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Achcha nahi lagta Dard ka bahana saheB -
17th April 2010, 03:07 PM
Bus bhi karo, ab youN pina pilana saheb
Achcha nahi lagta dard ka bahana saheb Maikhari mein baaten poshida ho jati hai Dil nahi chahta jinhe batana saheb Haal yeh aahique ka aisa kyuN huaa hai Tajurbekar se ab kya chupana saheb 
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Tere Intzaar Mein....
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17th April 2010, 08:37 PM
kwahish ji namskaar.............
bahut badhiya likha hai aapne. bus yuN hi likhte raheN yahi duaa karta huN zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! ===========================  sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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18th April 2010, 04:13 PM
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Younhi baithe baithe likha diya tha..... aur aapki nazar pad gayi... Kabhi is pura karunga..  Apna saath banaye rakhiye...... Khush rhaiye, khuda Hafez....
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19th April 2010, 12:12 AM
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apna khayal rakhen...' duaaon ke saath....  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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29th May 2010, 10:58 PM
Naresh jee aapke kahne per maine is aage badhaya tha per anjaam tak nahi pahuncha paya.... lijiye aapki nazar baki ke sher karta huN...
Bus bhi karo, ab youN pina pilana saheb Achcha nahi lagta dard ka bahana saheb Maikhari mein baaten poshida ho jati hai Dil nahi chahta jinhe batana saheb Haal yeh Devadas saa huaa kyuN hai Tajurbekar se ab kya chupana saheb Ungli diye to yeh haath thaam lete hai Maikasho se humdardi mat jatana saheb Sameer ab to puri yeh akhari Kwahish kare Meri lash ko meena say nahlaana saheb Meri zindagi guzri hai jis maikhane saheb Usi maikhaane mein mujhe dafnana saheb
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30th May 2010, 09:55 PM
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koi ehsaans likhe to aise likhe |
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5th June 2010, 12:26 AM
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Zidd sahab Aadaab! Behad fakhra sa mehsus kar raha huN main aapke is hounsla afzai ka tahe dil se shukra guzar huN.... Aate rhiaye, Khush rahiye... Khuda Hafez.....
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Very nice -
7th June 2010, 02:40 PM
Kwahish Ji
aapke baare jitna kaha jaye kam hai kyoki aapki pakad ghazal ke mamle me bahut hi aachi hai , isme koi shak waali baat nahi hai nidaan seedhi baat karta hai aur kahta bhi hai , sdc par yadi koi "Diamond" hai to vo aap ho meri nazar me , goodluck agli rachna ke liye. mai jhoothi tareef karne ki meri aadat nahi hai. Khus rahiyega. http://www.anidaan.@gmail.com All right reserved with Poet@Ajay nidaan  Kisi ek chehare ki talash me bhatakti rahee zindagi par mila nahi zindagi ko apni pahchaan ka chehara.
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7th June 2010, 02:54 PM
Maikhari mein baaten poshida ho jati hai
Dil nahi chahta jinhe batana saheb wah sameer bhai is sher ko hamse behtar aur koon samjhega kai baar do-char hona pada hai aise halatoN se.........  bas yuhin likhte rahiye aur hame padne ka mauka dete rahiye..... aapka. mitaya mujh ko hone ne, na hota main to kya hota !! (NM) |
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15th June 2010, 01:43 AM
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NidaaN sahaaB AadaaB! Aapne aisi tarif kar dii ke mere dil o zahen mein nashaa sa chaa gaya.... Main itni tarif ka haqdaar nahi huN sahab...... Bus aapki is tareef per bus yehi kahuNga... Khaak huN abar - e- aasmaaN na banaiye Zarra huN mujhe sara jahaaN na banaiye Aapke is andaaz se dil bagh bagh ho gaya......... Aise hi apna saath banaye rakhiye Khush rahiye..... Apna khyaal rakhiye... Khuda hafez......
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8th April 2013, 05:57 PM
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Secret Bhai Aadaab...! Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab, mere is adna se kalaam ko saraahne aur us sher ko samjhne ke liye jo sahiN se bayaaN nahi kar raha hai...  Actualy maine poshidaa ke meaning " Ujagar hona "samjh liya tha jo uske viprit hai... Shukriyaa Naresh jee aapne meri galti ki sahiN nishaan dehi kii... Shaad O aabaad rahiye Bhai... Khudaa Hafez..
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8th April 2013, 07:20 PM
masha allaah janaab ..... waaahh kya kkhoob sher kahe hain aapne sameer saahab... subhan allah....
Bus bhi karo, ab youN pina pilana saheb Achcha nahi lagta dard ka bahana saheb is sher ne to bas toofaan uthaa diyaaa.... daad qubool kijiye... Shaad... |
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8th April 2013, 07:26 PM
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Shaad Sahaab Aadaab! Taubaa janab Aise kafirana kalaam par " Mashaa Allaah" na kahiye... Aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa janab houNsla afzai ke liye... aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye.... Shaad toH hai hi aap aabaad rahiye... Khuda Hafez...
