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14th December 2011, 06:32 PM
Bataa tu bhi aakhir pashemaan kyoon hai,
Mitaaker tu mujhko pareshaan kyoon hai?
Wafa kay silay mayn jafaa daykay mujhko
Jagaa tayray andar yay eemaan kyoon hai?
Bana kay tu muflis mujhay poochta hai,
Yay chaak mayraa giraybaan kyoon hai?
Jalakay yay gulshan meraa soachtaa hai,
Yay jhulsaa huaa sa biyabaan kyoon hai?
Aa turbat pay mayree karay fikr kyun tu,
Basayra yay Ahmad ka viraan kyuun hai?
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14th December 2011, 06:37 PM
Seedha saadha, bebaaq lehza aur talkh sachhayi.. seedhe seedhe jahaan asar hona tha ho gaya Janaab Ahmad. Mujhe hansi bhi aa gayi kuchh soch kar...
It was a good share and well written.
Cheers!
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14th December 2011, 06:39 PM
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Originally Posted by Ahmad Hyderabadi
Bataa tu bhi aakhir pashemaan kyoon hai,
Mitaaker tu mujhko pareshaan kyoon hai?
Wafa kay silay mayn jafaa daykay mujhko
Jagaa tayray andar yay eemaan kyoon hai?
Bana kay tu muflis mujhay poochta hai,
Yay chaak mayraa giraybaan kyoon hai?
Jalakay yay gulshan meraa soachtaa hai,
Yay jhulsaa huaa sa biyabaan kyoon hai?
Aa turbat pay mayree karay fikr kyun tu,
Basayra yay Ahmad ka viraan kyuun hai?
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Ahmad Hyderabadi
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WaaH ! Ahmad Hyderabadi Bhai ! Kyaa Khoob Ashaar Nikaale HaiN ... BehtreeN !
Umdaa FikR O KhayaaL ... Laajawaab Peshkash !
Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN
Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ...
Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh
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14th December 2011, 06:47 PM
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Seedha saadha, bebaaq lehza aur talkh sachhayi.. seedhe seedhe jahaan asar hona tha ho gaya Janaab Ahmad. Mujhe hansi bhi aa gayi kuchh soch kar...
It was a good share and well written.
Cheers!
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Tasleemaat Pallavi Jee,
Welcome!
Buhat buhat shukrguzaar hoon aapka tashreef laanay aur apni beshqeemti raay say nawaznay par.
Iiteja hay aap say agar munasib samjhayn tou hamsay bhee apnay wajah_e_tabassum share karayn. Thanks once again!
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14th December 2011, 06:50 PM
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WaaH ! Ahmad Hyderabadi Bhai ! Kyaa Khoob Ashaar Nikaale HaiN ... BehtreeN !
Umdaa FikR O KhayaaL ... Laajawaab Peshkash !
Dilee Daad O Mubaaraqbaad !!!
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Aadaab Janab Mehra Sahab!
Khushaamdeed!
Wallah dil ko tasalli wa khushee huee aapko daykh ker aur aapki daad hasil kar dil baagh baagh hogaya! Buhat mamnoon hoon nawazish ka!
Ilteja hai aap say yoonhee saath daytay rahayn!
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14th December 2011, 08:47 PM
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Originally Posted by Ahmad Hyderabadi
Bataa tu bhi aakhir pashemaan kyoon hai,
Mitaaker tu mujhko pareshaan kyoon hai?
Wafa kay silay mayn jafaa daykay mujhko
Jagaa tayray andar yay eemaan kyoon hai?
Bana kay tu muflis mujhay poochta hai,
Yay chaak mayraa giraybaan kyoon hai?
Jalakay yay gulshan meraa soachtaa hai,
Yay jhulsaa huaa sa biyabaan kyoon hai?
Aa turbat pay mayree karay fikr kyun tu,
Basayra yay Ahmad ka viraan kyuun hai?
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Waahhh Ahmad Saahab... aapke Aashar padhkar dil se faqat yahi nikaltaa hai Subhan Allah... mere bhai is pur-asar kalaam ke lieye hamaari jaanaib se laakhon mubarakbaad.... Likhte raheNge aap isi ummeed hai ijaazat lete haiN..
shukriyaa...
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14th December 2011, 10:26 PM
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Bataa tu bhi aakhir pashemaan kyoon hai,
Mitaaker tu mujhko pareshaan kyoon hai?
Wafa kay silay mayn jafaa daykay mujhko
Jagaa tayray andar yay eemaan kyoon hai?
Bana kay tu muflis mujhay poochta hai,
Yay chaak mayraa giraybaan kyoon hai?
Jalakay yay gulshan meraa soachtaa hai,
Yay jhulsaa huaa sa biyabaan kyoon hai?
Aa turbat pay mayree karay fikr kyun tu,
Basayra yay Ahmad ka viraan kyuun hai?
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bahut khoob ... Ahmad ji ... acchi ghazal kahee hai ... daad hazir hai ... radhe radhe ........
Aapka Apna Ishk
'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है
इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है
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14th December 2011, 11:01 PM
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Bataa tu bhi aakhir pashemaan kyoon hai,
Mitaaker tu mujhko pareshaan kyoon hai?
Wafa kay silay mayn jafaa daykay mujhko
Jagaa tayray andar yay eemaan kyoon hai?
Bana kay tu muflis mujhay poochta hai,
Yay chaak mayraa giraybaan kyoon hai?
Jalakay yay gulshan meraa soachtaa hai,
Yay jhulsaa huaa sa biyabaan kyoon hai?
Aa turbat pay mayree karay fikr kyun tu,
Basayra yay Ahmad ka viraan kyuun hai?
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Too good Ahmad bhai ... seedha dil mein utar gaya ...
