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3rd May 2008, 06:39 PM
Woh ek larki tum jaisi,
Udaas logon ki bastiyon main....... Woh titliyon ko talash karti hai, Woh ek larki, Woh gol chehra, woh kali ankhain, Jo karti rehti, hazar baatein, Mizaj sada, woh dil ki achi, Woh ek larki, Sari baatein, woh dil ki manay, Woh karay wo, jo dil ki thanay, Koi na janay, kya us ki marzi, Woh ek larki, Woh chahat k sehrab dekhay.... Mohabbaton k woh khuwab dekhay.... Woh khud samandar, magar hai piyasi, Woh ek larki, Woh dosti k nisab janay, Woh janti hai ehadnajanay, Woh achi dost, woh achi sathi, Woh ek larki, Woh jam chahat ka pina chahay, Woh apni marzi se jeena chahay, Magar hai darti, magar hai darti, Woh ek larki, Mohabbaton ka jo falsafa hai, Woh janti hai, usay pata hai, Woh phir b rehti, dari dari se, Woh ek larki, Jo jhootay logon ko sacha samjhay, Woh sari duniya ko acha samjhay, Woh kitni sadi, woh kitni pagli, Woh ek larki...............!!!  :confus ed: |
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3rd May 2008, 06:47 PM
salaam SanaJi,
bahot umda aur lateef nazm hai aapkii. aisi achchhi nazmeN bahot kam paRhne ko milti haiN HaalaaN k maiN nazm ka shaidaai nahiiN phir bhi aapkii yeh taKhleeq bahot pasand aayii. is nazm ka markazi Khayaal aur us Khayaal ka bahaao bahoyt mutavaazan hai. ek kaamiyaab nazm kahne par amiN aapko dili mubaarakbaad pesh karta huN, qubul kijiye. share karne ke liye shukria regards MuKhlis  tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz |
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4th May 2008, 07:01 AM
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hi sana  hamesha ki tarhan outstanding collection thanks 4 shared $...!
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4th May 2008, 12:02 PM
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SALAM...bohat ache sana g nice post boaht achi lagi hai maza aya hai parh ker keep sharing like this more and more....take care,,, |
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4th May 2008, 12:06 PM
hello to sana ji.
beautiful lines thanks for sharing. Hi Rizi? aap ka likha padha toh yeh faraaz ki shayari yaad aa gayi... woh jo hum mein tum mein qaraar tha tumhay yaad ho ki na yaad ho |
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4th May 2008, 12:07 PM
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SALAM...bohat ache sana g nice post boaht achi lagi hai maza aya hai parh ker keep sharing like this more and more....take care,,, |
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4th May 2008, 12:15 PM
Hi Rizi?
aap ka likha padha toh yeh faraaz ki shayari yaad aa gayi... woh jo hum mein tum mein qaraar tha tumhay yaad ho ki na yaad ho[/quote] HI ANKITA g main ne to post kerna chor dia hai ap ko meri kon s post achi lagi hai..but thx for this apna khayal rakhna..BYE BYE ..... |
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4th May 2008, 12:26 PM
meri har baat par tera woh muskoorana
tumhay yaad ho ki na yaad ho hanstay hua mera woh chehra chipana tumhay yaad ho ki na yaad ho pehchaano toh jaanay. |
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4th May 2008, 12:37 PM
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sorry janab kuch yaad nahi aa raha hai plz ..app bata do na plz...pvt main he bata do ager yahan nahi bata sakti to.....main intzar ker raha hon.ok take care... |
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4th May 2008, 12:52 PM
private kyon mein toh hoon ankita.
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4th May 2008, 05:16 PM
lakin main app ko nahi janta app muje batao to sahi muje yaad he nahi hai app se kab baat ki hai ..app ksa se hain kya...iis main ...
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4th May 2008, 08:23 PM
choro rizi.
chalo ek baar phir say ajnabi ban jaayen hum dono. song from some old moive. It does not matter. I was just an avid fan of your shayari. |
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4th May 2008, 11:26 PM
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tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz |
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frnds,,,,,,,,,,,, |
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Location: im student, bhopal (M.P) india,,,,,,,,,,,Kitney Achey Hotey Hein Bachpan Key Wo Din, jab kebal khiloney toata kartey hain,
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4th May 2008, 11:49 PM
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,,,,,,,,,***rahul***Kitney Achey Hotey Hein Bachpan Key Wo Din,
Jab Sirf Kheloney Toata Kartey Hein .... |
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5th May 2008, 01:04 AM
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beautiful sharing!!!!! apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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5th May 2008, 02:34 AM
hello Mukhlis? why the big ?? I am fool when it comes to shayari.
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5th May 2008, 02:57 AM
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5th May 2008, 03:02 AM
Hello Mukhlis,
tum off line ho kar kaiisay post kar rahay ho? can I also do this? aur han meiinay toh pehlay bhi likha hai. jindagi mein humour ka rang na ho toh jindagi berang ho jaati hai. so do not worry I never mind anything aur han sorry mat kaho. tumhara frowing chehra pasand nahin aaya. hansi ki chamak teri tasveer par hai arzoo meri tehreer par hai tu rahay muskooraata har dam aisi taseer meri dua par hai |
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5th May 2008, 05:38 AM
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YES, u can do that by going into CP [Control Panel] which is the top left hand corner of ur screen and then go into ur profile and check the box that says "do you want to eb invisible to others?". its that simple! by the way, she'r achchha hai i noticed that u r in Canada. where abouts do u live in Canada? tu aur aaraa'ish-e-Kham-e-kaakul maiN aur andesha_haa-e-dur o daraaz |
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5th May 2008, 10:22 AM
Hello Mukhlis,
wahin rahti hoon jahan koi aata jaata nahin. and thanks for liking my writing. |
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7th May 2008, 12:36 PM
kahan rahti ho muje bi batao humen bi koi aysi he jaga ki talash hai jahan koi ata jata na ho bas main akela he hon .....
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7th May 2008, 06:48 PM
hi salam,
neha thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 reply |
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7th May 2008, 06:52 PM
hi salam,
rahul thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx k app nay reply kara. |
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7th May 2008, 06:53 PM
hi salam ,
thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxx mukhlis , rizi n ankita reply dainay ka |
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7th May 2008, 06:54 PM
hi salam,
koi to ho i don't know whats ur name but thanxxxxxxxxxxxxx 4 replyyyyyyyy |
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7th May 2008, 07:43 PM
my plesure sana ji app ne acha likha hum ne riply dia ..bas app ayse he likhti rahiye
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23rd September 2014, 12:40 PM
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bahut khoob likha hai aapne Sana ji........! .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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12th October 2014, 05:26 PM
kya baat hai sanajee.....sundar nazm.... ....daad hee daad
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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12th October 2014, 06:40 PM
.....bahut khoob sana ji.......
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे madhu.. |
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