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27th November 2008, 08:04 PM
hi...
phir wo hi atank ka jor aur bagunahon ki maut ka sannata...sochker dil bhi ghabra jata hai!kya insaniyat bilkul khatm ho gayi hai ya hum itne kamjor ke iska muqabala nahi ker saktey?bus isi kashmakash me kuch jazbaat pesh kerne ki koshish ker rahi hoon...umeed hai kuch sochne ke liye aapko majboor to hona hi parega! Mut banto mere desh ko nadiyo.n aur talo.n me Ke khoo.n bhi behne lagey behisab nalo.n me dhamako.n me kho rahi hai begunahon ki cheekhy.n dehal rahi hai jami roz,!,jo dehlti thi salon me zarra zarra but raha hai dekhiye ek asman maut bhi milne lagi hai ab niwalon me dil ke jakhm ho chaley hain burf se tees bhi uthti nahi pawn ke chalo.n me ghar ki deewaro.n me "sona" tab ho kaise bhagwan bhi mehfooz nahi jab shiwalo.n me |
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27th November 2008, 08:12 PM
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Fezan . . Koi Aisa Kamaal Ho Jaye Zindigi Be-Misaal Ho Jaye
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27th November 2008, 08:50 PM
Sawati ji namaskaar......................aapke ahsaas mujhe bahut apne se lage, aaj har kisi ke dil mein yehi shikayat hai ki akhir kyuN, kab tak....yeh sab chalta rahega....!
 .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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28th November 2008, 03:01 PM
swati
Dil ke jhakhm hare se lagte ha tumhari kavish ko padhne ke baad aur dekho na ki kya ho rhaa hai mumbai mai... meri ankhoN se aansuN aa gaye the us ros jab aag laga di thi unhone .. insaniyat aur taj dono maiN... kuch kehte nahi banta .. kyunki humare desh ki sarkaareN napunsak hai .. ya dalaal kursi ke rakhwale hai ... bas chup reh ke sun sakte hai hum ye kunaal Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa.. Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi.. |
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29th November 2008, 01:32 AM
dhamako.n me kho rahi hai begunahon ki cheekhy.n
dehal rahi hai jami roz,!,jo dehlti thi salon me sahi kaha aaj kal ka nazara yahi hai....ham sab chup rah kar sun skate hai kunal ne kaha..mere hisab se phir ham bhi utne hi jimmewaar honge ye desh ham sabka hai ham sabko iski raksha karni hogi miljul kar. samsamyik rachna.. शब्दों में पिरोना है , जिससे वो हमारी यादों में महकते रहे |
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30th November 2008, 08:18 PM
Fezan ji
apki hauslaafzai ke liye shukriya! |
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30th November 2008, 08:22 PM
sunita ji
ye hamari badkismati hai ke hum aise logon ke beech hain jo desh ko kuch nahi samjhtey aur salaam hai un jaabanjon ko jinhone jaan ki bazi lagaker auron ki madad ki!apki is hausla afzai ke liye shukriya! |
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30th November 2008, 08:23 PM
kunal ji
shayad hi koi aisa hoga jo in khabron ko dekh apni ankhey nam hone se rok paya hoga?aap sahi keh rahey hain hamari sarkar sirf apna bhala hi ker rahi hai desh hit ki baat to hai hi nahi..shukriya! |
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30th November 2008, 08:25 PM
sakhi ji(raj)?
ye sab parhna .dekhna aur sunna hamari adton me shumar sa ho gaya hai...merna to hai hi na to kyun na muqabala kertey hue mareyin! |
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1st December 2008, 05:02 PM
...and what u say about them....
