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20th July 2005, 07:23 PM

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Socha na atha pyar hume iss mod pe laayega
Us Ajnabii bin jeena yun mushkil ho jaayega

Chahte hain ek dooje ko mohabbat se jyada
Kya pata tha ki zindagi mai yeh lamha bhi aayega


PS: Bhaiyaa, u brought life to this dull competition...


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai
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20th July 2005, 07:30 PM

Kavita


Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Ajnabi khayaal sang laati hai
Rimjhim Runjhun si dharti par bajti hai
Tumhara pyar mehsoos karati hai

Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Hazaar sawaal mann mai oothati hai
Jhilmil kar dharti par chalakti hai
Aankhen jhoom ooth paani barsati hai

Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Tumhari khusboo sang laati hai
Ithlaake dharti par barasti hai
Tumhare paas hone ka ehsaas dilati hai

Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Humare pyar ko badha kar jaati hai
Cham cham kar dharti par khanakti hai
Hum ek doosre ka bana jaati hai

Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Tumhari yaad sang laati hai...


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
Lagta hai is baar "Pulkit", kismat teri bhi rang laayii hai

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20th July 2005, 08:10 PM

Gaana - Zindagi se ulajhkar saara din maikasho ye bhi kaam kar lena

Singer - Pankaj Udhas


Ajanbee bankar hi mujhase tum thodi si baat kar lena
Ajanbee bankar hi mujhase tum thodi si baat kar lena

Mile thay jo hum pahale kabhi un palo ko yaad kar lena

Ajanbee bankar hi mujhase tum thodi si baat kar lena
Aise to Zindagi ke mehfil mein kayi haseen pal aate hai
Aise to Zindagi ke mehfil mein kayi haseen pal aate hai
sajati thi jo khushiya dilo me unhe bhi yaad kar lena
sajati thi jo khushiya dilo me unhe bhi yaad kar lena

Mile thay jo hum pahale kabhi un palo ko yaad kar lena
Ajanbee bankar hi mujhase tum thodi si baat kar lena

Mana ki ab humaare raaste behad alag hai
Maana ki ab humaare raaste behad alag hai
Kabhi in raasto ke padaw me mujhe bhi yaad kar lena
Kabhi in raasto ke padaw me mujhe bhi yaad kar lena


mile thay jo hum kabhi un palo ko yaad kar lena

Ajanbee bankar hi mujhase tum thodi si baat kar lena
Tum thodi si baat kar lena


gaana ke liye meri pahali koshish.. hope sabko achhi lage..


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20th July 2005, 08:22 PM

Thanks,Chote Bhaiya...!

Aaj pehli baar Sher Khan ko Sher se takkar houi...!
(Aur han...Sherniyan se bhi)Non bracket wala dialogue
film Zanzeer se hai

Wonderful job...Little Brother! I just adore your work!

Ab mazaa aa raha hai...!

Bhaiya...



Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai


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'Sonnet...!' - 20th July 2005, 08:25 PM

Sonnet : Dreaming of a Stranger

At night when I lay down in my bed to sleep,
I dream of a stranger whom I can never see,
These feelings that I feel for her are so deep,
And I usually wonder what will become of me…
I never thought that I could be in love like this,
At first I told myself that it is only infatuation
For somebody, I know I can never ever kiss…
Is this love or maybe some kind of affection.

With her I keep sharing something very rare
In my daily prayers she is the one I claim for,
Even if I feel she will never be with me here
Yet day by day I care for her more and more.

How I long for moments of happiness and bliss
and I wish you could know that only you I miss…

I have written this one in the Shakespearian style :
Rhymes with the following pattern: Ab ab cd cd ef ef gg


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Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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Buddhu :) - 20th July 2005, 08:28 PM

I will just keep smilling **Pulkit, Great **Good Luck Everyone~*~God bless You All.

Keep smilling.......**


*Aapni Parwaaz-e-Takhayyull Hain Zamane Se Juda
Jiss Jagah Koyi Na Pahuncha Wahaan Tak Pahunche
Main Samajhta Huun Harr Dil Mein Khuda Rehta Hain
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20th July 2005, 08:55 PM

ek kavita fir se.. maine pichhali kavota me gadbad ki hai rules ko lekar.. hehehehe abhi gin gin ke likha hai.. hope sahi ho..



Wo shaam mujhe yaad hai aaj bhi
Aane waali thee ghar ek ajanbee
Wo kaun “tha” ya “thi” uska
Tha pata nahi, kar rahe thay
Intezaar hum sabhi…

Chaand sa tukada aaya mere ghar
Khush ho lataaon si mai jhum uthi
Baharo ne kiya swagat jhoomkar
Kabhi na bhoole wo sama
Chaandani har taraf fail uthi

Dekh usaka salona sa chehara
Chaand bhi khudpe sharmaaya
Dhak liya usane khudko badalo se
Hawa ke jhonko ne usako behlaaya
Dekh use mai fir se jee uthi…

Mai puchh rahi thi khud se
Chaand hai pyaara ya meri chandani
Shayd jhuk gaya wo aur sharm se
Megh na usake baate keh di
Tabhi to has ke baras padi..

