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~.. Aisa bhi ho sakta hai -
13th April 2012, 02:10 PM
isko pahle maine likhaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai ya fir ye msira-e-tarah ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai wo sach much hi bhool gaya ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai ya fir yuN hi bol raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai jisko khaali hath kiya bapis maine darwaje se koe aur nahi wo khuda ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai pahle Maa khud ghabrayee, fir has ke boli bachoN se toot ke chaT pe chand gira ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai saare raste band kiye haiN, usne khud tak aane ke ya dunia hi chood chuka ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai usko chand samjh kar maine kitni ghazleN likhiN thi chand hi khud uska tukda ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai mere ilawa aur bhi kitne uske dil maiN rahte hain shayad uska dil hi bada ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai halki fulki ghazleN likh kar shayar banta fir hun ye bhi sab uska socha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai fikr na usko tum yuN toko, uski bhi kuch baat suno chota bhayee tumse bada ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai |
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13th April 2012, 03:29 PM
WaaH waaH waaH bahut khoob Vikas Bhai....
 Gazab ke khayaal aur umdaa ashaar bahut khoob janab.... Behad khoobsurat kalaam kahi hai.... Meri hazaaroN daad kabul kijiye.... Eh insaan teri uske aage hargiz chal nahi sakti Aaj tu zameen par hai kal zameen mein hoga Maut tujhe aani hai har roz tal nahi sakti |
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13th April 2012, 03:31 PM
wo sach much hi bhool gaya ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai
ya fir yuN hi bol raha ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai pahle Maa khud ghabrayee, fir has ke boli bachoN se toot ke chaT pe chand gira ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai fikr na usko tum yuN toko, uski bhi kuch baat suno chota bhayee tumse bada ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai Vikaas JI..........! Wah Bohot Umdagi Se Radeef Nibhaayi Hai..... Wesay To Saari Ghazal Hee Umdah Hai Magar Quoted Ashaar Ki Fikr Or Andaaz KHaas Taur Se Pasand Aaya.... Daad Qabool Farmaaiye....Likhtay Rahiye........ Khush rahiye Ay Chaara-Saaz Dil Pe M're Daal Ik Nazar Mujhko Bas Aik Jism Ka Aazaar Hee Nahi AHMAD ALI SHAKIL |
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13th April 2012, 05:57 PM
pahle Maa khud ghabrayee, fir has ke boli bachoN se
toot ke chaT pe chand gira ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai Bahut Sundar ... Vikas Bhai ! Radeef Ke Saath Ash'aar Ki FikR Bhi Kamaal Ki Rahi ! Umdaah ... Ghazal Huii ... ! Purasar PeshKash ... Dilee Mubaaraqbaad !!!  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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13th April 2012, 06:24 PM
Wahhhhhhhhhhh Mere Bhai... umahhhhhhhhhhhhh Bohat umdahhhhhhhhh
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15th April 2012, 10:51 AM
Vikas BHaa'ii:
namaste! umdaah Ghazal aur umdaah Khayaal !! waah! KhuSh rahiye... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~Dhaval |
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15th April 2012, 06:36 PM
kripya Alfazon ka khayal rakhen . actualy ye line is tarah hain.
isko pahle maine dekhaa ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai ya fir ye hammsira-e-tarahi ho paisa bhi kho sakta hai "KAFIR ISLAMABADI" |
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15th April 2012, 10:32 PM
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Shukriya!.......ham sab ko apnay iss behtereen kalaam say rubaru karaanay ka..... maqtay nay dil ko chooo lia...Sub'hanAllah! beshumaar daad paysh e qidmat haye, qboul karayn. Thanks for making us think.......Aysa bhi ho skta haye Duagoh Ahmad |
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16th April 2012, 02:54 PM
Vikas ji,
aapki ghazal behat hi khub surat hai ....... mere ilawa aur bhi kitne uske dil maiN rahte hain shayad uska dil hi bada ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai simple labz mein kya kya bayan kar diye hai aapne just......... wow daad dheron kabul kijiye :-ek bujhaa hua dhumil palak jhapakte hi jo aankh se hu'aa ojhal woh lauT kar nahiiN aayaa gaye dinoN ki taraH
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16th April 2012, 10:39 PM
Wwaahhhh...Fikr bhai ....kamaal ka andaaz hai .....
koyee yun bhi likh paataa ho, aisa bhi ho sakta hai ? dheron daad Quote:
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16th April 2012, 11:30 PM
pahle Maa khud ghabrayee, fir has ke boli bachoN se
toot ke chaT pe chand gira ho aisa bhi ho sakta hai kya khoobsoorat khayaal hai bhaia.... Dil se daad 07666027379,09041116001,09876442643, 09417142513,09914097007,09625494246 Mail: parveenkomal@parveenkomal.com www.parveenkomal.com/blog { BURA NA SUNENGE BURA NA DEKHENGE BURA NA BOLENGE ACHHA LIKHENGE,KOI BURA KAHEGA TO KHUD KO TATOLENGE }  Wohi rizq deta jahaan ko , wohi zaat sab se azeem hai Meri muflisi pe na hans ke wo , tera taaj sar se giraa na de }QadeerToopchi{ |
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21st April 2012, 07:07 PM
Wah bahot hi badheeyan ghazal likhi hai aapne
waise to naya hun is shayri ke forum me par aap ki likhi kayi poems padhi hai jyada samjh to nahi in sabke bare me........! Bas itna kahunga Kya baat Kya baat Kyaaa baaat........! |
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24th April 2012, 05:37 PM
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behtreen sher likhe hain .... dil se daad hazir hai radhe radhe ................... Aapka Apna Ishk 'इश्क' के बदले इश्क चाहना तिजारत है इज़हार किससे करें महबूब तो दिल में है email: rkm179@gmail.com 
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