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30th December 2010, 11:52 PM
Doston Ishq-waalon ki mahfil mein ek baar fir haaazir hua hai ghulaam.. lekin is baar zyaada dimaag pe zor dalne wale kalaam ke bajaae ek halki fulki peshkash ke saath... aur ummeed karta hoon is baar bhi rahegaa aap sab kaa saath..
Meri jaan hii nikal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho,
Hasrate-Dil Machal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Na koi tamanna na shiqva raha baki tumhare aane se,
Har khwahish bahal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Kahan Majaal baharon me jo Tumhare raaste me aaen,
Ye qaaynat bhi Dahel jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Yoon to thakaa daala zamaane kii gardishon ne bahot,
Saarii Duniyaa badal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaane kya talash karti hain chehron ki bheed me aksar,
Phir har Nazar SaMbhal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaise ki fir chounk ke yakaayak, koii Neend se jaaga ho,
khaamosh shamaa jal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
shaad...
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31st December 2010, 05:43 PM
khob buhat achi he bhai
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31st December 2010, 08:54 PM
Shaad Ji ... Aadaab !
Bahut Khoob chaahat nazar aai iss dilkash peshkash meN ... sabhi ashaar ke khayaal ki romaani tabiyat ko aakhir tak asardaar dhang se barkaraar rakhaa aapne ...
tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...
aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen ... khush rahen ... !
duaaon ke saath ... !
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ...
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1st January 2011, 04:20 PM
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khob buhat achi he bhai
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Behad shukriya tanveer bhai.. aate rahen.. khush rahen
shaad...
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1st January 2011, 04:25 PM
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Shaad Ji ... Aadaab !
Bahut Khoob chaahat nazar aai iss dilkash peshkash meN ... sabhi ashaar ke khayaal ki romaani tabiyat ko aakhir tak asardaar dhang se barkaraar rakhaa aapne ...
tahe dil se daad hazir hai ...
aise hi likhte rahen aur aate rahen ... khush rahen ... !
duaaon ke saath ... !
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aapka bahot bahot shukriya naresh bhai.. padhne ke liye aur pasand karne ke liye.. aate rahen....
shaad...
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1st January 2011, 05:47 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Doston Ishq-waalon ki mahfil mein ek baar fir haaazir hua hai ghulaam.. lekin is baar zyaada dimaag pe zor dalne wale kalaam ke bajaae ek halki fulki peshkash ke saath... aur ummeed karta hoon is baar bhi rahegaa aap sab kaa saath..
Meri jaan hii nikal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho,
Hasrate-Dil Machal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Na koi tamanna na shiqva raha baki tumhare aane se,
Har khwahish bahal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Kahan Majaal baharon me jo Tumhare raaste me aaen,
Ye qaaynat bhi Dahel jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Yoon to thakaa daala zamaane kii gardishon ne bahot,
Saarii Duniyaa badal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaane kya talash karti hain chehron ki bheed me aksar,
Phir har Nazar SaMbhal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaise ki fir chounk ke yakaayak, koii Neend se jaaga ho,
khaamosh shamaa jal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
shaad...
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appke liye hum kya bolo kuch bolne ko bachca hi knha hai bhut hi behtareen hai ussme koi shaq hi nahi hai
naya saal appko mubarak hoo orr ummed nahi yaqin hai ki app iss trah behtran kalam kehte rahenge
yasir
यूँ छुए रूह हमारी की चरंगा चरंगा हर जर्रा खुर्शेदे-आलम-ताब
हर बेकस मज-ज़ुब रूह को उसके रब से जोड़ दे
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1st January 2011, 07:28 PM
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appke liye hum kya bolo kuch bolne ko bachca hi knha hai bhut hi behtareen hai ussme koi shaq hi nahi hai
naya saal appko mubarak hoo orr ummed nahi yaqin hai ki app iss trah behtran kalam kehte rahenge
yasir
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Shukriya Yasir bhai aapki aamad ke liye.. aapki muhabbat aur khuloos ke hum hamesha se hi kadardaaan rahe hain... behad khushi hui janakar ki aapko ye kalaam pasand aaya... bas aap doston ka saath rahe to yaqinan ye kalam bhi chalti rahegii.... aapko bhi naya saal behad mubaarak ho aur Allah aapki har muraad poori kare....khush rahiye.
shaad..
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2nd January 2011, 12:19 PM
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Doston Ishq-waalon ki mahfil mein ek baar fir haaazir hua hai ghulaam.. lekin is baar zyaada dimaag pe zor dalne wale kalaam ke bajaae ek halki fulki peshkash ke saath... aur ummeed karta hoon is baar bhi rahegaa aap sab kaa saath..