Rikjhim barsaat ne kiya ..
Swagat meri laadali ka
Pyaar se kehlaayi wo mahima
Nyuchhawar meri jaan hui uspar
Mere khushi ka pyaar us par jo barsa


Dedicated to my love... My Dear Mahima







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Quote:
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Jaan kar acha lagaa ki aap nathkhat bhi hein...Garima ji!Weisse
hum bhi kouch kam nahin...hehehe!Hamare ouss janam ke Mata-
Pita par bahout taras aa raha hai ab!Na jaane hum ne ounko
kya kya goul khilaaye the...

Apna khayaal rakhiyega...


hehehehe bahoot bura haal kiya hoga.. afterall do shaitaan bhai bahan aur kya kar sakate hai... shayad isliye bhagwaan ne socha hoga ki abaki baar inhe door door de taaki is janam ke maata pita thoda kam pareshaan ho.. .. hahahahaha..

mai to akele hi sabko tang karane ke liye kaafi hoon.. jaane agale janam ke liye bhagwaan ji kya programming ki ho..


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20th July 2005, 10:03 PM

Gazal


Maine chhutpan me ek khwaab dekha tha
Pyaara sa ho pariwaar ye armaan mera tha

Chal padi zindagi ki gaadi ajanbee raho par
Kayi padaw mile jinpar nahi mera basera tha

Jannat ka khwaab, jisame ho bahoot pyaar
Aise pagali sapano ka dil me mere dera tha

Abhi haqiqat ki duniya se waasta nahi tha
Sapno me hi mere jindagi ka rain-basera tha

Hui kuchh badi, kadam aaye dharatal par
Sapno ko hota dekh ulta yun roya man mera tha

Waqt ki pehchaan hote hi badi ho gayi main
Chuta wo lok jaha sapno ka sirf rain-basera tha

Ro pade nain dekh ke beehad dharati ki haalat
Uff kya yehi swapn jagat ka drishya mera tha

Garima-e-waqt ki aur pehcaan karani thi mujhe
Islliye haqiqat ki taraf chal pada kadam mera tha


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20th July 2005, 10:31 PM

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Aiye ajabee musafir tu ruk to jara…

Aiye ajanbee ruk tujhe tera waasta
haiy kathin ye tera raasta
Dard hi dard tune bhara hai yeha
Sun jara meri baate tu sun jara

Mujahko pata hai tujhe jana kaha
Lekin tu apani manjil ko,
Dhundhega kaise ye to bata
Dard se bhara hai ye saara jahaa

Aiye ajabee musafir tu ruk to jara
Khusiyo ki galiyan
Phoolo ki kaliyan
Paise se to milati nahi
Fir unhe to dundhega kaise kahan?

Dil jalake dilko jo tune rulaaya
Kisi ke ghar ko aag lagaaya
Pyaar se bhare bagiya me kaanta dabaaya
Kaise milega tujhe khushiyo ka jahaan

Aiye ajanabee musafir bata?
Aiye ajanbee musafir ruk to jara


Note - yeha par us ajanbee musafil ko ghrida sthaayi bhaaw se dekha gaya hai..beech becch me krodh ka anubhaaw prakat huwa hai.. aur vishmay bhaaw kaa aana jaana laga hai.. kulmilakar yeha roudra roop ki adhikata hai.. jaha jugupsa , veeshmay, aadi ki sanchaari bhaaw aur anubhaaw paida hue hai... mujhe jitna samajh me aaya wo maine likha hai.. agar mai kahi galat hoon ye kisi ko isase achha pata ho to plss dictate kare..

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Garima


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20th July 2005, 10:52 PM

Kavita

Ri! Ri! Pawan sun, na ajanbee ban
Mere baato manme gun
Kaam tujhe karna hai ek mera
Dil laga ke sun

Le jaana hai ek sandesh tujhe
Kehana hai unase jo baat mujhe
Karati hoon yaad
Raat din unhe

Jaa kah unase mujhe yaad aati hai
Jab bhi koi kali dekhati hoon
Usaki yaad satati hai
Bahoot yaad aati hai

Kuchh door par hai wo bagiya meri
Jaha rahate hai gulaab aur kaneri
Ek hi kyaari me hai wo
Bane thay dost wo baat maan ke meri

Aur puchh lena, kya unako bhi ..
Kabhi yaad aati hai unaki ye saheli
Ya ajanee bana bhool baithe hai
Jabse chhuti mujhase meri wo gali


Note - yeha paudho aur pawan ka maanwikaran kiya gaya hai..

vaatsalya sneh ka prabhaaw is puri kavita par hai isliye yeha vatsalya ras se otprot hai..

mai bas itana hi bata saki.. pls koi aur bata paaye to jaroor bataiyega..


