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23rd January 2013, 12:43 PM
Naazeen o hazraat ki khidmat me Shaad ka aadaab.... kuch likhne ka dil kai dino se nahi ban paa raha hai .... na khayaal saath de paa rahe hain na alfaaz... behad mushkiloN se chand aashaar likhne ki koshish ki hai.... aap sab ki Nazar kar raha hoon.. ummeed hai pasand kijiyega.... Mulaahezaa farmaaeN...
Taqalluf meiN rahe aaye hain kuch Iqraar Posheedah, ZubaaN kuch bhi kahe Lekin, huaa Inqaar Posheedah. Hamaare Naam se uThtaa hai Pardah NaazneenoN kaa, Hamaare hii liye Rehtaa magar Deedaar Posheedah. ZubaaN khole binaa hi Tum se Haal-e-Dil bayaaN kar dooN, Jhukii NazroN se hote haiN, kayee Israar Posheedah. Bahot Shiqve hain Tumse, par inhe Fursat se keh looNgaa, Abhii Rehne do Jaan-e-JaaN sabhii Taqraar Posheedah. Zamaane ki Nazar ab tak usey Chhoo kar na Guzree hai, Tabhi to Husn ka Paikar hai Woh, Rukhsaar Posheedah. Shaad... |
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23rd January 2013, 01:38 PM
Shaad bhaii:
namaste! waah !! bahot Khoob Ghazal kahii hay aapne... dil ko Chhu lene waale aSh'aar... Jhuki naZroN se hote haiN ka'ii israar poSheedaa'h ..waah !!  dil se daad ...yuuNhi liKhte rahiye aage bhee... KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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23rd January 2013, 01:38 PM
Aadab Shaad Bhai,
Bohot khoobsurat ghazal... Dili daad kubool kare... Yeh ashaar bohot pasand aaye... ZubaaN khole binaa hi Tum se Haal-e-Dil bayaaN kar dooN, Jhukii NazroN se hote haiN, kayee Israar Posheedah. Bahot Shiqve hain Tumse, par inhe Fursat se keh looNgaa, Abhii Rehne do Jaan-e-JaaN sabhii Taqraar Posheedah. Mubarkbaad!! Duaon ke saath Ijazat... Abrar.  Hum to pattharon se mohabbat ka hunar rakhte hain, Tum to phir bhi moom ho "Abrar" ke gale lag kar pighal jaoge... |
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23rd January 2013, 07:09 PM
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 hamari bhabhi jaan kaisi hai ?bahut khoobsurat aur bahutttttthi mast mast likha hai.... kush rho duaoN ke saath dii .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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23rd January 2013, 11:52 PM
shaad bhai aadaab...khubsoorat ehsaas piroye hain aapne....saare aashaar dil ko chu gaye...
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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24th January 2013, 10:56 AM
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bahot bahot shukriyaa Dhaval bhai.. khushi hui aapko bazm me maujood dekh kar aur ye jaankar ke aapko ye koshish pasand aai.... aate raheN, saath banaae rakkheN... shukriyaa Shaad... |
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24th January 2013, 11:58 AM
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Wah!....bohat khoob...sabhi ashaar ek se badhker ek hain....lajawaab...dil se daad qubool kijiye.... Sunita di is right....jabse aapki shadi huyi aapke kalamoN me nikhar aur badh gaya hai....so the credit goes to bhabhijaan..... ...Regards to her...... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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24th January 2013, 03:39 PM
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Abrar bhai, behad shukrguzaar hoon aapka jo aap bazm me tashreef laaye.... aapko kalaam pasand aaya ye jaan kar yaqeen maniye behad khushi haasil huii hai... aage bhi intzaar rahegaa aapki aamad ka... Khush rahiye... Shaad... |
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24th January 2013, 03:42 PM
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sabhi ashaar ek se badhkar ek.......!! dil se dhero daad haazir hai......!!! Aise hi likhte rahiye....!!! Khush rahiye...... Hame ehbab ki lambi qataron sy nahi matlab..........!! Jo dil sy hamara ho hame wo ik shaksh kaafi he......!! |
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24th January 2013, 04:53 PM
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Wahhhhhhhhhh Bahot Dilkash Andaaz Me Bahot Shukh Ashaar Kahay Hain Aap Ne... Acha Laga Aap Ka Ye Kalaam..... Bahot Si Daaaad Qabool Farmaaiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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24th January 2013, 06:25 PM
Shohaib bhai,
apka pyaar se bhara kalam bahut pasamd aya.. sub kuch posheeda hi posheeda hai. sanjay sehgal khone Pane ki daur mein yun uljha hai har bashar , Isee kashmeqash mein kat raha Zindagee ka safar. |
