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Hahahahha- Ishq - 13th September 2011, 06:26 PM

tanhaiyo me khayaal aata
khayalo me wo naam chala aata


beqrara dil ko karara nahi aata
milne ka wo unko khayaal nahi aata


jage to wo soye to wo , ye silsila tham hi nahi pata
soche to kya soche, koi vichar aur smaj nahi aata

rab se ajij wo kaisa saya hai,itna kya man ko bhaya
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13th September 2011, 07:25 PM

Bahot khoob koshish rahi aapki veena jee... bas likhti raheN, ehsaasoN ko kaagaz pe utaarti rahiye... shukriyaa

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Love 14th September 2011, 03:30 PM

Veena jii....bahut khoob likha aapne...dil ki baat sahi lafzoN mei kahi aapne....tabhi to kahte hai ki ISHQ aache bhale ensaaN ko behka deta hai....

keep writing
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16th September 2011, 05:40 PM

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Bahot khoob koshish rahi aapki veena jee... bas likhti raheN, ehsaasoN ko kaagaz pe utaarti rahiye... shukriyaa

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16th September 2011, 05:42 PM

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Veena jii....bahut khoob likha aapne...dil ki baat sahi lafzoN mei kahi aapne....tabhi to kahte hai ki ISHQ aache bhale ensaaN ko behka deta hai....

keep writing
god bless u
thanks a lot

ishq ke chakkar ne bhalo bhalo ko mara
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16th September 2011, 05:58 PM

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ishq ke chakkar ne bhalo bhalo ko mara
fir bhi chute na ye kaisa ishq ajab nyara
hmmmmmmmmm...........sahi hai jii


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16th September 2011, 09:59 PM

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rahgir manjil ka kya thikana
aapki tarif se aasan gujara
sukriya, pryass rahega
geto me kahi ho naam hamara
Aapke jawaab me kuch aashar yaad aa rahe hain, kabhi likhaa thaa chahta hoon aap padheN...


Aatee nahi ho Saamne Lekin Mujhe Yaqee'N hai,
Chupke Se Tum bhi Padhtee ho Mere Kalaaam ko.

GhazloN Mein merii jab huaa Zikre-Sanam kabhi,
LafzoN meiN kho kar DhooNdti ho apne Naam ko.


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18th September 2011, 02:07 AM

Acchi soch hai..bas yuhi likhte rahiye,aap ko dhek kar hume bhi likhne housla milta rahega..


Tareef ke liye sukriya,tareef ke kabil hum kahan,
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19th September 2011, 05:53 PM

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Acchi soch hai..bas yuhi likhte rahiye,aap ko dhek kar hume bhi likhne housla milta rahega..

housalo se housale mila kare hai
aap jaise housalo ko badaya karte hai

soch to soch hai ,
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A little bit more polish and this can be turned into diamond....


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A little bit more polish and this can be turned into diamond....
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