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7th January 2017, 09:32 AM
PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!
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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai
mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai
deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai
voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai
har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai
*peshtar = before, pehle
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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7th January 2017, 05:28 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by maikasH
PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!
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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai
mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai
deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai
voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai
har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai
*peshtar = before, pehle
rab raakha
maikash
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wahhhhhh Maikash ji.....majja aa gya aapki gazal pad ke, hamesha ki tarah superb
khush rhiye
rabb raakha
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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7th January 2017, 08:47 PM
Quote:
Originally Posted by maikasH
PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!
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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai
mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai
deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai
voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai
har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai
*peshtar = before, pehle
rab raakha
maikash
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Bas ek hee lafz...lajwaab.!!!!!
Salamat rahein....
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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12th January 2017, 07:19 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by maikasH
PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!
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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai
mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai
deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai
voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai
har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai
*peshtar = before, pehle
rab raakha
maikash
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Umdaa ustaad...har sher mein vo kashish ki kya baat hai....bechain dil ko qaraar aa gaya....yunhi likhte rahiye janaab...
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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13th January 2017, 04:27 AM
Shukriya, aap sab ka
baraa-e-meherbaani, rasmii "waah-waah" se parhez kiya kijiye
rab raakha jee
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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13th January 2017, 09:48 AM
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Shukriya, aap sab ka
baraa-e-meherbaani, rasmii "waah-waah" se parhez kiya kijiye
rab raakha jee
maikash
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aisa kyun laga aapko ki yeh rasmii waah-waah hai?
Qasid
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नाम-ए-वफ़ा की जफ़ा बताएं
क्या है ज़हन में क्या बोल जाएँ
रफ़्तार-ए-दिल अब थम सी गयी है
'क़ासिद' पर अब है टिकी निगाहें
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13th January 2017, 10:17 AM
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Shukriya, aap sab ka
baraa-e-meherbaani, rasmii "waah-waah" se parhez kiya kijiye
rab raakha jee
maikash
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rasmi waah waah.............??
अर्ज मेरी एे खुदा क्या सुन सकेगा तू कभी
आसमां को बस इसी इक आस में तकते रहे
madhu..
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21st January 2017, 02:02 AM
just an observation.
stay safe and sound.
rab raakha
maikash
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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26th January 2017, 03:14 PM
BAhut dino baad aapko pada kailash sahab..it's really wonderful creation of yours....
एक हाथ में दिल उनके एक हाथ में खंजर था
चेहरे पे दोस्त का मुखौटा अजीब सा मंजर था
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30th January 2017, 04:06 AM
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BAhut dino baad aapko pada kailash sahab..it's really wonderful creation of yours....
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yeh apne kailash saahab kaun hai Aru bhai?
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is tarhe teri yaad meiN har shaam dhaley hai
goyaa koyi nagin si kalejey pe chaley hai
maikash
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2nd February 2017, 07:15 PM
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Originally Posted by maikasH
PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!
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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai
mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai
deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai
voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai
har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai
*peshtar = before, pehle
rab raakha
maikash
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maikash bhai tak shaad ka aadaab pahoNche.....
ummeed karta hoon khairiyat se honge, aaj aapki is taazaa tareen ghazal pe nazar gayee to main khud ko maikash mahsoos kar raha hoon...
dil ko itnaa sukoon mil raha hai aapke kalaam ke lafz lafz se ke bayaan nahi kiyaa ja sakta, bas use mahsoos karke sukoon paaya jaa sakta hai....
aapki kalam me waaqai jaadu sa hai koii..... ham khushnaseeb hain jo aap jaise aalaa shayaron ki sohbat me pal rahe hain seekh rahe hain....
mujh haqeer ki naaqis daad qubool kijiye.....
tashreef laate rahiye.... apna khayaal rakhiye.. likhte rahiye
Shaad....
