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KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe -
1st August 2007, 07:51 PM
namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,
bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien: Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe mat roko humein fanna hone se tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe mat sikayo humein hasna tum saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe mat dekho humari nigahon mein tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........ Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time....  |
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1st August 2007, 08:03 PM
bahut hi khoob and bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne
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farishte -
1st August 2007, 08:47 PM
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1st August 2007, 08:50 PM
zindagi meri ab khatm hai shayad
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1st August 2007, 08:54 PM
tumhari gali mein qatl kar diya gaya mujhko
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1st August 2007, 08:57 PM
peshaani-e-hayat pe kuchh aise bal pade
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1st August 2007, 08:59 PM
meri aashiqui se pehle tuje kaun jaanta tha
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1st August 2007, 09:01 PM
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Bahut khoob Musafir ek pal ke ....sabhi sher ek se badhker ek hain...per jis sher ke saath aapne iftada ki hai woh mujhe bahut pasand aaya: ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe... Jawed... |
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1st August 2007, 09:02 PM
apna husn sa chehra behaal rekha kar
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1st August 2007, 09:04 PM
tujhe aarzoo-e-jaan likhoon ya jaane aarzoo
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1st August 2007, 11:36 PM
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manish bohat achi koshish rahi aur pehle se kafi behter koshish thi yunhi likhte raho khush raho..................aur janab aap haider ji aap seguzarish hai ke aap agar kuch post kerna chahte hain to alag se post kijiye kisi aur ke thread main nahi istarah yahan inki post disturb ho rahi hai umeed hai aap samjh gaye honge aur bura nahi manainge kisi baat ka...... apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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2nd August 2007, 05:08 PM
Sach kahu to yeh title jo tumne likha hain padh kar bahut gussa. aaya tha .....
 mujhe yeh laash maut vagireh shabd bilkul acche nahin lagte....ek pal to laga ki na padhu usee....par tumhe datne ke liye yaha chali aayi.........kya zaruri hota hain aise daravne shabd istemaal karna.........are kitne aur lafz hain acche acche pyarepyaree use istemaal karo..... par fir bhi kuch ashar hain jo hume acche lage................nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe mat sikayo humein hasna tum saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe mat dekho humari nigahon mein tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe Agar meri baaton ka bura laga ho to pehle se hi maafi mang leti hoon mein..... mausam Jaane kya samjhi main useN Faasla nazar aaya....Kuch kadmon ke saath se |
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3rd August 2007, 06:52 PM
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hey MANISH, gr8 job............manish muje pata nahi tha ki tumne apne aap mai itna dard chupa rakha hai...............kya khub likha hai tumne....maan gaye..........tum hamesha kehte ho na ki 'lamha tum mujse acha likhati ho'.............aaj tumne sabit kar diya ki tum mujse jayada acha likhate ho.............hamesh aise hi likhte raho.......... par ek baat kaho............plz ye kabr ki baatein mat karo.........tum ek bahut hi ache dost ho..........plz aisa likhakar doston ka dil mat dukhao............. aap ki dost, LAMHA............ |
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4th August 2007, 12:32 PM
dear munna....sabse phele to yeh batao ki aisa dard kyu likhtey ho, aur ha...mai.n bhi mausam se sahmat hoon....dard ko chorr kar aur bhi bahut kuch hai likhne ko...pyar byar par likha karo
 dard hamarey liye rahne do....bahut accha likha hai, ahsaas badiya hai.N...kahi kuch spelling mistake haiN, ek baar pad lena phir se....ab ki baar kuch pyar-byar par likhna... ek behtreen koshish ke liye dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye...!kush rahiye duao.n ke saath aapki diiii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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7th August 2007, 03:15 PM
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thanku lovedeep ji, aapko humara likha pasand aaya, humein yeh jan-kar bahut khushi hui. aapka saath raha to jaruur sajaynge. apna khyaal rakein aur khush rahein. aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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7th August 2007, 05:16 PM
manish bhaa'ii:
namaskaaR.... bahot Khuub liKhaa hay janaab... YuuNhii meHnat karte rahiYe... duaa haii aap aage aur bhee achchhaa liKheN...KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN.... duaaoN ke saath ijaazat.. aapka ~ Dhaval |
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9th August 2007, 06:39 PM
MANISH bhai ko mera pyar bhara aadab wah kya khoob likha hai apne accha laga apka kalam dilidaad hazir hai kubool ho..............aap ka bhai
Dunia ke sitam ki koi perwah nahi mujhko, wo kyoun mujhpe ungliya uthaye ja rahe hain. Jis shaks ko janta tha ek chehre se ''kashif'' Uske kitne chehre samne laye ja rahe hain.  |
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12th August 2007, 05:00 AM
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apna khyaal rakein. manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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14th August 2007, 01:47 AM
Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe mat roko humein fanna hone se tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe mat sikayo humein hasna tum saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe mat dekho humari nigahon mein tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........ hi dost thx for reading my shayris, glad to know that u liked my shayris. your one is wonderful, every word , every single line is so meaningful. sounds like you are in my position too. pray to god that your life will be full of happiness. keep writing. thx yr friend neha "Aaj phir se unki yaad humme sata gaya
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14th August 2007, 08:25 AM
Behtreen nazm........