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20th July 2005, 11:20 PM

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Ajanbee ek aisa vishay hai jis par jitna bhi likh doon kam hi lagta hai.
Kyunki jindagi ka harek pal pichhale pal ke liye ajanbee hi hota hai.
Hum jab maa ki konkh se bahar dharati par aate hai to sabse pahale ajanbee waatawaran me khood ko paate hai.
9 mahine maa ke garbh me surakhsit bitaaya hota hai, fir achanak se sabkuchh badal jaata hai.
Chaaloon hota hai waha se ek safar,har taraf anjaan logo se, anjaan si duniya.
Fir hum unhe dhire dhire apana bana lete hai. Samay ke saath wo sab hume apane lagane lagate hai. Ab apani maa apane papa apane bhai bahan sabkuchh apana dikhata hai. Bachapan abhi is apanepan par chal hi reha hota hai. Fir kuchh ajanbee humaari tarah chhote bache humaare apane dost banate hai.
Ye khel yehi khatm nahi hota hai…
Samay ki har sidhi waqt ka har padaw hume ajanbee fir apno ke daur tak le jaati hai..
Aaj jo humaare liye ajanbee hai kal wo apano ki ginati me aane lagate hai..
Dekhiye na koi apana khaas rishtedaar to koi dost to koi apana dushman hi sahi.

Ek taraf to kahate hai usase mera koi waasta nahi aur wahi dusari taraf kahate hai arre isase mera koi waasta nahi ye to MERA DUSHMAN hai dekha.. yeha bhi apanapan aur paraayapan aa hi gaya.

Ye ajanbe se apnepan tak ka safar itna itna lamba hai ki ispar jitna bhi likhoon kam hi rehata hai……..ajanbee huh


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ek ajnabi......... haan ek ajnabi hin toh the wo

wo ajnabi hin sahi par...... behad pyaara tha wo

bas do mithe bol bolkar.... bann gaya tha mera pana wo

do dinn ke saath se hin ....uttarr chuka tha dill main wo

ajnabi se itna gehra rishta..... bada mehnga pada wo

wo chala gaya khushiyaa lekar... gumm ka dariyaa de gaya wo


pyaar koii bol nahii.n, pyaar aavaaz nahii.n
ek khaamoshii hai sunatii hai kahaa karatii hai
naa ye bujhatii hai naa rukatii hai naa Thaharii hai kahii.n
nuur kii buu.Nd hai sadiyo.n se bahaa karatii hai
sirf ehasaas hai ye, ruuh se mahasuus karo
pyaar ko pyaar hii rahane do, koii naam naa do.....
hamane dekhii hai in aa.Nkho.n kii mahakatii khushabuu
haath se chhuuke ise rishto.n kaa ilzaam na do...........
   
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20th July 2005, 11:58 PM

Kahani


Saaany saany karati nistabhd khamoshi…… dharati ki tarah aaksh bhi khamosh tha. ….. raat ke ghupp andhere me dur dur tak kahi kisi ka aana jaana nahi tha…..
Nisha apane kamare me baith kuchh soch rahi thi.. … tabhi achanak dard me chikhati hui kisi ajanbee agantuk ki chikh sunaayi padi.

Pls koi hai to mujhe bacha lo.. jindagi bhar aabhari rahungee…aawaj dard aur darr se kaanp rahi thi


Nisha hadbada apane khwaabo ke duniya se jaagi… Wo ghar me akeli thi isliye achanak se darwaaja kholana uchit nahi laga. Lekin aawaj ka dard use khiinch raha tha .. abhi vichaaro ke udhedbund me thi hi ki ek saath kayi kadamo ki aawaj usake kaano se takraayi..

Wo aurat fir chillayi plsss darwaaja kholo mujhe bacha lo.. mai jindagi bhar aabhari rahungee..

Is baar Nisha kuchh jyaada nahi soch paayi.. usane jhat se darwaaja khola.
Wo aurat andar ki taraf dudate hue aa gayi.darr ke maare darwaaja usane khood hi band kar liya.

Bikhare baal..naye par fate kapade maano daudate waqt jhaadiyo se lagkar fate ho.. haath aur pairo me kaafi ghaanw thay jiname se abhi bhi khoon bah raha tha.. baat saaf thi ghaanw toorant ke lage hue thay..

Wo aurat andar aate hi thodi der me behosh gir padi.. Nisha se usaki haalat na dekhi gayi.. usane usaki marham patti ki. Thodi der me us aurat ko hosh aa gaya.. usane bataaya ki kuchh gunde usaki jaan lena chahate thay..

