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kya piiyeN, kya chhalkaayeN saheb.......Ghazal -
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aadaab dosto
dostoN aur khair-khwaahoN ki bohat de'r se shikaayateN aa rahi haiN ke mehfil meiN aap shirkat nahiiN karte ab miyaaN uski wajaah yeh hai ke tabiyat in dinoN kuch aisi hai ke jism sheeshe ke ghar ki maaniNd maloom hota hai ba-har-haal ek Ghazal haazir hai, saada si hai dekheN shaayad kisi kaam ki ho mula'iiza farmaayeN : kya piiyeN, kya chhalkaayeN saheb buuNd-buuNd pe kya itraayeN saheb chhoR deN usko, bhool jaayeN saheb hau'sla itna kahaaN se laayeN saheb mohabbat ki mareez-e-Gham se baateN inko lil'laah chup karaayeN saheb umr bhar aik hi mushkil rahi hai kis tarah dil ko behlaayeN saheb uTh chuke haiN raah tak'ne waale ab aap aayeN ya na aayeN saheb kaun ki raah, raah-e-maqtal hai be-jhijhak huqm farmaayeN saheb nahiiN lauTeNge ab guzre hue din kaise "maikash" ko samjhaayeN saheb maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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14th July 2009, 06:06 AM
Hello sir,
First of all I'm feeling so nice to be the first one to reply ur post ... just feeling lucky!!! kaise hain aap? aapki ki ghazal behaat aur bahut pasand aayiii... kayii barr hum kuch beyaan nahi kar paaten hain ..kuch esi hi hain aapki ghazal.. umeed karti hu hume aapki aur ghazal's ke saath aate raaye  aate rahye mehfil saajte rahye.... Dua karti hu aapki har ek khwaish purii ho ... zindgaii kaun sa rukh modh leti yeh koi nahi jaanta take care mandeep ~ Mandeep Kaur ~ |
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14th July 2009, 07:12 AM
maikash saheb . pahli baar padh raha hun aapko ......
lekin is gahzal ke baad apki bahut ghazlen padhi maine .... bas kya batyen shaeb khuda kare zor-e-kalam aur jyada............... __ kya piiyeN, kya chhalkaayeN saheb buuNd-buuNd pe kya itraayeN saheb sahi bahut sahi .......... chhoR deN usko, bhool jaayeN saheb hau'sla itna kahaaN se laayeN saheb kya baat hai . umda kaha hai apne....... khyaal sada sa aur itna sadaa byaan ki intaa ho gayee mohabbat ki mareez-e-Gham se baateN inko lil'laah chup karaayeN saheb ye to bas ..... ji bas kash aisa kuch humme bhi hota badi baten chote se misre mai ...... kyaa baat hai umr bhar aik hi mushkil rahi hai kis tarah dil ko behlaayeN saheb khoob ji khoob ........... uTh chuke haiN raah tak'ne waale ab aap aayeN ya na aayeN saheb jabardast .......... koe jabab nahi ..... mere pas maine apki kuch hi ghazel padhi hai ..... par ye wali to kyamat hai ........ bahut saaf khyaal saaf byaan hai aisa kuch mujhme bhi aa jaye ... kash aap likhte rahe ... aur hume padhate rahe kahi bhi likhe hume zaroor batyen |
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Mashallah behad khoobsurat likha hai aapne Maikash jii.......har sher lajawaab hai ,saari kahani chand lafzoN me bayaaN kardi hai aapne...... yuhi mehfil me shirkat kiya kijiye...... duaoN ke saath....... Zainy PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya... Nm |
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14th July 2009, 01:41 PM
umr bhar aik hi mushkil rahi hai
kis tarah dil ko behlaayeN saheb uTh chuke haiN raah tak'ne waale ab aap aayeN ya na aayeN saheb Maikash bhai, Bahut khoob likha hai aapne....Bahut khushi hoti hai aapko mehfil me shirkat karte dekh... yun hi aate rahiye aur apna khayaal rakhiye.... Dil se daad haazir hai aapke liye... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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14th July 2009, 04:30 PM
AadaaB Maikash Jee
Subhan Allah...... Aapki gazal ne hume bahut mutasir kiya hai... Aaj ek behtreeN gazal per dil se nikali daad kabool kijiye.......... Khuda aapko salamt rakhe, Aur bhi aisi behtreen gazal aapke kalam se nikalti rahe .. Yehi dua rahengi humari... Khush rahiye, Bazam mein aate rahiye... Khuda Hafez..... 