Taj ki aag mein rotiyan sikne lagi siyasat ki.. mandrane lage neta ab gidd ki khaalon mein shaheed ho gaye jawan watan ki raahon mein.. siyasatdaan uljhe hai shatranj ki chaalon mein swati ji aapka kalaam hamesha hi dil mein dastak deta hai..khaas kar akhiri sher behad pasand aaya...ek aam insaan kar dard bayan kiya hai aapne apni kalam se...aapki tehreer par meri daad kubool kijiye..waise "dard" par "wah" kehne ka gunaah kar raha hoon.... isi dard ko meine bhi bayan karne ki koshish ki hai... धमाकों के तमाचें (on Mumbai blast) -------------------- धमाकों के तमाचों से आँखें तो खुली होंगी गर अब भी न उठा हाथ तो यह बुजदिली होगी चूहे-बिल्ली का यह खेल आखिर कब तक चलेगा ? आज देहली है मुंबई कल खाख में दिल्ली होगी है गफ़्लत कि उंघती सरकारें जागेंगी धमाकों के शोर से सियासतदानों कि कुछ देर को महज कुर्सि हिली होगी ज़ंग जरूरत है अमन कि हिफाज़त के लिए वरना खिजा के साये तले सहमी चमन कि हर कली होगी "सो सुनार कि तो एक लोहार कि" याद रहे "कुरील" जब हम लेंगे हिसाब तो हर चोट कि वसूली होगी. -मनोज कुरील karte hai jo "kureel" se gila karte rahein. |
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2nd December 2008, 02:18 AM
swati ji aapne bilkul sahi akkasi ki hai aaj kal ke halaat ki aur afsos is baat ye hai begunah aur masoom log is ka shikaar bante hain jinhain pata bhi nahi hota ke woh kis khaate main maare gaye hain .........kash ab bhi insaniyat jaag jaye werna kuch nahi bachega... likhti rahiyega
apne ander se pash pash hoon main zaaat hai aetbaar e zaaat nahin ab to main khud bhi apne saath nahin |
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3rd December 2008, 03:02 PM
manoj ji
धमाकों के तमाचों से आँखें तो खुली होंगी गर अब भी न उठा हाथ तो यह बुजदिली होगी चूहे-बिल्ली का यह खेल आखिर कब तक चलेगा ? आज देहली है मुंबई कल खाख में दिल्ली होगी है गफ़्लत कि उंघती सरकारें जागेंगी धमाकों के शोर से सियासतदानों कि कुछ देर को महज कुर्सि हिली होगी ज़ंग जरूरत है अमन कि हिफाज़त के लिए वरना खिजा के साये तले सहमी चमन कि हर कली होगी "सो सुनार कि तो एक लोहार कि" याद रहे "कुरील" जब हम लेंगे हिसाब तो हर चोट कि वसूली होगी. sahi kaha hai apne..in atankwadiyon ke liye koi matlab nahi hota ki kaun si jagah hai..ya kaun se begunah log hain..bus inka majhab sirf aur sirf desh ko apni chalon me uljhaker apne akam asaan kerna hai...apki is gazal ke liye shukriya..bahut hi umda khayal hain aaj ke halat per! |
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3rd December 2008, 03:04 PM
koi to ho!...
aap apna naam batana chahngey? pata nahi in atankwadiyon ne is miiti me janam liya hai ya nahi..is dharti maa ko agar wo rulana chahtey hain to kya wo kabhi khud khush reh payengey?kitne sawal hain jo inke khilaf nikaltey hain..shukriya! |
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3rd December 2008, 03:13 PM
Swati jee:
namaste!! baRii hi saadagee se aapne apne dil kii baat keh dii ees kavviSh ke zar'iiYe... ak achchhi koShiSh!! daad!! KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat aapka ~ Dhaval |
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9th December 2008, 01:04 PM
dhavalji
apki is hausla-afzai ke liye shukriya |
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23rd March 2009, 09:05 AM
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swaati jee: bohat hi khuub aur di lko chhulene waala kalaam hai aap ka....... sachchaaii ka aaiina bhi agar kahuu.n to Ghalat nahii.n hoga.... aap me.n yeh qaabiliyat kuT kuT kar bhari hai ki aap samaaj me.n hone waali ghatnaao.n ko behtariin andaaz me.n apne kalaam me.n baa.nDh leti hai... meri aur se daad haazir hai. yuu.n hi likhti rahe.n -Mayank |
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23rd March 2009, 10:10 AM
Mut banto mere desh ko nadiyo.n aur talo.n me
Ke khoo.n bhi behne lagey behisab nalo.n me Bhaut acha likha hai akrosh bhara ... tadap bhi hai himmat bhi .... asar rakhta hai aapka ya kalaam yun hi likhti rahe |
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23rd March 2009, 01:16 PM
bohat khoob swati jee.....bohat hi acche aur sacche ehsaas hain...yuhi likhti rahiye.............
reps ++ added........... zainy Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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23rd March 2009, 03:04 PM
Wah ji Wah il ko sukun mil gaya kisine hamare zahn ko jhanjhoa to hai, Varna mohobbaton ke dayron me rahne wale Mulk ko bhul hi jate.
Shukriya bahot behtrin shayari likhi hai aapne. Dil se daad hazir hai! Quote:
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24th March 2009, 03:24 PM
mayank ji
ye to apki zaara nawazi hai ki aap hume is kabil samajhtey hain werna humme wo kabiliyat kahan jo aap jaise manjhey hue shayron me hai...hum to bus dil ko hila dene wale kuch lamho ko lkalamband kerni ki choti si koshish bhar kerety hain...apki is daad ke liye dil se shukriya! |
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24th March 2009, 03:25 PM
zainy ji
apki is tareef ke liye dil se shukriya kabool kareyin! |
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24th March 2009, 06:37 PM
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bahut khoob SWATI ......very very touchy......  "LAMHA"mujhko acchaa nahiiN lagtaa ko’ii hamnaam teraa , ko’ii tujhsaa ho to phir naam bhii tujhsaa rakhe.... |
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