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Dard-e-dil - 9th February 2003, 08:07 AM

Bahoot dino ke baad kuch likh raha hoon umeed karta hoon aap logon ko yeah pasand aayegi.. Shayar to nahi hoon phir bhi kuch likhne ke humne gusthaki kar hi di hai...


" Barson Baad aaj yeah kalam phir kuch likh paayi hai...
Shayad phir es dilko kisne gehri chot pohchayi hai...

Khushiyon ke basti se jo mukjo, gum ke duniya mein le aayi hai...
Mohobatt ke Sailab mein mere dilne ne aise chot khayi hai...

such kehte hai woh jinhone yeah saaza paayi hai...
Saath yahan palbhar ka, aur umra bhar ki tanhai hai...

Khush hai hum ke dil ko aise chot kisine pohchayi hai...
Maut ka bhi khuaf nahi abh jabh dilne aise chot khayi hai... "


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9th February 2003, 08:20 AM

Jignesh saahab,
sach meiN bahot dinoN ke baad aap yahaaN par aaye haiN.
yeh ghazal bahot achi hai dost, izse paDte paDte dil cheer gaya..

khaas-kar, sabse khoob sher yeh lagaa -
"Khush hai hum ke dil ko aise chot kisine pohchayi hai...
Maut ka bhi khuaf nahi abh jabh dilne aise chot khayi hai...
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mere paas sirf taareef hai karne ke liye, magar woh lafz nahiiN mil rahe.
is liye, maiN umeed karta huuN ki aap isi taraH mehfil meiN aate raheN ge!

aman



"je tu akhiiyaaN de saamne naii rehnaa,
te bibba saada dil moD de..!"


kya karooN? aisa hi hooN maiN..
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Love nice one! - 9th February 2003, 02:17 PM

bahaut khoob. kya baat hai janab. aapke lafzon ne mere dil ke zakham phir hare kar diye. aise hi likhte rahiyega.aur haan abki baar itna lamba break mat lijiye. jald hi hamen kuch aur naya pesh kijiye. tab tak ke liye sirf intezaar rahega.take care.


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12th February 2003, 09:46 AM

Aman aur Farhana ji bahoot shukriya aapke in jawabo ka..aapko pasand aaya yeah jaankar hume acha laga... ji hum zaroor likhenge lekin ek chote se break ke baad..


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hi - 12th February 2003, 10:15 AM

hi Jignesh ji, kaise hain app? bahut khoob, hum aab kahen tho kya kahen, baas yeh ke aap shayr bann jayein tho acha hoga kyuinke likhte hain app bahut hi gehrayee mein. aap aise hi likhte rehega, acha laga pardne ke baad. chale hain
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12th February 2003, 10:56 PM

hi jignesh ji

apne bohot hi acha likha hai.

Khush hai hum ke dil ko aise chot kisine pohchayi hai...
Maut ka bhi khuaf nahi abh jabh dilne aise chot khayi hai... "


yeh line to bas gazab ki hai. wah wah kehna bhi bohot kam hai tareef me. :-) likhte rahiyega. :-)


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wah - 13th February 2003, 08:49 AM

wah kya baat hai dard bahut gehrayi se beyaan kiya hai aapne ye line behad pasand aayi

Barson Baad aaj yeah kalam phir kuch likh paayi hai...
Shayad phir es dilko kisne gehri chot pohchayi hai...

touched by yourz words

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nice - 14th February 2003, 09:14 AM

Saath yahan palbhar ka, aur umra bhar ki tanhai hai...
wah wah wah

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