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Mat roko mujhe..........(nazam) - 10th August 2006, 08:40 PM

aaj mein pahli baar post par kuch likhne jaa rahi hoo. meri pahli koshish hai...


Mat roko rone do mujhe,
Aansuon ko pee jane do.....

Vo chala gaya apni yaaden dekar,
Uski yaadon mein he kho jane do.....

Har pal roti hai aankhe meri,
Ke ashkon ko bhi jum jane do.....

Ab to din ke ujale se bhi dar lagta hai,
Mujhe raat ke andhere me hi rahne do.....

Kaise bayan karu dil ka dard lafzon me,
Ankho ko he sab kaha jane do.....

Ab saha nahi jata usse judaai ka dard,
Ke zahar ko hi mukti samajh kar apnane do.....

Ab koi tamanna nahi meri jeeene ki,
Mujhe mout ke pahalu me so jane do....


aap sabhi ko meri ye nazam kaisi lagi plz batana zaroor
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Re: Mat roko mujhe..........(nazam) - 11th August 2006, 09:20 AM

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aaj mein pahli baar post par kuch likhne jaa rahi hoo. meri pahli koshish hai...


Mat roko rone do mujhe,
Aansuon ko pee jane do.....

Vo chala gaya apni yaaden dekar,
Uski yaadon mein he kho jane do.....

Har pal roti hai aankhe meri,
Ke ashkon ko bhi jum jane do.....

Ab to din ke ujale se bhi dar lagta hai,
Mujhe raat ke andhere me kho jane do.....

Kaise bayan karu dil ka dard lafzon me,
Ankho ko he sab kaha jane do.....

Ab saha nahi jata usse judaai ka dard,
Ke zahar ko hi mukti samajh kar apnane do.....

Ab koi tamanna nahi meri jeeene ki,
Mujhe mout ke pahalu me so jane do....


aap sabhi ko meri ye nazam kaisi lagi plz batana zaroor
shukriya

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mujhe lagta hi nahi pahli bar likha hai impect main to aaj bhee itna accha nahi likh sakta, tumhare jajwat, khayalat bahut acche hai.n kahin kahin wording ki problem hai per aage apne apne aap nikhar aata jayega.
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hi - 11th August 2006, 10:35 AM

pooja weldone....bhut acha likha.......jajbaat bhut umda hai.....ehsaas bhut behtreen hai.......kul milakar bhut achi nazam hai.....yu hee likhti rehna......hamari duaa appke saath hai.......raj......


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hi - 11th August 2006, 03:12 PM

bahot bahot shukriya aapka dilip ji ki aapne meri nazam ko saraha. aapne sahi kaha ki meri nazam me words ki pro. hai lekin first time likha hai shayad isi liye.
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hello - 11th August 2006, 03:15 PM

veer ji aapne meri nazam ka reply post par bhi kiya bahot achha laga. aapko meri nazam achhi lagi uske liye bhi shukriya. aapne honsala badaya hai to mein aur achha likhne ki koshish karungi.

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Re: Mat roko mujhe..........(nazam) - 11th August 2006, 03:15 PM

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aaj mein pahli baar post par kuch likhne jaa rahi hoo. meri pahli koshish hai...


Mat roko rone do mujhe,
Aansuon ko pee jane do.....

Vo chala gaya apni yaaden dekar,
Uski yaadon mein he kho jane do.....

Har pal roti hai aankhe meri,
Ke ashkon ko bhi jum jane do.....

Ab to din ke ujale se bhi dar lagta hai,
Mujhe raat ke andhere me hi rahne do.....

Kaise bayan karu dil ka dard lafzon me,
Ankho ko he sab kaha jane do.....

Ab saha nahi jata usse judaai ka dard,
Ke zahar ko hi mukti samajh kar apnane do.....