Baat bas yeha par khatm hui.. subah hote hi wo aurat Nisha ka shukriya karake chali gayi..

Nisha bhi in sab maamlo me jyaada na padate hue apana kaam karane lagi.

Ek baar office se lautate waqt Nisha ka accident ho gaya….is sahar me wo akeli thi.. sabne police maamla samajh kar use raaste par hi pade rehana diya.. Nisha behos besudh road par padi thi….


Nisha ne aankh khola wo kisi mahlnuma ghar me soyi hui thi.. usane puchha mai kaha hoon.. achanak se ek aawaj aayi.. Nisha abhi leti raho tumhe aaram ki sakht jaroorat hai..

Aap.. aap ka.. kaun hai…. dhiri tharthari aajwa me Nisha ne puchha..

Tumhe shayad yaad na ho lekin mujhe yaad hai.. tum wahi ladaki ho jisane kabhi meri jaan bachayi thi… Nisha ko ek ke baad ek saari baate yaad aati gayi… usaki aankhe us ajanbe…. Nahi nahi wo ab ajanbee kaha rahi.. us devi ke saamne natmastak hoti gayi……..


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21st July 2005, 12:24 AM

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English Poetry

I met a stranger in the darkness of night
Worried she was, so hugged me tight

that touch of hers changed whole of my life
We got closer, she became my wife

That kiss of hers refreshed my Soul n Heart
A promise we made, never to part

Whether in sunshine or in moonlight
Thoughts of her took me to flight

Our Love grew as the moments passed by
That affection of hers made my heart cry

Three words, she wishpered silently in my ears
I love u 'jaanu', cant see you in tears

Lucky was I to get the prettiest of girls
With every smile, she kept spreading the pearls

Heavenly abode, she made that small house of mine
Every corner reflected her love so divine

She, My Angel, always encourages my tries
Her love in my heart always comforts my cries

Never did i try with the feelings even slight
She's the one for whom always i will write


PS: Absolutely no idea about the techiniques of this thing.. had to be 20 lines... so made it 20...hope rest is fine...

hey brother!!!!

wow this is simply mind blowing and amazing sweetu!! every line is so sweet and drenched in deep luv

too good,,marvelous

Luv ya
Priya


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STRANGER - 21st July 2005, 02:38 AM

STRANGER

Stranger that he was, from this world apart
Came near me, looked deep in eyez, just touched my heart!

Held my face in his hands, brought me closer
So different was his style, he was like no other!

Softness in his touch, Magic was his personality
Cute was his smile, this was just rare reality!

Innocence on his face, sweet were his talks
Being with me or not, he still became my shadow, was always with me in walks!

Everywhere he started to be, in my heart, in my mind
Treated me like a princess, oh! He was so kind!

He made all dreams come true, had sparkles in his eyes
Gave me happiness of this world, he was a gentleman - he was so wise!

Hands in Hands, together we always walked,
Someone can be as caring like him, never had I thought!

Spent every moment in love, watched the sunset and sunshine,
Happiness showered on us like this, the god is so divine!

He has captured my thoughts, resided in my heart
Has become a part of me, then never to part!

Without him today, I am a stranger from me
He changed my world completely, by saying three magic words, I love Thee!


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Priya


Akhihaan milaake chan'na paavi na Judayi Vey .......

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21st July 2005, 11:00 AM

Doha


Apani chuni raah par to jeet paa lete hai sabhi
Ajanbee raaste ko jeet le sikanadar kahlaaye wahi


Anant se bhi aage... itni si khwahish hai :)
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21st July 2005, 12:08 PM

Ghazal:Socha naa thha...

In this Ghazal.. Radeef and Kaafiya might confuse people.. So i m explaining it in detail...

Here Radeef and kaafiya are in one word...

In Aayengi, Sikhaayengi - 'yengi' is the Radeef and 'aa' is taken as the Kaafiya...so.. the same is followed...bachaayengi

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Ban Ajnabee woh aise merii zindagii me aayengi
Rakh haath mere sar pe mujhe jeena sikhaayengi

Chhupa mujhko woh apne aanchal kii chhaanv me
Duniyaa bhhar kii burii nazaron se bachaayengi

Bin aashirwaad ke unke meri subah na hogi poori
"Mera Baccha" keh mujh par yun pyaar lutaayengi

Pyaari is maa se kabhi sach me milna meraa hoga
Pehli hi mulakat me mujhe woh dil me bithaayengi

Banaa Dost woh mujhe padhaa karengi mere dil ko
Maa ban ke fir mujhe sahi raah bhii dikhaayengi

Mushkil hoga ek din bhi bin unke saath ke bitaana
Ehsaas apnaa liye yun mere dil me woh samaayengi