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Maikash jiiii namaskaar....lijiye hum aapki gazal par phir se hazir haiN, bahut kuch poochna chah rahi hoon par yeh soch kar nahi poooch rahi ki aap phir kaheNge ki aap etne mushkil sawaal kyuN poocti ho sirf gazal ki hi baat kareN to SAHEB gazal ka har sher masha-allah...kehar barpa raha hai.....sabhi sher ek se badkar ek hai. nahiiN lauTeNge ab guzre hue din kaise "maikash" ko samjhaayeN saheb es sher se bahut kuch samaj mein aa raha hai phir bhi agar aap mere pm ka reply tafseel se deNge to jayada accha hoga apni sehat ka khayal rakhiye bhagwaan ji aapko acchi sehat aur lambi umr deN....ameeN duao.n ke saath .....Sunita Thakur..... यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया ....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए... 
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15th July 2009, 12:41 AM
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aapki duaaoN ka tah-e-dil se mashkuur-o-mamnoon huuN rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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15th July 2009, 12:43 AM
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Maikash Ji...........aapki SAHEB nazm ke sabhi sher zindgi ke chote-chote pehluo ko bahut hi sanzidgi ke saath chhute hai.....bahut khoob likha hai aapne........dil se daad detaa hu....har ek sher ko..........  YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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15th July 2009, 05:18 AM
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16th July 2009, 03:18 PM
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aapne mujh na ehl ki kaavish to pehli baar padha aur us par apni pasaNdiidagi ki mohar bhi lagayi ye mere liye behadd khushi ki baat hai daad ke liye shukruguzaar huuN aur ummiid karta huuN ke duusri Ghazliiyaat bhi aapko pasaNd aayeNgii rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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18th July 2009, 11:01 AM
Very beautiful lines Maikash,
these two were terrific mohabbat ki mareez-e-Gham se baateN inko lil'laah chup karaayeN saheb umr bhar aik hi mushkil rahi hai kis tarah dil ko behlaayeN saheb |
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21st July 2009, 03:38 PM
azeez maikash bhaii,
kaise ho? oopparwaala aap ko khushiyaa.n aur achchi sehat ataa kare.. aaj kaafi dino ko aap ko paDhne ka mauqa milaa.. aap ki yeh Ghazal behad achchhi lagiii.. aap shayri.com ke un logo.n me.n shaamil hai.n jin ke Ghazalo.n se mai.n bohat zyaadah prbhavit hota huu.n, ya phir yeh kahuu.n to bhi Ghalat nahii.n hoga ki, shayri.com par mere sab se pasandidah shayar aur insaan aap hi hai.n .. aur mai.n hamesha sab se yeh kahta huu.n ki sher kaho to maikash ke jaise maikash bhaii, aap ne is Ghazal par jo radeef liya hai woh bohat dilkash hai aur mujhe behad zyaadah pasand bhii hai.. kaii baar koshish kii,ki is radeef par ek Ghazal likhuu.n par, kaii baar waqt ki kamii aur kaii baar ehsaas ki kamii ke liye Ghazal matle se aage nahii.n baDhaa paaya.. ab to pata bhi nahii.n ki woh matla kahaa.n hai.... khair, ab aap ki Ghazal par aate hai.n.. chhoR deN usko, bhool jaayeN saheb hau'sla itna kahaaN se laayeN saheb kuchh der pahle, interview waale thread par aap ka post dekha tha, aur ab yeh sher ... ek aashiq ke dil ki baat aur dil ka dard bhala aap se behtar kaun jaan sakta hai... sher behad khuub hai!umr bhar aik hi mushkil rahi hai kis tarah dil ko behlaayeN saheb. waah wa! waah wa! uTh chuke haiN raah tak'ne waale ab aap aayeN ya na aayeN saheb bohat khuub! nahiiN lauTeNge ab guzre hue din kaise "maikash" ko samjhaayeN saheb shaandaar maqta! daad! maiksah bhai, mai.n bhi yahi kahta huu.n, maikash bhaii ki guzre huye din nahii.n lauTe.nge, to, phir guzre huye lamho.n me.n jeena khaa.n tak sahii hai.. behtar hai, ki guzre huye din ko na rokar aane waale din ko haseen banaane ki ksohish kii jaaye! Ghazal par dhero.n daad aur mubaaraq baad! apna khayaal rakhiye Mayank |
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22nd July 2009, 07:24 PM
Huzur Maikash Sahab...Sat Sri Akal...