Meri jaan hii nikal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho,
Hasrate-Dil Machal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Na koi tamanna na shiqva raha baki tumhare aane se,
Har khwahish bahal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Kahan Majaal baharon me jo Tumhare raaste me aaen,
Ye qaaynat bhi Dahel jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Yoon to thakaa daala zamaane kii gardishon ne bahot,
Saarii Duniyaa badal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaane kya talash karti hain chehron ki bheed me aksar,
Phir har Nazar SaMbhal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaise ki fir chounk ke yakaayak, koii Neend se jaaga ho,
khaamosh shamaa jal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
shaad...
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wah shaad bhai bahut khoob daad kubul karen
duaon ke saath
radhe radhe
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2nd January 2011, 05:15 PM
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wah shaad bhai bahut khoob daad kubul karen
duaon ke saath
radhe radhe
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Bahot bahot shukriya Rajinder bhai aaane ka aur waqt dene ka.. aate rahen khush rahen...
shaad...
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3rd January 2011, 03:46 PM
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Originally Posted by sameer'shaad'
Doston Ishq-waalon ki mahfil mein ek baar fir haaazir hua hai ghulaam.. lekin is baar zyaada dimaag pe zor dalne wale kalaam ke bajaae ek halki fulki peshkash ke saath... aur ummeed karta hoon is baar bhi rahegaa aap sab kaa saath..
Meri jaan hii nikal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho,
Hasrate-Dil Machal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Na koi tamanna na shiqva raha baki tumhare aane se,
Har khwahish bahal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Kahan Majaal baharon me jo Tumhare raaste me aaen,
Ye qaaynat bhi Dahel jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Yoon to thakaa daala zamaane kii gardishon ne bahot,
Saarii Duniyaa badal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaane kya talash karti hain chehron ki bheed me aksar,
Phir har Nazar SaMbhal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaise ki fir chounk ke yakaayak, koii Neend se jaaga ho,
khaamosh shamaa jal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
shaad...
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shaab bhai .... deree se haazir hone ke liye muaafee chaahoongaa. ek aur khoobsurat ghazal rahee aapkee. aur dimaagh pe zor daalne ka mauka isliye nahiin milaa kyunki baath seedhe dil par hi utar gayee. dheron daad aur duaon ke saath .... zarraa
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3rd January 2011, 06:34 PM
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shaab bhai .... deree se haazir hone ke liye muaafee chaahoongaa. ek aur khoobsurat ghazal rahee aapkee. aur dimaagh pe zor daalne ka mauka isliye nahiin milaa kyunki baath seedhe dil par hi utar gayee. dheron daad aur duaon ke saath .... zarraa
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Zarraa bhai.. chaliye der se aaye magar durust aaye... aap aa gaye aur aapki aamad ki khabar hame aapke comments se hi hoti hain.. Lijiye itna pyaara comment padhke humne aapko muaaf kiyaa... Chaliye accha hi hua saahab jo aapne seedhe raaste se ise dil tak pahucha liya, warna khamkha me mehhnat karni hoti... baharhaal behad shukriyaa aane ke liye.. aate rahen..khush rahen.
shaad...
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15th January 2011, 05:20 PM
Shaad Jee,
Ye halki fulki gazal bhi kamaal ki likh di hai aapne.....!!! Bahut khoob...!!!
Jaane kya talash karti hain chehron ki bheed me aksar,
Phir har Nazar SaMbhal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaise ki fir chounk ke yakaayak, koii Neend se jaaga ho,
khaamosh shamaa jal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Ye uprokat do sher behad ache lage hame...!!! iske liye dher saari daad hazir hai....!!! Khush rahein.....!!!
KAVITA NEGI
Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!!
Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!!
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15th January 2011, 10:14 PM
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Shaad Jee,
Ye halki fulki gazal bhi kamaal ki likh di hai aapne.....!!! Bahut khoob...!!!
Jaane kya talash karti hain chehron ki bheed me aksar,
Phir har Nazar SaMbhal jati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Jaise ki fir chounk ke yakaayak, koii Neend se jaaga ho,
khaamosh shamaa jal jaati hai jab saamne tum aate ho.
Ye uprokat do sher behad ache lage hame...!!! iske liye dher saari daad hazir hai....!!! Khush rahein.....!!!
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kavita jee namashkaar aaj aapka reply padha is post par .. aapne is adnaa si koshish ko bhi sar aannkhon me rakkha, main khud ko behad khush naseeb samajhta hoon jo yahan pe mere aap jaise dost hain.. hausla afzaai ka fir se shukriya kubool karen... saath detee rahen. apna khoob khayaal rakhiye.
shaad...
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