Jaaoonga jab kabhii bhii main milne ko unke aangan
Raahen sajaane ko meri palken apni wo bicchaayengi

Jiyegaa 'Pulkit' sar apnaa rakhkar unki god me hii
Pyaar-o-Dulaar woh is tarah mujh par barsaayengi


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21st July 2005, 12:34 PM

Ghazal

Ek ajnabee se humko pyar ho aayaa hai
Har pal oonhi ko dharkano mai basayaa hai

Baste hain subah shaam wohi humare zehan mai
Raat ko tasavvur mai oonke khayalon ne hakh jamayaa hai

Roothen jo hum oonse choti choti batoon par
Pyar ke meethe geet gaake ooshone hume manaya hai

Karte hain mohbbat oonse dil o jaan se jyada hum
Sirf oonhi ke pyar ka geet humne gungunaya hai

Alag na aho paayenge oonse ab kabhi hum
dil se satah nibhane ka mann humne banaya hai...


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Kavita: Posting this one agian.. as the last two lines were deleted somehow...

Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Ajnabi khayaal sang laati hai
Rimjhim Runjhun si dharti par bajti hai
Tumhara pyar mehsoos karati hai

Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Hazaar sawaal mann mai oothati hai
Jhilmil kar dharti par chalakti hai
Aankhen jhoom ooth paani barsati hai

Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Tumhari khusboo sang laati hai
Ithlaake dharti par barasti hai
Tumhare paas hone ka ehsaas dilati hai

Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Humare pyar ko badha kar jaati hai
Cham cham kar dharti par khanakti hai
Hum ek doosre ka bana jaati hai

Baarish jab bhi aati hai
Tumhari yaad sang laati hai...
Tan man meraa mehkaati hai
Ehsaas aur umag nayi jagaati hai...


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21st July 2005, 04:32 PM

Ghazal

Dhadkan mere is dil ki uski berukhi se thham jaati hai
Kyun us ajnabee ki har baat itna mujhko sataati hai

Pyaar kartaa hoon usse kyun is kadar main tootkar
Kyun dard uskaa dekh aankh merii bhi bhar aati hai

Laalii uske rukh ki bayaan kartii hai merii mohabbat
Tasavvur me mere aakar kyun fir woh sharmaati hai

Jaanti hai main karta hoon bepanaah mohabbat usse
Shaq karke mujh pe fir kyun, woh aise aazmaati hai

Socha kaii baar maine ke woh lagtii kyaa hai merii
Sapnon me mere aa kyun haq apnaa samjhaati hai

Zaroorat ban gayii hai wo merii saanson ke jaise
Kyun us bin zindagii ab lagtii diyaa bin baati hai


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'Qata...!' - 21st July 2005, 04:53 PM

Qata :

Mein ne swadesh ko na jaane kab ka chora
Maata Pita bhai behena aur saath sab ka chora
Teri ajnabi duniya main nafrat dekhne ki aas na thi
Lagta hai Khuda ne iss jahaan ko bin mazhab ka chora


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Doha

Ajnabee koii safar ho, yaa manzil ho ajnabee
Kucch kar guzarne ki himmat waala jeetega sahi


Kab sochaa thha milegaa humsafar "Shweta" jaisaa
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'Doha...!' - 21st July 2005, 04:56 PM

Doha :

Ajnabi jab dwaar par aay
Kuk.kur* dan.t diyo bataay

*Dog


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'Ghazal...!' - 21st July 2005, 04:59 PM

Ghazal :

Jo qaawi mantra na ban sake eisse koyi alfaaz nahin
Jo pyaar ke geet na gaa sake eissi koyi awaaz nahin

Mazhabi kitaab main jo talaasha wo ishk main hi mila
Hum ne jaana ki pyar se badhkar koyi namaaz nahin

Hamsafar ban ke jo saath de aur bevajeh ajnabi bane
Eisse insaan par ye khudrat bhi kabhi karta naaz nahin

Kitni niyaaz hai ki mein tere liye sher o ghazal likhoun
Par mein sirf premi houn Ghalib ya koyi Faraaz nahin

'Mushkil' hai toumhare zulm o sitam se anjaan ban.na
Chahte houe bhi tum par mein ho sakta naraaz nahin


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Keep smilling.......**


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'Limerick...!' - 21st July 2005, 05:48 PM

Limerick :

Strangely, since that strange sunny sunday
Strange that I became a stranger only to say,
Someone imprigioned me with a look
Similarly as a rose enclosed in a book
Strange was a stranger who crossed my way

Ps...This limerick has something special...and
strange!Up to you to discover...