khoobsurat ehsaas........ dilkash koshish....... Hamein apki yeh nazm bahut pasand aayi...... Khush rahiye Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
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17th August 2007, 04:12 AM
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hello mani didi, aap kaise hain? humein khushi hui k apko is nacheez ka likha pasand aaya. bahut bahut shukriya. and also thnx for advicin haideraqeel ji. aap humara aishe hi saath dete raheiyga. aapka chota bhai manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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19th August 2007, 05:51 AM
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hello didi, hum likhe aur app nah padein, to humare likne ka fayada kya!!!! chalo jo aap kehto ho, hum use maan lete hain. aab ki baar kuch acha likenge. aur hum gussa kaise ho sakte hain, aapki kissi baat par humein gussa nahi ayega. apko kuch sher pasand aaye, humein bahut bahut bahut (aishi  ) khushi hui. yuhin saath dete raheyiga humara.aap kush rahein aur apna khyaal rakein. aapka bhai manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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22nd August 2007, 01:47 AM
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aapko is nacheez ka likha pasand aay, humein bahut bahut khushi hui. bas wajah mat puchein aisha likne ki......thanku for ur support and kind words. apna khyaal rakeiyga, aur issi tarah humara saath dete reheiyga aapka dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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22nd August 2007, 10:07 AM
Wah Manish bhai
bahut khub. bahut hi dard bhari rachna ko pesh kiya hai aapne, aapki rachna ke har alfaaz mein dard nazar aa raha hai, jis khubsurati se alfaazon ko bayan kiya hai aapne is rachna daad hazir hai janab. yuhi likhte rahiyega aapka dost Merul Quote:
 Dhoka diya tha jab tumne mujhe, Tab dil se me naraz tha, Phir socha ki dil se tumhe nikal du, Magar woh kambakth dil bhi tumhare paas tha. Merul~~~~~~~~~~> |
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3rd September 2007, 06:47 AM
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bahut acha laga. aapko humari post par dekh-kar. yaar, dard hai tabhi to shayri aati hai. aur humein malum hain, abb to shayri sarri zindagi karni hai. likhte to app b acha ho. aur abb parhaiz karunga "kabr" jaise lafz use karne se. happy nw?? aage aishe hi saath dete rehna.....warna!!!! tumhara dost manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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3rd September 2007, 02:05 PM
manish ji kia kahu...apke ye khyal padhkar aankhein nam ho gayi...dil mein ek tees ubhar kar aayi...itna dard kaise aap apne andar samete hue ho...nikal faikoise apne andar se...bas yahi kahungi...is se pahle ki ye nasoor bane...
...mahuaa...  ..♥♥..Mera Tumhara..kya Rishta hai..kuch bhi Nahi.. Agar kabhi..Gujarta dekho..kya Tum Mujhe..bulaoge.. Shayad Nahi.. Agar jo phir Hum..kabhi na Mile to.. Kya Tum yaad aaogoge..Nahi.. Kiuki..Tum Mere..koi Nahi.. Main janti hun..Magar.. Ho jab Mere koi Nahi..kiu lagte ho Mujhko Paraye nahi....♥♥.. ..nm.. ...mahuaa... |
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11th September 2007, 03:47 AM
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namaste didi didi, promise u, iss bar kuch acha acha aur pyaara pyaara sa likhunga. bas wajah mat puchiye. dard hi ek asie cheez hai, ho humari hai, isse humara hi rehdo do. bahut acha laga, k aapko humara likha pasand aaya. ji dubara padi, galti ka pata chala. thanku so much, for telling me. yuhin aage b galtion ko sudhrate rehna didi. aage b aishe hi saath dete raheiyga. aapka chota bhai munna Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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11th September 2007, 09:46 PM
Dard se bhari yaha shaayri hamein bahut achi lagi, Manish Ji...! ( Manish naam ka ek dusre dost ki yaad aa gayi...)