Ab koi tamanna nahi meri jeeene ki,
Mujhe mout ke pahalu me so jane do....


aap sabhi ko meri ye nazam kaisi lagi plz batana zaroor
shukriya

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Keep it up - 11th August 2006, 03:47 PM

Pooja ji,

Bahut achha likha hai aapne,
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soch achhi hai,
umeed hai aage bhi aap aisa hi karengi,

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hello - 11th August 2006, 07:31 PM

thanku pawan ji aapko meri nazam pasand aai aur aapne use saraha.
mein koshish karti rahungi achha likhne ki.

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aap bhi shayar....... - 11th August 2006, 07:37 PM

for you my dear.......

zindagi main har koi har bazi jeet nahi sakta


aap ne jo likha hai wo har koi likh nahi sakta

aap ki shayri padhne k bad lagta hai k main aap k jais ashayar ban nahi sakta.........



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12th August 2006, 09:32 PM

askhon ko beh jane do,
unke sung yaadon ko jane do,
ye yaaden bahut tadpati hain,
aaj saari tadap tum mit jane do.


is umar me itna dard sahi nahi,
humse keh jo baat dil ki kahi nahi,
dil to hota hi hai tootne ke liye,
dosti ka hath badhaya hai mat kehna nahi nahi.....



padh kar bas yahi chand lines soojhi mujhe.to likh daali.umeed hai aapko bura nahi lagega
waise aapko jaan.ne ki ikcha ho rahi thi hume.umeed karta hun ki aap mauka dengi dost ban.ne ka.aapke jawaab ka intezaar rahega hume.



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aaj mein pahli baar post par kuch likhne jaa rahi hoo. meri pahli koshish hai...


Mat roko rone do mujhe,
Aansuon ko pee jane do.....

Vo chala gaya apni yaaden dekar,
Uski yaadon mein he kho jane do.....

Har pal roti hai aankhe meri,
Ke ashkon ko bhi jum jane do.....

Ab to din ke ujale se bhi dar lagta hai,
Mujhe raat ke andhere me hi rahne do.....

Kaise bayan karu dil ka dard lafzon me,
Ankho ko he sab kaha jane do.....

Ab saha nahi jata usse judaai ka dard,
Ke zahar ko hi mukti samajh kar apnane do.....

Ab koi tamanna nahi meri jeeene ki,
Mujhe mout ke pahalu me so jane do....


aap sabhi ko meri ye nazam kaisi lagi plz batana zaroor
shukriya

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bahut hi khub surat likha hai apne,akhiri do line to kuch jyada hi rula gayi,bahut acche,par ek baat kahunga ummeed hai ki bura nahi manege aap,suru ki dono line ek dusre se ulati hai,pahli mai apne kaha ki rone do aur dusre mai kaha ki pee lene do,esa mujhe laga ki kuch aur hona chahiye tha,apki pahli kosish thi ye aur itni saandar thi to mai mahsoosh kar sakta hu ki aap bahut umda sayar ke roop mai jani jayenge.
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for you my dear.......

zindagi main har koi har bazi jeet nahi sakta


aap ne jo likha hai wo har koi likh nahi sakta

aap ki shayri padhne k bad lagta hai k main aap k jais ashayar ban nahi sakta.........



gr6 goin dear keep it up...........dhaval


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askhon ko beh jane do,
unke sung yaadon ko jane do,
ye yaaden bahut tadpati hain,
aaj saari tadap tum mit jane do.


is umar me itna dard sahi nahi,
humse keh jo baat dil ki kahi nahi,
dil to hota hi hai tootne ke liye,
dosti ka hath badhaya hai mat kehna nahi nahi.....



padh kar bas yahi chand lines soojhi mujhe.to likh daali.umeed hai aapko bura nahi lagega
waise aapko jaan.ne ki ikcha ho rahi thi hume.umeed karta hun ki aap mauka dengi dost ban.ne ka.aapke jawaab ka intezaar rahega hume.
Its tooo tooo tooooo late

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Hi bhaai,

Well thanks for comment....