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25th January 2013, 10:52 AM
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meri khushnaseebi hai jo aapne ye andaaz ko nazar andaaz na kiyaa aur bade muhabbat ke saath is kalaam ki pazeeraai farmaai... Ab bhai kya bataaeN... Muhabbat agar ho jaae to ishq ki khushboo yaqeenan alfaazoN se aane lagtii hai, aur aapka matlab main samajh gaya dee..  aapki bahuraani/ bhabhi jaan.. bahot acchi hain, abhi parsoN hi lloutii haiN maayqe se.... hehehehe aapki duaaoN ka tahe dil se istaqbaal karta hoon.. aati rahiyega... aap bhi apna khayaal rakkheN..... Shaad... Quote:
 and thanks alot to you on behalf of your BahuRaani and from my side...  you too take care and really thanks a lot for coming on my post.. keep reading.... Shaad... |
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25th January 2013, 08:43 PM
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26th January 2013, 01:33 AM
Mere bhai, tumhaare lafz aise beh rahe thhe jaise ke sangeet... Bahut hi umda tareeke se ehsaas bayaan kiye hain tumne... I simply loved it... Dher saari daad kubool karo... Likhte raho... khayal rakho apna
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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26th January 2013, 11:52 AM
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hum likhte rahenge basharte aap bhi aate rehne ka vaada kartii jaaeN.. take care.. khush raho Shaad... |
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26th January 2013, 04:20 PM
Shaad Sahaab Aadaab!
Achchi kalaam kahi hai janab, Poshidaa baateN bhi khulkar saamne aa gayi.. Sabhi ashaar khoob rahe daad... Par khususan dusra sher behad umdaa raha ... Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti |
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27th January 2013, 09:00 AM
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27th January 2013, 09:02 AM
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28th January 2013, 04:43 PM
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Behad mashkoor o mamnoon hoon jo aap bazm me tashreef laaye.... Bahot khushi hui dekh kar ke kalaam ne aapko mutassir kiyaa... aapki daad aur duaaoN ke liye tahe dil se shukrguzaar hoon... aate raheN... apna khayaal rakheN... Shukriyaa... Shaad... |
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31st January 2013, 12:06 PM
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Daad aur duaaoN ke liye mashkoor hoon aapka... aur aapne jis sher ko tavajjoh farmaai hai uske liye behad mamnoon hoon.. apna khayaal rakkheN... khush raheN... Shaad... |
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31st January 2013, 03:26 PM
bhai Shaad miyaaN
aadaab bhai Ghazal to aapki maine kuch roz pehle padh li thi aur mujhe yeh veham raha ke maiN is par aapko mubarakbaad de chuka huuN, aaj dobara padha to hairaani hui ke miyaaN maiN to idhar aaya hi nahiiN!! koi na... der aayad durust aayad Ghazal aapne yeh bhi kamaal ki kahi hai to saahab daad "Tikaa" lijiye aur mujhe meri naalaayiqui ke liye muaaf bhi kijiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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1st February 2013, 08:50 PM
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Purasar Kalaam ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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2nd February 2013, 04:17 PM
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khush aamdeed janaab Maikash ..... aapko bazm me tashreef farmaaa dekh yaqeen maaniye is darjaa khushi ka ehsaas ho raha hai ke bayaani ke baahar hai.... koi baat nahi aisaa aksar sabhi ke saath ho jaata hai ke hum sochte hain ke wo cheez ho gayee hai jo asal me hotii nahi hai... khair aaap der aaye durust aaye... behad khushi hui aapko dekhkar... aage bhi tashreef laate rahenge .. isi duaaoN ke saath filhaal ijaazat dijiye... apna khyaal rakhiye.... Allaah Hafiz..... |
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2nd February 2013, 04:20 PM
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sach kahun to bahot veeraan thi ye bazm aapke aane se pehle.. aaap aaye hain to yaqeen manie ab tasalli huii... plzzz plzz plzzz aaate rahaa kijiye... Apna khyaal rakhiye.... Shaad... |
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