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'Joke...!' - 21st July 2005, 05:55 PM

Joke : Mushkil and the Stranger

It was the first time Mushkil left his little village with his wife to visit their son who lived in a large city…!On arriving there they were surprised to see that jungle of steel and cement. While touring the city, Mushkil decided to count the number of flats of a very high building .After some moment a stranger who was observing him, approached and asked him what he was doing
The innocent villager told him that he was busy counting the number of flats
“How many have you counted up to now”-asked the stranger
“And why…?”replied Mushkil
“Here in this city, for every flat you count, you have to pay 10 rupees-“
“Oh! I see, I have counted only ten flats so far”
“Then you must pay me 100 rupees”
“Okay” said Mushkil and he handled the man the required sum
After the stranger went away, his wife asked him why he has given the man that money
“You see how intelligent your husband is” he said,” I have paid him only for counting 10 flats whereas I had already arrived up to the 20th one."


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Story

This is a story of two strangers. They had never ever met each other personally. Both were members of a poetry site : 'Shayri.com'. Akshat and Pulkit had never exchanged any messages and had never been of a conversation, still they both had noticed each other on the site.

One pleasant evening as Pulkit entered the room no. 301 of hotel "Grand Goodwin", where many other members of the shayri family were already present. Akshat opened the door and as Pulkit introduced himself, Akshat was really excited on seeing him. He introduced himself as they hugged each other. Both of them had expected each other to be a bit different than they actually were. Pulkit had thought Akshat, whose Id on the site was Bedil musafir, to be a 6 footer, muscular man with heavy moustaches. he on other hand was a Hanger. He was a very this person with height around 5.5" - 5.6". Akshat expected Pulkit to be a lively, cool dude kinda guy. Pulkit in turn had a more studious look, and was a lot shy to start with. All in all was a wonderful experience.

This was start of a magical bonding. These two gelled so well right from the beginning. These two guys were so similar in their thinking and their way of taking life that their hearts came real close. Spent 2-3 hours together that day, with a hope to meet the next day. Next evening Pulkit reached the hotel after the office. Akshat was happy to see him. They spent a lot of time together, discussing things, discussing life. They had come really close by now. They both had started admiring each other. A lot was similar in these 2 guys.

Time to separate, Pulkit had to leave for home. As Pulkit started his bike, both of them had tears in their eyes. They hugged each other and then Pulkit left for his home. The next day Akshat called Pulkit up from his home. Pulkit was really excited to hear from his new friend. Now it had become a regular affair. None of these guys felt complete if they didn’t talk once or twice in a week. This is the story. Two people completely strangers, now are best of friends. Ready to share everything with each other. A real magical bonding. Wud wish their Friendship blossoms with each passing day.


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'A Story...!' - 21st July 2005, 06:04 PM

A Story : Do not take Sweets form Strangers...!

I was 11 years old and it was the first time my elder brother took to the cinema to watch English movies at night…I did not like Hindi pictures at that time. And watching two movies the same night was something new to me…!
The first movie was very amusing…it was a western film with Red Indians and cowboys (my favourites up today)At the break, my brother told me that he has to go out for some time and I knew that he was going to meet his girl friend who lived not too far away from there. That was his premeditated plan.
After he went away, the second movie got started…It was entitled “Never take Sweets from Strangers” and what a movie…It was so scary. There was an old man who always had sweets in his pockets and he used the sweets to entrap children .After that he killed them savagely. All long the movie I had my hair standing straight on my head., and how I longed for the presence of my brother
At the end of the film, his absence was unbearable and I had to wait for him alone outside the cinema.. In every passer by I imagined the old stranger’s face. After waiting for what seemed to be an eternity, I made up my mind to go home alone. I had 15 minutes of way to go through a dark street lined with trees.
I remember quite well how I took off my shoes and laced them on my shoulder(I always liked to run barefoot)and I took to my heels. On the way it seemed that the Stranger was pursuing me with a packet of sweets in his hand…!I arrived home in no time.
After what my brother heard from our parents when he returned home a little later, he promised on the thing that was dearest to him that it was the first and the last time he has taken me to the cinema.
And he has kept his word…!


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kya kahe kis kis tarah se.. - 21st July 2005, 06:07 PM

Kya kahe kis kis tarah se tu mujhe tarpaati thi
Need jab bhi aati tu phir khwaab si ban jaati thi

Raat bhar mein sochta tha yeh hua aur woh hua
aankh khulti thi sanam tu has ke yun sharmaati thi

aaine se phir jab subah hua tha saamna mera
aadhe dhundle aks mein tere saaya ki mehak aati thi

Kya kahe kis kis tarah se ...

halke paaon seedhiyon par siskiyon ki woh adaa
mere aane tak dilrubaa tu dil churaa le jaati thi

der si phir ho gayi nazuk teri in adaaon mein
phirse mein naraaz hua tu baahon mein aa chup jaati thi

kaun jaane dil ajnaabee mein aab armaan hai kya
khaabidaa narzron ko jab tu pyaar se chuu jaati thi

Need jab bhi aati tu phir khwaab si ban jaati thi
mere aane tak dilrubaa tu dil churaa le jaati thi...