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17th April 2013, 10:58 AM
are gazab........... kya baat hai bhai, chaa gaye aap to.... baut ahcha likha hai... Bhai meri bhi na jaane kab se dil meN chaahat hi ki kabhi saaheb radeef rakh ke likhun, par abhi tak aisa koi khayala nahin mila hai, par aapne isme bhi baazi maar li....
 ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ http://alfaaz-e-taish.blogspot.in/ Ishq hota tha, ishq karte haiN, Vo zamana tha, ye zamana hai... ----Taish ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ |
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17th April 2013, 11:27 AM
bahut khubbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb bhaaiiiiiii...........
zaari apnaa safar rakhtaa huN !! =========================== sharma.rajeev701@gmail.com https://www.facebook.com/rajeevsharmaraj111 http://www.rajeevsharmaraj.blogspot.com/ |
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Main shayar to nahin.....
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8th May 2013, 09:20 AM
sameer jee.....bahut bahut badhai aapko...u r really a diamond of SDC, this one is urs very creative art.....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था Arvind Saxena Ph. No. 7905856220 |
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30th May 2013, 05:21 PM
Bade asardaar aashaar hain Khwahish ji ... Cheers
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Sultaan raaj |
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Sultaan raaj -
3rd July 2013, 03:56 PM
Dard ko pirona hum bhi jante hai
saheb gum ko jhelna hum bhi jante hai saheb tor do hume.. Ya lout hi aawo ab.. kuch to fasle kam karo.. Intazzr tera hum bhi siddat se karte hai saheb.. . .. ... ~@ :JYOTIBA |
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5th July 2013, 11:30 PM
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moHteram umeed hai app khairiyat se hongy , is sher ka matlab samjhaa dijiye to peRhny ka luft dobalaa ho jaaey ga . jahaN tak meri jaankaari hai poshida to chupy huwe ko kehty haiN , ager app ne bhi yehi lafz istemaal kiya hai to phir to is sher ki tashreeH zaroor kijiye . mujhy ag raha hai shayad appne aise likha hai . ke maikhari (sharaab peeny se ) mai baatieN chup jaati haiN (jab keh sharab ke baad yeh baat ulaT ho jaati hai keh baatieN ayaaN ho jaati haiN , aur app ka dosra misra bhi yehi keh raha hai keh dil kuch baatieN chupaana chah raha hai chupi huwi ko kiya chupaana saHeb ? al aariZ Mujeeb |
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10th July 2013, 10:40 AM
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bahane bana kar saheb se kya chupana, tumse sikha hai humne bhi dil lagana. |
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2nd September 2013, 07:32 PM
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Taish Sahaab Aadaab...! Bhai yeH toH aapki nazar nawazi hai ke aapko yeH kalaam pasaNd aayi... Jee maine Vikas Bhai aur Maikash jee ki kalaam se inspire hokar likha tha is radiff maiN... Aapka bahut bahut shukriyaa bhai aage bhi apna sahyog banaye rakhiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Khuda Hafez...
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2nd September 2013, 07:34 PM
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Raj BHai Aadaab...! Bahut bahut shukriyaa bhai aapka... Kalaam psaNd karne aur waqt dene ke liye tah e dil se shukriyaa aapka... aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Khuda Hafez...
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2nd September 2013, 07:36 PM
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Aru Jee Aadaab...! Bhai itna bada compliment diya aapne ke bus maiN sambhal nahi paa raha huN iske aage... Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab aage bhi apni nazre banaye rakhiye... Aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Khuda Hafez...
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2nd September 2013, 07:50 PM
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Zarra Sahaab Aadaab...! Bahut bahut shukriyaa janab... aap jaise sukhanwar ki daad waqai bahut badi baat hai mere liye... Apna saath banaye rakhiye... bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Khuda Hafez...
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2nd September 2013, 07:52 PM
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Jyotibaa Jee Aadaab...! Bahut bahut shukriyaa Saheb... aapke lafz bhi behad khoobsurat the .. aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Khuda Hafez..
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2nd September 2013, 07:56 PM
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Mujeeb Sahaab Aadaab...! Janab aapki nazar nawaazi ke liye tah e dil se shukriyaa... Jee maiN aapki baat se sao fisad ittefaq rakhta huN... kyuN ke mujhe us lafz ka ilm hi nahi tha isse pahle so maine galati se istemal kar diyaa... Par janab aapki nazar se koi ghalati kahaaN chupti hai aap woH qaari hai jo behad paini nazar rakhte haiN aapke is nazar ko salaam janab... aage bhi baNde ki rahnumai karte rahiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabad rahiye... Khuda Hafez...
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2nd September 2013, 07:57 PM
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Aadaab Monika Jee...! Thank a lot for this nice appreciation... Aage bhi apna saath banaye rakhiye... Bazm meiN aate rahiye... Shaad O aabaad rahiye... Khuda Hafez...
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5th November 2013, 12:33 PM
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