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12th November 2009, 11:53 PM
Ummeed ke diye Saare jalte reh gaye Hum jaane kyon Haath malte reh gaye... Kismat ko kosne se Kya haansil hoga Apne hi jab hum ko Chhalte reh gaye... Yaadon ki ret par Likhe harf mitaane se Judaai ke aansu Gaalon par Fisalte reh gaye... Suna tha shehar mai Sapne pure hote hai Magar hum yaha Muqaddar badalte reh gaye... Bachpan ki koi Purani tasveer dekh kar Apne beete dino se Hum milte reh gaye... Jin jheel si aankhon mai Kabhi "Naresh"dooba rehta tha Aaj dekha us jheel ko toh Kamal khilte-khilte reh gaye...  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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13th November 2009, 09:30 AM
Jin jheel si aankhon mai Kabhi "Naresh"dooba rehta tha Aaj dekha us jheel ko toh Kamal khilte-khilte reh gaye... Mayank ji ko Upar likhi Ghazal ka maqtaa theek karne ke liye PM kar diya hai....main time rehte use edit nahi kar paya tha YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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13th November 2009, 01:41 PM
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bahot khub Naresh ji har baar ki tarah iss baar bhi lajawab!!!!!! hats off to you............  toot chuka hai kab ka mere saason ka dor armaa sare dil mein hi machalte rahe gaye kam naa ho saka meri zindagi ka andheraa suraj ki kirne har roz nikalte dhalte rahe gaye few lines from me........grammatical mistakes aap sudhaar lijiyen Naresh ji ... yuhi likhte rahiyen aap hume majboor kar dete hai sochne par aur hum vo aap ko likh dete hai Thanks Warm Regards _______________________________________________ PRANEETA
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13th November 2009, 03:08 PM
bahut hi accha likha hai aapne NARESH Jiii,
hume sabhi sher pasand aaye......yoon hi bazm mein aate rahiye god bless u .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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13th November 2009, 03:29 PM
Naresh jee,
aapki yeh koshish bahut achhi rahi saare aashar hume achha laga youn hi kahte rahiye khus rahiye DuaoN ke saath Diya  Mohabbat ke baad mohabbat mumkin hai faraz. Magar toot ke chahna sirf ek baar hota hai Goodbye SDC Diya |
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13th November 2009, 05:33 PM
Naresh jii AadaaB...........
Bahut khoob aapke khayal bahut achche hai.... aur aapne use khubsurat se bayan bhi kiya..... Yeh aapki aur ek achchi peshkash haiN dil se daad kabool kijiye.... Likhate rhaiye Khush rhaiye.. 
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13th November 2009, 05:49 PM
Naresh Jii,,
Aap ka likhaa acha laga..... Sabhi ashaar ache lagay..... Roz-ba-roz aap ki tehreer meiN nikhaar aata ja raha hai............ Likhtey rahiye,, Take care n Regardz, HSN tumhara shoq dekha to ghazal hum ne nazar kar di! kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN... ("Asad") |
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13th November 2009, 07:11 PM
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aapki sarahanaa ka bahut bahut shukriya.... aise hi aap saath dete rahiye.... hum behtar likhne ki koshish karte rahenge... khush rahiye... duaaon ke saath... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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13th November 2009, 08:47 PM
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khush rahiye... duaaon ke saath.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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14th November 2009, 07:09 AM
jazbaat kii kaliyaa.N chunanaa hai aur pyaar kaa tohfaa denaa hai logo.n kii nigaahe.n kuchh bhii kahe.n logo.n se hame.n kyaa lenaa hai ye Khaas ta'alluq aapas kaa duniyaa kii nazar me.n aam sahii --Sahir-- YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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14th November 2009, 12:17 PM
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Diya Ji....Namaste ! aapka meri koshish ko padhke sarahaane ke liye bahut bahut shukriya....aapka saath aur piyaar aise hi hamesha bana rahe.... khush rahiye duaaon ke saath... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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14th November 2009, 03:06 PM
