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~~~~~Meharbani dosto~~~~~ -
4th May 2008, 09:32 PM
Shayri.com ke sabhi dosto, ye special poem onn sabhi special dosto ke liye jo special aa kar meri rachnavo ke special time de kar read karte hai, aur phir ek special reply dete hai, mai onn sabh ka specially thanks karti hu, ye poem aap sabhi ke naaam
Dukh to bahut likhe rabb ne nasib me
baatane wala na mila koi diljani dosto
dukh aur dard hi the mere paas aaye
cha aur khushiyo ki, ki hai kurbani dosto
oski yaade le kar aaayi thi iss mehfil me
jis ke intzar me kati hai jawani dosto
jakhamo pe dava ka kaam kiya aap sabhi ne
jab tarraphti thi ye jind nimani dosto
likhane ki mujhe jaach kab aayi thi
aapka diya hosla hi meri nishani dosto
jin logo ko na mai mili, na dekha kabhi
vo meri kavatao ke dete hai parwani dosto
meri enn likhto ko aap jo "wah wah" ho karte
aapke hugare se hi bani hai kahani dosto
dil ki baate kaise kehati ye HEER
agar Shayri.com ki na hoti meharbani dosto
and also thanks Iss website ke Administrator aur moderators ki, jin logo ne ye mehfil banayi aur hum sabh ko ekathe hone ka moka diya
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Hello everyone -
4th May 2008, 09:42 PM
Hello everyone,
vese to mai aapni poem ko jiada punjabi me hi likhti hu, par mujhe kafi mere dosto ne kiha hai mai isse hindi me likhu, kyon ke mere sabhi dosto ko punjabi nahi aati, par wo mujhe nacheeez ko read karana chahate hai, so mai onn sabhi dosto ka teh dil se Thanks karti nu
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5th May 2008, 02:56 AM
hello A Heer,
aap kay likhay ashraar pasand aaye. sab say jyada pasand aaya aap ka naam. adhuri heer.
punjabi da ek gana yaad aa gaya....
mein bhi raha gaya adhura tu vi rah gayi adhuri...
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5th May 2008, 03:41 PM
oh heer g bahut bahut vdiya g....mind blowing
m lik it sooooo much
keeeeeeepitup g
rgards
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6th May 2008, 09:34 AM
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Originally Posted by Ankita
hello A Heer,
aap kay likhay ashraar pasand aaye. sab say jyada pasand aaya aap ka naam. adhuri heer.
punjabi da ek gana yaad aa gaya....
mein bhi raha gaya adhura tu vi rah gayi adhuri...
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Hello Ankita ji
thanks aapki iss reply ke liye, and also thanks to like name too
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6th May 2008, 09:36 AM
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oh heer g bahut bahut vdiya g....mind blowing
m lik it sooooo much
keeeeeeepitup g
rgards
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Thanks for reading this poem
Thanks ke aap ne aapna kimti time spend kita
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31st May 2008, 06:55 PM
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Originally Posted by ADHURI HEER
Shayri.com ke sabhi dosto, ye special poem onn sabhi special dosto ke liye jo special aa kar meri rachnavo ke special time de kar read karte hai, aur phir ek special reply dete hai, mai onn sabh ka specially thanks karti hu, ye poem aap sabhi ke naaam
Dukh to bahut likhe rabb ne nasib me
baatane wala na mila koi diljani dosto
dukh aur dard hi the mere paas aaye
cha aur khushiyo ki, ki hai kurbani dosto
oski yaade le kar aaayi thi iss mehfil me
jis ke intzar me kati hai jawani dosto
jakhamo pe dava ka kaam kiya aap sabhi ne
jab tarraphti thi ye jind nimani dosto
likhane ki mujhe jaach kab aayi thi
aapka diya hosla hi meri nishani dosto
jin logo ko na mai mili, na dekha kabhi
vo meri kavatao ke dete hai parwani dosto
meri enn likhto ko aap jo "wah wah" ho karte
aapke hugare se hi bani hai kahani dosto
dil ki baate kaise kehati ye HEER
agar Shayri.com ki na hoti meharbani dosto
and also thanks Iss website ke Administrator aur moderators ki, jin logo ne ye mehfil banayi aur hum sabh ko ekathe hone ka moka diya
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A heer jee:
SSA,
aray waah! kyaa baat hai.......!!! itne dino ke baad aap kii yeh poetry mujhe paRhne ka mujhe mauqa milaa... aur mujhe aap ke ehsaas bohat bohat pasand aaye....... aap ka is site ke liye aur yahaan ke members ke liye pyaar dekh kar bohat achchha laga....aap ne bohat khuubi se apne pyaar apne ehsaas ko bayaan kiya hai... aur aap kaa yeh qalaam to dil me.n ghar kar gayaa..... mujhe ek ek lafz pasand aaya..... aur behad khushii ho rahiii hai aap ka qalaam paRh kar.........
sach hi kaha hai aap ne, yahaa.n ham ek duusre ko jaante nahii.n hai, na hii kabhi unse ham mile hai.n, aur aisa bhii nahii hai kii zindagii me.n bhi kabhii un se mulaaqaat hogiii phir bhiii..... phir bhi ek duusre takhliif ko baa.nTne kii koshish karte hai.n.... shaayad yehi dosti hai!
oopar waale se duaa hai kii aap kii chaahate.n puuri ho, aur aap zindagii me.n khushiyaa.n hi khushiyaa.n aaye!
apna khayaal rakhiye!
all hats off to you....