aaj ek arse baad Pulkit ki "Pehli Koshish" ka reply is bazm mein keench laya...aapka kalaam dekha to ruk gaya...kyunki ...aapko padne ka bahut kam mauka milta hai.... aapki kalaam mein abhi bhi vo tez hai... Aapka apna........... **(*·.¸(`·.¸ ¸.·´)¸.·*)** *·.¸Paigaam -e- Aman¸.·* **(¸.·´(¸.·* *·.¸)`·.¸)** ~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~* inhan ankhaaon vicho kadi, tere hanju vaghe si..... aaj ki hoye, jehda ^AMAN^ da lahoo vagda ae...... AMAN RAHI |
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22nd July 2009, 07:49 PM
Sir,
Really Aapne kalam tod diye aur roshnai pee gaye, Superb! bahut hi achchha likha hai. Dil se daad kubul kijiye. Ye teen sher to tremendous, elegant, mind blowing and whatelse a man can admire-everything hai Ji. Bahut hi khoob Ab Aap itni pyaari rachnaaye laane meiN itni der karenge to hum Fan log to pareshaan honge hi. Upar walaa aapko achchhi sehat de (Hope you get well soon). Take care umr bhar aik hi mushkil rahi hai kis tarah dil ko behlaayeN saheb uTh chuke haiN raah tak'ne waale ab aap aayeN ya na aayeN saheb nahiiN lauTeNge ab guzre hue din kaise "maikash" ko samjhaayeN saheb With best wishes -Rashid Quote:
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23rd July 2009, 02:52 AM
MaikasH Sahib!...
Kaafi SaMay BaaD aaYa Mehfil MeiN... AaP Ke QalaaM paR nazaR gayi Aur Usko Pade Bina Raha nahiN Gaya!!! Sach kahE to PuraNe Din AaJ bhi BahuT yaaD aaTe Hai... PaR ab Vo kaBhi WaPas nahiN aa SakTe! BeeTa hua LamHa Jaane Ke BaaD laautTa nahIN hai! behaD purasar Qalaam likha AaP Ne... Padne Ke baaD Aaisa Lega Jaisa ki Aapne Hum ko Likh Diya! .. Wahh JanaB kya likha hai! AaP ne! umr bhar aik hi mushkil rahi hai kis tarah dil ko behlaayeN saheb Ek Sach ... uTh chuke haiN raah tak'ne waale ab aap aayeN ya na aayeN saheb Behad Khoob SuraT AlfaaZon se TareeF Poori NahiN ho sakTi hai! QalaaM ApanE AaP mein Ek TareeF hai! Khayal RakhiiyeGa! AaP Ka DosT -------------- Amrit |
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23rd July 2009, 11:51 AM
maiQash saahib !
