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30th March 2006, 04:06 PM
tera ahasas kuch is kadar mujh mein samaya hai.....
har pal har samaye bas tu hi nazar aaya hai....... subah ki pehli kiran aur angaraee leti....... apni bahao ke ghere mein ....... tujhe khud ko chumate paya hai.... kaise sawaaru apne baal. kasie karu ajj khud ko tayaar...... mera kaun se rup ne tumhe lubhaya hai......... apni kajare ki dhaar se, chureeyon ki chanak tak..... bindi ki chamak se, payal ki jhanak tak...... bas tera hi akas mujhe nazar aaya hai........ tujhse pyar karte huey...... apni aankhe band rakhu ya khuli......... dekhne ke liye sheeshey mein ........ khud ko tere saath paya hai........... mere har khayal mein shaamil hai tu...... har baat, har pal maine apne wazood mein........... bas teri chahat ko hi paya hai................ |
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30th March 2006, 04:56 PM
wah ranjana jee naice feelings.
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ahsas ko |
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ahsas ko -
30th March 2006, 05:06 PM
ahsas ko bahut achha likh letee ho tum saf pata chalata hai dil kee dharakano se utra hai geet bahut khoobsoorat hai aur is se bhee sundar rachnayo ka inatzar hai
Anil kho gaye hain woh log ab un kee justzoo hai |
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Wah ! |
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Wah ! -
30th March 2006, 05:48 PM
Prem-Rass To aapne kuut-kuut ke bhar diya esmen. prem ras etna jayada udel diya ki kavita usmen chhupkar rah gai.
good koshis karte rahiye `·.¸(¨`·.·´¨) Keep (¨`·.·´¨)¸.·´ Smiling! `·.¸.·´ |
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30th March 2006, 05:53 PM
Vikram bhai prem rass hona aur jayada hona achi baat hai
aapne Jaysi ji ki panktiya to padhi hogi...utna bhi nahi hai ki aap kavita ko chhupa de apka Diggaj Quote:
kabhi humne yu khud ko harata naa dekha Kaise Samjhau Dil-e-hasarat-nasiib Ko Apne K Sab Kuch Milta Nahi Chah Lene Se Ish Zamane Mein..... "Diggaj" |
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2nd April 2006, 09:29 AM
thanks diggaj.........
tumne hamesha mujhe hamesha aage aur accha likhne ke prerna de hai....... shukriya ranju |
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2nd April 2006, 09:32 AM
vikram ji .........
aap romantic poetry main adventure aur mystery dhoond rahe hai??? sorry romantic poetry main toh romance hi jhalkega...... ranju |
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2nd April 2006, 09:34 AM
thanks anil ji...........
aapke comments mere liye bahut hi mayne rakhte hain........... shukriya........ ranju |
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2nd April 2006, 10:15 AM
bahut accha likha hai chottu ma dil khush kar diya .....................
aap ka prince wo chahat hamesha tum hogi ab to chahna hi reh gaya hai zindagi main na jane yeh chahat kab puri hogi |
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2nd April 2006, 04:00 PM
bahut acha likha aapne.nice.keep writing
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3rd April 2006, 06:48 PM
hi ranjana
bahut khubsurat bahut pyaara ehsaas hai jo aapney likha hai isi tarah likhti rahna bye |
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4th April 2006, 12:20 PM
shukriya surbhi..........
itne pyar se isko padne ke liye....... with love ranju |
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4th April 2006, 12:20 PM
shukriya surbhi..........
itne pyar se isko padne ke liye....... with love ranju |
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4th April 2006, 12:39 PM
shukriya.......akeli jaan........bhai yahan naam bade hi classic hai...
plz apna naam toh batao dear........ with love ranju |
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4th April 2006, 12:41 PM
thanks prince.....isko pad ke tumahra dil kush hua.........
with love ranju |
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5th April 2006, 01:20 AM
great words ranjana ji
keep writing and sharing with us bye TC Honth Kaape Magar Koi Baat Na Ho Saki, Meri Khamosh Nigahen Har Baat Keh Gayi, Aur Unko Shikayat Hai Ki Baat Na Ho Saki.... (nm) *(`'·.¸(`'·.¸*¤*¸.·'´)¸.·'´)* .....«´¨`·..ASHU...·´¨`»...... *(¸.·'´(¸.·'´*¤*`'·.¸)`'·.¸)* ------------------------------------------------ |
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5th April 2006, 04:34 PM
shukriya .........
ashu aapne isko pada aur pasand kiya....... with love ranju |
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5th April 2006, 04:34 PM
shukriya .........
ashu aapne isko pada aur pasand kiya....... with love ranju |
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