Mayank
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Thank u very much -
3rd June 2008, 12:54 AM
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Originally Posted by Mayank
A heer jee:
SSA,
aray waah! kyaa baat hai.......!!! itne dino ke baad aap kii yeh poetry mujhe paRhne ka mujhe mauqa milaa... aur mujhe aap ke ehsaas bohat bohat pasand aaye....... aap ka is site ke liye aur yahaan ke members ke liye pyaar dekh kar bohat achchha laga....aap ne bohat khuubi se apne pyaar apne ehsaas ko bayaan kiya hai... aur aap kaa yeh qalaam to dil me.n ghar kar gayaa..... mujhe ek ek lafz pasand aaya..... aur behad khushii ho rahiii hai aap ka qalaam paRh kar.........
sach hi kaha hai aap ne, yahaa.n ham ek duusre ko jaante nahii.n hai, na hii kabhi unse ham mile hai.n, aur aisa bhii nahii hai kii zindagii me.n bhi kabhii un se mulaaqaat hogiii phir bhiii..... phir bhi ek duusre takhliif ko baa.nTne kii koshish karte hai.n.... shaayad yehi dosti hai!
oopar waale se duaa hai kii aap kii chaahate.n puuri ho, aur aap zindagii me.n khushiyaa.n hi khushiyaa.n aaye!
apna khayaal rakhiye!
all hats off to you....
Mayank
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Thank you Mayank ji, aap ki iss reply ke liye, and mujhe read karne ke liye,
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3rd June 2008, 02:14 PM
heer ji aap ne to kamal kar deya
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3rd June 2008, 02:27 PM
Bahut Khoob Mehterma ..........
App ki is koshsih ne DIl CHo liya
Keep it Up .............
aur bilkul sahi kaha app ne hamein SDC ka behad shukriya ada kerna chahiye kiyon isne hameien bahut achy doston se milaya
Shukriya ...............SDC...
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4th June 2008, 01:47 AM
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heer ji aap ne to kamal kar deya
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Thank u Monu ji,
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4th June 2008, 01:48 AM
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Bahut Khoob Mehterma ..........
App ki is koshsih ne DIl CHo liya
Keep it Up .............
aur bilkul sahi kaha app ne hamein SDC ka behad shukriya ada kerna chahiye kiyon isne hameien bahut achy doston se milaya
Shukriya ...............SDC...
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Thank u Mujeeb ji aapki iss reply ke liye and iss poem ko like karne ke liye
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4th June 2008, 10:10 AM
zindgi naam ko humari hai
aakhri saans v tumhari hai
mujhse puchho chamak sitaron ki
maine ro-ro k sub guzari hai
teri chaahat kahan pe le aayi
tujhse milne ki be-qrari hai
aap k haanth me lakiren hain
warna takdir to humari hai
'dil mera todte ho lo tode
chiz meri nahi tumhati hai'
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5th June 2008, 03:44 PM
Heer ji,
aap ke shayri bahut he payari hai
sada aap muskurati rahoo,
doto ko apne shayri sunati rahoo,
hum mar bhi jayey to apne dosti ke kessey logo ko sunati raho, aap sada u he muskurati raho
Aap ka noor hai jo par raha cherey per
Barna koon puchta hai humey en andheroo mai
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24th June 2008, 04:27 PM
Kya baat hai janaab Heerme yaaro
Lagta hai yaaro ka yaar hai yaaro
Aapka qalam behad pasand aaya. Main aajhi is site me register kiya hu.
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4th August 2008, 02:14 PM
soooooorey heer ji
kar chuti thi isleye main aap ko messege nahi bhej paya
happy friendship day
aap sada muskurati rahoo
khushyoo ke samunder main nahatey rahoo
Har koi chahey chahey aapko apna bnana tum youh he katil adayeh banate rahoo
Jo ho na saka tumhara sahara tum usey bhe apna dost banate rahoo
aap sada muskurati rahoo
apney dosto or mata peta ka pyar pati rahoo
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8th August 2008, 09:59 AM
Dukh to bahut likhe rabb ne nasib me
baatane wala na mila koi diljani dosto
dukh aur dard hi the mere paas aaye
cha aur khushiyo ki, ki hai kurbani dosto
oski yaade le kar aaayi thi iss mehfil me
jis ke intzar me kati hai jawani dosto
jakhamo pe dava ka kaam kiya aap sabhi ne
jab tarraphti thi ye jind nimani dosto
bahut hi pyari poem likhi hai HEER aapne..kitni sachai hai aap ki iss poem me....
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