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23rd May 2008, 04:59 PM

Very nice mausam ji, lamha ji, acharya ji and all...........

kuch kadam chale the wo mere saath bhi,
jinaki yaad me tum gamgeen se ho........
   
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28th May 2008, 10:46 AM

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Very nice mausam ji, lamha ji, acharya ji and all...........

kuch kadam chale the wo mere saath bhi,
jinaki yaad me tum gamgeen se ho........


"aaye to yuu.N to ke jaise hameshaa ke meharabaa.N
bhuule to yuu.N ke goyaa kabhii aashanaa na thy"

-Faiz Ahmed Faiz


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Woh gaya, tanhaiyaan meri lautke ghar aa gayi
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vo jaate hai.n aatii hai qayamat ki sahar aaj
rotaa hai duaao.n se gale milke asar aaj
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Very nice mausam ji, lamha ji, acharya ji and all...........

kuch kadam chale the wo mere saath bhi,
jinaki yaad me tum gamgeen se ho........



tumhii.n to ho jise kahatii hai naaKhudaa duniyaa
bachaa sako to bachaa lo ki Dubataa huu.N mai.n
[Majaz]


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-Faiz Ahmed Faiz



na jaane kis liye ummiidavaar baiThaa huu.N
ik aisi raah pe jo terii rahaguzar bhii nahii.n
[Faiz Ahmed Faiz]

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na jaane kis liye ummiidavaar baiThaa huu.N
ik aisi raah pe jo terii rahaguzar bhii nahii.n
[Faiz Ahmed Faiz]

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ummid se hi ummid ka ehshash hota hai
jo dil me aata hai vahi apne pass hota hai


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ik aisi raah pe jo terii rahaguzar bhii nahii.n
[Faiz Ahmed Faiz]

[ummiidavaar = hopeful]
jii chaahe us kii rahguzar meiN khaRhe raheN
is aashiqi meiN ham to gaye kaam kaaj se


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jii chaahe us kii rahguzar meiN khaRhe raheN
is aashiqi meiN ham to gaye kaam kaaj se
balvinder jee, aap ke sher ka jawaab haazir hai!

ishq kii maar ba.Dii dardiilii ishq me.n jii na pha.Nsaanaa jii
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balvinder jee, aap ke sher ka jawaab haazir hai!

ishq kii maar ba.Dii dardiilii ishq me.n jii na pha.Nsaanaa jii
sab kuchh karanaa ishq na karanaa ishq se jaan bachaanaa jii
''Mayank'' sahab dekhiye ''Munavvar'' lakhnavi sahab kyaa farmaate haiN..

ishq baqaa-e-rooh hai, ishq ghizaa-e-rooh hai
yah jo nahiiN to dahar meN, lutf-e-hayaat hi nahiiN


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''Mayank'' sahab dekhiye ''Munavvar'' lakhnavi sahab kyaa farmaate haiN..

ishq baqaa-e-rooh hai, ishq ghizaa-e-rooh hai
yah jo nahiiN to dahar meN, lutf-e-hayaat hi nahiiN
ishq fanaa kaa naam hai, ishq me.n zindagii na dekh
jalwa-e-aaftaab ban, zarre me.n roshanii na dekh


Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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mobbhat me koi kisi ko na kabi khuda kare,
bas itna Ahessan kare jab bi kare wafa hi kare,

ham to saath unke kanton pe chalte jaye,
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Shaayar ka naam yaad nahi,magar ye sher kabhi bhool nahi paaya..(kisi ko ilm ho bataaye ye kis ka sher hai.inaayat hogi aur shaayar ke saath insaaf bhi)bahar-hal sher nazar karta hoon..
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Shaayar ka naam yaad nahi,magar ye sher kabhi bhool nahi paaya..(kisi ko ilm ho bataaye ye kis ka sher hai.inaayat hogi aur shaayar ke saath insaaf bhi)bahar-hal sher nazar karta hoon..
KABHI KABHI TO BAHUT INTEZAAR RAHTA HAI
IK AISE SHAKHS KA JO MUJH KO JAANTA BHI NAHIN.

