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6th April 2005, 10:22 AM

dear rohin
thx buddy for posting ahead. the novel written by u is awesome. each chapter seems to be beautifully written by u.gud efforts buddy. it really leaves a remark on u n u wait ahead eagerly to read ahead. gr8 going. really i believe if read deeply each chapter gvs u moral. gr8 going. keep flowing ur thoughts buddy. first thing in the morning is to read further as never want to wait for long.thx so much for sharing ur beautiful thoughts with all of us. waiting ahead to read ahead. god bless u with his fine glitters
   
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6th April 2005, 04:47 PM

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Yaar COnfusion badh rahi hai.. Who's falling for who? Kahani me tp twist hi twist hain... Hmmm.. but its coming very nicely....Mujhe bahut mazaa aa raha hai... Keep on penning them down...


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6th April 2005, 06:41 PM

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ye kya fir se confusion .. mai jab bhi aage padhati hoo ek naye utsaah ke saath lekin last me fir se confusion par aa jaati hoo.

hmm achha hai ek achhe novelist ki tarah aap bhi apne darshako ko itna betaab rakhate hai ki wo next chapter padhe bina nahi rak paayega.

lekin ye bechaini itani na badha dena ki gale se utare nahi so pls jaldi jaldi chapters dete rahna.


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hi - 6th April 2005, 09:23 PM

wonderful and amazing ~~ rohin. the story is takin the turns to dil to dhak dhak hoga hi....jaise jaise poem padhi.....and the words...Some for a few stations, Some till the final destination. dhadkan baadhti hai tumhari is story se...aur tej aur tej
---^----^----^^---^^------ sochne par majbur kar rahi hai bahut kuch....waiting eagerly to read on.......

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Whistling past as it runs
Bringing smiles and cheers as it goes
Carrying baggage and people
Gathering speed or slowing down
Thru winter, summer and rain
Thru deserts, mountains and fields
Over a bridge or thru a long tunnel

loved the way you wrote it...keep it up...i ll be waiting at the last station... too much excitement...here for me...


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Station 7 - 10th April 2005, 04:48 AM

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“Hi” Samay said to Roshni.

“Hi! How come you are here?” Roshni said who was buying something at the grocery store.

“I try to go for an early morning Jog everyday but the way our industry works it becomes a bit difficult sometimes.”

“Yeah” Roshni said “But it’s good for health”

“True. Well! What you doing?”

“Well need to go to school so thought of getting something for breakfast”

“How will you make it?”

“Well we have a toaster and a electric kettle so we will manage.”

“Okay” Samay said. “Well I better get going else Ronit will not wake up”

“He is still sleeping?” Roshni said looking amazed then had a smile and added “Sanjana is also sleeping”

“They are similar in many ways”

“Looks like. I also better go need to wake her up”

“Come then” Samay and Roshni walked towards the building. They reached their floor.

“Okay then we will meet later” Samay said to Roshni.

“Yeah sure” Roshni said as Samay entered his house.

Roshni headed towards her flat. She opened the door and saw Sanjana still sleeping. She went up to her and pushed her.

“Wake up madam its morning?”

Sanjana just shifted positions.

“Oye Get up”

“What is this? What time is it?”

“Its 7 in the morning”

“Only. No way, I will wake up by 11”

“11 ‘O’ clock! Why?”

“Well my work is only in the afternoon.”

“Okay! Well I have brought bread and milk and coffee when you wake up have some. Hopefully the Gas guy will also come so you can collect that”

“Sure now go” Sanjana opened her eyes a bit pulled Roshni towards her hugged her and then just fell on the bed pulled the blanket over her head and waved her and went to sleep.

“Okay I will leave in 30 min. Call me if you need something”

“Okay” a faint voice came from inside the blanket.

Roshni got ready for work and left for school. Sanjana was asleep and then the bell rung.

“Oh No Roshni also na must have forgotten her keys or something. COMING” Sanjana shouted.

Half asleep in her night dress she walked to the door and opened the door

“You” Sanjana shouted and closed the door. The door bell rang again

“Oh God”

Sanjana opened the door

“What happened? What do you want?” Sanjana said looking at Ronit.

“Hey babe you look even more beautiful in the morning” Ronit said laughing.

“Is that what you wanted to say then thanks now go” Sanjana said irritatingly and was closing the door when Ronit stopped.

“Oye madam wait. I have no interest in you. This Gas fellow was looking for your flat so I just got him here. I have to leave for office so please take care. Bye” Ronit said and showed the Gas guy the way and turned back.

“Thanks” Sanjana said to Ronit who was walking away.

“No Problems” Ronit said without turning back.

“Idiot” Sanjana said softly.

“Thank You” Ronit said again without looking back.

Sanjana smiled a bit and was going.

“You have a beautiful smile.” Ronit turned and said. Sanjana looked and smiled and went in

“So how much I have to pay?” Sanjana asked the guy who had by then kept the Gas.

“350”

“Okay give me a min I will get it from inside”

Sanjana went into her room and got the money and handed it over to the Guy and closed the door behind him.

She tied her hair in a ball around her head and went to the bathroom washed her face brushed her teeth and then put some water for coffee and bread to toast.

Sat on the couch and picked her mobile and called.

“Yes Aakash. How you doing?”

“How come you are up so early?” The voice came from the other end.

“Nothing, anyways what time is the shoot?”

“at 2”

“Okay I will be there on time. Bye.”

Sanjana sat there for a while she was still thinking about Ronit and what he said. She smiled at herself. Hit her head with her hand.

She switched on her music system. Made coffee and had her toast. Then she went to get ready for work.

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Station 8 - 10th April 2005, 04:55 AM

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Samay and Ronit were going out for a walk and while getting down the lift met Roshni.

“Hi Guys” Roshni said.

“Hi” both said simultaneously.

“Back home early”

“Yeah not much work. Besides its Friday so not many people work late” Samay said.

“Good. Going somewhere”

“Yeah we were thinking of going for a walk. Besides feeling a bit hungry so thought will grab a roll. Would you like to join?” Ronit asked

“Hmm, Sure. Give me 5 min I will see if Sanjana has come and if not leave her a message” Roshni said.

“Okay” Samay said. Roshni went in and they both moved to the garden in front of their apartments.