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6th February 2017, 02:40 PM
aaj aik baar phir se aapki gazal padne ka dil hua to yeh sher bas jubaaN par atak gya aaj apna bhi dil udhas hai
bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai
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.....Sunita Thakur.....
यह कह कर मेरा दुश्मन मुझे हँसते हुए छोड़ गया
....के तेरे अपने ही बहुत हैं तुझे रुलाने के लिए...
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1st March 2017, 09:07 PM
har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai
Maikaash Bhai
Written straight on heart. Sort of Nostalgic.
You are king of such writing.
"na haste hein na khul kar roo rahe hein
ye kesi zindagi ham dho rahe hein"
God bless you.
लब पे मुस्कान को लिए ऐ दोस्त, काँधों पे लाश अपनी ढोते हैं,
इस भरे शहर में हम Dard-e-Sush, जो न पाया उसे भी खोते हैं!
lab pe muskaan ko liye ae dost, kandhon pe laash apni dhote hein
is bhare sheher me ham dard-e-sush, jo na paaya use bhi khote hein
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17th July 2017, 01:45 PM
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PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!
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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai
mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai
deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai
voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai
har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai
*peshtar = before, pehle
rab raakha
maikash
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bahut dino baad punah aapko padha... bahut sunder rachana likhi hai aapne..
shubhkamnao sahit
Akant...
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आहट सी कोइ आये तो समझ लेना कि तुम हो...
AahaT si koi aaye to samajh lena ki tum ho...
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23rd January 2020, 12:54 AM
voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai
Waaah..lajawaab ghazal..
Har ek sher zabardast..
Likhte rahiye...khaas aapki ghazalein padhne ..kaafi log ab bhi Sdc per aate hain.
A very happy birthday to you
Zainy
PalkoN ki baand ko tod ke daaman pe aa gira
Ek aaNsu mere zabt ki tauheen kar gaya...
Nm
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19th April 2021, 11:41 AM
Quote:
Originally Posted by maikasH
PindaaN waali mauj nai labhdi
Yaaran di oh fauj nai labhdi
Kalle manjaa dhaa baithe aaN
"Sandhua" kitthe aa baithe aaN!
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bazm-e-sukhan sajaao tabiyat udaas hai
yaaro, Ghazal sunaao, tabiyat udaas hai
mai ho ke dawaa ho ye maraz la-ilaaj hai
saaqi zahar pilaao, tabiyat udaas hai
deen-o-haram ki baat kisi aur din sahi
vaiiz, galey lagaao, tabiyat udaas hai
voh aa rahe haiN phir se aaj yaad baar baar
kaaGhaz-qalam uThaao, tabiyat udaas hai
har ashq ne dam toDne se peshtar*, kahaa
“maikash” :unheN: bulaao, tabiyat udaas hai
*peshtar = before, pehle
rab raakha
maikash
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Maikash bhaiya
Pranaam.. Jsk
Kyaa khoob andaaz e Bayaan.. Maza aa gaya
Dil se daad
Khush rahen.. Apna khayal rakhen
Aapka
Dhaval
*~*Dhaval*~*....Ek Ehsaas...
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25th April 2021, 11:01 PM
waah kya kahne Maikash bhai !!! kis tabeeyat se kaha hai ye kalaam !!! wwwaaahhhhh
maiN rehnuma ke kahe raastoN se door raha
mera maqaam sada manziloN se door raha
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30th April 2021, 01:22 AM
yeh ghazal nahi ek tarah se vo tahriir hai jo misaal ban kar humhein sikhaati hai ki ghazal kaise kahi jaati hai...ek baar phir salaam jitni baar padhi jaaye kam hai
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3rd September 2021, 12:54 AM
Maikash bhaii
Arse baad yahaN se guzra par yaqiin janiye mera aana mukkamal ho gaya apki ye ghazal padh ke.. din ban gaya mera .. behad shukriya
KunaaL (Sifar).........
Hai 'sifar' bhi reyazi ka hissa..
Shayrii bhi hisaab ki hogi..
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