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Post Eei kaash ki haathon ki lakiron mein... - 28th September 2003, 01:11 PM

hello doston,

Mein yahaan nayi hoon, but umeed karti hoon aap sabh se jald hi parichay ho jaayega!

Mein kuch kuch likhti hoon, kabhi-kabhar... aur ushi mein se ek koshish aap sabh ke saamne arz hei!

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Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN
Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti
Pal kuch khushi kei aur kuch gam ke
Hum alag alag chaant lete
Tere haathon se bhi
Kuch mere haathon se bhi

Kasam Yaa Khudda ki
Khushinyo ki bahaar tujh pe barsaate
Har voh khushi ka pal tere saath bitaate
Gam tere hisse aane na dete
Chupke se saare gam ke pal
Hum chura le jaate

Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN
Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti
Milan ka pal hei kabh, aur kabh judaai
Hum sabh jaan lete
Milan ke pal sabh thaam lete
Aur judaai ke palO mein
Tere dil ki gehraai mein chupp jaate
Ki na kabhi hummei
Judaai khoj paati
Aur na kabhi hum judaa ho jaate

Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN
Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti
Ki phir jaane hum kya kya kar paate
Lamha lamha parh paate
Har lamhe ko sahej kar
Apne dil se lagaa lete
Eei kaash...
Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN
Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti
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28th September 2003, 01:23 PM

ritu dost,
waahhhhhh
bahot khub
Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN
Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti
Milan ka pal hei kabh, aur kabh judaai
Hum sabh jaan lete
Milan ke pal sabh thaam lete
Aur judaai ke palO mein
Tere dil ki gehraai mein chupp jaate
Ki na kabhi hummei
Judaai khoj paati
Aur na kabhi hum judaa ho jaate


ae kaash......... to muje yah sawaal kabhi n hota k.......

kyun sama gaya
kaise sama gaya
kab sama gaya
mere hathhao ki lakiromaie
yah khalipan.... khalipan.... khalipan
   
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28th September 2003, 01:37 PM

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Originally posted by meena chheda
ritu dost,
waahhhhhh
bahot khub
Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN
Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti
Milan ka pal hei kabh, aur kabh judaai
Hum sabh jaan lete
Milan ke pal sabh thaam lete
Aur judaai ke palO mein
Tere dil ki gehraai mein chupp jaate
Ki na kabhi hummei
Judaai khoj paati
Aur na kabhi hum judaa ho jaate


ae kaash......... to muje yah sawaal kabhi n hota k.......

kyun sama gaya
kaise sama gaya
kab sama gaya
mere hathhao ki lakiromaie
yah khalipan.... khalipan.... khalipan
sukhriya Meena ji, aapko meri koshish pasand aayee yeh jaan ker bahot khushi hui!

Haathon ki lakiron mein khalipan
na samaa jaata
Ager voh humei deta apnapan
Magar haaye re kismat
joe hei mera hi darrpan
Ushi keiliye
aaj tarasta hei mera khalipan
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28th September 2003, 05:58 PM

Hi Ritu
kaise ho.........
Welcome to this site....
pehle mujhse milo....
pyaar se log mujhe Mohit kehte hain....aur gusse se bhi Mohit
he kehte hain.....
aur dheere dheere pata chal he jayega aapko mere baare mein
vo kya hai na ki maine socha ki apne mooh se khud he apni
tareef kyon karein....
anyway....ab main aapki ghajal padhta hu fir vaapis reply karunga
ok.....
hey jaana mat...
   
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Vaise ghajal achhi nahi.....balki bohat acchi likhi hai...

itni badi ghajal aapne khud likh???
shaabash....
   
