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tell me dear, will you be mine !! - 6th July 2015, 07:28 AM

When I walk
When I shine
Tell me dear, you will be mine !!

Despite the need
Despite the pain
when the matter's beyond
just loss and gain
when i look up and there's sunshine
tell me dear, will you be mine !!

I don't just care what people say
those aren't the rules by which i play
but when clock comes to half past nine
tell me dear, will you be mine !!

when i quietly walk these empty streets
yes you can hear when my heart beats
and when everyone says that you're damm fine
tell me dear, will you be mine !!



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6th July 2015, 10:21 AM

Very nicely written mast ji........simple yet deep... ...too good!!
Keep writing...



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6th July 2015, 10:28 AM

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When I walk
When I shine
Tell me dear, you will be mine !!

Despite the need
Despite the pain
when the matter's beyond
just loss and gain
when i look up and there's sunshine
tell me dear, will you be mine !!

I don't just care what people say
those aren't the rules by which i play
but when clock comes to half past nine
tell me dear, will you be mine !!

when i quietly walk these empty streets
yes you can hear when my heart beats
and when everyone says that you're damm fine
tell me dear, will you be mine !!


amazing ... truly amazing bro.......................

just like a miracle in front.... keep writing lovely romantic posts like this.... take care

Reps added...... from the bottom of my heart.

Shaad....


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8th July 2015, 08:07 AM

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Very nicely written mast ji........simple yet deep... ...too good!!
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Thanks Madhu, appreciate your pat on the back for this...trying to do different things in different genre and good words are always a boost..



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amazing ... truly amazing bro.......................

just like a miracle in front.... keep writing lovely romantic posts like this.... take care

Reps added...... from the bottom of my heart.

Shaad....
Bhai thanks for the appreciation...I will keep trying such experiments all i need is you by my side



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Heart touching and romantic.... keep writing anu bhai

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Heart touching and romantic.... keep writing anu bhai

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