“Isn’t she beautiful and so sweet?” Ronit said looking as Samay.

“Yeah. But what happened to you. Are you okay?” Samay said having a smile on his face.

“I am fine. Why?”

“She is not the kind of gal you generally like”

“I mean come on buddy. All those gals are just time pass. They themselves make the passes. When you think of a life partner or something more serious you think of a gal more sober. The one you can take to your parents”

“I see. Yeah for sure. What if the gals say the same thing for you?”

“Well that’s there choice.”

“You are a jerk”

“Thank you” Ronit said laughing.

They turned towards the gate and saw Sanjana coming in.

“Hey Sanjana” Samay called for her.

Sanjana looked back and saw them; she waved back at them.

“Hi Samay” She said walking to where they were standing “What’s up?”

“Well we are going for a walk and have some roll Roshni is joining us. Are you coming?”

“Sure. But where is di”

“She said she will check if you have come”

“Okay. Here she comes” Sanjana saw Roshni coming down.

“Great! So shall we go” Samay said.

“Lets go” Roshni said.

“You know this place where we are going to makes the best rolls besides the best of the crowd comes here and we are able to meet most of our friends here” Ronit said as they started to walk.

Ronit walked besides Roshni and Sanjana and Samay walked behind.

“So Sanjana how was your day?” Samay asked.

“Oh same old boring stuff. Lights make up and shoot”

“Isn’t it glamorous?” Ronit said.

“Well yes and no”

“Meaning” Ronit asked

“What you see is just a mirage. The reality is a desert no one wants to see.”

“Wow! Wow! What a dialogue” Ronit said, raising his hand in the air.

“YOU” Sanjana said hitting Ronit hard on his back.

“Easy you two” Samay trying to hold back Sanjana

“He started it” Sanjana said acting very innocent.

“Oh My God!” Roshni said “now quiet you too”

“Tell her” Ronit said

“Quiet” Samay

“These two will never learn” Roshni said to Samay.

“I swear.” Samay said. “So Roshni, Where do your parents live?”

“Well they live in Kanpur. My dad is retired so he just wanted stay at our ancestral place and we decided to move ahead in our careers so we opted to come to Bangalore”

“Okay”

“What about you two?”

“Well we both have been together for many years now. We went to same high school and same college and now the same company. Our parents are also good friends now and are staying in Delhi”

“Nice. That’s cool” Roshni said.

“Here we are?” Samay said as they all reached the Roll stall.

There was a lot of crowd there; all young college going, people or office going people. Lot of hustle and bustle was there.

“Hey!! Ronit” a sweet voice came from somewhere and suddenly someone from the crowd came and hugged Ronit and kissed his cheeks.

Ronit’s face also lit up. As others looked in amazement

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10th April 2005, 05:23 AM

YEH KYA HUWA??????? AISE THO APKE READERS KUCH ZYADA HI IMPATIENT HONGE AGAR AAP AISE SUSPENSE MAIN CHOREINGE....RONIT KO KISNE KISS KIYA?????!!!!!?????


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10th April 2005, 07:35 AM

hmmmmmm no comments as i knew it u wud leave to tht level again where we wud be impatient to read ahead.well gud flow n loved reading it. gr8 as usual. all chapters leave a mark n forced to wait ahead for u to write further. keep going n thx for writing ahead.



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na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

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jo - 10th April 2005, 08:52 AM

hi rohin
good going
luving to read ur writings
reality is a mirage u dont wanna see........ur writings are simple yet fantastic!

rohin waiting eagerly to read more

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10th April 2005, 04:54 PM

So nice of u Big B.. jaisa ki andaaja tha ek naye hi mod par laaoge aap..

bahoot hi achha likha hai aapne.. thanks ki aapne ek saath 2 chapters daale hai to mujhe in dono ke bich koi gape nahi mila. lekin fir se meri wahi ikchaa agala chapter bhi jaldi se dena..

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11th April 2005, 02:04 PM

Rohin...

Mazaa aa raha haii!! U know something our moderator 'Praveen ji' is into making Ad Films n stuff.. Why dont u 2 tie up.. It wud come out as a gr8 movie or a play...Srsly

Aur haan.. Rukna mat... Keep on penning down the classic...


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Station 9 - 12th April 2005, 02:33 AM

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“Hi” Ronit all red. Ronit kissed the gal on her cheeks and said “What a pleasant surprise this is? Where have you been?”

“Well nothing much.” said the blue eyed gal.

“Meet my friends. You know Samay. These two are our new neighbours Roshni and Sanjana” Ronit introducing them to the gals.

“Hi everyone” said the gal.

“Hi” said Roshni.

“Hi” said Sanjana.

“Everybody this is Sweety” Ronit introduced the gal to everyone.

“Well nice to meet everybody” Sweety said and then looked at Ronit “Ronit will you come with us”

“Sure” Ronit replied “Hey guys I will …...meet you ….later” Ronit said as Sweety pulled him away.

Sweety and Ronit walked away. As Samay, Roshni and Sanjana looked at him go.

“So what would you both like to have?” Samay said looking at the girls who were still thinking something.

“What was that?” Sanjana quivered. “I mean who was that”

Samay began to laugh.

“What is there to laugh?” Sanjana seemed a bit angry.

“Nothing” Samay said trying to keep a straight face.

“What? First of all he came with us. Then he left without even saying proper goodbye. Does he have manner or not. Then did you look at that gal and the way she was behaving” Sanjana sounding every bit jealous.

“Relax Sanjana” Roshni said.

“Yeah Relax. Sweety is Ronit’s Cousin she is studying here in Bangalore. She is a sweetheart. She loves Ronit a lot. Ronit loves his sisters a lot.”

“Oh I see.” Sanjana had a glow on her face.

“Why what happened?” Samay asked.

“Nothing. Don’t bother” as she continued to have the smile on her face.

“So! What will you like to have?” Samay asked again.

“Well I will have a Egg Roll” Roshni said

“Same for me. Lots of spice in it”

“Hey Boss three Egg rolls please one with lot of spice.” Samay said to the guy at the Stall.

“So Roshni, How was the day at the school?” Samay asked

“Well as usual it was real good. Being at school just makes my day. Everyday I see something new. To be able to bring happiness in these innocent lives is so wonderful” Roshni said.