Kya kahe kis kis tarah se..



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21st July 2005, 06:12 PM

Gazal

Ek baat ho maa ki meri to dhadkan tham jaati hai
Ek pal bhi saath bitaaya nahi fir yaad bahoot aati hai

Ajanbee ban mile thay kabhi hum bahoot pahale
Lekin aaj har saans aapke yaado me beet jaati hai

Ho koi khushi ka baana dil gaaye jab ye taraana
Rooh meri ye har pal aapko paas apane paati hai

Baandh doon chaand taaro ki jhadi aapke liye
Jo koi jhadi aapko aapke dil me pyaar jagati hai

Natmastak hai Garima us ajanbee pal ke liye
Usi ke karan “maa” mujhe priy beta keh bulaati hai


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21st July 2005, 06:14 PM

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Maa ke pyaar me likhoon sabd hazar
Jitna bhi likhoon wo kam pade yaar

Ajanbee khayaalo ko bas likh doon
Maa ke pyaar ko sabdo se kaise tolun

Dil dooba pyaar ke sagar me unake
Doob ke bhi thaah na pa paayi jisake

Jab bhi koi mushkil aati hai saamne
Paati hoon har waqt unhe sang apane

Jab bhi koi khushi ka paal aata hai
Dil bataane ko bechain ho jaata hai

Har dard me ruswaayi me yaad aaye
Jaise pyaar se wo aansoon poch jaaye

Maa ke pyaar ka kya karoon bakhaan
Ise na samajh paate khuda ya bhagwaan

Dar jaati hoon mai agar kabhi kisi pal
Hoti hai maa meri tabhi usi chhann

Kya kya kahoon, kaise kahoon pata nahi
Har bhaaw ko lafjo me daalana aata nahi

Darati hoon agar kabhi kisi ajanbee pal
Kho doon agar pyaar, oh mitega jeevan sambal


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'Sonnet...!' - 21st July 2005, 06:29 PM

Sonnet : 'In love with a Stranger...!'

Of a stranger I have fallen in love who
Has in her eyes the dawn and sunset…
A feeling so strange inside I have met
however, it make me happy and sad too.
A fear invades me at the only thought
of her going away leaving a lonely heart,
I know that I would die her without ,
My heaven she is of mysteries so sweet .

And I imagine the sky to be of her jealous
For such a bright moon it can never have,
destiny smiles when thinking about us,
she is the future for whom in hell I’ll dive.

it is only joy in a heart that beats for her,
A star so far, maybe I’ll look at her forever.


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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'Ghazal...!' - 21st July 2005, 06:51 PM

Ghazal :

Moujh jeisse ajnabi ko koyi apna nahin mila
Mere shab e nind ko ek bhi achaa sapna nahin mila

Aasmaan ke chaadar ko odh kar soya hai meine
Iss sheher main sar chupaane ka thikaana nahin mila

Souna hai ki tum paraaye logon ko bhi apnaati ho
Meri balaa ki tujhse milne ka koyi bahana nahin mila

Mere jaan o jigar tere liye kayi ghazal gaate hein
Jisse sounkar tum yahaan aao wo taraana nahin mila

Keisse tum se do baatein ho, jaan.na ‘Mushkil’ hai
Kitaab e zabaan main teri lazaan ka pan.na nahin mila


Jeene ke liye mujhe ek sapna dedo
Haqeekat meri jaaN liye jaa rahi hai

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21st July 2005, 07:26 PM

Kavita

Pulkit mera man huwa tha us ajanbee pal
Jab palako me khila tha pyaar ka kamaldal

Pyaare se bol me is naachiz ko bola bahan
Huwa gadgad kho gaya kahi mera man

Sunate hai wo meri har baat har jidd ko
Gudiya hoon mai unaki jaan gayi is baat ko

Pyaar me mera man hai rehata harpal chanchal
Milake bhool jaati hoon saara ghum usipal

Dard mera jaane kaha gayab ho jaata hai
Pyaar ki barsaat se man hara ho jaata hai

Kabhi pyaar ke paribhaasa se bhi thi ajanbee
Aaj dekho har lamha apnepan se lage bhari

Mujhe har baat me dhaandhas dilaate hai
Har baat meri bin kuchh kahe sunate jaate hai

Bhaiya mere aise hi jo kaafi salone hai
Isliye to wo Pulkit ke naam se jaane jaate hai

Kya kahoon mai aur kuchh unake liye
Jo bhi likhati hoon sbd kam hi jaate hai


Pyaar unka itna jitna mai sambhaal na sakoon
Fir bhi mujhpar wo pyaar lutaate hai.


