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Post KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe - 1st August 2007, 07:51 PM

namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........


Life is filled with goodbyes, a million goodbyes, and it hurts every time....and every time my heart dies a little...



Darkness falls on me like rain...
just
one drop at a time....


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bahut hi khoob and bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne
ek ek line bahut hi pyari hai, ese hi likhte rahiye and iss mehfil ko aise hi sajate rahiye








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farishte - 1st August 2007, 08:47 PM

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ek ek line bahut hi pyari hai, ese hi likhte rahiye and iss mehfil ko aise hi sajate rahiye





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namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........

Bahut khoob Musafir ek pal ke ....sabhi sher ek se badhker ek hain...per jis sher ke saath aapne iftada ki hai woh mujhe bahut pasand aaya:

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe...

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namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........

manish bohat achi koshish rahi aur pehle se kafi behter koshish thi yunhi likhte raho khush raho..................aur janab aap haider ji aap seguzarish hai ke aap agar kuch post kerna chahte hain to alag se post kijiye kisi aur ke thread main nahi istarah yahan inki post disturb ho rahi hai umeed hai aap samjh gaye honge aur bura nahi manainge kisi baat ka......


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Sach kahu to yeh title jo tumne likha hain padh kar bahut gussa. aaya tha ..... mujhe yeh laash maut vagireh shabd bilkul acche nahin lagte....ek pal to laga ki na padhu usee....par tumhe datne ke liye yaha chali aayi.........kya zaruri hota hain aise daravne shabd istemaal karna.........are kitne aur lafz hain acche acche pyarepyaree use istemaal karo..... par fir bhi kuch ashar hain jo hume acche lage................

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe


Agar meri baaton ka bura laga ho to pehle se hi maafi mang leti hoon mein.....

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nice - 2nd August 2007, 06:55 PM

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namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........
manish ji ko raj ka namaskaar......manish ji kyaa baat hai bhut hii dilkash andaaz mein dil ki tarap ko lafzon mein dhala hai.......magar hamari to duaa hai ki aap hamesha khush rahe.......raj.......


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
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namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........

hey MANISH,
gr8 job............manish muje pata nahi tha ki tumne apne aap mai itna dard chupa rakha hai...............kya khub likha hai tumne....maan gaye..........tum hamesha kehte ho na ki 'lamha tum mujse acha likhati ho'.............aaj tumne sabit kar diya ki tum mujse jayada acha likhate ho.............hamesh aise hi likhte raho..........
par ek baat kaho............plz ye kabr ki baatein mat karo.........tum ek bahut hi ache dost ho..........plz aisa likhakar doston ka dil mat dukhao.............
aap ki dost,
LAMHA............
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dear munna....sabse phele to yeh batao ki aisa dard kyu likhtey ho, aur ha...mai.n bhi mausam se sahmat hoon....dard ko chorr kar aur bhi bahut kuch hai likhne ko...pyar byar par likha karo dard hamarey liye rahne do....

bahut accha likha hai, ahsaas badiya hai.N...kahi kuch spelling mistake haiN, ek baar pad lena phir se....ab ki baar kuch pyar-byar par likhna... ek behtreen koshish ke liye dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye...!


kush rahiye

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bahut hi khoob and bahut hi aacha likha hai aapne
ek ek line bahut hi pyari hai, ese hi likhte rahiye and iss mehfil ko aise hi sajate rahiye






thanku lovedeep ji, aapko humara likha pasand aaya, humein yeh jan-kar bahut khushi hui. aapka saath raha to jaruur sajaynge. apna khyaal rakein aur khush rahein.

aapka dost

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7th August 2007, 05:16 PM

manish bhaa'ii:

namaskaaR....

bahot Khuub liKhaa hay janaab... YuuNhii meHnat karte rahiYe... duaa haii aap aage aur bhee achchhaa liKheN...KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN....

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat..

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MANISH bhai ko mera pyar bhara aadab wah kya khoob likha hai apne accha laga apka kalam dilidaad hazir hai kubool ho..............aap ka bhai


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farishte ne poochha shaitan se kyon bhai insaan se darne lage

shaitan ne haath jodkar keha are bhai fursat mein hoon
mere saare kaam insaan karne lage
shukriya janab, k aapne apne kuch sher humari post par sher kiye. aap inhe main page, jahan sabhi inhe pad sakein, aur hain ek aur baat, agar yeh sher aapke nahi to, inke neeche not mine, likhdein.

apna khyaal rakein.

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Darkness falls on me like rain...
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Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........


hi dost

thx for reading my shayris, glad to know that u liked my shayris.
your one is wonderful, every word , every single line is so meaningful. sounds like you are in my position too.

pray to god that your life will be full of happiness. keep writing.

thx
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14th August 2007, 08:25 AM

Behtreen nazm........

khoobsurat ehsaas........

dilkash koshish.......

Hamein apki yeh nazm bahut pasand aayi......

