 |
|
|
|
|
 |
 |
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon, |
 |
|
 |
|
(#1)
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
  
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon, -
25th September 2012, 05:51 PM
toote hue khwabon se jindagi bana leta hoon,
main kaanch ke tukdon se aaina bana leta hoon, phenkte hain log jo patthar mujhpe, main sabko jodkar moorat bana leta hoon, raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein, main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon, raat ke andhere mein bhatkta nahin main, har sitare ko apna chaand bana leta hoon, na poocho mujhse meri sehat ka raaj, main har dard ko dawa bana leta hoon vo itrate hain apni haath kee lakeeron pe, main mehnat se apni taqdeer bana leta hoon, mere ret ke mahal dekh ke hansne walon. main iradon ko faulaad bana leta hoon, aate nahin jo bure waqt pe kaam mere, main aise doston ko gujra hua waqt bana leta hoon, aasmaan mein chaand ko takta nahin main, aage haath bada ke apna bana leta hoon, milta nahin jab mandiron masjid mein vo. main mohabbat ko apna khuda bana leta hoon, manjil pe pahunch ke rukta nahin main, ek naye sooraj ko apna mukaam bana leta hoon, jeevan mein ho mere kitna bhi andhera, insaan hoon do patthar se aag bana leta hoon, apnon se karta nahin koi gila shikva, main dushmanon ko bhi apna dost bana leta hoon, daulat shohrat ke peeche bhaagta nahin , bheed se alag pehchan bana leta hoon. umeed ka daman kabhi chhodta nahin 'aru' ek deepak se diwali bana leta hoon, एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
 |
|
 |
 |
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#2)
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
26th September 2012, 07:27 PM
mere khyal se mujhe ab shayri.com pe post karna band kar dena chahiye, kyonki koi bhi nahin batata kee maine kaisa likha hai, mere khyal se moderators ko sabke threads pe reply karna chahiye aur use suggestions dena chahiye.... Is tareeke se shayri.com aur important aur famous ho jayega.
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#3)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 657
Join Date: Mar 2007
Location: Chandigarh/Jalandhar
Rep Power: 21
|
26th September 2012, 08:47 PM
Hi Dost,
Aaj kaafi time baad login kara aur aate hi apki nazm padhi... Kaafi achhe andaaz lage aapke. yeh lines dil ko chho gayi... kahi copy karu to muaaf karna dost... but awesome lines for me.... "raaah-e-manjil mein ho kitni bhi mushkilein, main jab thaanta hoon raasta bana leta hoon," Quote:
Badnaseeb bhi nahi par mera naseeb bhi nahi Maana ke main ameer nahi par gareeb bhi nahi Dil ki gehraaiyon mein chhipaya hai jise Woh door bhi nahi mujhse par kareeb bhi nahi Chahta to hoon dena usko khushiyan saare jahan ki par mil jaayein unke gham "Jasdeep" itna khushnaseeb bhi nahi
|
|
 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#4)
|
|
|
volunteer
Offline
Posts: 723
Join Date: May 2010
Location: chandigarh
Rep Power: 24
|
26th September 2012, 10:18 PM
Quote:
path par kaante bahut hain tere par manjil par jaana too.ne dar na jatilata se jeewan ki isko saral banana too.ne pasat na hone paye honsle khud ka sahas khud hi juta le 
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#5)
|
|
|
Tere Intzaar Mein....
Offline
Posts: 1,181
Join Date: Feb 2010
Location: Ludhiana(Punjab)
Rep Power: 38
|
27th September 2012, 01:45 PM
Quote:
bahut hi sundar................................ zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#6)
|
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
29th September 2012, 07:39 AM
Quote:
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#7)
|
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
29th September 2012, 07:40 AM
Quote:
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#8)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 285
Join Date: May 2010
Location: chandigarh
Rep Power: 24
|
30th September 2012, 12:13 AM
Incredible
 ................................... |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#9)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 1,714
Join Date: Dec 2010
Rep Power: 37
|
30th September 2012, 02:35 AM
zindagi samaj aur maahaul ke andhere mein mashaal jalaane ki apki sachchee koshish waqai prashansa ki haqdaar hai aur apka qalaam daad ka !!!
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
bahut khoob |
|
|
|
|
|
(#10)
|
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 8
Join Date: Mar 2012
Rep Power: 0
|
bahut khoob -
1st October 2012, 07:13 AM
Ek deepak se deewali banaa leta hun.....fantastic !!!!!
Quote:
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#11)
|
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
10th October 2012, 10:16 PM
Quote:
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#12)
|
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
16th October 2012, 11:36 AM
Quote:
Aapne ise pasand kiya uske liye shukriya... एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#13)
|
|
Registered User
Offline
Posts: 608
Join Date: May 2009
Location: Surat (Gujarat)
Rep Power: 35
|
16th October 2012, 01:48 PM
Bohat Khoob Rahe Jazbaat.. Aur Jazbaa...
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#14)
|
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
19th October 2012, 11:24 AM
Quote:
For reply and reputations. एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#15)
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
24th October 2012, 02:18 PM
thanx zainy jee for reputations.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#16)
|
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
29th October 2012, 11:43 AM
Quote:
Thanx. एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
(#17)
|
|
|
Main shayar to nahin.....
Offline
Posts: 2,794
Join Date: Oct 2002
Location: kanpur
Rep Power: 50
|
2nd November 2012, 10:29 AM
Quote:
Its my pleasure that u kike it. एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
|
|
|
|
|
|
|
 |
«
Previous Thread
|
Next Thread
»
| Thread Tools | |
| Display Modes | Rate This Thread |
Linear Mode
|
|
Powered by vBulletin® Version 3.8.5
Copyright ©2000 - 2023, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
Copyright ©2000 - 2023, Jelsoft Enterprises Ltd.
vBulletin Skin developed by: vBStyles.com