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28th September 2003, 11:46 PM

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Hi Ritu
kaise ho.........
Welcome to this site....
pehle mujhse milo....
pyaar se log mujhe Mohit kehte hain....aur gusse se bhi Mohit
he kehte hain.....
aur dheere dheere pata chal he jayega aapko mere baare mein
vo kya hai na ki maine socha ki apne mooh se khud he apni
tareef kyon karein....
anyway....ab main aapki ghajal padhta hu fir vaapis reply karunga
ok.....
hey jaana mat...
Hi mohit ji

nice to meet you and thanks for your welcome. Ji zaroor aapke baare mein aur jaan-na chahungi .. u sound interesting !
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28th September 2003, 11:47 PM

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Vaise ghajal achhi nahi.....balki bohat acchi likhi hai...

itni badi ghajal aapne khud likh???
shaabash....
Sukhriya Mohit ji again, for liking it!

Ji vaise yeh ghazal nahi nazm hei aur haan yeh meine khudd likhi
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Re: Eei kaash ki haathon ki lakiron mein... - 29th September 2003, 11:31 AM

Welcome Ritu ji

Aik achchi nazm share ki hai aapne hum logoN ke saath. Daad qubuul kiijiye. Aur aage bhi apne kalaam sunaati rahiyega.

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29th September 2003, 11:36 AM

Hi! Riru,

Your 'Nazm' is really beautiful. You have really used some beautiful words here. This goes to show our site is gettin popular, Itne Acche "shayar' aa rahe hain. May god bless u with the powers to choose the desired

Do keep writing..

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Re: Re: Eei kaash ki haathon ki lakiron mein... - 29th September 2003, 05:22 PM

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Welcome Ritu ji

Aik achchi nazm share ki hai aapne hum logoN ke saath. Daad qubuul kiijiye. Aur aage bhi apne kalaam sunaati rahiyega.

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29th September 2003, 05:24 PM

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Hi! Riru,

Your 'Nazm' is really beautiful. You have really used some beautiful words here. This goes to show our site is gettin popular, Itne Acche "shayar' aa rahe hain. May god bless u with the powers to choose the desired

Do keep writing..

Take Care
Sukhriya Pulkit Ji

Haan this site is quite popular & ofcourse beautiful too
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Re: Eei kaash ki haathon ki lakiron mein... - 29th September 2003, 08:29 PM

Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN
Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti
Milan ka pal hei kabh, aur kabh judaai
Hum sabh jaan lete
Milan ke pal sabh thaam lete
Aur judaai ke palO mein
Tere dil ki gehraai mein chupp jaate
Ki na kabhi hummei
Judaai khoj paati
Aur na kabhi hum judaa ho jaate

Ritu ji
sabse pehle to aap ka swagat hai .....behad khushi hai ki ek behtreen shayra ka aagaz hua hai yahan....aap ke khayalat bahot ache hai aur utne hi ache hai aap ke alfaaz jinhe aap ne yahan sajaya hai....hamari daad qubool kijiye aur aise hi jazbaton ke phool khilate rahiye....
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Re: Re: Eei kaash ki haathon ki lakiron mein... - 30th September 2003, 03:07 PM

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Eei Kaash ki haathon ki lakiroN meiN
Irtiqaa-e-zindagii likhi hoti
Milan ka pal hei kabh, aur kabh judaai
Hum sabh jaan lete
Milan ke pal sabh thaam lete
Aur judaai ke palO mein
Tere dil ki gehraai mein chupp jaate
Ki na kabhi hummei
Judaai khoj paati
Aur na kabhi hum judaa ho jaate

Ritu ji
sabse pehle to aap ka swagat hai .....behad khushi hai ki ek behtreen shayra ka aagaz hua hai yahan....aap ke khayalat bahot ache hai aur utne hi ache hai aap ke alfaaz jinhe aap ne yahan sajaya hai....hamari daad qubool kijiye aur aise hi jazbaton ke phool khilate rahiye....
-MANOJ
Sukhriya Manoj ji, for the welcome and aapko meri nazm pasand aayee ishliye bhi! Koshish karti rahungi ki aur kuch likh saku!
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hi bahut pyari nazam likhi hai apne.is it u ritu aur mujhe bhaleka laga.
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nice work ritu
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Jaan Jee, well said. Nice one. Thanks.
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Super duper hit - 10th July 2006, 01:17 PM

Hi ritu, dhiraj here

Bahut hi achha likha hai apne, keep it up

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