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
wo pyar deewana hota hai

kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan
wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
wo waqt suhana hota hai...


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30th November 2005, 05:27 PM

hello shweta...
thanks for readin it...
glad u liked it...
thanks for comin
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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1st December 2005, 08:48 AM

Dear Karthik,

It was too too too too too cute...bahaut cute likha hai tumne and yeah bahaut romantic bhi...loved reading each and every word of the poem...

Aise hi likhto raho...it was really beautiful...hope to read soem more from you on love...

Luv u lots and always
palak



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Naam ke tere kii ibaadat hai, Ishq teraa khudaayi hai
Berang meri duniya sanam rangeen toone banaayi hai
Dil ki har dhhadkan me naam teraa shaamil hai is kadar
Ke dekhoon main aaina bhi to soorat teri nazar aayi hai


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5th December 2005, 07:48 AM

dear palak...idiot...u hope to read more frm me????
stupidd!!!!arre...how many days has it been since u came on to the site re...keep comin some times atleast...
thank u for ur comments...grt to c ur reply...
take care
luv u too


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
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Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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5th December 2005, 11:06 AM

mere karthik,

khusurat ahesaas

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hello maa...thanks a lot...
take care


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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

I envy the words, which took the form of my emotions
I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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Re: Re: I'll Come Down!!! - 2nd January 2006, 09:51 AM

It really touches heart......

very nice

Happy New Year to all the group members

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hello dinesh...
thanks a lot...
happy new year ...
have fun buddy
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Chaandni mere pyaar ki kyun uspar na rang laayi
Kyun bas kami hi meri ibaadat me usko nazar aayi
Thaa laakh bura sahi main. sacchi meri chaahat thi
Kyun meri bhaavnaon ko woh samajh nahi paayi...

Dekhna chahta hun..
Tere tasveer ko khwab banake dekhna chahta hun
Aur us khwab mein apne aap ko khona chahta hun

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I love my poetry…
Which has turned the tears of pain in to the pearls of love…
   
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