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meri subhkamnaye apke saath hai,isi khubsurati ke saath likhte rahe,apka......baagi...
Namaste,

Ye meri pahali shayri thhi zindagi ki...aapki salaah ka or yaha aane ke liye saath me saraahne ke liye bahot bahot shukriya

Waise likhna sirf mera shauk hai...zindagi ke kuch aise haseen, dukhi, muskuraate hue or pyaar bhare lamho ko shayri ki shaql dena mujhe achha lagta hai...bas meri baat shaayri me dhall jaaye, wahi kaafi hota hai mere liye...isse jyada kuch nahi chaahti..waise bhi ab likhna band kar diya to bulandiyo tak jaane ka savaal hi anhi utthta...ek khwaahish thhi ke apne pyaar pe kuch likhu...bas vo likh diya or wahi meri aakhiri shaayri thhi...iske baad kuch likhne ki chaaht nahi...

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aapne kaha ye aapki pahli koshish hai
mujhe lagta hi nahi pahli bar likha hai impect main to aaj bhee itna accha nahi likh sakta, tumhare jajwat, khayalat bahut acche hai.n kahin kahin wording ki problem hai per aage apne apne aap nikhar aata jayega.
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pooja weldone....bhut acha likha.......jajbaat bhut umda hai.....ehsaas bhut behtreen hai.......kul milakar bhut achi nazam hai.....yu hee likhti rehna......hamari duaa appke saath hai.......raj......
Dilip ji...Veer ji.....i miss u alot....plz come back...

Veer ji aap aate to hain..lekin fir kahi kho jaate hain...fir se aajaaiye pahale ki tarhaa....

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mene apke jajbaato ko kureda maafi chahunga,pls likhte rahen,
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no its really ok...u didn't do anything like that ok..so chill yaaa

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11th July 2008, 10:15 AM

Khul k dilse milo to saza dete hain log,
Sache jazbat b thukra dete hai log,
dekh nahi sakta do insano ka milna,
baithe huwe do parindo ko b uda dete hai log.
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aaj mein pahli baar post par kuch likhne jaa rahi hoo. meri pahli koshish hai...


Mat roko rone do mujhe,
Aansuon ko pee jane do.....

Vo chala gaya apni yaaden dekar,
Uski yaadon mein he kho jane do.....

Har pal roti hai aankhe meri,
Ke ashkon ko bhi jum jane do.....

Ab to din ke ujale se bhi dar lagta hai,
Mujhe raat ke andhere me hi rahne do.....

Kaise bayan karu dil ka dard lafzon me,
Ankho ko he sab kaha jane do.....

Ab saha nahi jata usse judaai ka dard,
Ke zahar ko hi mukti samajh kar apnane do.....

Ab koi tamanna nahi meri jeeene ki,
Mujhe mout ke pahalu me so jane do....


aap sabhi ko meri ye nazam kaisi lagi plz batana zaroor
shukriya

aapki dost
pooja
bahot khub likha hai..itne khayalat aap ke dimag mai kaise aate hai well dun yar har bar kuch alag sa ..wa wery nice bahoot khub likha


Mujhse wo judaa naa ho jaaye,

Jindagi kahin Be-mazaa naa ho jaaye,

Mazaa aata hai pyaar karne mein,

pyaar mera kahin khafaa naa ho jaaye,

Shahar ki Be-chiraag galiyon mein,

Gum kahin manzil ka rastaa naa ho jaaye,

Aaj uunse kuch maang hi loon yaaron,

Wo kahin kal Be-wafaa naa ho jayae

IS JAHAN MEH PATHAR KE INSHAAN REHTE HAI,

SABHI EK DUSRE KO SHAITAN KEHTE HAI,

BAHUT DUNDA MAGAR NAHI MILA

LOG JISE BHAGWAN KEHTE HAI

Matlabi hai yeh duniya,

Yahan kaun kiskahota hai,

Dhooka bhi wahi deta hai

Jis pe bharosa hota hai.