“Yeah I guess being a Kid is great. God made them special. He made them kids for life.” Samay

“That’s so sweet of you to say Samay” Roshni said.

“Here bhaiya your Rolls” the stall guy interrupted.
Samay took the rolls and paid for it. The three then began to walk back home.

“Leave all that Tell us do you have a girlfriend” Sanjana quizzed Samay.

“Hmm. What do you think?” Samay asked back

“I think you do have one. After all a guy like you can’t be single”

“If you say so” Samay said.

“Tell man there is nothing to hide. We are friends right” Sanjana persisted.

“Yeah Sure” Samay laughed it away. “So Sanjana do you have a boyfriend”

“Me yeah you are my boyfriend” Sanjana said.

“Yeah sure good joke.” Samay started to laugh.

“Seriously. See you are a boy and you are my friend. So you are my Boy Friend. Now tell me, who is your Girl Friend?”

“You”

“Oh so sweet. So from today we are Boy Friend, Girl Friend” Sanjana said and grabbed Samay by the arm and started to walk.

Samay and Roshni started to laugh.

“So GF shall we go home” Samay said

“Sure BF. But, don’t you think we should remove the Haddi from the Kebab” Sanjana said pointing to Roshni.

“Very Funny” Roshni said.

“Let’s Go” Samay said.

“Hey Samay since Ronit is not there why don’t you come over for dinner” Roshni said.

“No it’s okay. I have to go to office tomorrow”

“That we also have to come. Don’t be so formal” Roshni said.

“No besides I know Ronit he will not have food without me” Samay said.

“Okay no problems.” Sanjana said.

“Hey we are home” Roshni said.

“Yeah. Well see you later.” Samay said.

“Yeah tomorrow is Saturday so we are expecting you both for lunch” Roshni said

“Yeah sure” Samay said

Samay went of to his apartment.

“Isn’t he sweet” Sanjana said.

“Yeah a real nice guy” Roshni said.

“Perfect Pair” Sanjana said.

“Yeah”

“Oye Hoye. Di….So you like him”

“What?”

“I was thinking of Samay and you” Sanjana said.

“Crazy or what? What do you know of him to say so?”

“I think he likes you”

“Sanjana you also sometimes. Oh God. Do something for this gal.” Roshni opened the door. Sanjana gave her a tight hug.

“Love you di” Sanjana said and gave her a hug again.

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12th April 2005, 12:06 PM

dear rohin,
as usual the flow of ur novel is going superb. keep writing ahead to bt plz post us soon as i cant wait reading ahead. so better post next chapter soon. all the best buddy. take care



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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hi - 12th April 2005, 08:27 PM

great going
plz keep it up and keep writing

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Hello Dood, - 16th April 2005, 04:57 AM

Rohin Dood,
the flow of the story is as awesome as the one before ... i feel this very nice .. dood finish the remaining parts soon or else i will finish you for sure :P just kidding finish it soon buddy.


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“Sanjana are you ready. They will be here any moment. I am making the Roti’s okay”

“I am ready di. Why do you worry so much? They are jus Samay and Ronit so take a chill pill”

The door bell rang.

“Sanjana get the door please my hands are in the flour.”

“Sure” Sanjana opened the door. “Oh hi BF and hi Ronit”

Ronit was shocked for a moment and kept looking at Sanjana.

“Hi GF” Samay said.

“Hi Sanjana” Ronit finally getting over the shock

“Come on in both of you.” Sanjana opened the door wider. “Shall we BF” Sanjana pulled Samay’s hand.

“Nice place. In a short time you have transformed this place. Cool” Ronit said.

“All credit goes to my di. She is the best”

Samay and Sanjana sat on the couch while Ronit moved towards the kitchen to say hi to Roshni.

“Hi Roshni” Ronit said. Roshni turned around to greet him. Ronit started to laugh badly.

“Ronit what happened?” Roshni said.

Hearing Ronit laugh Samay and Sanjana also came in. They both also joined Ronit in laughter. Roshni also couldn’t help herself so she joined.

“Why are you laughing di?” Sanjana asked.

“Seeing you all laugh I also started to laugh” Roshni said laughing away. As Ronit laughed loudly hearing her replies and was holding his stomach. Samay also laughed a lot.

“Now tell me” Roshni asked again but this time little seriously.

Ronit grabbed her by her shoulders took her in front of the mirror and then stood behind her and showed her the mirror.

They all broke out into laughter. Roshni had the flour all over her hair and especially her nose that made her look like a joker

“Now let me cook.” Roshni said putting some flour on Ronit’s face.

“Hey” Ronit

Sanjana and Samay seeing Ronit were laughing badly when Roshni put some flour on all their faces too. Now all burst out laughing

“Sanjana get them something to drink while I finish” Roshni went into the kitchen.

“Let me help you” Sanjana volunteered.

“NOOOOO” Ronit and Samay shouted and both grabbed Sanjana each holding one arm.

“We want to live for some more time” Ronit said.

Both started to laugh again

“DI looked at these two. BF you too”

“Ronit this is not good.” Samay said and started to laugh.

“What did I do?” Ronit said trying to act innocent.

“BF you too” Sanjana said and hit Samay slowly.

“Lunch is ready” Roshni announced as she started to bring the dishes out.

“Wow the smell is awesome” Ronit said.

“Well can’t wait to eat” Sanjana said.

“Yeah start I will bring the remaining stuff” Roshni said

“Great” Samay said as the three of them got down to the table.

Ronit served himself and past the dishes around. Finally Roshni also joined in and they all began to eat

“Wonderful” Samay said taking a bite.

“Thanks” Roshni said.

“Feel like kissing your hands” Ronit said.

“OYE” Sanjana said.

“Oye! What?” Ronit said

“Nothing” Sanjana said and started eating again.

“Good” Ronit said.

“So what plans after lunch BF” Sanjana asked

“I will sleep” Ronit said.

“I didn’t ask you. You are not my BF” Sanjana replied and Ronit kept quiet keeping his head down.

“Nothing you tell me” Samay said laughing a bit.

“Well let’s go for a drive” Sanjana said.

“sure” Samay said. “Roshni you would also join us right”

“No” Roshni said.

