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Help in completing this sher!!!plz -
22nd December 2008, 06:46 PM
''Dekhne wala kya jane Hasne wala kitna roya hai...........
mere shayri pariwar ke dosto plz meri madad karo mujhe ye sher adhura lagta hai or ise pura karne me meri madad karo maine suna hai ke yaha par koi sher adhura nahi hota par ye mujhe adhura lagta hai... dosto plz isse ap ke lafzon se sajaa de.. ap k jawab ka muntazir apka dost Bakhtiyaar (BugZ) --------------------------------------------------- As I gaze upon your beauty, I think to myself, "never have I seen an angel fly so low". --------------------------------------------------- When I was little, I had a favorite teddy bear, who kept my secrets, shared my adventures, and wiped away all of my tears. I used to think that no one could take his place, then I found you! |
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24th December 2008, 01:35 PM
Hi...Aapka sher pura karne ki humane ek koshish ki hai ...i hope yeh kuch help kare iase pura karne mai.
http://www.shayri.com/forums/showthread.php?t=64149 ''Dekhne wala kya jane Hasne wala kitna roya hai.......... Jo toot ke bikhara hai, Wahi jaane uasne kya khoyaa hai. Labon pe jo hasi samete sabako hasaane nikala hai, Log kya jaane yahaan par uaske dil ne kya kya jhela hai. Samet kar apane aansoon jo mann hi mann roya hai, Na jaane kyon duniya ke mele mai woh aaj yoon akela hai. Dekhane waale jinka jasbaaton se na koi rishta hai, woh kya jaane in aaokhon mai aansoono ka baseraa hai. Love: Gudia Bhagwaan ji aapko hammesha khush rakhe. Jay Ambe Puri Hoke Bhi Jo Puri Na Ho Hoon Zindagi Ki Wo Ankahi Kahaani...... ------------------------------------------------------------ Ek Aaina Jiski Tasveer Dhundhla Gai, Ek Dil Jiski Dhadkan Ruksi Gai, Ek Zindagi Jiski Manzil Ka Koi Pata Hi Nahi, Ek Daaman Jahaan Se Khushiyaan Galti Se Bhi Guzarti Nahi. |
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26th December 2008, 12:34 PM
aapka sher pura karne ki koushis hai..... sayad appko achcha lage...
dekhne wale kya jane hasne wala kitna roya hai ye to janta hai wo hi jisne gam-e-sagar ko dil mai duboya hai log ha.ns kar chal dete hai ha.nsne walo par koe na jane kitna usne dil mai dard chhupoya hai... with love.......... pradeep sumanakshar |
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31st December 2008, 01:22 AM
Thank u g thank u very very much i really love this family of
shayri... i really thank u Gudiya and suman g thank u i really appriciate this i really loved ur replies thank u from the bottom of my heart... --------------------------------------------------- As I gaze upon your beauty, I think to myself, "never have I seen an angel fly so low". --------------------------------------------------- When I was little, I had a favorite teddy bear, who kept my secrets, shared my adventures, and wiped away all of my tears. I used to think that no one could take his place, then I found you! |
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4th January 2009, 01:29 PM
Gudiya....
lajawaj koshish....  ~*~Kaash Dil ki aawaz mein aisa asar ho jaaye
Jise Hum Yaad karte hai use Khabar ho jaaye ~*~ |
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