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अंदाज़-ए-बयां शायराना है
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>> Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye.. -
18th May 2009, 12:10 PM
Mehfil me sabhi dost ko, Omi ka salam.. kafi dino ke baad kuch likha hai, hope aap logo ko pasand aayega..
<<..Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye..>>
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Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye
ki uske dil meiN meraa basar hoo jaye
rag rag meiN bahta hai vo lahu ban k
bas us se bhi ab yeh khabar hoo jaye
aayine mein dek sakooN maiN aks uskaa
uskii soch meiN shaam-e-sehar hoo jaye
naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye
palkoN pe bithaa kar rakhega "Omi" usse
Ki ab wo mere khawabo ka sahar hoo jaye
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Meri Apni Qalam se : OMi
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Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
Har pal tere aane ki Aash mein.......
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18th May 2009, 12:19 PM
WOW omi ji
its awesome yaar
kya kahe bohot ziyada khoobsurat hai
jazbaat bhi aur andaaz bhi
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18th May 2009, 12:20 PM
Thx u my frnd... aap ki nazar padi iss nacheez pe, aap ne hamari koshiso ko saraha.. iske liye tahee diL se dhanywad..
yuh hi mehfil me aate rahiye..
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WOW omi ji
its awesome yaar
kya kahe bohot ziyada khoobsurat hai
jazbaat bhi aur andaaz bhi
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18th May 2009, 12:22 PM
,,,,,,,,ab toh aana hi padega ji,,,,,,,
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19th May 2009, 01:22 PM
diL ke armanoN ki mahak se, aa usko mahka dooN,
aaj apne zakhm-e dil ke lahoo se dulhan ki maaNg sazA dooN..
NM
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Originally Posted by heart_killer
palkoN pe bithaa kar rakhega "Omi" usse
Ki ab wo mere khawabo ka sahar hoo jaye
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19th May 2009, 03:38 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by heart_killer
Mehfil me sabhi dost ko, Omi ka salam.. kafi dino ke baad kuch likha hai, hope aap logo ko pasand aayega..<<..Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye..>>
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye
ki uske dil meiN meraa basar hoo jaye
rag rag meiN bahta hai vo lahu ban k
bas us se bhi ab yeh khabar hoo jaye
aayine mein dek sakooN maiN aks uskaa
uskii soch meiN shaam-e-sehar hoo jaye
naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye
palkoN pe bithaa kar rakhega "Omi" usse
Ki ab wo mere khawabo ka sahar hoo jaye
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Meri Apni Qalam se : OMi
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superb again...............
naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye
it was very nice........ but omi ji aisa kyu lag raha hai ke aap isse aur khaas likh kar sakte the...........
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19th May 2009, 07:56 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by heart_killer
diL ke armanoN ki mahak se, aa usko mahka dooN,
aaj apne zakhm-e dil ke lahoo se dulhan ki maaNg sazA dooN..
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nice sharing omi ji
bohot acha hai,,,
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21st May 2009, 12:04 AM
Ek InteZaar si ban gayi hai Zindagi,
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21st May 2009, 12:20 AM
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21st May 2009, 08:20 AM
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Originally Posted by heart_killer
Mehfil me sabhi dost ko, Omi ka salam.. kafi dino ke baad kuch likha hai, hope aap logo ko pasand aayega..<<..Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye..>>
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
Iskadar mere ishQ kaa asar hoo jaye
ki uske dil meiN meraa basar hoo jaye
rag rag meiN bahta hai vo lahu ban k
bas us se bhi ab yeh khabar hoo jaye
aayine mein dek sakooN maiN aks uskaa
uskii soch meiN shaam-e-sehar hoo jaye
naam se uske hi machalta hai mera Dil
kaash uske dil mein mera ghar hoo jaye
palkoN pe bithaa kar rakhega "Omi" usse
Ki ab wo mere khawabo ka sahar hoo jaye
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Meri Apni Qalam se : OMi
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Omi ji
aapki iss nazm ke kuch sher toh bahut hi laazawaab lage munjhe....kahi dil chhute hai....aise hi likhte rahiye...
---naresh mehra---
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21st May 2009, 02:56 PM
omi ji........... us change ka besabri se intzaar hai................. bas u hi hamare saath bane rahiye.........
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21st May 2009, 03:34 PM
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21st May 2009, 03:36 PM
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23rd May 2009, 04:08 AM
Omi jee,
bahot achha likha hai aapne .....ghazal dil pe asar kar gayi .....janab aapki ghazal se to mahfil ko char chaand lag gayi .........khus rahiye
Diya
Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz.
Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai
Goodbye SDC
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23rd May 2009, 10:16 PM
Diya Ji..
Hamari gazal se nahi...
Aap ke aane se hamari mehfiL me char chand lag gaye hai ji..
aur aap ki tareefoo ke liye tahe diL se sukariya madam ji.
Yuh hi aapna sath banaye rakhiyeee..
--> Omi
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Omi jee,
bahot achha likha hai aapne .....ghazal dil pe asar kar gayi .....janab aapki ghazal se to mahfil ko char chaand lag gayi .........khus rahiye
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