“Why?” Ronit asked.

“I have some work” Roshni replied.

“what work?” Sanjana asked.

“Yes you would have to come with us and that is final” Ronit said.

“Okay” Roshni agreed and all the others jumped in joy.

“We will go for a long drive and have a ice cream and then in the evening we will go have some Chaat” Ronit announced.

“Great” Roshni added.

“Well then we will break for 2 hrs? We need some sleep and then go” Samay said.

“Sure we also need to get ready” Sanjana said.

“Yeah Yeah miss beauty queen” Ronit teased.

Everybody finished the lunch and sat on the couch.

“Well who wants Ice cream?” Roshni asked

“ME” all said together.

“Then get ready all of you soon”

“Yes Madam” everybody said.

“Good children” Roshni said.

“Get up Ronit lets get ready.” Samay said.

“Yeah meet you both in two hrs” Ronit said.

They both left while to meet after two hours.

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dear rohin,
today after many days u posted ahead. aare yaar koi dushmani hai humse. itna waqt lagate ho aage likhne mein. aisa nahi chalega ab. me gonna protest now. its better u keep on posting ahead soon or me gonna go for strike. well aaj bahut dino baad frndship pe pada. sach mein energy milti hai , kuch beete lamhein yaad aa gaye. well no relation beyond this wonderful relation of friendship. itna acha lagta hai wen u write so beautifully on this relation. hats to u bt ek baat aur gusse bhi hoon ki itna late kyo post karte ho next station. plz i cant stay hungry so better i need my dose everyday. so keep on posting ahead everyday or else me gonna protest. waise itne dino baad pada acha laga. likhte raho. god bless u with his fine glitters. take care.



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Ronit started to laugh bad

Ronit started to laugh away

They both left while to meet after two hours.

Samay and Ronit left for home, to meet again in two hours.


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Hi Big B,
jaanti hoo reply late se de rahi hoo.. but kal net bahoot slow tha so deri hui ..
ye chapter to bahoot hi achha laga .lekin humesha ki tarah meri aapse ek hi zidd.. agala chapter jaldi se daalna.
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hi rohin,
hmmmm lagta hai tum nahi sudhroge lazy bone. 16th april was the last date wen u posted ur station n after then completly hault to it. lagta hai laton ke bhoot baaton se nahi manege. wat baloney is this. height of ur laziness. everyday i check that may be today u post but u seem to hv forgotten this post. now a warning for u . u just hv two days,today n tommorow. if in these two days if u dont post the next station then see what i do with u. better take my words seriously n post ahead soon. stop being lazy any more n try to concentrate on ur novel. dont leave it incomplete buddy. eagerly waiting for ur nxt chapter. make it fast or i m gonna shoot u. then all members of this site wud suffer to lose such a gud writer. chalo phata phat se post karo. dost hu tumhari itna haqh hai tumpe mera, warna i will open ur secret. me blackmailing u now. take it seriously. me not kidding any more.



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Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
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Where r u Rohin? This post is incomplete... U r gonna get some big thrashing off me if u dont come n post the new stations soon... I am waiting!!


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The door bell rang and Ronit got up to open the door with half sleeping eyes.

“Hi, Let’s go” Sanjana pulled Ronit outside the house. Ronit almost slipped.

Roshni began to laugh, so did Sanjana.

“Wait a min gals let me get ready. I tell you being handsome is such a pain. Gals don’t wanna leave you” Ronit said.

“Go Go get ready” Sanjana said showing him the door. “Hey BF wow! You are looking handsome” Samay came out all ready and set to go.

“Cool Sweetie let’s go. Ronit you are not ready yet. Don’t you wanna go?” Samay said

“I am ready. Let’s go.” Ronit put on his slippers.

“Where are we going?” Roshni enquired.

“Don’t worry all I will say is you will enjoy” Ronit added

“Okay then what are we waiting for?” Sanjana said.

They all went down to the parking lot and all got in to the Car owned by Ronit. Ronit and Sanjana took the front seats while Samay and Roshni the back seat.

“So fasten your seat belts and enjoy the ride.” Ronit said.

Ronit zoomed the car thru the gates and on to the streets. He switched on the deck and speeded up the car.

“Cool Ronit you are a nice driver” Sanjana said.

“Thanks” Ronit.

“Nice music” Sanjana said.

“It’s from the new movie Lucky” Samay said.

“Yeah I wanted to see that. It has the Aishwarya Rai look alike right?” Sanjana asked excited.

“Yeah. She is cute.” Ronit said. “So guys! where do we go from here?”

“Well let’s go to Corner House” Samay suggested.

“Yeah sure” Roshni added.

“Okay then” Ronit. Ronit got into a more relaxed drive. Everybody was enjoying the ride.

“So Ronit do you have a GF” Roshni asked. As soon as Roshni asked Samay began to laugh.

“Nothing he is crazy.” Samay said.

“Why?” Roshni asked. Ronit had a smile on his face.

“Tell na Samay” Sanjana Persisted.

“Well he has a simple funda. Enjoy as much as you can. He never has a girl friend for a long time. They keep changing like seasons.” Samay said.

“Yes. One for every season” Ronit said and began to laugh loudly.

“Don’t tell me You have never had a serious Girl friend” Roshni asked.

“Nope” Ronit answered as he braked. “Here we are at Corner House. So what will you all like to have?”

“Well I would like to have a Vanilla Ice cream cone.” Roshni said.

“Vanilla?” Ronit asked again.

“Well all ice cream come from this only.” Roshni answered.

“I would have a Hot Chocolate fudge, with lots of nuts. I Love Nuts”

“Then love yourself” Ronit said laughing and hearing which all broke into a laughter. Sanjana tried hitting Ronit.

“What will you have Samay?” Roshni asked.

“Ronit Knows” Samay said winking at Ronit.

“What?” Sanjana looked puzzled.

“Well you will see” Ronit smiled and winked back at Samay. Ronit went to get the ice cream.

He was back with a Vanilla Cone, A Hot chocolate Fudge and a Death by chocolate.

“My God Death By Chocolate?????” Sanjana asked in astonishment.

“YES” Ronit and Samay said in chorus.

“Well there is a story behind it” Samay said.

“What? Tell us.” Roshni asked.