Khush rahiye



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Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi
Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki
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hello mani didi,

aap kaise hain?

humein khushi hui k apko is nacheez ka likha pasand aaya. bahut bahut shukriya. and also thnx for advicin haideraqeel ji. aap humara aishe hi saath dete raheiyga.

aapka chota bhai

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Sach kahu to yeh title jo tumne likha hain padh kar bahut gussa. aaya tha ..... mujhe yeh laash maut vagireh shabd bilkul acche nahin lagte....ek pal to laga ki na padhu usee....par tumhe datne ke liye yaha chali aayi.........kya zaruri hota hain aise daravne shabd istemaal karna.........are kitne aur lafz hain acche acche pyarepyaree use istemaal karo..... par fir bhi kuch ashar hain jo hume acche lage................

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Agar meri baaton ka bura laga ho to pehle se hi maafi mang leti hoon mein.....

mausam

hello didi,

hum likhe aur app nah padein, to humare likne ka fayada kya!!!! chalo jo aap kehto ho, hum use maan lete hain. aab ki baar kuch acha likenge. aur hum gussa kaise ho sakte hain, aapki kissi baat par humein gussa nahi ayega. apko kuch sher pasand aaye, humein bahut bahut bahut (aishi ) khushi hui. yuhin saath dete raheyiga humara.

aap kush rahein aur apna khyaal rakein.

aapka bhai

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manish ji ko raj ka namaskaar......manish ji kyaa baat hai bhut hii dilkash andaaz mein dil ki tarap ko lafzon mein dhala hai.......magar hamari to duaa hai ki aap hamesha khush rahe.......raj.......
namaskaar raj ji,

aapko is nacheez ka likha pasand aay, humein bahut bahut khushi hui. bas wajah mat puchein aisha likne ki......thanku for ur support and kind words.

apna khyaal rakeiyga, aur issi tarah humara saath dete reheiyga

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22nd August 2007, 10:07 AM

Wah Manish bhai
bahut khub.

bahut hi dard bhari rachna ko pesh kiya hai aapne, aapki rachna ke har alfaaz mein dard nazar aa raha hai,

jis khubsurati se alfaazon ko bayan kiya hai aapne is rachna daad hazir hai janab.

yuhi likhte rahiyega
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namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........


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hey MANISH,
gr8 job............manish muje pata nahi tha ki tumne apne aap mai itna dard chupa rakha hai...............kya khub likha hai tumne....maan gaye..........tum hamesha kehte ho na ki 'lamha tum mujse acha likhati ho'.............aaj tumne sabit kar diya ki tum mujse jayada acha likhate ho.............hamesh aise hi likhte raho..........
par ek baat kaho............plz ye kabr ki baatein mat karo.........tum ek bahut hi ache dost ho..........plz aisa likhakar doston ka dil mat dukhao.............
aap ki dost,
LAMHA............
hello princess,

bahut acha laga. aapko humari post par dekh-kar. yaar, dard hai tabhi to shayri aati hai. aur humein malum hain, abb to shayri sarri zindagi karni hai. likhte to app b acha ho.

aur abb parhaiz karunga "kabr" jaise lafz use karne se. happy nw??

aage aishe hi saath dete rehna.....warna!!!!

tumhara dost

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manish ji kia kahu...apke ye khyal padhkar aankhein nam ho gayi...dil mein ek tees ubhar kar aayi...itna dard kaise aap apne andar samete hue ho...nikal faikoise apne andar se...bas yahi kahungi...is se pahle ki ye nasoor bane...

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dear munna....sabse phele to yeh batao ki aisa dard kyu likhtey ho, aur ha...mai.n bhi mausam se sahmat hoon....dard ko chorr kar aur bhi bahut kuch hai likhne ko...pyar byar par likha karo dard hamarey liye rahne do....

bahut accha likha hai, ahsaas badiya hai.N...kahi kuch spelling mistake haiN, ek baar pad lena phir se....ab ki baar kuch pyar-byar par likhna... ek behtreen koshish ke liye dil se mubarakbaad kabool kijiye...!


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namaste didi

didi, promise u, iss bar kuch acha acha aur pyaara pyaara sa likhunga. bas wajah mat puchiye. dard hi ek asie cheez hai, ho humari hai, isse humara hi rehdo do.

bahut acha laga, k aapko humara likha pasand aaya. ji dubara padi, galti ka pata chala. thanku so much, for telling me. yuhin aage b galtion ko sudhrate rehna didi. aage b aishe hi saath dete raheiyga.

aapka chota bhai

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Dard se bhari yaha shaayri hamein bahut achi lagi, Manish Ji...! ( Manish naam ka ek dusre dost ki yaad aa gayi...)

Yun hi likhte rahiye aur hum aap ko parhte raheinge, ok...?

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manish bhaa'ii:

namaskaaR....

bahot Khuub liKhaa hay janaab... YuuNhii meHnat karte rahiYe... duaa haii aap aage aur bhee achchhaa liKheN...KhuSh raheN.. apnaa Khayaal raKheN....

duaaoN ke saath ijaazat..

