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10th June 2003, 06:18 PM
marne ki khwahish hai dil mein
to kabhi jine ka armaan bhi rakha hoga chahe jitna muskuraye koi insaan sine mein kahin-na-kahin koi gum chupa rakha hoga...... sagar |
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10th June 2003, 06:27 PM
Wah!..bohat khoob likha hai Gaurav ji..
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13th June 2003, 11:22 PM
Hmm, reality sounds in it
bahot khub likha hai aapne sagarji welldone keep writing sanam jo ab ye bewaqt hi tuje satane aa gaye logo ne nahi dekha apne girebaan main aur dekho 'sanam' ko aajmane aa gaye -> SaNaM |
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13th June 2003, 11:28 PM
well written sagar ji pasand aaya aapka armaan..aapke armaan ke saath hamari zara hi hasrat nazar kare..
yun to kahiye to isme dosh aapna bhi to nahin kya maloom ki garib ki taqdeer mein kya likha hoga ghum to bahut hai aapne bhi sine mein koi aisa bhi nahin jisne jhank ke dekha hoga Qasid ___________________________________________ नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है 'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें |
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