“Well we both are crazy about Ice cream” Ronit said. “The first time the two of us met. We met over an Ice Cream eating competition at Corner House. The idea was who could eat the maximum number of Death By chocolate Sundae. We both at the maximum 4 and finally we shared the 5th. So whenever we come here we both share a Death by Chocolate. We have been best pals ever since.”

“We were in same School back then but some how never ever talked before that day. But after that day we have never been apart. We got along real well.” Samay added.

“awwwwwww” Sanjana said. “So sweet”

“Thanks” Samay said.

“Can I also share.” Sanjana asked.

“Sure. You are our friend too.” Ronit said winking at her.
Sanjana took a bite.

“Roshni you too” Samay called Roshni to have a bite too

“Thanks” Roshni said taking a spoonful.

“So an Ice Cream to our friendship. Death by chocolate until death” Ronit said and al stuck their spoons together as if too cheers. They all had a nice laugh.

“Finish quickly. I have another surprise for all of you” Ronit said.

“What surprise? Ronit tell na” Sanjana asked.

“Wait and Watch” Ronit said.

“I have no patience” Sanjana said.

“Well then hurry up and finish the ice cream. It’s a magical place.” Ronit said.

“Hai I can’t wait. Di please hurry up! What are you doing? Taking so much time” Sanjana sounding very excited.

“My God. Help us” Roshni said laughing. Ronit and Samay also joined in.

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8th May 2005, 10:27 AM

not again rohin. again u left the station to tht extent where we are going mad n crazy to read ahead. already u lazy bone took pretty long time to post the nxt station n tht too we know hw we convinced u for tht, now dnt know aur kitne papad belne padge tumhare aage takki u post next soon. well all jokes apart dear thx so much ,though u never had time to write as u have a hectic shedhule in ofc, still u took care of our feelings n posted ahead, i m really thkful to u buddy. i really respect u as the way u take care of others feelings. now cuming towards ur station, let me tell u one thing, the way u can write u have tht ability in u to write so well. keep writing buddy n as usual u are masters in it. just a request dont keep us wait so long to read such a wonderful writer. god bless u n take care.



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Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
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“I am all done” Said Sanjana.

“Me too” said Roshni.

“Not me” said Ronit. Ronit started laughing. “So Samay shall we have one more?”

“Why not?” Samay

“Hey BF” Sanjana said.

“Just kidding GF” Samay replied. “Let’s go. Ronit let me drive now”

“Sure” Ronit handed the keys to Samay.

“So shall we go” Samay asked.

“Yeah” Sanjana sounded all excited

“Where are we going?” Roshni asked.

“Well you will see when we get there.” Ronit got into thee back seat while Samay took the drivers seat.

“I can’t wait” Sanjana said.

Samay started the car and they were on their way. Sanjana started fiddling with the music player, while Ronit and Roshni got talking. Samay looked at complete ease and was popping in with some words now and then. Then finally Samay stopped the car.

“Here we are” Samay said as he got out of the car and opened the door for Sanjana to get out.

“Where are we?” Roshni asked again.

Ronit got out of the car and opened the door for Roshni. “Come out and you will see” he said. Sanjana and Roshni got out of the car.

“WOW! What a place?” Sanjana said sounding really excited. Her smile said it all.

“Yeah wonderful” Roshni said.

“Isn’t it beautiful” Ronit asked them.

“Yeah. Where are we?” Sanjana enquired.

“Well we are about an hour away from Bangalore. It is one of the few places near Bangalore, where the you can find peace and beauty.” Ronit said.

They had come to a small fall about an hours drive from Bangalore. It is a beautiful spot. It was evening time and hence not many people around, very quiet and very serene. Ronit and Samay used to come here often as it was away from the city and once in a while when you wanna take a break from the busy city life it was a fantastic place to come to.

“Beautiful. Thanks Ronit” Roshni said.

“Mention not” Ronit smiled.

“Wow lets walk for some time and then we will head back home. Today it is a bit late we will come here some other time during morning time” Samay said.

“Wow BF its so beautiful. I did not know there are such beautiful places here” Sanjana said.

“Madam! Stay with us and we will show you all the beauties of the world.” Ronit said.

They all started to walk towards the fall. Samay and Roshni walked ahead. While Ronit and Sanjana followed. They were slow so they had fallen back a bit of the two.

“Aren’t the two of them real sweet” Sanjana said to Ronit.

“Who?” Ronit asked, as he picked up a stone on the way.

“Samay and Roshu di. The two look so nice together. Wish they would be more then just this.” Sanjana said and Ronit began to laugh.

“Sanjana you also Na. You have hardly seen Samay and hardly know him. How can you then pick him for your sister” Ronit asked.

“Well you are stupid. Forget you. Sometimes you meet some people and feel like you have known them for years. Samay is such a sweet cool guy. Just the kind of guy Di would want.”

“Well your Di is wonderful and Samay is the best. I am sure they would be a nice pair. But you n ever know what is going on in their mind.”

“True. Well there is only one way to find out”

“What?”

“Ask them.”

“I think you are gone. Get your checkup done soon before it’s too late.”

“Shut up you fool. They are many ways to know and ask. You are a duffer, you don’t know anything”

“Well what do you have in mind?”

“Well will you help me?”

“Sure. But what is the plan”

Sanjana narrated the whole plan to Ronit. They both sounded very excited.

“So did you understand everything?”

“Well yes. It will be done my dear. But what will I get in return”

“What do you want?”

“Well. Let’s see. I just wish that two will be together”

“Oh so Sweet. Me Too” Sanjana said and gave a hug to Ronit.

“Ronit. What are you too doing? Shall we go?” Samay shouted from distance.

“Yeah sure” Ronit said.

“Let’s race.” Sanjana said.

“What? Are you crazy?” Ronit said to Sanjana

“Why are you scared of loosing to a gal.”

“Nope.” Ronit said.

Sanjana started running back to the car. Ronit gave her a good chase and finally caught her before the car. They both were panting heavily.

“Oh God” Ronit said. “I think I am getting old”

Sanjana was laughing loudly. She was also trying to catch a breath. They both began to laugh.

“What happened to you two?” Roshni asked. Roshni and Samay got to them.

“Nothing let’s go” Sanjana said.