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shukyira janab, aapko humara likha pasand aaya, humein bahut khushi hui. koshish karte rahenge acha likhne ki. aap yuhin, aage b saath dete raheiyga.

thnx 4 ur kind words

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Bohot acha likha mr.ishq
pata hai ham to roone hi lage
aisa par kar bewaafaa hone ko dil nahi chata
par kya karun hame bhi lagta hai ke apne haathon se hi
bewafaai karni pare gi
kasch koi hame aisa karne se rok sakta
par bewafaai bhi jaan buj kar nahi ki jaati
woh to woh log hi jaane jine doo rahon par
yeh faisla karna hota hai ke woh kis raah ko chune ga

darr lagta hai ke woh bhi aap ki tarha mere baad aisa na likhne lag jaayen
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Smile frnd 4 ever - 17th September 2007, 05:34 PM

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namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........
Aadab manish ji,
kaise hai aap?

kya kahun manish ji,
sach,,yakin maniye aaj hamare paas alfaz nahi hai,,
kaha se laye woh alfaz jisse aapki taif bayan ho sake,

manish ji,wakayi aapki yeh nazam kabile tarif hai,
itne pyare ehsaas,itne pyare lafzon ka istemaal,
kamal hi kar diya aapne,

bas ab hamari daad ko kabul kar hi lijiye,

apna khayal rakhiye
khush rahiye.
ALLAH HAFIZ


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namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........
waah waah manish bahut hee khoob likha hai aap ne yunhee laikhate rahe,meri aur se dad kabool kare.

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MANISH bhai ko mera pyar bhara aadab wah kya khoob likha hai apne accha laga apka kalam dilidaad hazir hai kubool ho..............aap ka bhai

bahut bahut shukriya kashif bhai. aapko yahan dekh-kar bahut khushi hui. aapko humara likha pasand aaya, humein yeh jan-kar acha laga. aage b yuhin saath dete raheiyga.

aana khyaal rakein aur humesha khush rahein

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namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........

hello ji
manish ji
bahut khoob likkha hai....
sacch.. dusre ne ki bewafayi ilzaam khud ko diya... ye mazaa bhi kucch or hai.. hai na Manish ji

bas yahi to saccha pyar hai...or kya

u hin likhte rahiye janab


tc ji


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uth jati hai kalam likhne ko
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wo kalaam shayraana hota hai

jab yaad karte hai kisi ko
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Smile hii - 21st September 2007, 10:32 PM

hi manish bhot hi badhiya likha hai aapne..khush rahiye or yuhi sabko acchi acchi poems sunaaiye...kp smiling


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namaskar, salaam and sas-ria-kaal dosto,

bahut dher k baad, kuch likha hai. umeed hai aap ko humara likha pasand ayega. aur humesha ki tarah, aap humara saath denge. gaur farmayien:

Barbaad hone do mujHe, apni najron se girne do mujhe
aaj us bewaffa ki yaad mein, jalne do muhhe
aab hum jeeyein to kiss ke liye
maut ki raah par chalne do mujhe

mat roko humein fanna hone se
tadapti shamma ki tarah bujne do mujhe

nah do humein risto ka vaasta tum
kagaz ki kasti ki tarah dubne do mujhe

mat sikayo humein hasna tum
saans lene k andaaz bulne do mujhe

mat dekho humari nigahon mein
tanhai mein aashq bahane do mujhe

dil aur rooh ko shikayat hai mujse
KABR ke us par....chupne do mujhe

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........
kyaa baat hai manish kamaal ka likha hai tumne yaar tumane yeh kalaam likh kar yeh saabit kar diyaa ki yaha "m" (sinh raashi waale) is family ke sabhi sadasya shaayri ke mastermind hai.(Kabhi khood ki taariff bhi kar leni chahiye ,) kyun sahi kaha na . Bahut badhiya likha hai dil se daad kabool karna ,yunhee likhate rehna manish ji

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22nd September 2007, 12:38 AM

Ei chhore

kaise ho re......wah wah...kya lilkha hai.....pata hai tumhari ye post pahale bhi dekhi thhi, padhi nahi thhi, aaj padh bhi li reply bhi kar diya.....warna tum kahate ke pooja aati nahi hahahahahahaa......

bahot achha likha hai.....kitna sacch hai, hansi ke pichhe ansoo hote hain....ye baat hum dono par fitt hoti hai.....daad lelo chhore.....warna.....!!!......

yunhi likhte raho....ek din itna achha likhne lagoge ke....ke..har shaqs tariff ke liye shabd hi nahi talaash payega.......yahi dua hai tumhare liye...khush raho......aur haaa.......chit-chat me bhi tashrif le aya karo....warna bahot maar paregi haaa.....soch lena.......bahot dant diya.......ab

ijaazat!!!

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22nd September 2007, 01:46 PM

ishq mein marna, kaam hai deewano ka
fanna ho-kar, yhe rasm nibane do mujhe........

Hi,

Accha likha hai aapne... khaaskar aakhiri sher mujhe bahut pasand aaya... likhte rahiye yun hi...


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