Yun hi likhte rahiye aur hum aap ko parhte raheinge, ok...? Apna khayaal rakhiyegaa Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai 
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jsk dhaval bhai shukyira janab, aapko humara likha pasand aaya, humein bahut khushi hui. koshish karte rahenge acha likhne ki. aap yuhin, aage b saath dete raheiyga. thnx 4 ur kind words tc manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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17th September 2007, 04:37 PM
Bohot acha likha mr.ishq
pata hai ham to roone hi lage aisa par kar bewaafaa hone ko dil nahi chata par kya karun hame bhi lagta hai ke apne haathon se hi bewafaai karni pare gi kasch koi hame aisa karne se rok sakta par bewafaai bhi jaan buj kar nahi ki jaati woh to woh log hi jaane jine doo rahon par yeh faisla karna hota hai ke woh kis raah ko chune ga darr lagta hai ke woh bhi aap ki tarha mere baad aisa na likhne lag jaayen but it is very good bye aapki doast jaan Unko chaha hai unko chahein ge wade jo kiye te woh nibhayein ge ho kar kisi aur ke bhi rahein ge unhi ke ham chahein haar jaayen hamara pyaar nahi haare jism chahe ho jaye kisi aur ka dil to hai unka aur unhi ka rehe ga mil sakein na woh aur ham kahin phir bhi joodhre hain unka mera dil kahin jaante hain ham mera kal koi aur hai par phir bhi HUMKO UNSE PYAR HAI |
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17th September 2007, 05:34 PM
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kaise hai aap? kya kahun manish ji, sach,,yakin maniye aaj hamare paas alfaz nahi hai,, kaha se laye woh alfaz jisse aapki taif bayan ho sake, manish ji,wakayi aapki yeh nazam kabile tarif hai, itne pyare ehsaas,itne pyare lafzon ka istemaal, kamal hi kar diya aapne, bas ab hamari daad ko kabul kar hi lijiye, apna khayal rakhiye khush rahiye. ALLAH HAFIZ Sweet HASSONI, ( Badrul HaSSaN ki SoNi ) ()""""()()""""() ( ,'o' ) ( ,'o' ) (,) (,) (,) (,) SoNY _ Badrul HASSAN forever.. and ever and ever! **********(¨`·.·´¨) Always ************* `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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18th September 2007, 09:43 AM
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21st September 2007, 05:19 AM
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bahut bahut shukriya kashif bhai. aapko yahan dekh-kar bahut khushi hui. aapko humara likha pasand aaya, humein yeh jan-kar acha laga. aage b yuhin saath dete raheiyga. aana khyaal rakein aur humesha khush rahein manish Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little... Darkness falls on me like rain... just one drop at a time.... |
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21st September 2007, 10:19 PM
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hello ji manish ji bahut khoob likkha hai.... sacch.. dusre ne ki bewafayi ilzaam khud ko diya... ye mazaa bhi kucch or hai.. hai na Manish ji bas yahi to saccha pyar hai...or kya u hin likhte rahiye janab tc ji jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai uth jati hai kalam likhne ko wo pyar deewana hota hai kar deti hai haal-e-dil bayaan wo kalaam shayraana hota hai jab yaad karte hai kisi ko wo waqt suhana hota hai... ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* duniya mein kitna gam hai apna gam phir bhi kam hai ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* |
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(#36)
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21st September 2007, 10:32 PM
hi manish bhot hi badhiya likha hai aapne..khush rahiye or yuhi sabko acchi acchi poems sunaaiye...kp smiling
 
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21st September 2007, 10:39 PM
hi manish bhot hi badhiya likha hai aapne..khush rahiye or yuhi sabko acchi acchi poems sunaaiye...kp smiling
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Zakhm-e-Rooh
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21st September 2007, 11:23 PM
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 ,) kyun sahi kaha na . Bahut badhiya likha hai dil se daad kabool karna ,yunhee likhate rehna manish jiregards manish (manu) |
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22nd September 2007, 12:38 AM
Ei chhore
kaise ho re......wah wah...kya lilkha hai.....pata hai tumhari ye post pahale bhi dekhi thhi, padhi nahi thhi, aaj padh bhi li reply bhi kar diya.....warna tum kahate ke pooja aati nahi hahahahahahaa......bahot achha likha hai.....kitna sacch hai, hansi ke pichhe ansoo hote hain....ye baat hum dono par fitt hoti hai .....daad lelo chhore.....warna.....!!!......yunhi likhte raho....ek din itna achha likhne lagoge ke....ke..har shaqs tariff ke liye shabd hi nahi talaash payega.......yahi dua hai tumhare liye...khush raho......aur haaa.......chit-chat me bhi tashrif le aya karo....warna bahot maar paregi haaa.....soch lena.......bahot dant diya.......ab ijaazat!!! Grazie Pooja  ===========Deepika=========== Pyaar Hai Yaa sazaa ayi mere Dil bataa Toot'ta Kyu.N naHi.N Dard Kaa Silsilaa
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22nd September 2007, 01:46 PM
ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........ Hi, Accha likha hai aapne... khaaskar aakhiri sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya... likhte rahiye yun hi... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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