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Exclamation mar jayenge hum tanha:( - 21st January 2005, 03:15 PM

Jo chodh ke jaoge raho main tanha
Kehte hai kasam khakar mar jayenge hum tanha


Jin raho se gujrethe tum sath humain lekar
Un raho pe rakhenge kadam kaise tanha


Jana hai jaruri to bas itna bata jao
Hum kaise uthayenge duniya ke sitam tanha


Hum ek hi dariya ke mazbur kinare hai
Us aur hai tum tanha,,is aur hai hum tanha



Dhundho to ujale ki ab koi kiran humdum
Ganghor andhero mai ghut jaye na dam tanha



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21st January 2005, 04:14 PM

Jo chodh ke jaoge raho main tanha
Kehte hai kasam khakar mar jayenge hum tanha

Jin raho se gujrethe tum sath humain lekar
Un raho pe rakhenge kadam kaise tanha

Jana hai jaruri to bas itna bata jao
Hum kaise uthayenge duniya ke sitam tanha

Hum ek hi dariya ke mazbur kinare hai
Us aur hai tum tanha,,is aur hai hum tanha

Dhundho to ujale ki ab koi kiran humdum
Ganghor andhero mai ghut jaye na dam tanha


Pallavi!!

Bautiful Nazm buddyy...Really very nice words.. loved them....Aage bhi iase hi likhti rehna


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Nice ....... Very Nice ........
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Nice ....... Very Nice ........ - 21st January 2005, 04:26 PM

It's very good Accuallly, mar jayegey "Hum" Tanha. kuch lines likh paya hoon aap ka kallaam ped ker. hope u like it.!



us ehesaas ko apne pas mat ane de aye dost,
jo zakhmo ko teri hawa de,
mat phela haath us bewafa ke samne,
ke woh zakhmo ko tere koi dawa de!


terii raahon mein baarahaa ruk kar
ham ne apanaa hii intazaar kiiyaa
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22nd January 2005, 02:05 PM

pulkitji

mujhe aacha laga janke ki aapko doobara se aacha laga mera likha hua aise hi sath dete rahiyega .

kuch yaad aaya wo likhrahi hoon

dil gaya ,tumne liya hum kya kare
jane wali chiz ka gam kya kare


apna khyal rakhiyega pulkitji

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hum tumji

aacha laga janke ki aapko pasand aaya

aise hi sath dete rahiyega dostI

us ehesaas ko apne pas mat ane de aye dost,
jo zakhmo ko teri hawa de,
mat phela haath us bewafa ke samne,
ke woh zakhmo ko tere koi dawa de!

yeh aapne bahoot hi aacha likha hai hum bhi likh rahe hai gaur kariyega dost


"Ae dost ,usse bewafa kehke ,mere "pyar" ko jalil na karo
yahi mera nasib hai,usko kuch na kaho
wo hi mera dil hai,usse zakham na kaho
hasi gayi zindagi se meri to Kya,usse koi dhokebaaz na kaho"

apna dhyan rakhiyega

apki dost
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Re: mar jayenge hum tanha:( - 22nd January 2005, 02:30 PM

Jo chodh ke jaoge raho main tanha
Kehte hai kasam khakar mar jayenge hum tanha

tumse umeed hai ki tum yuN na alfazoN se sataogi...
janogi humari bebasi jab ashq aankhoN se bahaogi...


Jin raho se gujrethe tum sath humain lekar
Un raho pe rakhenge kadam kaise tanha

harr pal beete haseeN yadoN ka dariya bahega..
kaise tum tanha khudko un rahoN pe paogi....


Jana hai jaruri to bas itna bata jao
Hum kaise uthayenge duniya ke sitam tanha

uri na hota to kaise torte khudki sansoN se rishta...
sitam-e-jamana barpa humpe,jo na mehsoos kar paogi...


Hum ek hi dariya ke mazbur kinare hai
Us aur hai tum tanha,,is aur hai hum tanha

ye to shayad dastoor hai duniya ka bhichar ke roye...
do kinaroN kabhi milte hi nahi, sochte ki kya mila paogi...


Dhundho to ujale ki ab koi kiran humdum
Ganghor andhero mai ghut jaye na dam tanha

ujala tau maut ka faila hai gham-e-sehra maiN door tak
mar chuke tumhe nisani bana apni, kaise tum mar paogi...




pallavi ...

hath ruk hi nahi paye ... tumhare kalaam ko padh ke ... aur likhta chala gaya ... galat way maiN mat lena ,... bohat khub likhne lagi ho tum ... well thodi takniki barikiyoN pe gaur karo to aur accha likh paogi .. halaNki mere reply maiN takniki bohat galtiyaN hai .. jo ki tumhare kalaam ko dekhte likha tha ...

apna khayal rakhna

aur likhti rehna


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22nd January 2005, 08:12 PM

kunal...


shukriya aapko hamari kalaam pasand aaya aur isko aur bhi sunder bana diya aapne


hath ruk hi nahi paye ... tumhare kalaam ko padh ke


kisne kaha hai ki aap apne hath ko roko
han bariki se matlab samjhaoge janab

well thodi takniki barikiyoN pe gaur karo to aur accha likh paogi .. halaNki mere reply maiN takniki bohat galtiyaN hai .. jo ki tumha

han par aapne jo kalaam likha hai uske word kuch kuch mujhe samajh nahin aaye jayad hi typical word use kiye hai matlab prob. ho rahi hai mujhe samajh main nahin abhi paki shayar nahin bani na aacha waise likha aacha hai aur han taknii kya hai abh????/ wo bhi bata dena ho sake to aaj hi bata dena plzzz


aur hamesha apna dhyan rakhna ,take care
bye

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