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Janab Naresh Sahib Aadaab, Suna tha shehar mai Sapne pure hote hai Magar hum yaha Muqaddar badalte reh gaye... Bhaijaan aap ke is sher ne to dil jiit liya. Chekhuub janab. Mehanat zaahir ho rahii hai YuuN hi mashq jaari rakheN aur khudara ho zor-e-kalam aur ziyaada.DuaaoN ke saath Ijaazat Naadaan HumeN gunah bhi karne ko zindagi kam hai." -Anand Narayan Mulla. वो कौन है जिन्हें तौबा की मिल गई फुरसत, हमें गुनाह भी करने को ज़िंदगी कम है. -आनंद नारायण मुल्ला |
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14th November 2009, 06:53 PM
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Ek badhiya peshkash pe meri daad kabool Kijiye... Aise hi likhte rahiye... Khush rahiye... Duaon ke sang ijaazat... Vikram Uss Rizk Se Tau Maut Bhali Jis Rizk Se Aatee Ho Tere Parwaaz MeiN Kotaahi.... vikramjethi@gmail.com |
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14th November 2009, 07:37 PM
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apna khayal rakhiyega... duaaon ke saath.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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15th November 2009, 09:06 AM
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Sunita Ji...Namaste..! aapki taarif ka bahut bahut shukriya....! Mere liye....aapka saath .....rehnumaai ki maanind hai..... aainda bhi aapka pyar aur aashish mujhe mitla rahega..... khush rahiye... apna khayal rakhiyega... duaaon ke saath.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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15th November 2009, 08:15 PM
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duaaon ke saath... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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16th November 2009, 02:27 AM
"Kismat ko kosne se Kya haansil hoga
Apne hi jab hum ko Chhalte reh gaye..." Naresh ji... is sher ke maiyene mujh nasamajh ki samajh se bahar hai...... kya aapke apne aapko chal nahi paaye.? Matley ke hisaab se ye sher bilkul ulta hai... ya to hona chahiye tha...ki chaltey chaley gaye... Khair ye meri nizi raye hai... Ghazal ke baaqi saare sher matle ke maiyne se alag hai... Gaur se padha jaaye to ye pata chalta hai ki aap ek koshish karna chahte the ...lein vo nahi ho paaya....magar baaki har sher mein vo cheez ho rahi hai.... apne khyaal ko aapke ru-b-ru rakhne ki koshish ki hai... gar bura lagey to maafi bakshiyega.... khush rahiye........... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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16th November 2009, 09:32 AM
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Vikram Ji....koshish ko sarahane ke liye........aapka bahut bahut shukriya... aainda bhi aise hi saath milta rahega... khush rahiye... duaaon ke saath... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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16th November 2009, 07:17 PM
Bade Logon Se Milne Mein
Hamesha Faasla Rakhna Jahaa Dariya Samandar Se Mila- Dariya Nahiin Rehta...! YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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16th November 2009, 11:31 PM
Aman Ji !...Namaste !.....aapko aaj muddaton baad apni post par dekhkar mujhe bahut khushi mehasus hui....aapne jis aur ishaara kiya hai....woh aapka nazariya hai....usme main kuch nahi kahunga....aur isme bura lagne ki koi baat nahi hai....sab ko apni raaye rakhne ka adhikaar hai...mere liye sabse khushi ki yeh baat hai.....ki aap ne meri koshish par nazre karam farmaya....main aapki raaye par zarur gaur karunga....
aainda bhi aapka aise hi saath milta rahega....itni aasha toh hamesha aap se rakhunga hi.... khush rahiye... duaaon ke saath.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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17th November 2009, 07:34 AM
Dard Ke Phool Bhi Khilte Hein
Bikhar Jaate Hein .. Zakhm Kaise Bhi Hon, Kuch Rooz Mein Bhar Jaate Hein...! YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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17th November 2009, 05:13 PM
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yeh narm mulayem thandi hawayeN jab ghar say tumharay guzraiN tumhari khusbu churayeN mere ghar lay aayeN kabhi yooN bhi to ho sooni har manzil ho koi na mere sath ho aur tum aao YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th November 2009, 08:56 AM
ek lafz-e-mohabbat ka adna sa fasana hai simte to dil-e-ashiq, faile to zamana hai..... Jigar Muradabadi YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th November 2009, 11:05 AM
WAH NARESHJI...
