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Love Dedicated to my love . - 6th August 2014, 04:25 PM

Ek raah k rahi hai ham tum bhi
bas halat juda hai thodi si
koi door hua hai tumse bhi
koi pass nahi hai mere bhi
koi door tadapta rahta hai
koi hamse kabhi nahi kahta hai
koi jeewan apna haar chala
sab saansin ham pe war chala
siski sunta hu uski mai
tha palke chunta jiski mai
ab vo bhi tanha hota hai
ye dil bhi har pal rota hai
e dil k nagar k waasi sun
palko se apne moti chun
mat yaad mujhe tu yun kar ab
mai basa chuka hu duniya ab
tujhko ab aage jana hai
mujhko bhi dil se bhulana hai
tere pyar ki hai ab jeet yahi
tu baandhe jo ab preet nayi
kya hansil ab is yaari se
ban beti farmadaari se
na yaad bewafa ko ab karna
khusiyo se bas aanchal bharna
teri sabse hai har baat alag
hai dono k jajbaat alag
tu pyar ka pathar hai shayad
tera ho ab farhaad alag
mai aam musafir raho ka
badhta he chalta jata hu
khud apna aap gawanta hu
teri baat wahi hai aaj talak
meri baat juda hai thodi si


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6th August 2014, 05:03 PM

wahhhhhhhhh! Bohat khoob.. Ashwani jii..

Likhte rahiye,

DusooN ke saath,,


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kabhi fursat meiN sun lena, bohat ashaar baqi haiN...
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6th August 2014, 05:09 PM

wahhhhhhhhh! Bohat khoob.. Ashwani jii..

Likhte rahiye,

DusooN ke saath,,

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dhondho ge humaiN mulkoN mulkoN
milne ke nahi, nayaab haiN hum...(nm)


Hounslaafjai ka behad Shukriya Hassan Sahab....
Yun he kuch lines dil me aayi thi likh dali
Afsos k mai shayer nahi hu


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Ashaar of "Sahaab" - 6th August 2014, 05:10 PM

nayi tamseel ..nayi upmayen ..instant ashaar

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फटे रुमाल की मानिंद हो गईं ग़ज़लें

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nayi tamseel ..nayi upmayen ..instant ashaar

हमारे हाल की मानिंद हो गईं ग़ज़लें

फटे रुमाल की मानिंद हो गईं ग़ज़लें

हर एक लफ्ज़ में माज़ी की झुर्रियां देखो

ज़ईफ़ खाल की मानिंद हो गईं ग़ज़लें

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wahhh! wahhh! wahhh!

Kamal ka kamal hai....

Aap shayer hi nahi shayer se kahiN bhad kar haiN Ashwani jii!

Likhte rahiye,

DuaooN ke saath,,


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7th August 2014, 11:03 AM

HAunsla Afjai ka tahe dil Se shukriya Hassan bhai


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28th August 2014, 06:58 AM

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28th August 2014, 08:47 AM

Aisi tanhai k insaan ko pagal Kar De

Kash seeney me tera Dard he halchal Kar de

Bin tere Dard k lagta hai adhura sab kuch

Dard De De k Mujhe Dost mukkammal Kar de


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28th August 2014, 08:49 AM

Begaana apna ban Jaye aisa to kam hota hai
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28th August 2014, 11:30 AM

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