janaab kaisii tabiiyat hai aapki ... ? behad purasar ghazal kahii aapne , ek arse ke baad parha aapko ... aapse guzaarish hai ki buzm meiN shirkat farmaate raheiN aur apnii sukhanfahmii se nawaazte raheiN ! daad Qabuul farmaaye ... apna khyaal rakheiN ! |
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26th July 2009, 12:43 AM
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Zainy sahiba, aadaab hausla-afza'ii ke liye behadd shukurguzaar huuN jee aapka ummiid to hai ke aane waale kuch roz mehfil meiN haaziiri lagtii rahe, kohshish to ba-har-haal rahegi rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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26th July 2009, 01:02 AM
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Pulkit miyaaN namaste bhai raaz ki yeh hai ke yeh Ghazal mehfil ki nazar faqat aapki ki wajah se huii hai, aapne meri dukhtii rag ko kuch is tarah se cheRaa ke Ghazal post karni paDii vagarnaa yeh Ghazal bhi pata nahiiN kitni aur GhazloN ki tarah radii ki kisi Tokarii meiN paDii hoti ba-har-haal aap ne daad se nawaaza, shukriya dekheN phir dobara kab mulaaqaat ho rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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26th July 2009, 01:05 AM
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aadaab miyaaN bhaii yeh baat mere liye baa'is-e-massarrat hai ke mujh naalaayiq ki yeh adnaa si kaavish aap jaise saahib-e-shauq ko mutaasir karne ke kaam bhi aa sakti hai sitaayish ke liye shukriya qabuul farmaayeN rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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27th July 2009, 11:23 AM
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Aapka dil dukhaane kaa yaa puraani baatein kuredne ka to mera katai iraada nahin thha... Magar mujhe is baat ki khushi hai ke aapne mehfil me is bahaane shirkat to kii... Bhai... you are one of those people, whom many of aspiring shayars look up to and yours being present on the site would kep them associated too... Read your reply on Kshitiz's post... Aapne jin teen logon ki baat kii, un teenon ki hi mehfil me shirkat bahut kam ho gayi hai... Magar mujhe yakeen hai aapko yahaan dekh, woh khud ko rok nahin paayenge... Meri yeh personal request hai aapse... ke yahaan aate rahiyega... apna acche se khayal rakhiye... God Bless... Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai |
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27th July 2009, 12:25 PM
umr bhar aik hi mushkil rahi hai
kis tarah dil ko behlaayeN saheb maikasH sahab, aadaab, bahot umda ghazal hai..yeh sher to jaise dil me ghar kar gaya..god bless u...khush rahiye aur mehfil haiN shirkat karte rahiye.. cheers, Pradhyuman gore ghareeban hai ye 'bismil', kyun tu naashaad nazar aata hai? musht-e-khaak hai basi yahan, bata kahan fuwaad nazar aata hai? -------------------------------------------------- |
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1st August 2009, 01:16 PM
chhoR deN usko, bhool jaayeN saheb
hau'sla itna kahaaN se laayeN saheb nahiiN lauTeNge ab guzre hue din kaise "maikash" ko samjhaayeN saheb Huzur, Tasleemaat..... Tafseelee khat apki pichlee ghazal pe likh chukee hei Maham aur baar baar apni tafseelee baat se apko nahi pershan karna chahtee hei , Bas itna hee ke ye ghazal bhi apki hasb e riwayat behud dil ke qareeb lagee aur dil ko ishee wajhe se shayed bhali lagee...... Jo ashaar ap ke raqam kiye vo khaaskar ruh pe naqsh bana gaye Ajub bebasi hei ye ishq ki ...........jo in ashaar mein mehsus kee Maham ne Daad , gu ke dene ka saleeqa nahi , magar haazir karte chalen socha, Sada khush rahayae Maham Azmi |
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5th August 2009, 05:19 AM