Jin jheel si aankhon mai Kabhi "Naresh"dooba rehta tha Aaj dekha us jheel ko toh Kamal khilte-khilte reh gaye... AAPKI YE LINE DIL KO CHU GAI.... KUCH LAFZ DIL KI GAHRIYON ME UTAR JATE HAI... JAISE AAPKE YE ALFAAZ.... BAS AISE HE LIKHTE RAHIYE..... S.R.SINGH SURAT(GUJRAT) अक्सर बहते हुए आँसू भी बात किया करते है"...!!! |
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18th November 2009, 03:33 PM
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khush rahiye.... duaaon ke saath.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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18th November 2009, 08:48 PM
ghar kii vahashat se larazataa huun magar jaane kyon
shaam hotii hai to ghar jaane ko jii chaahataa hai YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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19th November 2009, 10:59 AM
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Naresh ji, yeh sher behad pasand aaye..daad..khush rahiye..aur mashk jaari rakhiye... Yaadon ki ret par Likhe harf mitaane se Judaai ke aansu Gaalon par Fisalte reh gaye... Suna tha shehar mai Sapne pure hote hai Magar hum yaha Muqaddar badalte reh gaye... god bless u aapka dost, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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19th November 2009, 08:41 PM
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Pradhyuman Ji......namaste ! kaise hai aap......bahut dino ke baad ....aapko apni post par dekhkar mujhe behad khushi mehsus ho rahi hai......aapko mere chand ashaar pasand aaye iske liye aapka bahut bahut shukriya.....aainda bhi aise hi aapka saath mujhe milta rahega...khush rahiye... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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20th November 2009, 09:37 AM
Zindagi, main bhi musaafir hoon teri kashti ka,
Tu jahan mujh say kahegi main utar jaaoonga ! Phool rah jayeengay guldaan mein yaadon ki nazar, Main to khushboo hoon phizaon mein bikhar jaaoonga ! - Moein Nazar YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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20th November 2009, 05:50 PM
main khudbhi ahetiyatan us gali se kam guzarta hoon, koi masoom mere liye kyun badnam ho jaye, --bashir badr-- YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st November 2009, 12:07 AM
sun liyaa kaise Khudaa jaane zamaane bhar ne vo fasaanaa jo kabhii hamane sunaayaa bhii nahii.n YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st November 2009, 05:43 PM
jo be niyaz hein khud apne husn se Mohsin! kahan woh mujh se mera intikhab poochte hein? YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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21st November 2009, 10:37 PM
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Originally Posted by naadaan  Janab Naresh Sahib Aadaab, Suna tha shehar mai Sapne pure hote hai Magar hum yaha Muqaddar badalte reh gaye... Bhaijaan aap ke is sher ne to dil jiit liya. Chekhuub janab. Mehanat zaahir ho rahii hai YuuN hi mashq jaari rakheN aur khudara ho zor-e-kalam aur ziyaada.DuaaoN ke saath Ijaazat Naadaan Shyam Ji...Aadaab ! aapko arse baad aapni post par dekhkar acha laga....aapki nawazish hai....kimti waqt dene ke liye...aur sarahanaa ke liye.....bahut bahut shukriya...aainda bhi aapka aise hi saath bana rahe.....khush rahiye... duaaon ke saath... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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22nd November 2009, 08:09 PM
koi ummid bar nahin aati koi surat nazar nahin aati pehle aati thi haale dil par hansi ab kisi baat par nahin aati hum wahan hain, jahan se humko bhi kucch hamaari khabar nahin aati kaabaa kis muh se jaaoge 'Ghalib' sharm tumko magar nahin aati YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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23rd November 2009, 11:20 PM
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aapne is sher mai jis aur ishaara kiya hai....uska bhaaw yeh nahi hai....yaha "reh gaye" ka matlab hai.....woh aise kar rahe hai........misre se saaf hai....baal ki khaal toh kisi bhi sher ki nikaali ja sakti hai....phir apna apna harek ka nazariya bhi hota hai.....isme behes toh ho nahi sakiti....sher mai kuch baate ishare se samjhaai jaati hai.... Kismat ko kosne se Kya haansil hoga Apne hi jab hum ko Chhalte reh gaye..." isme yahi bhaaw nikalta hai........apne hum ko chhal rahe hai....agar pure ashaar par gaur kare toh... baaki toh nazariya apna apna hai.... phir bhi aage koshish karunga......har baat saaf kehne ki.... YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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24th November 2009, 09:50 AM
unse mohabbat kar hum khud ko yun bhula baithe,
ki bas unhi ke khayal hain is dil mein aa baithe, humne to dil diya , jaan unke naam kar di, jane kyun wo aj is mehfil hain anjaan ban baithe....! --nm-- YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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26th November 2009, 09:38 AM
Teri Ankhon Se Hi Khulte Hain Saveron Ke Ufaq
Teri Aankhon Se Hi Band Hoti Hai Ye Seep Ki Raat Teri Aankhen Hain Ya Sajde Main Hai Masoom Namazi Palken Khulti Hain to Youn Goonj Ke Uthati Hai Nazar Jaise Mandir Se Jaras Ki Chale Namnaak Hawaa Aur Jhukti Hain To Bas Jaise Azaan Khatm Huee Ho Teri Ankhen, Teri Thahri Huee Gamgeen See Ankhen Teri Ankhon Se Hi Takhleeq Huee Hai Sachchi Teri Ankhon Se Hi Takhleeq Huee Hai Ye Hayat --Gulzaar-- YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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