“Yeah get into the car” Samay said.

“Di you sit in the front” Sanjana said “Come Ronit I am tired. We will sit at the back”

“Yeah. I am tired” Ronit replied.

They all got into the car as Samay drove them back home. They had a wonderful time.

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dear rohin,
my day is made. thx for writing ahead so soon. atleast i have got sumthing to read today which i love reading,especially ur novels n just wish it has no end i keep on reading it. really rohin its wonderful n i m really thankful to u tht u r keeping ur words n posting ahead. just this way only keep on writing ahead as i really dnt have patience to wait for it. take care n may god bless u with his finest glitters. one thing as usual todays station to was fabulous. just loved reading each word.



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ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
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My dear Bhaiya,
so nice of u.. post aage badhaane ke liye.
but bahut der se badhaayi hai .. abhi jaldi jaldi aage post daalna.. as u know aapki bahan ke paaas patience bilkul nahi hai.

these chapters are fantastic.. eagerly waitng for next one

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WHY ARENT YOU WRITING MORE CHAPTERS????? and aapne story ko kis mordh pe chor diya hai???...and whats up with the very short chapters???? please continue the story as soon as possible(meaning today!)

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hmmmm me waiting rohin. i m noticing tht it was 9th of may u last wrote n again u stopped. kya yaar maal gaddi ki tarah atak kyo jate ho. why u really makes us wait hell for ur post. rohin u very well know na that my mood is quiet off. so to see a smile on ur this friends face, post ahead as soon as possible buddy. breaks lagani band kar do. pata nahi kab humesha ke liye aankhein band ho jaye meri n i loose the oppertunity of reading ahead. pata rohin since yesterday just one thing came in my mind, that is live for today as tomorow never comes. so buddy a humble request write ahead soon n for god sake dont take too many breaks.waiting for ur next station. write is fast or else see wat i do then. bye take care n may god bless u with his finest glitters.



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ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
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jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

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Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
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18th may today. still not able to get the oppertunity to read ur next station rohin. hmmmmmmmmm me waitinh yaar. its hell, the way u keep us wait to read ahead. oh god give sum time to this busy man so that he writes ahead. me waiting rohin.



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ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
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bhai....aram khatam aur kaam shuru karo issi waqt! CONTINUE THE DARN STORY...you told me you would "very soon"...so what happened to that hunh? oh...by the way, for a gift for your promotion...you get to sit down and write the next couple of chapters

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Hi Everyone,

Sorry sorry sorry.

Sorry have been a bit busy.... But what to do.... work is work.... plus you need a good ambiance to write... hope to write more chapters in coming days...

Vaise tum sab ka blackmail karna acha laga.... acha laga aap logon ka yeh apna pan.... trust me I cherish all the replies I get here....

The story is in my mind... i have the end in mind....

By the way... mujhe daatne se pehle....
do you all still have that paper with you all???? that is your ticket for the journey....

if not then re do the whole thing.... because the story is reaaching the half way stage and you all are gonna need it.... else you will have to get down at the next station.... think about it..

So without further adieu here comes the next station.

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“Hey BF” Sanjana shouted at Samay who was entering the building. Samay turned back to see whose calling.

“Oh hi Sanjana” Samay turned as Sanjana cam near him.

“Where is Ronit haven’t seen him for a long-long time”

“Well he has got caught up in his new Project. He has been very busy lately. Comes late goes early. You know how it is in our Industry. Well where were you going?”

“Nothing I was looking for Ronit only”

“Oooooooooo! Is everything alright?”

“Yeah everything is okay. Talk of the Devil and the Devil is here. Hi Ronit” Sanjana spotted Ronit coming into the building.

“Hi Sanjana. How are you?”

“Long time No See” Sanjana said.

“Nothing it’s been hectic two months. So what have you been up to?”

“Yeah sir is so busy that doesn’t even have time to say hi. Look at Samay he has been so nice kept meeting often”

“Good” Ronit said.

“Well why don’t you both come up to the flat and fight over a cup of coffee?” Samay said

“Yeah sure” Sanjana said.

“Where is Roshni?” Ronit said.

“She is upstairs. I will call her.” Sanjana said.

“Great then let’s go” Ronit said.

They got upstairs. Sanjana went to call Roshni. Ronit went to freshen up after the hectic day. Samay got busy making the coffee. The door bell rang and Samay opened the door.

“Oh Hi Again GF. Hi Roshni.” Samay said sounding all cheerful.

“Hi Samay. Where is Ronit?” Roshni asked.

“Huh! What is up with you people? Who ever comes asks for Ronit. Am I some Ghost or what?” Samay said.

“Sorry BF come let me give you a hug” Sanjana said and gave Samay a hug. Samay had a smile now.

“Yaar. You also na, haven’t met Ronit for a long time that is why I asked.” Roshni tried explaining.

“No need for explaining now. I know my value now.” Samay said.

“Good. As it is you were in seventh heaven” It was Ronit. He was dressed in a Kurta Pyjama.

“Oye Hoye! Cool. What happened Ronit looking totally Indian today” Sanjana said teasing Ronit.

“Thanks for the compliment lady” Ronit said enjoying the compliment.

“Yeah you are looking quiet nice” Roshni complimented Ronit. This time he just smiled.

“So what will you all have tea or coffee?” Samay asked.

“Well Coffee please” Roshni said.

“Me too” Sanjana said.

“What will you have Ronit?” Samay asked. There was no reply. Ronit suddenly seemed to be lost somewhere.

“Ronit” Sanjana said to Ronit who was still unmoved.

“Ronit” Roshni went up to Ronit and kept a hand on his shoulder.

“Huh” Ronit turned around lost in thoughts. Roshni looked into his eyes.

“What happened?” Roshni asked. She too got saddened looking at Ronit’s face. “Hey yaar what happened?” Roshni asked him.

“Nothing. I will have coffee please” Ronit said to Samay.

“Something has happened and you are not telling us” Samay said to Ronit.

“Nothing Yaar it’s okay” Ronit said. Samay looked straight in Ronit’s eye and Ronit just turned towards Sanjana.

“Stupo What happened? Tell Yaar? Don’t think that I am going to plead you whole day. So tell fast” Sanjana said looking at Ronit.