Bahot khoob bhai ... aise hi likhte rahein ...
Dil se daad pesh hai ... Qubool farmaayein !!
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15th December 2011, 05:13 PM
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Waahhh Ahmad Saahab... aapke Aashar padhkar dil se faqat yahi nikaltaa hai Subhan Allah... mere bhai is pur-asar kalaam ke lieye hamaari jaanaib se laakhon mubarakbaad.... Likhte raheNge aap isi ummeed hai ijaazat lete haiN..
shukriyaa...
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As Salaam Alaikom Janaab Shaad Saahab,
Khoshaamdeed is bazm e khaaksaar mayn. Awwal kay aapki aamad he hamray liay khushee ka sabab hay, oopar say aapki daad paana goya sonay pay sohaga. Aapki nawazish wa aamad ka tahay dil say shukriyaa. Ilteja hay aapsay yoon hee saath daytay rahayn.
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15th December 2011, 05:17 PM
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bahut khoob ... Ahmad ji ... acchi ghazal kahee hai ... daad hazir hai ... radhe radhe ........
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Janab Ishk Saahab Salaam,
Khoshaamdeed! Aapko is bazm mayn daykh badee khushee huee. Daad ki inaayat wa aapki aamad ka bayhad shukrguzar hoon. Ilteja hay aap say yoon hee saath daytay rahayn.
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15th December 2011, 05:21 PM
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Too good Ahmad bhai ... seedha dil mein utar gaya ...
Bahot khoob bhai ... aise hi likhte rahein ...
Dil se daad pesh hai ... Qubool farmaayein !!
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Adaab Deep Sahab!
Khoshaamdeed! Aapkay khuloos wa dili daad ka bayhad mashkoor hoon. Aapki daad sar ankhon per. Aamad,Honslaafzaai aur khuloos ayk baar phir say dili shukriyaa. Ilteja hay aap say yoon hee saath banaye rakhayn.
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16th December 2011, 08:54 PM
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Bataa tu bhi aakhir pashemaan kyoon hai,
Mitaaker tu mujhko pareshaan kyoon hai?
Wafa kay silay mayn jafaa daykay mujhko
Jagaa tayray andar yay eemaan kyoon hai?
Bana kay tu muflis mujhay poochta hai,
Yay chaak mayraa giraybaan kyoon hai?
Jalakay yay gulshan meraa soachtaa hai,
Yay jhulsaa huaa sa biyabaan kyoon hai?
Aa turbat pay mayree karay fikr kyun tu,
Basayra yay Ahmad ka viraan kyuun hai?
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ji bhaut bhaut khoooooooob ................................
Radhika
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Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye
Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse
Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye
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19th December 2011, 06:55 AM
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ji bhaut bhaut khoooooooob ................................
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Salaam Radhika Behen!
Khushaamdeed!
Ayk baar phir say mayn aapka bayhad shukrguzaar hoon aapki aamad wa nawazish kay liyay! Ilteja hay aap say yoon hee saath daytee rahayn!
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6th January 2012, 11:52 AM
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Bataa tu bhi aakhir pashemaan kyoon hai,
Mitaaker tu mujhko pareshaan kyoon hai?
Wafa kay silay mayn jafaa daykay mujhko
Jagaa tayray andar yay eemaan kyoon hai?
Bana kay tu muflis mujhay poochta hai,
Yay chaak mayraa giraybaan kyoon hai?
Jalakay yay gulshan meraa soachtaa hai,
Yay jhulsaa huaa sa biyabaan kyoon hai?
Aa turbat pay mayree karay fikr kyun tu,
Basayra yay Ahmad ka viraan kyuun hai?
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bahot khub Ahmad sahab
daad qabul farmayen
Regards
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Kaash k khamoshi bhi ek zabaaN hoti
Main dekta rehta unhe aur haal-e-dil bayaaN hota
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6th January 2012, 12:18 PM
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Bataa tu bhi aakhir pashemaan kyoon hai,
Mitaaker tu mujhko pareshaan kyoon hai?
Wafa kay silay mayn jafaa daykay mujhko
Jagaa tayray andar yay eemaan kyoon hai?
Bana kay tu muflis mujhay poochta hai,
Yay chaak mayraa giraybaan kyoon hai?
Jalakay yay gulshan meraa soachtaa hai,
Yay jhulsaa huaa sa biyabaan kyoon hai?
Aa turbat pay mayree karay fikr kyun tu,
Basayra yay Ahmad ka viraan kyuun hai?
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ahmad hyderabadi saheb aadaab,
wah kya ghazal lekar aayeN haiN aap mehfil meN...
bahut khoob...dil se daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
'E Taahire Laahuti!!!
Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali
Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho
Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi....
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12th January 2013, 04:51 PM
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bahot khub Ahmad sahab
daad qabul farmayen
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Tasleemaat Pari behen, Khushaamdeed! Aapki daad dil say qabool haye behna aur saath he aapki maazrat bhi talab haye dayree say shukriya kay liyay! ilteja haye aapsay yoonhee saath banayay rakhayn!
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ahmad hyderabadi saheb aadaab,
wah kya ghazal lekar aayeN haiN aap mehfil meN...
bahut khoob...dil se daad haazir hai qubuul kijiyega...
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Aadaab Jethi Saahab! Bayhad mashkoor hoon aapki aamad wa inayat e daad ka! Dili shukriya janaab aapki purkhuloos nawazish ka! Takheer e shukriya kay liyay maazratkhwaah hoon! Ilteja haye aapsay ki yoonhee saath nibhaatay rahayn!
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12th January 2013, 07:12 PM
Waah Ahmad Bhai Bohat Khoob.. .
Kabile E TAreed Hai Sabhi Panktiyaa...
Shukriya Likhne Ke liye
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