Lehar aati hai kinare se palat jaati hai

Yaad aati hai dil mein bas jaati hai

Dono mein faraq itna hi hai lehar bewaqt aati hai

Aur tumhari
yaad har waqt aati hai......

Hum me thi na koi baat

Yaad na tum ko aa sake

Tumne hame bhoola diya

Hum na tumhe bhula sakee...

Thanx..

agar pasand aye to reply jaroor dena
mai intejar karunga


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Kat gayi umr, hamein pyar karna na aaya,
Usney maanga bhi agar kuch to maangi judaai,
Aur ek hum thay ke inkaar karna na aaya!!!!
   
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17th July 2008, 09:28 AM

meri pyari matko..........aaj teri yeh nazam padi aur bahut derrrr tak kuch sochti rahi....waqt ke saath saath sab kuch badal jata hai....halaat, samjote, jazbaat aur bahut kuchhhhhhhhhh.....jis waqt tune yeh sab likha tha un ahsaaso.n ko main samaj sakti hoon...shayad mujse behtar koi ek hi samaj sakta hai ....hai na

meri dua yehi hai ki meri matko kahiN bhi rahe bas kush rahe, jo usne chaha hai woh usko har pal miley...ameeN

duao.n ke saath
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17th July 2008, 11:09 PM

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aaj mein pahli baar post par kuch likhne jaa rahi hoo. meri pahli koshish hai...


Mat roko rone do mujhe,
Aansuon ko pee jane do.....

Vo chala gaya apni yaaden dekar,
Uski yaadon mein he kho jane do.....

Har pal roti hai aankhe meri,
Ke ashkon ko bhi jum jane do.....

Ab to din ke ujale se bhi dar lagta hai,
Mujhe raat ke andhere me hi rahne do.....

Kaise bayan karu dil ka dard lafzon me,
Ankho ko he sab kaha jane do.....

Ab saha nahi jata usse judaai ka dard,
Ke zahar ko hi mukti samajh kar apnane do.....

Ab koi tamanna nahi meri jeeene ki,
Mujhe mout ke pahalu me so jane do....


aap sabhi ko meri ye nazam kaisi lagi plz batana zaroor
shukriya

aapki dost
pooja
apki pehli koshish b buhat khubsorat hai khas kar akhri sher muje buhat sundar laga


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21st July 2008, 09:36 PM

helloo pooja
bahut khub likhti hain aap,aise hi likhte rahiye
yakin nahi hota ki pehli baar me koi is tarah apni shayri pesh kar sakta hai
all the best.

Raj


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Smile hi panjabi kudi - 31st July 2008, 04:02 AM

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meri pyari matko..........aaj teri yeh nazam padi aur bahut derrrr tak kuch sochti rahi....waqt ke saath saath sab kuch badal jata hai....halaat, samjote, jazbaat aur bahut kuchhhhhhhhhh.....jis waqt tune yeh sab likha tha un ahsaaso.n ko main samaj sakti hoon...shayad mujse behtar koi ek hi samaj sakta hai ....hai na

meri dua yehi hai ki meri matko kahiN bhi rahe bas kush rahe, jo usne chaha hai woh usko har pal miley...ameeN

duao.n ke saath
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salam
muje aap ki signitur bahoooooooooooooot achi lagi wery nice
aur aap ki shoch jo aap ne matko rep diya hai vo bi wery funni...,

good friend


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apki pehli koshish b buhat khubsorat hai khas kar akhri sher muje buhat sundar laga
Din Tere Khayal Mein Gujar Jata Hai,
Raat Ko Bhi Khayal Tera He Aata Hai.
Kabhi Ye Khayal Is Tarah Bad Jaata Hai,
Ki Aaine Mein Bhi Tera Chehra Nazar Aata Hai.

accha lage to naam yaad rakhna
bura lage to paigaam na karna
agar chuta ho kuch humse
to maaf kardena
aur agar main thik thak hi hu to
dost keh kar sine me laga lena
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