“Oye Sentimental fool” Samay said. “Tell now”

“Nothing. Life is weird right” Ronit said.

“Huh” Sanjana said.

“Oye Tragedy King Dilip Kumar” Samay said. “Tell now”

“First of all you didn’t meet us for so many days today when you are meeting us you are dressed like a Devdas. What is wrong with you buddy?” Sanjana shouted at Ronit.

“Relax take it easy” Roshni said. “Ronit I understand the feelings are all personal. If you want to you can share your thoughts with us. We are friends and here for you always. Just one thing I will like to tell you. When it pains, let it rain.”

“Thanks Roshni. I know I can count on all of you all the time. It’s just that…. ”

“What?” Sanjana interrupted.

“Again” Roshni stared at Sanjana.

“Sorry. This idiot is acting as if this is a Karan Johar Movie” Sanjana said innocently.

“Will you listen” Roshni said. “Yeah Ronit what were you saying”

“Well relax. It’s just that I never thought that life can change in one day. Hey shall we go to the terrace. It feels stuffy here.”

“Okay lets go. I will take some coffee also” Samay said. He walked up to Ronit looked in his eye and kept his hand on Ronit’s heart and then went into the kitchen to make Coffee.

“Coffee is ready let’s go” Samay said.

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“Here we are” Ronit opened the door to the terrace.

“SURPRISE” Everybody shouted.

“HAPPY BIRTHDAY SAMAY” Everybody again shouted.

“Oh My God” Samay was shocked.

Everybody rushed towards him.

“Happy Birthday Samay” Ronit said giving him a hig.

“Happy Birthday BF” Sanjana gave Samay a big hug.

“Happy Birthday Samay” Roshni said.

“I don’t believe this” Samay still looked dazed. “Thanks everyone”

Ronit had arranged the surprise. He had invited all the office colleagues and friends. They all rushed to wish Samay.

“Hi Samay Happy Birthday. Let me give u a kiss” it was Neha. Ronit was laughing loudly as Samay looked totally embarrassed. He avoided the gals. Now it was turn of the boys.

“Well where will you hide now Samay” Ronit said. “Boys get him lets give him good birthday bumps.”

Everybody grabbed Ronit by his hands and leg and picked him up. They all started to sway him in air and then gave him good birthday bumps One round for each year. All the gals were laughing at the scene.

“Oye. You all are such … Oh my god…” Samay felt the pain in his back.

Ronit was laughing like anything. He was just rolling with laughter.

“Oh Poor Baby” Sanjana gave a hug.

“That makes it a bit better”

“Well Guys I am done. But don’t you all think I should get a birthday gift too” Samay said.

“WHAT DO YOU WANT” Everybody shouted.

“The same thing that you all gave me just now give it to Ronit also. After all he is my best friend we should share everything” Samay said

“You Idiot. You say you are my best friend. Does does somebody do this to a friend. Who said I will share all the hitting too. We share joys and tears not this” Ronit said.

Ronit was running around the terrace, while everybody tried to catch him. Finally everybody caught him and gave him the same treatment as Samay.

“You are a dead man.” Ronit also feeling the pain came and sat next to Samay. “I need a hug. Anybody to hug me” Ronit looking towards Sanjana

“Get Lost” Sanjana said.

“I am there Honey” Neha came and gave Ronit a hug. He had a big smile on his face.

“Thanks sweetheart” Ronit gave Neha a kiss on her cheeks

“Well lets cut the cake” Roshni said.

“Wow Cake” Samay looked all excited. “I Love Cake”

“Well Di made it for you” Sanjana said.

“Wow Cool. Amazing.” Samay said.

“Eat first and then tell” Roshni said.

“Cut it first” Ronit added.

“Of course duffer” Samay replied

Samay cut the cake as everybody started singing Happy Birthday to you.

“Thank you. The first piece to my best friend Ronit” Samay cut the piece and as Ronit came close put the cake all over Ronit’s face.

“Oh its so yummy” Ronit trying to lick his face.

Samay then gave one piece to Sanjana and then Roshni and then ate one himself.

“That was really yummy. I love it” Samay said having the cake. “Everybody enjoy your self. Have a blast”

“Play the music” Ronit said.

The music started and everybody danced. Everybody was having so much fun.

Samay now felt tired a bit and came and sat on the chair. Ronit also came and sat next to him.

“When did you arrange all this? I did not do much I just invited people and made payments. Sanjana was the one who arranged all this. She is so sweet.” Ronit said trying to catch some breath.

“How did she know its my birthday?” Samay asked.

“You must have told her” Ronit replied.

“Nope” Samay said.

“Hi guys what happened? Tired already?” Sanjana broke thru the crowd and came to them.

“Yeah after all the beating and dance I am dead tired” Samay said.

“Me too” Ronit said.

“Well it is quiet fun”

“Sanjana who told you about my birthday?”

“Di told me” Sanjana said and sat between the two of them.

“Roshni!!” Ronit looked Puzzled. “How does she know?”

“I told her” Samay replied.

“You!” Ronit looked amazed.

“When? How come?”

“Well it’s a long story.” Samay replied.

“No matter how long I wanna know” Ronit said.

“Well let the party get over” Samay said.

“Okay” They all got back to the dance floor.

Soon it was midnight and everybody departed. Everybody was very tired but happy.

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not again. rohin again u left it to tht extent where we wud be eagerly waiting for u to write ahead. pata nahi wen will the day come now . og god listen to my voice, give sum free time to rohin so tht he posts ahead soon, which i know this lazy bone wont post ahead so soon. kaas tum india mein hote, sach mein i wud have put u on gun point so tht u post ahed soon. plz yaar ab late mat karna. already pata nahi kitna time lagate ho likhne mein. neways as usual ur these two stations were fantastic. just loved reading it buddy. hope to read further soon. take care n may god bless u with his finnest glitters.



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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ek dam subah subah aake padha.. meri subah perfact ban gayi... aur haa aage ke chapters jaldi se dalna// and I have that paper till now..