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dil pe karte hen dimaghon pe asar karte hen
hum ajab log hain zehnon men safar karte hain


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muddato.n pahale jab tujh se taarruf bhii na thaa
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terii tasviir se karataa thaa baate.n
mere ghar me.n aa_iinaa nahii.n thaa


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Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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terii tasviir se karataa thaa baate.n
mere ghar me.n aa_iinaa nahii.n thaa

[Majaz]




haadise aur bhii guzare terii ulfat ke sivaa
haa.N mujhe dekh mujhe ab merii tasviir na dekh
[Majrooh Sultanpuri]


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dekhaa huaa saa kuchh hai to sochaa huaa saa kuchh
har vaqt mere saath hai ulajhaa huaa saa kuchh
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aour ''Prashant'' sahab meraa naaqis ilm kahtaa hai ki sher ki asl soorat vahii hai jo aapne pahle bayaaN kii hai....

hairaaN hue na the jo tasavvur meiN bhii kabhii
tasveer ho gaye merii tasveer dekh kar


mazahab ko_ii lauTaale aur uskii jagah de-de
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aour ''Prashant'' sahab meraa naaqis ilm kahtaa hai ki sher ki asl soorat vahii hai jo aapne pahle bayaaN kii hai....
hairaaN hue na the jo tasavvur meiN bhii kabhii
tasveer ho gaye merii tasveer dekh kar

hum un kii tasviir dil me.n chhipaaye baiThe hai.n
viiraan zindagii me.n ek gul khilaaye baiThe hai.n
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kal raat uRh rahe they sitaarey havaa ke saath
aor maiN udaas baiThaa huaa thaa Khudaa ke saath


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aor maiN udaas baiThaa huaa thaa Khudaa ke saath


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ko_ii chaudhvii.n raat kaa chaa.Nd ban kar tumhaare tasavvur me.n aayaa to hogaa
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ko_ii chaudhvii.n raat kaa chaa.Nd ban kar tumhaare tasavvur me.n aayaa to hogaa
kisii se to kii hogii tum ne muhabbat kisii ko gale se lagaayaa to hogaa
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rag-rag meN jo rah-rah kar shole-se uThaaye hai


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aag ho to jalane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai
barf ke pighalane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai
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aag ho to jalane me.n der kitanii lagatii hai
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der lagii aane meN tum ko shukr hai fir bhiiaaye to
aas ne dil ka saath na chhoRha vaise ham ghabraaye to


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der lagii aane meN tum ko shukr hai fir bhiiaaye to
aas ne dil ka saath na chhoRha vaise ham ghabraaye to

Ik ik kar ke huye jaate hain taare raushan
Merii manzil kii taraf tere qadam aate hain


Jaane kya samjha woh mujhe
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Ik ik kar ke huye jaate hain taare raushan
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tere aane kii jab khabar mahke
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tere aane kii jab khabar mahke
terii khushboo se saara ghar mahke

bechain bahaaro.n me.n kyaa-kyaa hai jaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
jo phuul mahakataa hai usase tuufaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
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bechain bahaaro.n me.n kyaa-kyaa hai jaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai
jo phuul mahakataa hai usase tuufaan kii Khushbuu aatii hai


rusvaa_ii to vaise bhii taqdiir hai aashiq kii
zillat bhii milii ham ko ulfat ke fasaane se
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rusvaa_ii to vaise bhii taqdiir hai aashiq kii
zillat bhii milii ham ko ulfat ke fasaane se
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Apni ruswai main terey naam ka charcha dekhoun
Aik zara sher kahoun aur kiya kiya dekhoun (Perveen Shakir)
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Apni ruswai main terey naam ka charcha dekhoun
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kuch nazar nahi aata un ke tasavvur ke sivaa
hasarat-e-didaar ne aaNkho ko andhaa kar diyaa
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gustaakhii muaaf janaab, lekin ye sher kuchh yooN hai....

apnii rusvaaii, tere naam ka charcha dekhooN
ek zaraa sher kahooN aour maiN kya-kya dekhooN


aour ab jawaab meN ye sher haazir hai mulaahiza farmaayeiN..