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21st July 2005, 07:28 PM

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Humaare yeha har november ke mahine me ek bahoot bada mela lagta hai..
Mujhe yaad hai hum us samay bhi mela jaane ke liye planning kar rahe thay.
Science students me hum sirf 6 ladkiya thi… plaaning yehi thi college se nikalate hi hum apana rookh apane apane gharo ki taraf na karake mele ki taraf karenge..

Haan theek hum mele me pahuch gaye.. khoob masti ki.. ab waqt lautane ka waqt ho chala tha.

Raaste me hume ek boodha aadmi gira pada mila.. wo duhaayi de dekar chilla raha tha.. mele ki bhidd me use koi puchaane waala nahi, waise to wo mela, humaare yeha ke Mahatma Saint Shre Sudist baaba ke naam par lagta hai
Lekin waha sadhuo ki bhid bhi kam nahi thee.
Hum 6 ladkiyo ko waha se ghar to lautana tha jo kaafi door tha lekin us vridh purush ki chitkaar ko ansuna na kar paaye aur usaki sahayata karane ki sonchi.. ye baat achhi hui ki use bas mele ke mukhya mandir tak hi jaana tha
Faisala to le liya tha lekin unaki dheemi chaal ki wajah se ek ek karke sabhi 5 friends khisak gaye..mai man hi man budbudaayi.. jaane mujhe bhi kya bhoot chala tha jo har kisi ki help ke liye chal padati hoon.. chaahe wo ajanbee hi kyu na ho.. shaam dhal gayi thi.. mujhe reh-rehkar dadima ki chhadi yaad aa rahi thi. 1ghante 30 minute me wo janaab ashram tak pahuche.. mujhe man hi man khudpe gussa aa raha tha.. maine luatate waqt socha inako to maine bheed me kuchal jaane se bacha liya mujhe dadima ki chhadi se ab bhagwaan hi bachaaye..
Wo vridh shayd meri man ki baat taad gaye thay.. unhone bola beta ye chithi lo aur apane dadaji ko de dena.. maine anmane bhaaw se letter liya.. ghar aayi.. kahane ki jaroorat nahi mere saath kya sulook huwa..

Usake baad dadaji ko letter de diya.. unhone padha….

Agali subah dadaji ko ashram bulaaya gaya.. wo waha se bahoot khush luate .. unhone bataaya ki jis saks ki maine madad ki thi wo waha ka adhyakch tha.. usane meri baat se khush hokar dadaji ko mele ka nirikchhak ghosit kiya jo udhar ke liye bahoot maan ki baat hoti hai..

Kuchh sawal mere man me abhi bhi chal rahe thay.. ki wo dadaji ko kaise pehchaanta tha.. but maine kuchh puchha nahi…..khush jo thee mai….


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21st July 2005, 08:26 PM

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Mai chaman me dhundh rahi thi apana Aman
Bada bechain rehata tha is jag me mera man

Dard hi hai is duniya me har pal har hagah
Koi nahi tha yeha jo dekh sake mera man

Dil ka haal tha behaal, sochati thi din-o-raat
Thi pyaar ki talash jaha kah sakoon har baat

Ek din mujhe mila is ajanbee bazm ka naam
Ajanbee ban aayi thi dar rahi khud se pagal ban

Sabse pahale baat hui meri Aman bhaiya se
Protshahan se jinake khila utha kamal sa man ye

Pyaar se bolate hai wo mujhe pagal bahan
Unase karake baat har baar ho jaata hai halka man

Kabhi kabhi hum baate nahi bahar karate hai
Fir baad me ek duje par khoob hasate hai

Ek baar bhaiya ne mujhpar likhi thi ek gazal
Mujhe banaaya tha aab aur pawan chanchal

Mai kahati hoon bahoot achhe hai bhaiya mere
nahi kar sakati bayaan alfaazo me maaf karo bhaiya mere

ajanbee us pal ki hoon shukrguzaar man se
jisane diya mujhe aisa bhaiya pyaare hai jo man se


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21st July 2005, 08:51 PM

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baat hai us waqt ki jab mai college jaati thi
meri ek saheli thi jo humesha muskuraati thi
subah ho ya shaam usaki muskurahat na jaati thi
isliye to “ajanbee” ko bhi wo jald dost banati thi


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21st July 2005, 11:52 PM

Gazal

Ajanbiyo ke kayi kayi kisse hote hai
Kuchh acche to kuchh bure hote hai

Ghum to kahi hasi ka fawwaaraa
Lekin ye baat hai sab sache hote hai

Dard to kabhi ban majak aati yaade
Sach hai ye hum sabpar beete hote hai

Hasi khushi beete hue jo pal ho
To kuchh sikha wo rahe hote hote hai

Agar kahin unase laga ho ghotaala
To apane hi pyaare lagate hote hai

To kya soche kaise soche Garima
Jab har sama ke do rang ke hote hai


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