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wah wah rohin ji...do chapters aur likhliye hain aur aage likhne ka naam hi nahi lerahe aap
bhai...this is not fair...aapni sister or fans ko aise middle of the story mein nahi chorte....JALDI AUR LIKHO!!!! warna my mood is gonna be like this-


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u were suppose to post it today. kahan doondu agla station. i hope u not written in invisible buddy. rohin u fooled me. u told me yesterday tht u wud post it today. where is ur next station. i m waiting dear



mera aashiyaan tha wahan jahan toofanon ka theekana tha,
ek naadan dil tha aur ek bedard zamana tha!
na jaane kyu ussi pal mil gaya ek dard naya,
jab kisi roz mere labon ka muskurana tha!

*****************************

Kutch bayani ho ehsaason ki…..
Kutch kahani ho jasbaaton ki….
Ek paaq bazm jahan ho sirf pyar…..
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Karein ek dooje se har koi lagaav….
Koi kare shikayat koi de sujaav
Naazim kare hifaazat-e-pyar…
Dhoondte hain koi aisa manzar yaar….

Buzurgoon ki kahawaat hai…
Fal-e-intezaar meetha hai….
Kehte hain Jas- Nal- Aman….
Thoda sa, bus thoda sa intezaar….

   
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Everyone leaves. The four of them drop on the chairs around the mess. They too are very tired.

“So BF, did you enjoy the party.” Sanjana asked.

“Very much. It was fantastic” Samay gave a tired reply.

“So Mr. You told me not to tell anyone about your birthday how come you told Roshni?” Ronit quizzed.

“Well……..” Samay trying to find a way out.

“You better not try to hide things from me. You ….you… rascal” Ronit trying to find a suitable word.

“On my birthday what a wonderful gift from my best friend” Samay making a innocent face.

“Get lost” Ronit tried to kick Samay from where he was sitting. But it’s a tired kick.

“Well Roshni you only tell else he will kill me” Samay said looking at Roshni. Ronit looked puzzled.

“Well” Roshni looked reluctant.

“Please” Samay almost pleading.

“Will any of you tell the story?” Sanjana said loosing patience.

“Well. Few weeks back while Ronit was having late nights at work and Sanjana had gone outstation for a modelling assignment we both decided to have dinner together…..”

“I got ready and went to his place and rang the bell and nobody answered. It was strange as we just met 10 min ago. Well then I looked that the door was unlocked. So I went in looking for Samay. He was neither in the living room nor in the kitchen. So I presumed he was taking a shower. I went into the kitchen to prepare the dinner. Suddenly I heard somebody shouting. I got scared. I went to the living room and heard it coming from Samay’s room. As I walked towards it the shouts became intense…”

“I was scared to open the door but thought I should and I knocked and went in. Samay had just kept the phone down. The look in his eyes was just unbearable. It was red. Red like …….my god….. that was something”

“I asked him what happened. He didn’t say a word and went into the washroom to wash his face. He came out wiping his face. But that didn’t help and I could sense something big had happened.”

“I asked him again. I told him that it is better he lets out the steam before the steam burns him. We went and stood in the balcony. After few min off silence he said.

“It was my ex-girlfriend”

“ex??” Roshni looked puzzled.

“Yes. We broke up a year back”

“do you still love her”

“Well its past. She is married. I did love her and still do and will always, but not in the same way as before. Today I respect her for what she is. I do respect the fact that she is married. I do know that she will love me forever. But its life and we have to move on. All I can say is I am not sorry that it ended, I am happy that it happened. The moments that we spent together….. I will cherish them for life….. but in life you do not always get what you want….. I accept that and live with it and I know……up above he has thought something good for me”

There was silence then as the two just stared out of the balcony.

“So why did she call?”

“To remind me that my birthday is coming…”

“When?”

“Two weeks from now.”

“Then why today?”

“Well we broke up on my birthday. She didn’t wanna hurt me.”

“Then why were you shouting?”

“Well the pain doesn’t go away so easily Roshni. I love her a lot. But then again she has a family now. She has to take care of them and love them like she would have loved me. I do not want her husband to feel she is not with him. So I shouted just to make her feel that she is not wanted here.”

Again there was deep silence.

“Shall we have food” Samay said.

“Sure. Samay if you do not mind will you show me her photo?” Roshni asked as they moved to the kitchen.

“sure”

“So we both then had dinner and then he showed me the photo. She is beautiful and wonderful. Samay even wrote a poem about his love”

“What poem?” Sanjana asked all excited.

“Well Samay ….” Roshni looked at Samay.

“Okay” Samay said and took out the piece of paper from his wallet.

The paper looked old and worn and was in a number of folds.

Samay took a deep breath

“Been waiting for this for days
Knew it will come someday

My heart is beating very fast
As the moment comes at last

Today I am gonna meet her
At last, we will be together

Why is the clock so slow
It is not how it should flow

The sky above was all so clear
Now roaring clouds is what I hear

Oh My God it might Rain
No God not all over again

I see someone come running
that is her, I have a feeling

She came into my open arms
Her head near my beating heart

I held her tight and hugged her
I wish this would last forever

I held her face and smiled
as i looked in her ocean eyes

It started to rain as I hugged her
heavens above had blessed us

Oh I Love it when it rains
I feel her, and the one above”

He folds the paper back and puts it in his wallet.

“Wow so romantic” Sanjana said “Wish someone will write for me this way. Ronit why don’t you write for me” Sanjana turned towards Ronit.

Ronit was lost in deep thoughts. Sanjana pushed him.

“What?” Ronit looking lost.

“Did you hear what Samay said”

“Yes”

“Then what happened?” Roshni asked Ronit.

“Well….” Ronit took out a piece of paper from his wallet and gave it to Roshni. “I found this in his dustbin. I didn’t know what it meant till now”

“I looked thru the window
It was raining heavily
I went in the open balcony
the rain stopped pouring
I came all wet in the face
Dried my face with the towel
stood in front of the mirror
a few drops of water
it was the tears from the rain”

Roshni read it out. Her voice was breaking towards the end.

Ronit got up and rushed down the stairs. Everybody was just puzzled.

“What happened?” Sanjana asked.

“Well I will go see him” Roshni was about to get up.

“No you two just clean the mess here. I think I know what happened”

“Okay. Take care of him” Roshni shouted towards Samay as he ran out of the terrace door and ran down the stairs.

“Ronit wait” Samay could be heard calling with the echoes through the walls.

To Be Continued.....

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