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Love Wo le saath Shams o Qamar Jaa rahe hain! - 27th August 2011, 09:05 PM

Wo idhar jaa rahe hain, udhar jaa rahe hain,
Koi bhi na jaane, kidhar jaa rahe hain!

Ho raha hai ujaala jidhar jaa rahe hain,
Wo le saath shams-o-qamar jaa rahe hain!

Beqarari ki hum had se guzar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar dil pe aisaa, asar jaa rahe hain!

Giraker wo shajr-O-hajar jaa rahe hain,
Baa-zor wo, is qadar jaa rahe hain!

Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!

Wo zamanay ke dil pe qahar dhaa rahe hain
Ajnabi ko banaa humsafar jaa rahe hain!


Honaa Hai Fenaah Yaad Rakh Aye Shams Tujhko Bhi,
Is Kehkashaan Mein Mai He Nahi Waahid Shaye Faanee!


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Love 28th August 2011, 07:04 PM

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Wo idhar jaa rahe hain, udhar jaa rahe hain,
Koi bhi na jaane, kidhar jaa rahe hain!

Ho raha hai ujaala jidhar jaa rahe hain,
Wo le saath shams-o-qamar jaa rahe hain!

Beqarari ki hum had se guzar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar dil pe aisaa, asar jaa rahe hain!

Giraker wo shajr-O-hajar jaa rahe hain,
Baa-zor wo, is qadar jaa rahe hain!

Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!

Wo zamanay ke dil pe qahar dhaa rahe hain
Ajnabi ko banaa humsafar jaa rahe hain!

hello AJANBI ji

achcha laga ye padh kar...asardaar rahi ye peshkash
daad qabul farmayen janab
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hello AJANBI ji

achcha laga ye padh kar...asardaar rahi ye peshkash
daad qabul farmayen janab
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Thank You for vsiting, reading and posting ur daad! Daad deposited in IDBI(IndianDaadBankOfIndia)!
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7th September 2011, 08:32 PM

Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!

wahh..wahh..doosre misre ko do tarah padha ja sakta hai..bahot ache..


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Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!

wahh..wahh..doosre misre ko do tarah padha ja sakta hai..bahot ache..
Sir G aapki daad sar aankhon pr(o v bina chashma lgaye)
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13th September 2011, 12:44 AM

That's an Ouchh!! one...Touched the feelings and touched the heart. Thanks for sharing and keep your magic thoughts up.

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13th September 2011, 01:25 PM

ajnabi jii...bahut khoobsurat ahsaas...har ahsaas se romaniyat chalak rhi hai...accha laga padkar...dil se daad hazir hai.



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Wo idhar jaa rahe hain, udhar jaa rahe hain,
Koi bhi na jaane, kidhar jaa rahe hain!

Ho raha hai ujaala jidhar jaa rahe hain,
Wo le saath shams-o-qamar jaa rahe hain!

Beqarari ki hum had se guzar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar dil pe aisaa, asar jaa rahe hain!

Giraker wo shajr-O-hajar jaa rahe hain,
Baa-zor wo, is qadar jaa rahe hain!

Nikal ghar se wo ban-sanwar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar raat mein do-pahar jaa rahe hain!

Wo zamanay ke dil pe qahar dhaa rahe hain
Ajnabi ko banaa humsafar jaa rahe hain!


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hasa nice ring and feel to it.... simple is powerful... keep writing...


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Ho raha hai ujaala jidhar jaa rahe hain,
Wo le saath shams-o-qamar jaa rahe hain!

Beqarari ki hum had se guzar jaa rahe hain,
Wo kar dil pe aisaa, asar jaa rahe hain!

Giraker wo shajr-O-hajar jaa rahe hain,
Baa-zor wo, is qadar jaa rahe hain!

Bohat khoob...!!!..............




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