ham ghazal meN teraa charcha nehiiN hone dete
terii yaadoN ko bhii rusvaa nehiiN hone dete


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ham ghazal meN teraa charcha nehiiN hone dete
terii yaadoN ko bhii rusvaa nehiiN hone dete
yaad karanaa har gha.Dii us yaar kaa
hai vazifaa mujh dil-e-bimaar kaa


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yaad karanaa har gha.Dii us yaar kaa
hai vazifaa mujh dil-e-bimaar kaa




ab to biimaar-e-muhabbat tere
qaabil-e-Gaur hue jaate hai.n
[Daag Dehlvi]


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jab kuch na rahaa mujh meiN to kholiiN mirii aaNkheN!
qaatil ne KahaaN hasrat-e-deedaar nikaalee


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ab to biimaar-e-muhabbat tere
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jis ko tirii aankhoN se sarokaar rahegaa
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gustaakhii muaaf janaab, lekin ye sher kuchh yooN hai....

apnii rusvaaii, tere naam ka charcha dekhooN
ek zaraa sher kahooN aour maiN kya-kya dekhooN


Lol


kamal hai janab ............mein kahon k glass adha khali hai or app kahien ke nahi adha bhera howa hai to baat to aik hi howi per baat who hi nahi hai ...


aisa maine nahi kaha ........Aamir khan ki new coming movie ka song hai
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2nd June 2008, 11:29 PM

Woh mila to dar - daricho sabpe tari tha sukoon
Woh gaya, tanhaiyaan meri lautke ghar aa gayi

The expression,concept,words are beautiful..but
is sher ko bahar(meter mein)mein rakhne ke liye do tarah se kaha jaa sakta hai..
1.
wo mila to dar dareecho(n) sab pe tari tha sukoon
wo gaya,tanhaaiyan meri palat kar aa gayeen.

or like this..

2.
wo mila to dar dareecho(n) sab pe tari tha sukoon
wo gaya tanhai meri laut kar phir aa gayi.

i think i m not crossing limits or offending any one..i m doing it for the first time(and last if i m told)..and doing it only because some ONE on this meaningful site accused me that i only talk about me and do not share my opinion about shayri out here...having said it i m only offering my opinion and i may be WRONG..so please understand my sentiments..all of U there..shukriya.

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Woh mila to dar - daricho sabpe tari tha sukoon
Woh gaya, tanhaiyaan meri lautke ghar aa gayi

The expression,concept,words are beautiful..but
is sher ko bahar(meter mein)mein rakhne ke liye do tarah se kaha jaa sakta hai..
1.
wo mila to dar dareecho(n) sab pe tari tha sukoon
wo gaya,tanhaaiyan meri palat kar aa gayeen.

or like this..

2.
wo mila to dar dareecho(n) sab pe tari tha sukoon
wo gaya tanhai meri laut kar phir aa gayi.


i think i m not crossing limits or offending any one..i m doing it for the first time(and last if i m told)..and doing it only because some ONE on this meaningful site accused me that i only talk about me and do not share my opinion about shayri out here...having said it i m only offering my opinion and i may be WRONG..so please understand my sentiments..all of U there..shukriya.
Aslam u alaikum ,

First of all , i am really thankful to you , keh app hamary dermiyan hamari islah ke liye aye hain .......appka jitna shukriya ada kiya jaaey kam hai , or app yeh kaisi baat ker rahy hain keh hamien bura lagay ga ... bilkul bhi nahi janab ... balkeh yeh hamary liye fakher ki baat hai keh hamien app se kuch seekhny ko mil raha hai ...aisy hi saath dety rahiye hamien app ki zaroorat hai



sach yeh hai keh mujhy shayri ki abc ka bilkul pata nahi hai , bahut dafa confuse ho jata hon , abhi app ki is correction se mujhy sirf itna pata chala hai ke is sher main mistak (wahid , jamma ) singular & plural ki hai ...is liye meine unko highlight kiya hai kya meine sahi samjha hai ya reason kuch or bhi hai ................

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