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Sunita Jee namaskaar meri Ghazal par aapka phir se swaagat hai aapne to mushkil sawaal puuchne meiN koi degree kee maloom hoti hai !! jo ash'aar aapko pasaNd aaye unke liye shukriya "Tikaa" lijiye aur aap kehti haiN ke maqte se aapko kuch-kuch samajh aaya to us par mera kehna yeh hai ke duusrey ash'aar bhi "youN hi" nahiiN kahe gaye  , aap ishaara samjheiN to janaab Javed Akhtar saheb ka ek she'r hai :talkhiyaaN kaise na hoN ash'aar meiN mujh pe jo guzrii mujhe hai yaad sab in dinoN mere message box ka buraa haal hai lekin aapse vaada hai ke jaane se pehle har ek khat ka jawaab tafseel se zaroor duuNga, aap dheeraj rakhiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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namaste bhai daad aur duaaoN ke liye khaaksaar ka shukriya "Tikaa" lijiye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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27th July 2011, 03:34 PM
Maikash Sahab
Aadaab ! Do Din Se Garmaa Garam Bahas Dekh Aur PaDhkar ... Kahi Aapki Yeh Ghazal Zehan MeN Utar Aai ... Aaj Phir Se Isse PaDhaa Toh ... Wahi Taazgi Mili ... Bahut Umdaa Khayaalaat Arz KiyeN HaiN .... Khaaskar Yeh Do Sher Zehan MeN Der Tak Thahar Gaye .... umr bhar aik hi mushkil rahi hai kis tarah dil ko behlaayeN saheb uTh chuke haiN raah tak'ne waale ab aap aayeN ya na aayeN saheb Ek Baar Phir Se Dil se DheroN Daad Aur Mubaaraqbaad Qubuul KareN ... ! Khush RaheN ... ! Apna Theek Se Khayaal RakheN ... ! DuaaoN Ke Saath ... ! YuuN Besabab Aansoo Aate NahiN Lag Zaroor Koii Baat Dil Ko Rahii Hai ... Fareb Kaa ChaDhtaa Bazaar Dekh Insaaf Se Bastii Khaalii Ho Rahii Hai ... ---Naresh Mehra---- |
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27th July 2011, 04:53 PM
Maikash bhai
aadaab aaj phir kaafi arse baad yahan aana huaa. aap ke kalaam ko parhe baghair raha naheenjaa sakta. bohat khoob janaab. choti behar, aap ka tishna aur barjast lehja, gham e jaanaan aur gham e zamaana ka khoobsurat imtizaaj. kyaa baat hai. jitni daad aapko utni hi mere bhai pulkit ko bhi. bohat bohat shukriyaa aap ka. God bless you. regrds musharrafhusain |
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27th July 2011, 05:49 PM
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aadaab musharraf bhai, ek ar'sey baad aapse muKhaatib ho raha huuN, Ghzal ki paza'raii ke liye shukurguzaar huuN aapka, wazan meiN thoDi gadbadation hai , iski ek duusri suurat shayad Ghar meiN kisi kaGhaz par paDii huii hai kisi koney meiNaap un giney-chuney logoN meiN se ek haiN jinko maiN aksar is bazm meiN dhooNdta rehta huuN bohat khushi huii aapko yahaaN dekh kar mehr'baani karke aate raha kariye rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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27th July 2011, 05:52 PM
maikaSh bhaiya:
SSA bas itnaa hi kahuNgaa ki aapki GhazaloN ko paDhnaa aik alag hi baat haii.. ehsaas laa-jawaab! dil se daad aur duaaeN KhuSh raheN... apnaa Khayaal raKheN duaaoN ke saath ijaazat Jai Shree Krishnaa aapka ~Dhaval |
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27th July 2011, 05:52 PM
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Ghazal is qaabil nahiiN hai jitni daad apne di, shukriya bhai rab raakha maikash is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai maikash ............................... |
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28th July 2011, 12:38 PM
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Radhika  Seene Me Zakham Utarey Chale Gaye Jo Humpe Guzari Guzarey Chale Gaye Woh Aayega Ek Din Milne Humse Naam Uska Hi Pukarey Chale Gaye E-mail : radhika.nm2@gmail.com |
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