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tumko is dewanay ki nazar na lag jaye....... - 26th June 2006, 10:14 AM

dosto appka bhut bhut shukria jo appnay is nacheez ki itni hosla afzai ki hai.....app jaise qadardaan agar kisi ko bhee mil jaye to koi bhee gazal keh sakta hai......phir meri kaya okaat hai......koshish karounga ki yu hee appka humqadam ban kay saath chalta rahu......appka dost .......raj.........

chand jab badlon say ghira ho,
or poonam ki raat ho,
to tum bhee niklna raat main,
kiyonki tab tumko chaand ki nazar na lagaygi,
haan khud ko ghunghat main zaror chhupa lena,
kiyonki meri do aankhain tumko,
dekhnay ki gustakhi karaingi,
shayad tumko dil main bharnay ki koshish karaingi,
tum raat ka daman orrh lena,
kahin is deewanay ki nazar na lag jaye tumko,


yeh nazam aapkay naam........raj.........


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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Re: tumko is dewanay ki nazar na lag jaye....... - 26th June 2006, 12:04 PM

chand jab badlon say ghira ho,
or poonam ki raat ho,
to tum bhee niklna raat main,
kiyonki tab tumko chaand ki nazar na lagaygi,
haan khud ko ghunghat main zaror chhupa lena,
kiyonki meri do aankhain tumko,
dekhnay ki gustakhi karaingi,
shayad tumko dil main bharnay ki koshish karaingi,
tum raat ka daman orrh lena,
kahin is deewanay ki nazar na lag jaye tumko,


wah..wah...
bahoot khubsurat khayal hai aur bahoot umda andaaz-e-bayaan....
-manoj


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shukria - 27th June 2006, 07:02 PM

manoj ji app to bass yu hee tareef kartay ho......appki poetry kay samnay to hum kush bhee nahi....lakin phir bhee kush to hoga meri soach main jo appkay dil say yeh alfaaz niklay........appki dad ki nazar kush aashaar......


dosto ki dosti nay uttha diya mujhko,
ek zaray say aaftab bana diya mujhko....

dard kay fasanay kay siva kush bhee nahi,
phir bhee seenay main chhupa liya mujhko.....

lafaz mujhay beganay say lagtay thay kabhi,
appki daad nay shayar bana diya mujhko........



appka dost..........raj........


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shukria - 28th June 2006, 10:01 AM

shukria hyder sahib jo appko meri nazam achi lagi......warna hum to kisi qabil he nahi.....bass dil kay jajbaat kagaz kay seenay pay uttar kar kagaz par zulam kartay hai........


dosto ki dosti nay uttha diya mujhko,
ek zaray say aaftab bana diya mujhko....

dard kay fasanay kay siva kush bhee nahi,
phir bhee seenay main chhupa liya mujhko.....

lafaz mujhay beganay say lagtay thay kabhi,
appki daad nay shayar bana diya mujhko........


un se kar liya kinara unki khushi ki khatir
ab mujhe bewafa kahiye ya bawafa kahiye...(Raj)
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dosto appka bhut bhut shukria jo appnay is nacheez ki itni hosla afzai ki hai.....app jaise qadardaan agar kisi ko bhee mil jaye to koi bhee gazal keh sakta hai......phir meri kaya okaat hai......koshish karounga ki yu hee appka humqadam ban kay saath chalta rahu......appka dost .......raj.........

chand jab badlon say ghira ho,
or poonam ki raat ho,
to tum bhee niklna raat main,
kiyonki tab tumko chaand ki nazar na lagaygi,
haan khud ko ghunghat main zaror chhupa lena,
kiyonki meri do aankhain tumko,
dekhnay ki gustakhi karaingi,
shayad tumko dil main bharnay ki koshish karaingi,
tum raat ka daman orrh lena,
kahin is deewanay ki nazar na lag jaye tumko,


yeh nazam aapkay naam........raj.........



wah wah.....................kya mast mast nazm hai......majja aaya padkar.

god bless u


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