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30th July 2004, 11:23 PM
SEENE MEIN SULAGTE HAI ARMAAN,
AANKHON MEIN UDAASI CHAIYI HAI; YEH AAJ TERI DUNIYA SE HAME, TAQDEER KAHAN LE AAYI HAI.... KUCH AANKH MEIN AANSO BAAQI HAI, JO MERE GHUM KE SAATHI HAI; AB DIL HAI NA DIL KE ARMAAN HAI, BUS MAIN HOON MERI TANHAYEE HAI. EK AISI AAG LAGI MANN MEIN, JEENE BHI NA DE MARNE BHI NA DE; CHUP HOON TOA KALEJA JALTA HAI, BOLOUN TOA TERI RUSVAAYI HAI. SEENE MEIN SULAGTE HAIN ARMAAN, AANKHON MEIN UDAASI CHAIYI HAI THNX 4 READING HOPE U LIKE IT TAKE CARE BYE FAREED. |
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4th August 2004, 07:55 AM
One of my favourites as well.
Dard hi dard ko pehchane! |
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4th August 2004, 08:25 PM
Thnx 4 liking n ya very true dard hi dard ko pehchaanta hai .
take care bye bye |
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5th August 2004, 02:17 AM
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Bahut dard bhari ghazal likh di aapne.. Vaah kahun ya Aah kahun, samjh nahi aa raha... Bas ek bahut purana sher yaad aa gaya.. "Yeh ishq nahi aasaan, bas itna samjh lena, ek aag ka dariya hai, aur doob ke jaana hai" Shaayar ka naam nahi jaanti, par dil ke bahut kareeb hai yeh.. Khush rahiye.. ~Priya "Dikha kar khawaab in aankhon ko, De gaye aansoon in mein Tum.. Kaise chalka doo yeh aansoon, In mein bhi To rehTe ho Tum.." ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ Sirf Tanu Ki ChaahaT...... ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ |
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thnx |
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thnx -
5th August 2004, 02:35 AM
Priya ji,
aap ne ghazal padi aur aapko pasand aayi yehi kaafi hai ab "Aah" na kahiye bus jisne yeh ghazal likhi aur gayi uske liye wah wah kahiye.anywayz thnx 4 liking it take care bye bye |
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Waah... |
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Waah... -
14th August 2004, 05:34 PM
Aadaab,
Hope you are well. Really a beautiful Gazal.  Aise hi haal hojaata hain, aksar... Mujhe yaad aaya jo, kuch youn hain: Aapni aankhon ke samander mein utar jaane dein~Tera mujrim houn mujhe doubke maar jaane dein~Zakhm kitne teri chahat se mile hain mujhko~sochta houn ke kahoun tujhse magar jaane dein.......ye gazal thi. Ek aur: Dil mein ab dard~e~Muhabbat ke siva kuch bhi nahin~Zindegi meri Ibadat ke siva kuch bhi nahin.......yeh bhi ek gazal hi thi. Thank you very much for sharing with us. Do keep sharing your choice of songs & gazals...Khush rahiye ye Duwaon ke sath ijaazat chahoungi. Do take care of yourself. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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Hi thr.....!!! |
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Hi thr.....!!! -
15th August 2004, 03:44 PM
Shimul hi,
hw r u?well thnx a lottttt 4 liking the ghazal n replyin 2it.thnx a lot 4 ur words. take care bye bye Fareed. b happy alwayz!!! |
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18th August 2004, 07:36 PM
I am fine. Hope you are well. My pleasure.
I am happy. Thanks for your reply. Khush rahiye ye Duwaon ke saath ijaazat dein dijiye...Do take care of yourself. God bless you. Keep smilling....... Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain Mera Paigam Mohabbat Hain Jaahan Tak Pahunche** *~~~Ahsan Sherazi Jee~~~** *Pure Love** |
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25th August 2004, 02:46 PM
Fareed ji....yahi naam hai na apka...priya ji k response se pata chala...
aap ki kya tareef karoo.....bura mat manNa..aise lag raha hai jaise kisi ne mere shabd chura kar yaha likh diye ho...kyuki vahi dhang...vahi...dard...vahi feelings...isliye aisa laga ki kahi.n maine to nahi likhi kahin... kher ham sab gam k maro ka yahi haal hai.... Main teri bazm me u hi chala aata hu... ki shayad kahi.n dard ko marham mil jaye.. tere riste zakhmo ko to dekhkar u lagta hai.. har taraf us khuda ki bas rusvai hai... tahe dil se taree kabool kare... aap mujhe parna chahe to me shayri-e-dard per aati hu... UDAS |
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25th August 2004, 03:00 PM
Udas bhai bahut bahut shukriya janab bus zindagi mein kabhi dard hain toa kabhi bahut khusiyan lekin main kehta hoon ke agar hum dard mein bhi muskurayein toa ghum bhi khushi mein badal jaata hain.
take care n thnx a ton 4 ur beautiful words take care Fareed. |
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